[korzhik]
- 00:37:974 (8) - What would you think about moving this note at x:144 y:208? I think it would work pretty good to continue the oval flow of 00:37:343 (7) - , continuing really well with the next slider 00:38:185 (1) - ! It's not a really big change but imo it'd work pretty good
- 01:03:417 (1) - This slider felt really strange to play. The fact it's ending on the white tick feels a bit strange mostly because of all the other sliders going 3/4, and there's a change at 01:03:837 - which would be better emphatized with a note, so what would you think about making this slider just 1/4 shorter and add a note at 01:03:837 - ?
- 01:06:360 (1) - I would personally move this New Combo to 01:06:991 (5) - , since there is a distortion starting at 01:06:991 (5) - . It would also work really well pattern-wise, differentiating the two patterns there
- 01:12:668 (1,2,3) - This is a really personal thing, so feel free to refuse if you don't want to change: if you want to follow the whole synth part there you could use a pattern composed by a 1/6 repeated slider and also a 1/4 one. It would follow really well the synth there to make a good transition with the next pattern though I think you should make some tweaks to make it work right
- 01:33:695 (3) - Imo a New Combo could work really well there, seeing how the song is different from the stream part to this one. Not a big change though it'd be cool to see this New Combo here :p
- 01:45:050 (1,2) - A speed up just for these two sliders would fit really well imho, seeing how the song is getting more intense right at this point before going to the notes after. A 0.3x speed up (1.5x in total) should just be perfect for doing this!
- 03:00:746 (1) - While the difference between 3/4 sliders and 1/2 sliders worked really good in all the places I like this slider more as a 3/4 one. I think that the dropoff with 03:01:167 (1) - will work totally good with that, other than fitting quite well with the synth overall. That's more a personal thing anyways, so feel free to ignore!
- 04:18:966 (5) - CTRL+G? Considering the oval flow of 04:18:335 (4) - and also the following slider's direction it could work quite well, even with 04:19:387 (6) - placed as it is now! Try it and see if you like it
- 05:05:225 (7,7) - As these notes finish the whole pattern it'd be pretty cool to have them spaced a bit out to make some jumps to follow this "impact" there. Maybe you could put 05:05:225 (7) - at the same position of 05:04:595 (4) - and 05:06:907 (7) - at the same position of 05:06:066 (3) - or 05:06:276 (4) - to do this. See if you like it!
- 06:39:320 - I think that some notes there could work good, even if you guys used mainly 1/2 sliders with these parts: I think it works really well with the stop there and it also emphatises all the drums there. It plays quite good to be honest! (remember to do this at 06:42:579 (4,5) - as well if you do this!