Hey! From queue for m4m
[General]
I think you have some timing issues.. for example in ur insane go to 01:14:830 (3,4,5,6,7) - and slow down speed to 25%, you'll hear ur notes aren't with the music. Sorry I can't fix for u cuz i suck at timing and stuffs so u may wanna ask someone else for help
The tags in ur Easy/Normal and Hard/Fluffy are different.
for E/N it's: hatsune miku vocaloid arpk alpaca arpakasso
For H/I it's: hatsune miku arpk alpaca arpakasso
ya add vocaloid to H/I too
[Easy]
00:31:002 (1,2) - blanket is off
00:32:408 (3) - 00:34:752 (1) - watch for overlaps like these
00:32:877 (1,2) - blanket as well. Use grid 4 for most precise adjustments
00:36:158 (3,5) - you're better off just stacking these 2 together.. the overlap isnt very pretty
00:45:064 (4,2,3) - overlap.. i'll shut up about overlaps from now on
00:58:658 (2) - u might wanna somehow stack the slider end onto 00:56:314 (2) - .. maybe shift 00:54:908 (1,2,3) - entirely to the right so that (1) slider is blanketed by 00:53:502 (2) - , then just make subtle adjustments with 00:57:720 (1,2) -
01:14:127 (1) - left a little bit more
01:27:720 (1,1) - as anal this may sound this doesn't flow well..
01:49:283 (1) - too short to be in an easy imo, this looks much better imo http://puu.sh/aAGHb/634a84fea9.jpg
02:01:002 (3) - 02:03:814 (3) - stack would look a lot better
02:09:439 (3) - (224, 256) 02:09:908 (1) - (224, 176) (and make the rest of the adjustments urself
02:11:783 (1) - if u could end ur slider on 02:09:439 (3) - then that'd be wonderful
02:34:283 (1,2,1) - a bit more circular would flow better i.e. http://puu.sh/aAH9i/1689be5473.jpg ( u can also blanket 02:36:158 (1,2) - while ur at it too)
[Normal]
you must must must must keep flow consistant and never break it in easy/normals!!
00:30:767 (2,3) - flow break
00:50:220 (1,2) - flow break.
00:54:673 (4,1) - Flow break
00:56:548 (3,1) - Flow break..
01:06:157 (3,4) - it's only 30 seconds into the song and I can find this many I think you need to go back and think about flow more. I stopped here cuz otherwise this'll be me ranting about flow breaks
good flow = not much turns for the cursor!!
00:29:830 (1) - match music http://puu.sh/aAIjV/0a6d36b8f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/aAIp6/b48a5e889d.jpg
00:31:470 (3) - 00:34:283 (1) - stack mebe
00:34:752 (2,3) - even tho its a weird shape u can still blanket
00:59:830 (1,2,3,4) - might be hard for normal, try this http://puu.sh/aAIyW/927c0cb572.jpg
01:07:330 (1) - same as what i said earlier
01:18:345 (2) - unbalanced
01:37:330 (1,2,3,4) - same as earlier
01:53:033 (1) - sound better if u end it on 01:54:439 - instead
01:55:377 (1) - why did u slow down in the kiai? you should be speeding up not slowing down o_o
02:10:845 (3) - 02:11:783 (1) - unbalanced
02:16:002 (2,2) - if u could somehow stack would look nicer
02:19:283 (1,2) - this looks better imo http://puu.sh/aAIWX/0dd33eb223.jpg
02:25:377 (1,2) - weird shape but still can blanket
02:29:127 (2) - ctrl + G
[Hard]
00:27:955 (4,5) - blanket better
00:58:189 (3,4) - overlap looks bad
01:02:642 (1) - this (blanket?) can look better
01:25:611 (2) - 01:27:252 (5) - stack
01:51:275 (1) - u wanna give room for players to react to the next note, even tho its hard this is too much
02:10:611 (3,4,5,6) - messy
I think your rhythms need work.. go to single player and put on auto and just listen, right now your notes are placed oddly \:
[Fluff]
cs4 cuz cs5 is cancer
od7?
I didn't look at this as much cuz well you only looked at my N/H so o_o
I'll give u some insight on what i saw
u can definitely beautify this map more, i.e. 00:30:767 (2) - 00:32:642 (1) - stacking these 2
places like 00:47:408 (1,2,3) - just has random rhythm and is difficult to play, not suitable for a slow song u have right now
when changing SV try to move by 0.25x each time, when u went from 1x to 1.5x it's sudden and can easily lead to sliderbreaking
yeah so for this diff also just put on auto and listen to your rhythms cuz i think it needs work there.
Good luck!~
[General]
I think you have some timing issues.. for example in ur insane go to 01:14:830 (3,4,5,6,7) - and slow down speed to 25%, you'll hear ur notes aren't with the music. Sorry I can't fix for u cuz i suck at timing and stuffs so u may wanna ask someone else for help
The tags in ur Easy/Normal and Hard/Fluffy are different.
for E/N it's: hatsune miku vocaloid arpk alpaca arpakasso
For H/I it's: hatsune miku arpk alpaca arpakasso
ya add vocaloid to H/I too
[Easy]
00:31:002 (1,2) - blanket is off
00:32:408 (3) - 00:34:752 (1) - watch for overlaps like these
00:32:877 (1,2) - blanket as well. Use grid 4 for most precise adjustments
00:36:158 (3,5) - you're better off just stacking these 2 together.. the overlap isnt very pretty
00:45:064 (4,2,3) - overlap.. i'll shut up about overlaps from now on
00:58:658 (2) - u might wanna somehow stack the slider end onto 00:56:314 (2) - .. maybe shift 00:54:908 (1,2,3) - entirely to the right so that (1) slider is blanketed by 00:53:502 (2) - , then just make subtle adjustments with 00:57:720 (1,2) -
01:14:127 (1) - left a little bit more
01:27:720 (1,1) - as anal this may sound this doesn't flow well..
01:49:283 (1) - too short to be in an easy imo, this looks much better imo http://puu.sh/aAGHb/634a84fea9.jpg
02:01:002 (3) - 02:03:814 (3) - stack would look a lot better
02:09:439 (3) - (224, 256) 02:09:908 (1) - (224, 176) (and make the rest of the adjustments urself
02:11:783 (1) - if u could end ur slider on 02:09:439 (3) - then that'd be wonderful
02:34:283 (1,2,1) - a bit more circular would flow better i.e. http://puu.sh/aAH9i/1689be5473.jpg ( u can also blanket 02:36:158 (1,2) - while ur at it too)
[Normal]
you must must must must keep flow consistant and never break it in easy/normals!!
00:30:767 (2,3) - flow break
00:50:220 (1,2) - flow break.
00:54:673 (4,1) - Flow break
00:56:548 (3,1) - Flow break..
01:06:157 (3,4) - it's only 30 seconds into the song and I can find this many I think you need to go back and think about flow more. I stopped here cuz otherwise this'll be me ranting about flow breaks
good flow = not much turns for the cursor!!
00:29:830 (1) - match music http://puu.sh/aAIjV/0a6d36b8f5.jpg or http://puu.sh/aAIp6/b48a5e889d.jpg
00:31:470 (3) - 00:34:283 (1) - stack mebe
00:34:752 (2,3) - even tho its a weird shape u can still blanket
00:59:830 (1,2,3,4) - might be hard for normal, try this http://puu.sh/aAIyW/927c0cb572.jpg
01:07:330 (1) - same as what i said earlier
01:18:345 (2) - unbalanced
01:37:330 (1,2,3,4) - same as earlier
01:53:033 (1) - sound better if u end it on 01:54:439 - instead
01:55:377 (1) - why did u slow down in the kiai? you should be speeding up not slowing down o_o
02:10:845 (3) - 02:11:783 (1) - unbalanced
02:16:002 (2,2) - if u could somehow stack would look nicer
02:19:283 (1,2) - this looks better imo http://puu.sh/aAIWX/0dd33eb223.jpg
02:25:377 (1,2) - weird shape but still can blanket
02:29:127 (2) - ctrl + G
[Hard]
00:27:955 (4,5) - blanket better
00:58:189 (3,4) - overlap looks bad
01:02:642 (1) - this (blanket?) can look better
01:25:611 (2) - 01:27:252 (5) - stack
01:51:275 (1) - u wanna give room for players to react to the next note, even tho its hard this is too much
02:10:611 (3,4,5,6) - messy
I think your rhythms need work.. go to single player and put on auto and just listen, right now your notes are placed oddly \:
[Fluff]
cs4 cuz cs5 is cancer
od7?
I didn't look at this as much cuz well you only looked at my N/H so o_o
I'll give u some insight on what i saw
u can definitely beautify this map more, i.e. 00:30:767 (2) - 00:32:642 (1) - stacking these 2
places like 00:47:408 (1,2,3) - just has random rhythm and is difficult to play, not suitable for a slow song u have right now
when changing SV try to move by 0.25x each time, when u went from 1x to 1.5x it's sudden and can easily lead to sliderbreaking
yeah so for this diff also just put on auto and listen to your rhythms cuz i think it needs work there.
Good luck!~