1. Clear!

1. 02:31:928 (3,4,5) - unsnapped. 是忘了加绿线还是怎么...?
   
2. 00:36:750 - 不加一个note吗;w;
   
3. 01:03:107 - 加个note？
   
4. 01:04:392 (5,6) - 感觉好卡手
   
5. 01:27:214 - 我建议这里关闭kiai，01:27:428 - 这里打开kiai，然后01:27:535 - 加一根绿线关掉kiai
   
6. 01:52:928 - 这里貌似有个重音
   
7. 02:11:678 - 加note？
   
8. 02:15:857 (3,4) - 这间距很容易让人以为是1/4跳的啦
   
9. 03:18:428 (1) - 听说去掉NC以后followpoints有奇效
   
10. 03:54:857 (1,2) - 这边应该还是蓝色的note啊，03:55:607 (3) - 加上NC改成灰色
    
11. 没啦

1. -settings- CS用4.8吧，5还是太小了
   
2. 02:48:000 (1) - 我觉得这个slider用0.75x会比较好，不然变化太大了。02:49:285 (1) - 这个用0.5x
   
3. 貌似没啥问题

1. 00:57:214 (1) - 去掉NC
   
2. 01:22:285 (2,3) - 整个blanket?：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094924
   
   Picture

   
3. 02:30:857 (2,3) - ^
   
4. 貌似也没啥orz

1. 02:36:000 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2094934
   
   Picture

   
2. 低难度有什么好看的啊啪啪啪

1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
4. Bond means highly suggest.
5. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

1. Uncheck widescreen support if you wont add a storyboard.
2. You can use custom diff name as to the hardest diff, why not have a try?

Easy

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  Rhythm:

1. Fine
   Structure:
2. 00:37:714 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle with 1 2 and 3's head.
3. 00:39:428 (1) - make a curve at the middle point of this slider, just like this: http://puu.sh/bXdDn/37f1af5c9a.jpg You can emphasize the vocal. （可以让这个滑条弯一下，弯的地方正好压在vocal上。）
4. 00:47:142 (3,1) - Why not symmetrical?
5. 00:53:571 (2,1) - Avoid the slight overlap.
6. 00:56:571 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved if you want to make a blanket here.
7. 00:58:285 (2,2) - Also a slight overlap.
8. 01:24:000 (1) - Move to 395|40 for a perfect stack here. (Also the same in other KIAI times.)
9. 01:44:571 (1) - Try this: http://puu.sh/bXdX9/3792f0c077.jpg Also this pattern can follow the vocal better
10. 01:47:571 (2,1) - Blanket issue: http://puu.sh/bXe0Z/6c60dc9426.jpg (Wont repeat :3)
11. 02:52:285 (2,2) - Stack..QwQ This one is so obvious...so I repeated :3
    Hitsounds
12. Nice
    Others:
13. 01:13:500 How about creating a fountian (disable and enable KIAI quickly) here? (Also other diff)

Normal

1. Wow, AR6 and CS4..and some stacks at first..Hmm... ..Tbh, maybe there will be difficulties in some ranking procedures about this diff/style at current atm.
   Rhythm:
2. Hmm...
   Structure:
3. Better to stack well in some notes. By doing this way you can make the diff neat :3
4. 00:57:214 (1,2) - For a better flow: http://puu.sh/bXfVs/3dceb154da.jpg
5. 02:02:142 (2,3) - 让这个滑条好好的躺在外面滑条的怀抱里 :3
6. 03:54:428 (3) - Maybe a curve wont hurt? http://puu.sh/bXgDe/e355948bd2.jpg
   Hitsounds
7. The sliderslides in the start secyion of this map sound a little loud, consider silence them.
   Others:
8. 00:38:571 (3) -Better to NC here instead of 00:39:214 (1) - Since you change your rhythm into 3/4 here, you need an NC to tel theplayers expecially newie players. Also, NC 00:39:428 (2) - here. (Also in anoter part at 01:47:142 (3) - .)
9. 00:56:571 (1) - remove NC

Hard

1. Some nazi points wont be repeated :3
   Rhythm:
2. 02:55:285 (2,3) - Why not a triplet and a single note? http://puu.sh/bYBY2/18219d7822.jpg Or a repeat slider? http://puu.sh/bYBYU/de81ad28d7.jpg
   Structure:
3. 02:18:321 (5) - You need a jump here to emphasize the high pitch vocal instead of jumping at 02:17:142 (1,2) - . Also, for a better flow, Ctrl+G this: 02:17:142 (1) -
   Hitsounds
4. 01:27:000 (6) - How about adding some hitsounds to emphasize the background music?
5. Add Finish at 02:58:285 (1) - 03:00:000 (1) - 03:01:714 (1) -
   Others:
6. 01:54:428 (2) - Better NC here as you did at 00:45:857 (1) - . Also here you changed SV, so you need to NC to tell the players.

Insane