XYumiXX wrote:

I hope you find any of this helpful C: Forgive me if you don't, since I don't have much experience with modding yet. Thank you either way~ It's great to get people's opinions.

Most of these are suggestions to just change it up a little. c;

Easy

00:37:837 Probably shouldn't have just one slider for all of the beats. Maybe you could put a couple circles. If I changed it then the flow would be worse.
01:59:405 Could take out the third circle from the combo and make the second slider from the combo repeat. I think that would make the flow worse, and I like how 2 and 3 are the same rhythm as 4 and 5.
02:14:340 Same, except add some circles after the third note in the combo. Do you mean same as the above? It already is a reverse here.

Normal

01:07:221 Could get rid of the seventh slider in the combo and replace it with a note. Make the sixth repeat. I changed it, but not to that.
01:24:466 Maybe get rid of the third and forth circle in the combo and replace them with a slider. Fixed~
02:38:618 I don't think the spinner fits very well at the end. Fixed~

Hard

00:33:963 Move the second circle from the blue combo above the seventh circle in the green combo before. Wouldn't that be making a jump? That would be fun to play, but I think that would be a random jump.
00:44:764 Replace the forth and fifth circle with a slider. Fixed~ Why not.
02:09:775 Could put a slider instead of all the circles. Fixed, but just with the circles from the red combo.

Fluffy

00:44:729 Maybe put a slider and make it repeat instead. I don't see how that would work.
01:35:013 Don't really know how to explain it, but maybe space the sliders differently. I think you mean to spread it out because they're so close to each other. Fixed~

I didn't really have much. Overall, I really like this beatmap Maybe you should find a background soon ;o There is a background... I think you need to redownload (That means you have to delete it and download it again. It's not just an update.) my map to see it because I keep changing it. I really need to put that under my map's description.

Again, I'm really sorry if I'm no help or if this is all wrong. Don't worry. You still helped.

GENERAL

EASY

NORMAL

HARD

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heloo~ :3 M4M from your queue~ Insane mod is WIP~

GENERAL

1. How about changing offset to 23033. You didn't put any notes at 8033 anyway :3 I think it's fine.
2. Uncheck widescreen support on Fluffy Fixed~

EASY

1. 00:27:720 - Don't curve this for consistency. That doesn't look so good.
2. 00:31:470 - Fix Blanket Fixed~
3. 00:51:626 - Fix DS Fixed~
4. 01:54:908 - Make a straight line I think it's fine.
5. 02:05:220 - Move to x:372 y:260 I did something different.
6. 02:08:033 - Move to x:160 y:248 ^^^
7. 02:13:658 - Straighten this slider to have consistency with 2 or Curve 2 instead I'll do a sliderkick if that's what you mean.
8. 02:20:689 - Move to x:340 y:320 Fixed~

NORMAL

1. 00:23:736 - Add circle I think it's fine.
2. 00:24:673 - This felt awkward. Change it into a reverse slider to follow the vocals more. Fixed~
3. 00:26:783(6,1) - NC at 6 instead of 1 Fixed~
4. 00:30:064 - Change 1/2 slider into circle I did something a bit different.
5. 00:34:283(5,1) - NC at 5 instead of 1 Fixed~
6. 00:36:626 - Move this slider to 00:36:392 Fixed~
7. ^(if you did above) 00:37:095 - Add Reverse slider, it matches more :3 ^^^
8. 00:41:783 - Change this into a circle I think it's fine.
9. 00:53:501(2,3,4) - There's no emphasizing sound here but you made a different pattern. Just change it into a 1/1 reverse and a circle or 2 1/1 sliders Fixed~
10. 01:04:283(5,1) - NC at 5 instead of 1 Fixed~
11. 01:08:033(6,1) - NC at 6 instead of 1 Fixed~
12. 01:15:298 - Add Circle I added a slider.
13. 01:24:908 - Change 1/2 slider into circle ~ big white tick here Fixed~
14. 02:07:095(3,4,5,6) - Another no emphasizing beat~ Don't change patterns for consistency. Because on the 1st and 2nd kiais, you just used 1/1 sliders more then on this part of the kiai or 3rd kiai, you used a lot of 1/2 sliders even though it's just the same.
    ~You can find them yourself. In the 3rd kiai, you used a lot of 1/2 that's why the new combos are up to 9 now~ Fixed~
15. 02:24:204 - Remove circle. No sound here :3 The "A" in ARPK is here.
16. 02:32:876 - Move to x:244 y:348 to make a Y pattern and also fix triangle w/ 3 I don't really see the point.

HARD

1. 00:32:408 - Unstack and make a diamond pattern like this: http://puu.sh/hRkuf/7d699ebffd.jpg Fixed~
2. 00:35:220 - When I play, this throws me off xD There's no change in the sound anyway. so I think you should put a circle the red tick at 00:34:986 ~ =v= Fixed, but with a slider.
3. 00:37:095 - Change this 3 circles into a 1 reverse slider and the pattern is opposite of 4 I like the variety here.
4. 00:37:915 - Better if this part has circle But, there's not really a sound there.
5. ^(if you did above) 00:38:033 - Change this into 1/1 slider to lessen the difficulty ^^^
6. ^ 00:38:501 - Add circle ^^^
7. 00:40:845 - The 3 circles is too hard lol for a hard :3 Change it into a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/hRl0J/c8f48684a0.jpg Fixed~
8. ^ 00:41:548 - Also, leave this w/ no note here Fixed~
9. 01:00:767 - Unstack 2 and move it like this: http://puu.sh/hRmej/78ace8c89a.jpg That would be making a jump.
10. 01:14:595 - Change the 2 circles into 1/2 reverse slider I like how it is.
11. 01:15:415 - Add circle Same reason as 00:37:915 - here.
12. 01:22:798 - To avoid the 1/1 slider ending in a big white tick. Change this into a circle and start a 1/1 slider at 01:23:033 Fixed~
13. 01:26:314 - Ctrl+G for better flow and move 1 like this: http://puu.sh/hRpnz/2d6f60bf92.jpg Fixed, but I stacked 1.
14. 02:29:595 - For me, the 2 ~ 1/4 and a circle doesn't go well =v= Don't use the blue ticks there Fixed~

Okay~ That's all :3 Good luck for Ranking~

salinqi wrote:

Hi m4m~(my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/305672) feel free to turn down my request if my mod is not helpful

[Easy]
OD+1? I think it's fine. It is the same as the HP drain rate.
02:28:658 - why not start here I doesn't give a lot of spinner-recovery time, but I guess I can.

[Normal]
OD-1? Same reason as in Easy.
01:36:158 (5) - add NC? 8 notes a group is too many for a normal diff I'll take something out instead.
01:56:783 (5) - ^ ^^^
02:08:033 (5) - ^ It's only 7 here.
01:53:033 (1) - delete NC I think It's fine how it is.

[Hard]
00:34:048 (7) - I would prefer not to overlap 7 here It's stacking, not overlapping, and I think it's okay.
02:04:986 (2,3,4) - ds inconsistency Fixed~
02:06:861 (3) - move it to x288 y84 so it would not be so close to 1 That messes up the ds, and I don't really like that flow.
02:23:970 (3,4,5,6,1) - not beautiful,try a pentagon? Fixed~

[Fluffy]
00:46:704 (5) - delete whistle on the head Fixed~
kiai part is too easy,try some small jumps or add some 1/4 beats I'll keep this in mind.
01:30:064 (5) - Ctrl+G Why?
02:00:533 (1) - ^ Fixed~
02:21:158 (1,2,3,4) - a little crowded,space them out a bit? Fixed~
00:49:283 (1,2) - I would prefer to use two 1/2 sliders here I'll just do 1.

Nice song and also good map~:) Good Luck!

[-Deemo-] wrote:

From Modding Queue

[Normal]
02:08:970 (5,6,7,1) - 02:16:470 (5,6,7) - 02:11:783 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure if this counts as a triplet but from the osu wiki, you should "Avoid triplets/streams (1/4 notes)" on Normal These aren't streams or triplets. Streams are on green ticks and triplets are on blue ticks. These are on red ticks, and idk what that's called.

[Hard]
00:33:345 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - This is confusing to read after the triplet, may throw of hard players Fixed, enough people have mentioned this.

The other difficulties that I didn't talk about seem fine to me, the insane was fun

paraoka wrote:

pls remove my Taiko GD.

UndeadCapulet wrote:

From my queue:

Fluffy

OD 7.5 seems rather high, 7 is enough Fixed~
Similary, HP 7.5 is really high for a slower song like this, use HP 6 Fixed to 7 not 6.
00:52:095 (3,4,5,6) - You could have this form a complete star pattern with 00:51:158 (1) - 's head, if you want. Right now the 00:51:626 (2,3,4) - motion seems kinda jerky to me, idk maybe I'm just crazy, but I really think you should move your incomplete star somewhere else, or rework the pattern or something, I'm just suggesting completing the star because, well, it'd be complete, idk Fixed, I think.
00:58:658 (1) - Breaking this into two circles would be nicer in my opinion, like you did at later parts. I like the symmetry with the blue 3.
00:59:829 (5,6,7,8) - You're skipping the sound on the blue tick to then overmap the tick at 7. This is a really bad rhythm. Fixed~
01:20:220 (4,5,6) - Straightening out this line would probably play nicer (like, line up the tail, 5 and 6 is what I mean) Fixed~
02:20:220 (3,4) - This jump is pretty uncharacteristic of this diff. Fixed~
You can map the stuff at 02:28:423, this is the highest diff in the set, after all; nobody will be tripped up by starting soon after a spinner. Fixed somewhat because I want to start it on the downbeat.

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Hard

HP 5 HP 6 is fine.
00:53:033 (1,2,3) - Even out the spacing here. Fixed a bit. It looks even to me.
01:27:720 (3,4) - How do I put this...because of how everything else in this diff is very neat and structured, these sliders not being parallel looks unintentional and messy. Something more along the lines of this fits the aesthetic of this difficulty better while still keeping the sliders from being perfectly side by side. Fixed~
02:01:939 (4) - Move this to around here so the space between all the sliderbodies is even (this also plays better). Fixed, and blanketed the following 1 to 2.
02:06:627 (2,3,4) - I think this is better. I think I care more about the pattern 02:07:095 (4,5,1,2) - here.
02:35:689 (4,5,6,1) - I think this right angle plays awkwardly, and honestly looks sloppy. This part of the song is the least intense, personally I think you should just stack the triplet. If you still want things spaced out, try to find placements that flow better. Fixed~

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Normal

00:54:439 (3,4,5) - Something like this is better imo. I think that makes 4 -> 5 a bit more awkward.
00:59:361 - Seems weird to leave this beat out, you could extend 00:58:658 (5) - into a 3/2 to solve this (though personally I'd just use 1/2 sliders for all of these beats). I'm mostly going by the vocals, so I think it's fine.

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Easy

OD 2 OD1 is fine.

Nice song, good luck!

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, sorry for the big delay, but anyways... M4M as we discussed!

[> General <]

1. - In normal diff: The end of the break on 01:38:238 - is probably inconsistent with other diffs, since you haven't dragged in other diffs. Fixed~
2. - Everything else seems fine! ^_^

[> Easy <]

1. 00:28:658 (3,4,1) - This flow, imo, is probably weird to me. From a curved slider, suddenly goes to the sharp one. Maybe it's best you change the rhythm here, like Ctrl + G, or change slider position e.g. I made it less sharp.
2. 00:46:470 (2,3,4) - The spacing here is quite different in-between. (2) and (3) is okay, but (3) and (4)... 0.82x spacing... Fixed~
3. 00:52:564 (4,1,2) - Well, you can possibly make a good pattern here, the current one you made was a little straight, so why not make a triangle form here? Fixed~ why not
4. 01:00:533 (1,2) - There's an unbalanced spacing here, maybe it's recommended to fix this. Fixed~
5. 01:02:877 (5,6,1) - Same as above. Fixed~
6. 01:05:220 (2,3) - I probably didn't liked this flow because of slider (2)'s tail is heading to the other direction, and (3) is below it. You should change one of their position for the flow to be ongoing. Fixed~
7. 01:07:095 (4) - I might think this slider's tail seems to be inaudible. If you're trying to make an emphasis with the music, then maybe it'll be fine. I am trying to emphasize the music.
8. 01:12:252 (2,3) - Same as 01:00:533 (1,2) - Fixed~
9. - Well, I can't find those spacing errors to make the mod big. So try finding those spacing notes by watching up on the top right on the editor, to check their distance snap. Okay, I looked over it and fixed a few more spacing errors.
10. 01:29:127 (3,2) - It seems far, but an overlap like this might be a little complex for beginners. Fixed~
11. 01:49:283 (1) - Remove the finish hitsound, since other diffs aren't added there..... or maybe add finish on other diffs at the same part? Fixed by adding finishes to the other diffs.
12. 02:19:283 (3) - Looks fine, but try to move this downgrid for a triangle formation. Fixed~
13. 02:25:377 (1) - This spinner seems too fast for beginners to start spinning and during the spin. It appears quickly, and disappears quickly... seemingly unrankable. Try to increase length of the spinner, or remove it and map some notes.Okay, Fixed
14. 02:36:158 (7) - IMO, I prefer Ctrl + G here, because it's much noticeable for beginners after they clicked the previous circle. Fixed~
15. - This diff looks fine and okay. Some flows lack aesthetic, still seems fine! ^_^

[> Normal <]

1. 00:27:720 (3,4) - This could've been better if it's symmetric imo. Fixed~
2. 00:37:095 (6,1) - Try to recorrect this for a better parallel. Fixed~
3. 00:43:658 (3) - I prefer this slider curved, not a straight one. It might look nicer, if you try so.
4. 00:59:595 (6) - Same issue as the previous diff, slidertail is inaudible. Same answer as other diff.
5. 01:19:283 (1,2,3) - It's probably minor, but recorrect blanket. Fixed~
6. 01:53:033 (1,1) - This pattern would look perfect if they're in the same sliding position. Fixed~
7. 01:58:189 (7) - Same as 00:43:658 (3) - Fixed~
8. - Pretty much a good diff! ^_^ Just because you focused much on blankets doesn't means it makes the map perfect, quality matters ofc ;p GJ~

[> Hard <]

1. 00:23:970 (4,5,6) - You have a weird spaced triplets here, you might need a check for this. What's weird about it?
2. 00:38:033 (1) - I guess you missed a finish hitsound here. Fixed~
3. 00:39:908 (1,2) - The flowing will look better if you Ctrl + G this two circles. Watch the spacing. Fixed~
4. 00:41:431 - I'm not sure what are you using this inherited point for. It doesn't seem any notes passing through it, so you should delete this. It was someone's suggestion. I'll change it a bit.
5. 00:46:470 (3,4,5) - Same as 00:23:970 (4,5,6) - I don't understand what's so weird about it.
6. 00:57:486 (3,4,5) - Spacing~ Fixed~
7. 01:00:533 (1,4) - I think you may need to stack these circles completely, I don't see it correctly stacked. Fixed~
8. 01:14:830 (4,5) - I feel the rhythm should be swapped here, likely Ctrl + G. It sounds much better than the current one. Fixed~
9. 01:28:189 (4) - Reselect the Addition hitsound from Normal to Drum. You missed this one? Fixed~
10. 01:32:173 (6,1,2) - Spacing~ Fixed~
11. 01:35:220 (5,6) - Remake them as the same sliding position, it'd be much neater imo. Fixed, I thought that they were though @_@
12. 01:37:329 (5,6,7,1) - The distance spacing here is a little sudden, I don't think it make sense with the song track emphasis. It's best you remake this as 1.0x spacing as usual. I think it's fine, and I really like the emphasis there.
13. 01:56:548 (5,2) - Is it really necessary to hide the reverse arrow? Fixed~
14. 01:58:189 (4,5,1) - Spacing~ Fixed~
15. 02:00:533 (1,2) - I'm not sure, but maybe you could recorrect this blanket? Fixed~
16. 02:16:939 (4,1,2) - Spacing.... ehh, there are more of them further. Fixed~
17. 02:19:048 (6,3) - Stack slidertail correctly. Fixed~
18. - Maybe I shouldn't be a little mad, but i almost liked this diff! There are some miss-hitsounded, and flowing issues. I pointed out the ones that bugged me a little, but it's not a big deal ofc. Well, It's up to you~

Hmm, maybe that's enough. I'm too hard for soft things.
Good map~ Best of Luck!

infr4 wrote:

still great work that diff

if someone want remake that.

infr4 wrote:

still great work that diff

if someone want remake that.

jonawaga wrote:

You should be thanking paraoka, but she quit taiko mapping, and I can't find her profile on osu. I'm sorry but I'm probably not going to be adding taiko back to this map, if that's what you're asking.

Midge wrote:

m4m, sorry for being late, being super lazy when it comes to ranking maps.

[easy]

very dull diff. lots of 1/1 notes that seem to be kinda thrown in there. i know it's an easy diff, but you can still get creative with it. rankable, but again, dull. no other real problems aside from that, but you can't really fix it without remapping. No change. I like the simplicity.

[normal]
same problems i see in the easy, except it's all 1/2 now. Same reason.

1. 00:37:095 (6) - turn this into 2 sliders to emphasize the bass in the back, eg: http://hnng.moe/f/2bF Fixed~
2. 00:43:658 (3,4) - this can be emphasized much better eg: http://hnng.moe/f/2bG There's no sound 00:44:829 - here, and I'm going by the vocals anyway.
3. 00:45:064 (6,1) - swap these Those notes don't exist. http://hnng.moe/f/2bH
4. 01:05:220 (3,4) - nothing in the music really warrants a slider that starts on a red tick. try this http://hnng.moe/f/2bI I did something else, but fixed.
5. 01:04:752 (2,3) - HUUUUUGE ds increase. never do this. you should always use distance snap on easy-hard diffs I don't see a ds increase here... There was a big one around 02:00:533 - here, but I fixed it.
6. 01:13:189 (3) - ctrl+g, better flow Fixed~
7. 01:21:158 (3,4,5) - this is very well done, as it emphasizes the bass and the vocals at the same time, and the placement is well done too. I think it was someone else's suggestion lol
8. 02:25:376 (1) - out of place. you should map this section I feels in place because I'm going by the lyrics, and this is where the lyrics stop.

other 2 diffs are veeery similar. didn't really need to map a hard for this one imo.

[hard]

1. 00:41:548 - note here Fixed~
2. 01:00:298 (6,1,2) - ds change is too big imo it's fine imo
3. 01:14:829 (4) - no reason for this Are you talking about the red tick? Fixed~
4. 02:25:025 (1) - same deal Same reason.
5. 02:35:923 (5,6,1) - this is literally the first triplet in the whole map, lol. either add more triplets or change this one, because it kinda just comes out of nowhere. It's just the first stacked triplet, but fixed~

i kinda wanna skip the last diff, but message me ingame if you want me to irc it with you. That's okay.

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

1. I think your offset may be a little off. Try adjusting it by -15 ms, i.e. uninherited timing point should be at 8018.
2. Just my personal opinion, but I think your hitnormal may be a little too quiet. It fits with the song though, so you can leave it as is

1. 00:40:845 (3) – This slider could be made more neatly so that it blankets 00:41:783 (1) better
2. 02:31:001 (4) - ^; blanket with 02:31:939 (5)

1. 00:35:220 (4) – Maybe you can make this into a 1/2 slider? I think that would feel more appropriate here
2. 01:02:642 (1,3) – Use the same slider shape here; I think that making them symmetrical will look better
3. 01:32:408 (1,2,3,4) - ^; I think they all look a little off from each other
4. 02:15:533 (1,2) – The sliders look a little weird to me here, but it’s probably because of the way (1) is curved. Maybe try making it so that the (1) curves upwards instead?
   
   SPOILER

   note: you might want to make the (1) blanket (2)’s slider end; I didn’t do so in the image
   

1. 00:29:947 – Maybe you can add in circle here? Place it in the same spot as 00:29:829 (6) if you do
2. 00:50:220 (3) – Unnecessary middle pivot in this slider
3. 01:06:861 (3) – Maybe you can adjust this slider to something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:21:158 (1,2,3) – Make these blanket each other?
5. 01:37:915 – It sounds like the vocals are also on the blue tick here, so maybe you can add in a circle here to make a triplet
6. 01:56:197 – Feels like you missed a drum beat on this blue tick here. Maybe add in a circle or something? You’re probably going to want to move 01:56:314 (5) a bit closer if you do
7. 02:17:290 – ^

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my M4M Queue- sorry about the delay, already have midterms to write =w=;; That's okay~ ^^

IT’S SO FLUFFY I’M GONNA DIE- (╯✧∇✧)╯

Difficulties looked at: Easy, Normal, Hard, Fluffy

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded thank yuu

General

1. I think your offset may be a little off. Try adjusting it by -15 ms, i.e. uninherited timing point should be at 8018. Fixed, I think I can hear it better at 8018.
2. Just my personal opinion, but I think your hitnormal may be a little too quiet. It fits with the song though, so you can leave it as is The song is also quiet. I think they go well with each other.

Easy

1. 00:40:845 (3) – This slider could be made more neatly so that it blankets 00:41:783 (1) better Fixed, slightly.
2. 02:31:001 (4) - ^; blanket with 02:31:939 (5) ^

Not much I could find on this difficulty, well done (╯✧∇✧)╯

Normal
Couldn’t find anything wrong here; it looks fine to me (╯✧∇✧)╯

Hard

1. 00:35:220 (4) – Maybe you can make this into a 1/2 slider? I think that would feel more appropriate here I like it how it is.
2. 01:02:642 (1,3) – Use the same slider shape here; I think that making them symmetrical will look better Fixed.
3. 01:32:408 (1,2,3,4) - ^; I think they all look a little off from each other
4. 02:15:533 (1,2) – The sliders look a little weird to me here, but it’s probably because of the way (1) is curved. Maybe try making it so that the (1) curves upwards instead? Fixed, changed the part before this too.
   
   SPOILER

   note: you might want to make the (1) blanket (2)’s slider end; I didn’t do so in the image
   

Fluffy

1. 00:29:947 – Maybe you can add in circle here? Place it in the same spot as 00:29:829 (6) if you do I don't think there's a sound there.
2. 00:50:220 (3) – Unnecessary middle pivot in this slider Fixed.
3. 01:06:861 (3) – Maybe you can adjust this slider to something like this? Yep, fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:21:158 (1,2,3) – Make these blanket each other? That would involve making them less curved, so instead, I made it not look like a blanket.
5. 01:37:915 – It sounds like the vocals are also on the blue tick here, so maybe you can add in a circle here to make a triplet I hear "darou" like da-rou, not da-a-rou.
6. 01:56:197 – Feels like you missed a drum beat on this blue tick here. Maybe add in a circle or something? You’re probably going to want to move 01:56:314 (5) a bit closer if you do I don't hear it, not even on 25% speed. The drum is 01:56:064 - here.
7. 02:17:290 – ^ ^ The drum's 02:17:158 - here.

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Well, that’s all I can find Already has a lot of mods, so there really wasn't much I could find. Hope this helps Thanks, it did!

Xelasto wrote:

0-o Oh my gosh I didn't realize you did M4M with me. Screw me. But it seems this map is still going, so let me give it my best shot. Sorry if it's not the best. I haven't modded in a while. No worries!

Easy

HP Drain: At least 2 Fixed~ 2, 4, 6, 7 makes a lot more sense than 1, 4, 6, 7
Overall Difficulty: At least 2 ^
The background is blurry. Try getting a higher res one. Usually 1366 x 768 is good. It was 1366 x 768 , just blurry. I switched it for a less blurry one.

00:32:393 (4) - NC (new combo) NC here is every 8 beats, or every 2 measures. That would be inconsistent.
00:51:611 (3,4,1,2) - I suggest the pattern not be so boxy. Kinda makes it feel weird. Fixed, a bit.
00:54:893 (3,4,1) - Really weird flow. I suggest 1 curves down instead of up and to the right, as it makes a hook motion. Fixed!
01:02:393 (4) - NC Inconsistent.
01:08:018 (1,2,3,4) - This also feels weird when playing. Fixed!
01:56:768 (4) - NC That would be inconsistent.
02:04:268 (4) - ^ ^
02:10:361 (2,3) - These shapes look really odd. Try opening them up. Fixed!
02:24:893 I really don't think mapping is necessary after this point, but if you really want to Not mapping this part leaves a lot of it unmapped.
02:34:268 (4) - NC Inconsistent.
02:36:143 (7) - NC That makes sense. Fixed!
02:38:955 (1) - No NC ^
02:38:955 (1) - This note has too many hitsounds on it's end. I really think it shouldn't have any hitsounds because the song is quiet and ends abruptly. Fixed!

Nice difficulty, but it does seem very repetitive. Other than that good job Thanks~ ^^

Normal

00:37:549 (7,1) - I suggest you instead delete 1, extend 7 up until the finish, and continue on. 3 Fast sliders in a row isn't fun for new players. That would ruin the NC
00:45:049 (5) - NC here and not on the next note. I did something different.
01:00:986 (2) - NC on this note not the last one. The end if the kiai is a perfect place for NC.
01:15:518 (1,2,3,4) - Too many fast sliders. Consider combining them. I changed 1 into a circle.
01:19:736 (2) - NC here not the last note Same reason.
01:25:361 (4) - This slider should be repeat. I think it fits the music more. That makes 01:26:299 - this lose emphasis, and defeats the purpose of the blanket.
01:36:611 (5) - NC Inconsistent.
01:38:018 (1) - No NC ^
01:55:830 (2,3) - Make these a different shape. Looks odd together. Changed a bit.
01:57:939 (6) - Raise this up a bit. Looks really weird. Changed a lot.
02:06:611 (2,5) - Why not start these two on the same place? Fixed!
02:12:939 (4,5) - Make one slider, might be a bit too tricky for new players. There's no reason to start a slider on this red tick. Also, that makes 02:13:174 - this lose emphasis.
02:16:455 (5,6,7,1) - Combine some notes here. Too many notes at once. Fixed!
02:24:189 (4) - Unnecessary beat. The "A" in ARPK
02:38:955 (1,2) - Please help these poor abused sliders, who were unfairly thrown into the corner and overlapped. ;-; Donate now. Fixed! Can't leave this alone ^^
02:39:424 (2) - Also no hitsound on the end since the song has none. Fixed!

Nice difficulty, just too many fast sliders and a few other weird things. Looking good. It should be a lot less weird now.

Hard

00:28:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is some weird flow. Change it up a bit. Fixed!
00:40:830 (4,5) - This comes really suddenly and as a surprise. Might catch a lot of hard mode players off guard considering the stuff before it. I don't see how this could catch someone off guard.
00:52:080 (4,5) - Improve these blankets. Fixed!
00:53:486 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:53:955 (4,5,6) - The sudden change downwards flows oddly. Fixed, but only because others have mentioned this.
01:00:752 (2) - NC here, not the last note. Inconsistent. (NC's are usually green ticks.)
01:10:830 (3,4) - Once again, is kinda a surprise and plays odd. Fixed. (I really see what you mean here.)
01:12:705 (4,5) - This one actually doesn't flow that badly, so this one is fine. I want to make them circles.
01:27:236 (2) - Instead replace this with a repeating slider, with the hitsound on the repeat. The sudden silence is boring. I did something different, but it filled the silence, so fixed!
01:32:393 (1,2,3,4) - This is a weird pattern. Try improving it to be more symmetrical. Fixed!
01:38:018 (1) - Not a necessary NC. The kiai changes, and it follows the pattern that every NC follows. It is necessary.
01:51:025 (6,1) - Maybe add whistles? I added normal whistles. (There are 3 whistles though: normal, drum, and soft.)
02:02:393 (1) - Curve the end a bit more to make the blanket better. Fixed!
02:04:971 (2,3,4,5) - Once again, the block pattern is not very fun to play or look at. Fixed!
02:04:033 (5,2,1) - Bad overlap. Fixed!
02:15:049 (4) - Curve the end a bit more. Fixed a little bit.
02:24:893 (1) - NC not necessary. Same reason.
02:30:283 (4,1) - Just make it a repeating slider. Why? It ruins the NC.
02:30:752 (2,3,4,1) - Flows really oddly. Try changing it a little, Fixed!
02:35:908 (5,1) - make it a repeating slider. Okay, Fixed!
02:38:018 (1) - No NC Inconsistent.

Nice difficulty. Just a few weird spots that play oddly and some unnecessary NCs. Noice

Very nice song. It has GREAT hitsounds. (They're LordRaika's hitsounds. I think I recommended getting hitsounds from LordRaika in my mod) Just a few parts have odd flow and NCs. Also try to somehow make easy a tiny bit less repetitive. Hope this gets ranked. Good luck! Thanks! ^^

ReFaller wrote:

Hi, i'm modding this for my sister. Thanks so much~!
[General]
artist: baker, as a user (imo) isn't the best choice, because this song sings hatsune miku - this artist should be used (but remember type huge letters where is needed) Imo, it's fine because baker did most of the work, and it's easy to find this song by searching baker.
[Easy]
00:40:361 (2) - you may stack with 00:37:549 (5) Fixed~
From 01:00:518 (1) to 01:07:080 (4) i prefer break time. If you decided for break, delete not important green timing goodies. That would be inconsistent with the other diifs, and I want to map as much as possible.
02:02:393 (1) - move to y:96 Why?
02:24:893 (1) - why additional normal sampleset? rest of diffs have in this place without it Fixed~
[Normal]
02:32:393 (1) - you probably kicked the flow Fixed, a bit.
[Hard]
i recognize that CLEAR (ノ°▽°)ノ
[Fluffy]
you call it insane? Custom name works for the hardest diff in a mapset, which is "Fluffy" in this case.
00:50:674 (3) - you forgot add clap Fixed~
01:54:189 (4) - here might be a NC That would be inconsistent.
01:54:307 (5) - set additional drum sampleset Fixed~
I think that's all. My sister can't wait when it will be ranked

jonawaga wrote:

ReFaller wrote:

you call it insane? Custom name works for the hardest diff in a mapset, which is "Fluffy" in this case.

ReFaller wrote:

I mean difficulty is imo too easy for an insane.

Smokeman wrote:

[Easy]

00:23:018 (1,2,3) - try making turning this into a more circular motion. (you have it easy here since its the first note.. you can just move it and save the rest of the apttern http://puu.sh/mJcvJ/68521fd117.jpg Fixed~
00:25:830 (4,5,1) - You could move those aswell, but it doesnt look too bad I'm going for a straight flow there.
00:30:518 (1,2,3) - you could argue that this rectangle doesnt look very nice. if you are going to fix this then try putting these 00:32:393 (4,5) - into the slider flow aswell Fixed somewhat~
00:50:205 (2) - make this less sharp http://puu.sh/mJcE7/7f5a072484.jpg Fixed~
00:51:611 (3,4,1,2) - this would benefit aswell if you did a circular move (smth liek this is possible aswell http://puu.sh/mJcLF/d4832972f5.jpg but i dont know if its worth fixing since the rest of the pattern after the slider might get wonky) Isn't that worse flow? I did something a bit different.
01:19:736 (2) - so close to be outside the playfield xD. its fine doe no change then XD
02:09:424 (4,1,2) - put those into a circular motion. After adjusting the rest of the patterns you should move this one 02:13:643 (1) - up relative to 02:13:174 (4) - Fixed~ (I think)
02:38:955 (3) - change this with a 1/2 repeat slider mb ? That would be the only 1/2 beat slider in the map, and it would catch Esay players off-guard.


[Normal]

00:30:518 (1) - move this a bit down (mb to 176|84) to enhance your swag :^) Fixed~
00:36:143 (4,5) - you shoudl keep the 1/1 rythm here. This slider is a bit too sudden for this dif level. Mb just put a note on 00:36:611 - Simplified a bit, but it works with the rhythm so well I don't want to remove it and make 1/1 patterns
01:08:018 (1,2) - try not to put stacks in nomals at all Okay, I make it a 1/2 repeating slider instead, but that's not much better.
01:14:111 (4) - move the sldierhead to 328|128 . This circular motion fits betetr (adjust the note after the slider respectivly) Fixed, I raised it, but not to 328|128.
02:25:361 (1) - refrain from puttng spinner in the middle pf maps. You should map this part. (Sinenrs mess up more than they fix D: ) I'll try to fix this later...
02:38:955 (1,2) - move those a bit farther away so they dont look liek they are spaced the same as these 02:36:611 (2,3) - Fixed~


[Hard]

00:37:080 (3,4,5) - i think this triple breaks more than it does good. 00:37:197 (4) - remove this Fixed~
try to remap the kiai w/o slider velo changes (you sped it up to 1.25). hards usually stick with 1.0 and rarely a bit under if it is RLY necessary. But it's fun and it gives emphasis~!
02:25:010 (1) - SPINNAAAR (same like wiht the normal) I'll try to fix this later...
02:30:752 (2) - remove this Fixed~
02:38:955 (1,2) - map this to a 1/2 rythm (liek in your normal) Fixed~

doesnt look too bad. i dont know about the antipumps/stacks you did sometimes

[Fluffy]

00:31:689 (5,6) - the spacing is offputting Fixed~
00:33:564 (6,7) - same Fixed~
00:46:924 - this yould be clickable D: Fixed
00:52:549 (5,6) - move those a bit more away from the other notes so they dont "nearly touch" eachother Fixed~
00:54:424 (7) - a slider here would emphasis this better It's not much of a difference here.
01:26:299 - samem as before (make it clackable) Fixed~
01:31:924 - its allways the second and fourth white tick. The same to those triples ending on an important note Okay, I went arounf the map fixing this.
01:37:314 (3,4,5,6,1) - remove the triplet and space them like 6 and 1 No, I like the way it sounds. Miku says "da-a-ke da-rou".
01:54:189 (4,5,6,7,8) - try so space it less since the end of this stream is kinda weak Fixed~
02:04:736 - here aswell (clickable) Fixed~
02:24:189 (6,7,8,9,1) - chaneg this to smth like this http://puu.sh/mJeI7/724717e86e.jpg I want it to be clickable :p
02:25:127 (1) - SPINNAR I'll try to fix this later...
02:36:377 - you can put a note inbetween so you dont have this akward double It doesn't feel awkward. It feels fine.

not bad. The Fluffy one needs some work doe

good luck!!

1. I guess there might be a mod that suggested you to change the offset, and you changed it right? If that's the case you have to take a look at those green lines to because you have to resnap them after you changed the offset.

1. Nothing much to mention I guess, just some symmetry patterns could be polished a bit for a better flow.

1. 01:02:393 (3,4) - DS
2. 00:30:518 (1,2) - Linear flow here's kinda awkward to play imo.
3. 01:04:268 (1) - I would ctrl+H this for a better flow with 01:05:205 (2) . And I think breaking the flow here 01:02:861 (4,1) wouldn't be that hurt because you already put an NC on 01:04:268 (1) .
4. 02:30:049 (3,4) - Just a random nazi but improve blanket here pls. > http://puu.sh/mLAHS/5fc305c214.jpg

1. 00:35:205 (4) - Could have been positioned a bit to the right for a better flow, I know that you're trying to keep a consistent DS here but do sth about it pls.
2. 01:18:330 (4) - This slider's kinda touch the life bar, move it down a bit please. > http://puu.sh/mLAR8/6311b3a0f4.jpg
3. 02:18:564 (5,6) - Flow's kinda weird imo, not sure how to describe this properly.
4. 02:38:955 (1,2) - Just my opinion but I'd change these to 4 circles instead as that way gives more impact at the end. Also applies to Fluffy.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

1. I guess there might be a mod that suggested you to change the offset, and you changed it right? If that's the case you have to take a look at those green lines to because you have to resnap them after you changed the offset. Right, I had changed it for the most part. There were still a few errors in Easy/Normal/Hard and a lot of errors on Fluffy, but they're all fixed now. Also, the Preview Point was unsnapped, but I fixed it.

[Easy]

1. Nothing much to mention I guess, just some symmetry patterns could be polished a bit for a better flow. Thanks anyway~

[Normal]

1. 01:02:393 (3,4) - DS How am I still making ds errors in Normal... T_T Fixed~
2. 00:30:518 (1,2) - Linear flow here's kinda awkward to play imo. Fixed a bit~
3. 01:04:268 (1) - I would ctrl+H this for a better flow with 01:05:205 (2) . And I think breaking the flow here 01:02:861 (4,1) wouldn't be that hurt because you already put an NC on 01:04:268 (1). Fixed~
4. 02:30:049 (3,4) - Just a random nazi but improve blanket here pls. > http://puu.sh/mLAHS/5fc305c214.jpg Fixed a bit~

[Hard]

1. 00:35:205 (4) - Could have been positioned a bit to the right for a better flow, I know that you're trying to keep a consistent DS here but do sth about it pls. Fixed~
2. 01:18:330 (4) - This slider's kinda touch the life bar, move it down a bit please. > http://puu.sh/mLAR8/6311b3a0f4.jpg Fixed~ How did I let that happen...
3. 02:18:564 (5,6) - Flow's kinda weird imo, not sure how to describe this properly. It looks like the old mapping style, doesn't it. XD Fixed a bit~
4. 02:38:955 (1,2) - Just my opinion but I'd change these to 4 circles instead as that way gives more impact at the end. Also applies to Fluffy. Fixed in Fluffy, but it's fine here.

Good luck~, the mapset looks pretty good now~
And sry for not modding the highest diff lol.

Marianna wrote:

Hallow M4M

Easy

1. 01:17:861 (4,2,3) - It is very strange to see the same sliders so close and pointed to different bind it leaves very bad flow. Aconcelho putting CTRL J here 01: 19: 736 (2.3) - Fixed~ (I think.)
2. 01:35:205 (2,3,4,1) - Move this to x:408 y:228 for one better flow Fixed~
3. 02:24:893 (1,2) - For better flow transform it into a slider Fixed~

Normal

1. The distance of difficulty between Normal and Hard is unrankeable concider put an Advanced or leave the Hard easier
   I'll start mapping Advanced. Thanks.

Gl~ ^^

Swegmec wrote:

A mod for M4M:
I am doing Easy, Normal, and Advanced.

Easy:
00:34:268 (1,2) - Make 2 Follow 1, not be next to it. It's fine the way it is.
00:38:018 (1) - Interrupts the flow. Keep the current rhythm instead of a long slider. Fixed~
00:50:205 (2) - Take the repeat out and add another slider/circle. It follows the song the way it is. There's not really a reason to do that.
00:56:768 (1,2) - Align these so you go straight into it. It's fine the way it is.
01:12:705 (3,4) - Put the repeat on the 4, not the 3. Fixed~

Normal
00:36:143 (4,5,6,7) - A bit awkward note placement. Rearrange them. Changed a bit.
02:01:455 (5) - Put this 1/2 beat earlier. Why?
02:15:518 (3,4,5) - Put a circle 1/2 beat after 3, then 1 big slider in place of 4 and 5. Why? That would be inconsistent and the current rhythm is fine.
02:37:080 (3,1,2) - Put a circle in between here. But there's no sound besides static...

Advanced
00:31:689 (3) - Take this out. I'll switch it for a circle.
00:33:564 (4) - ^ ^
00:44:932 (3,4,5) - Move all back 1/4 beat, then move 5 so it is equal time apart as 3 and 4 (so it goes 3-4-5 instead of 3-4--5) I think making (4) and (5) a slider would be a better way to fix this.
01:21:611 (2,3) - Place a circle 1/2 beat before 3. But there's no sound there.
01:23:018 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make 3/4/5 1/2 beat apart. (1) and (2) are a half beat apart, and there is no object (5). (3) is a reverse slider.
01:31:689 (3,4) - Make these 1/2 beat apart. I made (1) and (2) a slider.
??? I don't know if you just haven't finished, but there are no notes after about 1:32! Maybe my error, or maybe you haven't finished, but check this. It's not finished. This difficulty was added because of the previous mod. It's done now.

-Tochi wrote:

• 
  

  Fluffy

1. 00:24:189 (5,6,7) - Why not make the spacing here consistent? 00:25:830 (4,5,6) - Like here. Fixed~ I blame grid-snap xD
2. 00:37:666 (7,9) - Im pretty sure that there's no sound in the music here, i would highly recommend to remove them before the BNs tells you that >.< Fixed, but I'm keeping the anti-jump.
3. 00:57:236 (2) - Maybe move to x:480 y:232 to make the spacing more consistent so it fits with the previous part like 00:54:424 (7,8,1) - spacing here is consistent. Why not~
4. 01:00:049 (7,8,1,2) - I don't really like the flow of this even if the blanket might look good and all, but i recommend u to keep this part in mind. You're right~ Fixed~
5. 01:13:643 (1,2) - Improve the blanket, by making the slider more curvy? Fixed~
6. 01:21:143 (1,2,3) - Why not the same as 00:43:643 (1,2,3) - People might think it's fast sliders again since the earlier sliders were fast. This was a mistake... Fixed~
7. 01:50:674 (5,6,1) - Use DS (Distance Snap) to make the spacing consistent. Right now 01:51:025 (6) - is: http://puu.sh/mOHIa/f29390fe24.jpg But it should be consistent: http://puu.sh/mOHKh/3382c85330.jpg Prev = Previous object, Next = Next object, look at the upper right when highlighting an object. Fixed~ I know what you mean~

• 
  

  Hard

1. 01:36:611 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Isn't there too many circles here for a Hard? Fixed a bit~
2. 02:26:768 (1,2) - Swap the NC, so it start on the slider. That would be inconsistent, but I fixed a different NC around here.

• 
  

  Normal

1. Didn't find anything x.x It's okay~ (＾▽＾)

• 
  

  Feedback

  
  Sorry, not good at modding lower diffs xD
  Sorry for taking long time before modding this :/
  Good luck with this!

1. Song Folder: BG looks kinda blurry, I'd try searching for a higher quality alternative
2. Song Setup: CS3.8 for Normal and Advanced leaves little in the way of spread balance, and also is a large jump from Easy which is CS3. Suggest changing Normal to CS3.4 or so to remedy this. Also AR4 to AR6.5 from Normal to Advanced is quite a large gap, Normal AR5 would be more appropriate in this case
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Timing: Offset is very early right now, try 8040 (+22). Use Timing menu (F6), select all timing points and "move seleceted by..." to save yourself a lot of time. Don't forget to resnap notes and preview point as well. Additionally, consider dragging the start of your break to 01:38:508 so that the fade out of HUD coincides with the strong drum beat there for a better aesthetic. Lastly, why is 02:09:915 - 02:24:915 not kiai time when it's the same musical rhythm as your current kiai sections?
5. Hitsounds: soft-hitnormal is very quiet, almost inaudible compared to the other hitsounds. Suggest increasing the volume of this or finding an alternative. Additionally, drum-hitwhistle is exceptionally loud, and to a point, is drowning out the music where you use it. I'd reduce the volume on this slightly
6. AImod: No issues

1. 00:38:040 (1) - This (or at least the head) should be moved down, both for neater flow into and out of 00:37:571 (5,2) and to avoid the overlap with 00:41:790 (1)
2. 02:01:008 (4,2) - Try moving (2) somewhere else or rearranging this to avoid the overlap here, it's quite noticeable
3. 02:33:352 (3) - Missing whistle on head?

1. 00:28:643 (4,5,6) - This is a huge difficulty spike early in the map relative to what you've been mapping. Removing (5) would be a more fitting alternative here, as it introduces 1/2 rhythms in groups of (2) only, which also avoids introducing a sizeable difficulty increase from the Easy, using strictly 1/1 throughout
2. 00:36:143 (4,5,6,7) - Very odd rhythm choice here, looks like you decided to switch between vocals and drums in the middle of a measure with no indication... I think that a better option here would be 1/1 slider on the downbeat for vocals, then two 1/2 sliders at 00:37:080 - for drums, since this allows you to emphasize the drum buildup without creating a huge difficulty spike due to higher hit leniency on sliders
3. 00:38:018 (1,2) - Really awkward looking flow, this can be improved with a more flowing movement instead of an angular one
4. 00:51:611 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try varying your direction here, at the moment the player jusy has to move clockwise for 8 seconds and it feels a little stale to play
5. 02:13:174 (5,1) - Another very awkward flow to both look at and play, something like this would be much better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4846273
6. 02:37:080 (3) - ^ Rotate anticlockwise ~45 degrees and move up for a better flow into and out of this

1. 00:32:627 (2,3) - Advise against stacking here if you plan to keep 00:44:932 (3,4) - since these both look identical but are differently snapped, which will confuse a lot of players at this level. Personally, I wouldn't introduce 1/4 tapped patterns until Hard, since this presents a huge difficulty jump from Normal at present. If you do decide to keep those though, make sure you unstack similar 1/2 patterns such as 00:49:033 (4,1) for consistency
2. 00:46:455 (3,4,5) - E.g. an alternative here would be circle + 1/4 repeat slider + circle, or something similar to what you did at 01:24:189 (3,4)
3. 02:06:611 (2) - Might overlap with some skinned HP bars, see if you can move this down slightly at all to avoid this

1. 00:35:205 (4) - Why is this not a slider? There's a long vocal sound here, so leaving this as just a circle feels weird and inconsistent
2. 00:36:611 (2,3,4,5) - Linear pattern feels kinda boring here, you could make this into a shallow zig-zag or curve to give it more definition
3. 02:17:627 (2,5) - These are awfully close to overlapping and look squashed, try unblanketing (5) and moving somewhere else, or else rotating it and moving (6) further down.
4. 02:23:018 (1,2,3,4) - Considering you emphasized the tails with loud snare hits, shouldn't (1,2) be 4 circles and (3,4) a slider? would allow you to emphasize the strong beats much more effectively

1. 00:37:080 (5,6,7) - These 4 hits are all of equal strength, so they should all be clickable objects imo. Swap the slider (5) out for two circles with the same spacing as 00:37:549 (6,7,1) for a "doublet" pattern - or, arrange the four in a square pattern, or a star pattern with 00:38:018 (1)
2. 00:43:643 (1,2) - SV change is quite drastic here and is not immediately noticeable from the rhythm. A smaller multiplier like 1.25x would work better here for readability. Be sure to do the same at similar points such as 01:21:143 (1,2)
3. 01:23:603 (4) - This beat is unnecessary, it's not following a strong sound and you already have a triple in this measure from 01:23:955 (6,7,8)
4. 01:37:314 (3,4,5,6) - For added emphasis to the end of the kiai, three 1.4 kicksliders would be good here to emphasize the small changes in the vocals
5. 01:54:541 (7) - Remove this, although there's a faint drum sound here, the two strong notes either side of it get weakended by the addition of this, since the stream gives all notes equal emphasis. triplet and single circle with spacing between them creates a unique pressure that feels much better to play
6. 02:25:127 (1) - Any reason why you placed a spinner here when you mapped this out in all the other diffs? Feels a little lazy and inconsistent, personally
7. 02:36:143 (1) - If this is following the trumpet sound, it should end on the 1/3 at 02:36:299 instead of the 1/4

JBHyperion wrote:

You modded my map so I feel I should drop some kind of mod here in return.

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: BG looks kinda blurry, I'd try searching for a higher quality alternative Fixed~ This is like the fifth times this has happened...
2. Song Setup: CS3.8 for Normal and Advanced leaves little in the way of spread balance, and also is a large jump from Easy which is CS3. Suggest changing Normal to CS3.4 I'll take 3.5 here. or so to remedy this. Also AR4 to AR6.5 from Normal to Advanced is quite a large gap, Normal AR5 would be more appropriate in this case Fixed~
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Timing: Offset is very early right now, try 8040 (+22). Use Timing menu (F6), select all timing points and "move seleceted by..." to save yourself a lot of time. Don't forget to resnap notes and preview point as well. Additionally, consider dragging the start of your break to 01:38:508 so that the fade out of HUD coincides with the strong drum beat there for a better aesthetic. Lastly, why is 02:09:915 - 02:24:915 not kiai time when it's the same musical rhythm as your current kiai sections? Fixed all~
5. Hitsounds: soft-hitnormal is very quiet, almost inaudible compared to the other hitsounds. Suggest increasing the volume of this or finding an alternative. Additionally, drum-hitwhistle is exceptionally loud, and to a point, is drowning out the music where you use it. I'd reduce the volume on this slightly Fixed both~
6. AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

1. 00:38:040 (1) - This (or at least the head) should be moved down, both for neater flow into and out of 00:37:571 (5,2) and to avoid the overlap with 00:41:790 (1) Fixed~
2. 02:01:008 (4,2) - Try moving (2) somewhere else or rearranging this to avoid the overlap here, it's quite noticeable Fixed~
3. 02:33:352 (3) - Missing whistle on head? Yes, the head and the tail.

Normal

1. 00:28:643 (4,5,6) - This is a huge difficulty spike early in the map relative to what you've been mapping. Removing (5) would be a more fitting alternative here, as it introduces 1/2 rhythms in groups of (2) only, which also avoids introducing a sizeable difficulty increase from the Easy, using strictly 1/1 throughout Fixed~
2. 00:36:143 (4,5,6,7) - Very odd rhythm choice here, looks like you decided to switch between vocals and drums in the middle of a measure with no indication... I think that a better option here would be 1/1 slider on the downbeat for vocals, then two 1/2 sliders at 00:37:080 - for drums, since this allows you to emphasize the drum buildup without creating a huge difficulty spike due to higher hit leniency on sliders Fixed~
3. 00:38:018 (1,2) - Really awkward looking flow, this can be improved with a more flowing movement instead of an angular one Fixed~
4. 00:51:611 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Try varying your direction here, at the moment the player jusy has to move clockwise for 8 seconds and it feels a little stale to play Fixed~
5. 02:13:174 (5,1) - Another very awkward flow to both look at and play, something like this would be much better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4846273 Fixed differently. I'm not sure how to do what the ss shows without overlapping with 02:16:243 (3) - this.
6. 02:37:080 (3) - ^ Rotate anticlockwise ~45 degrees and move up for a better flow into and out of this Fixed~

Advanced

1. 00:32:627 (2,3) - Advise against stacking here if you plan to keep 00:44:932 (3,4) - since these both look identical but are differently snapped, which will confuse a lot of players at this level. Personally, I wouldn't introduce 1/4 tapped patterns until Hard, since this presents a huge difficulty jump from Normal at present. If you do decide to keep those though, make sure you unstack similar 1/2 patterns such as 00:49:033 (4,1) for consistency Fixed wherever I could. I tried to take stacking out of this difficulty. Are rhythms like 01:31:711 (3,4) - this and 02:03:586 (4,5) - this okay though?
2. 00:46:455 (3,4,5) - E.g. an alternative here would be circle + 1/4 repeat slider + circle, or something similar to what you did at 01:24:189 (3,4) Fixed~
3. 02:06:611 (2) - Might overlap with some skinned HP bars, see if you can move this down slightly at all to avoid this Fixed~

Hard

1. 00:35:205 (4) - Why is this not a slider? There's a long vocal sound here, so leaving this as just a circle feels weird and inconsistent Fixed~
2. 00:36:611 (2,3,4,5) - Linear pattern feels kinda boring here, you could make this into a shallow zig-zag or curve to give it more definition Fixed~
3. 02:17:627 (2,5) - These are awfully close to overlapping and look squashed, try unblanketing (5) and moving somewhere else, or else rotating it and moving (6) further down. Fixed by stacking~
4. 02:23:018 (1,2,3,4) - Considering you emphasized the tails with loud snare hits, shouldn't (1,2) be 4 circles and (3,4) a slider? would allow you to emphasize the strong beats much more effectively Fixed~

Fluffy

1. 00:37:080 (5,6,7) - These 4 hits are all of equal strength, so they should all be clickable objects imo. Swap the slider (5) out for two circles with the same spacing as 00:37:549 (6,7,1) for a "doublet" pattern - or, arrange the four in a square pattern, or a star pattern with 00:38:018 (1) Fixed, that plays well.
2. 00:43:643 (1,2) - SV change is quite drastic here and is not immediately noticeable from the rhythm. A smaller multiplier like 1.25x would work better here for readability. Be sure to do the same at similar points such as 01:21:143 (1,2) Both lowered to 1.2x
3. 01:23:603 (4) - This beat is unnecessary, it's not following a strong sound and you already have a triple in this measure from 01:23:955 (6,7,8) Removed~
4. 01:37:314 (3,4,5,6) - For added emphasis to the end of the kiai, three 1.4 kicksliders would be good here to emphasize the small changes in the vocals Fixed~
5. 01:54:541 (7) - Remove this, although there's a faint drum sound here, the two strong notes either side of it get weakended by the addition of this, since the stream gives all notes equal emphasis. triplet and single circle with spacing between them creates a unique pressure that feels much better to play Fixed~
6. 02:25:127 (1) - Any reason why you placed a spinner here when you mapped this out in all the other diffs? Feels a little lazy and inconsistent, personally You're right, I was feeling lazy Mapped~
7. 02:36:143 (1) - If this is following the trumpet sound, it should end on the 1/3 at 02:36:299 instead of the 1/4 Fixed~

This is all from me. If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.
Good luck! (:

ReFaller wrote:

No kudosu, unless you want
[Hard]
02:38:977 (1,2) - XD They are 1/8 beat too long (sliderends are snapped on yellow ticks....blleeeeehhhh) Thanks, but I found it too.
It's an error after resnapping

JapanYoshiTheGamer wrote:

Include a custom whistle hitsound or tone it down a bit. It gets annoying fast. Also, it's pronounced Omou, not Omofu.

Nepuri wrote:

[General]

OD seems a bit off...
Muzukashii could be 4.5 at this bpm (quite low), and also gives leniency on the blue tick 1/2 spaced rhythms.
Oni doesnt call for a 6, its too slow and undense for that, I recommend a 5 for this.
Fluffy would be fit with a 5.5 since its a tad above oni fixed

HP seems appropiate! lovely

Maybe you should map out the intro for each diff. It not having vocals isnt really a valid excuse since you mapped out 02:24:915 - This outro too, which also has no vocals soooo... Yea sure

[Muzukashii]

00:29:602 - This 2/1 break moment feels weird since it skips over 2 beats while the vocals set out... I suggest you place a note here at this timestamp to give a smoother transition into the next vocal phrase, otherwise it feels kind of forced even for vocal mapping. fixed

00:43:665 (80,81,82,83,84) - kdkdk? A more steady sounding rhythm like that would support the beat thats shifting up a gear better. kdkdk should also work with the vocal emphasis i guess. but this is perfect lyric pitchmapping

01:07:102 - yes same logic skipping 2 beats is weeeeird...
same at 00:52:102 - etc, you get my idea. Please apply to all where it does apply fixed all

00:58:665 - Idk how to feel about this major buildup being ignored D: Its not signaled unlike the buildup before the kiai, which should be fixed imo as its inconsistent and breaks expectation...
01:36:165 - This has no buildup and has no contrast to the aforementioned section which is also bad... fixed

01:09:329 (178,187) - remove these 2 since they havent been mapped out at 00:33:704 - and 00:31:829 - . the 3/4 serve as a kind of break moment here aswell, which can help

01:21:165 (225,226,227,228,229) - kdkdk youve heard the suggestion before blah. no

01:29:602 - note here for reasons already stated aaa

Else nothing much to say :3 fixed rest

[Oni]

01:07:805 (205) - Remove since most instruments are taking a break here? Leaving out this note can emphasize this fixed

01:53:040 (397,398,399,400,401) - kdkdk would work here for same reasons as muzukashii aaaa no for the same reasons then

02:23:977 - Unfinish? Its not that different of a note from the others. what no it offers variety

I suggest you nerf this a bit overall, its very much close to the top diff, and doesnt have any stark differences between it and the top diff besides break placement. Not very healthy spread imo :/ oki

[Fluffy Oni]

I pretty much said all i wanted to say about it when i testplayed it for you. Its fine afaic c:


Good lucko~

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

m4m uwu
also need activity points for bn apps =3=

[- - Easy - -]

1. 00:08:040 (1,3) - This overlap doesn't look very good, does it? Stacking (3) onto (1) would be good, if you're afraid it might be too hard to read for beginners, you can always get more opinions and some testplays fixed
2. 00:15:070 (5,1,2) - You can make (1,2) into a slider to differentiate this part from the previous measure fixed
3. 00:19:290 - What I noticed is that you don't use consistent rhythm for same parts which is shown here and also in the previous sections, from the beginning. This can be quite a problem consistency-wise, I recommend you stick to simple rhythm and follow it until the end of the section, choose an instrument that you're gonna follow for simplicity it's so minor it's fine, and changing it would be difficult without destroying the pattern and the ds
4. 00:19:290 (1,2) - Ctrl+J (2) for better flow current flow seems more circular... please explain how this flow is "better"...
5. 00:29:602 (4) - To follow the previous pattern, make this the same shape as previous slider, just Ctrl+J it but... circular flow :/
6. 01:34:290 (1,2) - Putting two sliders without the same kind of curve can look random and you've never did it again in the map so it would be better to make them both same for aesthetic consistency fixed
7. 01:38:040 (1) - Move to x260 y134 for better flow and perfect triangle was changed with previous suggestion.
8. 01:51:165 (1) - Rotating by 120 degrees could result in better flow and aesthetics, just a suggestion ruins the current pattern
9. 01:53:040 (1,2) - You could try making this linear fixed
10. 01:53:040 (1,2,1) - This isn't perfectly linear, resulting in bad aesthetics, make it perfectly linear (if you didn't apply the suggestion above) fixed with above
11. 02:10:383 (2,4) - Not a nice overlap, try to stack fixed
12. 02:24:915 (1,3) - Basically the point above repeats so ima let you take care of that fixed
13. 02:37:102 (2) - Place in the center of the editor for flow fixed

Volta wrote:

[General]
i think 1.4 base SV looks better but yeah.

[Muzukashii]
00:27:258 (19,20,21) - maybe change to k-dd? i think it would suits the vocal better really goes agains the pitches here
00:30:305 - remove? pattern is kinda long here

00:37:219 - this note is kinda weird to me. I'd suggest to move to 00:37:102 - and change it to d, and add d at 00:37:336 - to follow the drum since it's more prominent than the trumpet i did something similar
01:14:719 - same as^

00:38:743 (1,2) - change to dd? it would make the higher pitched vocal at 00:39:680 (1,2) - more emphasized
00:47:180 - maybe change to d? it would make the flow more dynamic imo
00:54:680 - same as^
01:24:680 - same as^
01:32:180 - same as^
01:56:555 - ^
02:04:055 - ^

01:07:805 - remove?
01:16:711 (147,148) - change to k-d? follow pitch
01:33:586 ~ 01:38:040 - how about arrange them like this:

i think this will emphasize the vocal in a way better I did something similar

01:47:415 - maybe remove? i think a couple of break would reflect the calmness better

02:06:399 - consider to remove the note, since the vocal is stopped at 02:06:165 - it would be nice to highlight them
02:08:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider to change to ddddK, it would have greater impact this way imo it denies the vocal pitch though
02:16:477 - i think you should add note here, refer to 02:01:477 - , 01:29:602 - , 00:52:102 -
02:20:696 - maybe change to k since it has same drum sound as 02:20:461 - and higher pitch than 02:20:930 - ?

[Oni]
00:24:680 - i think dd or kk would fits the vocal better here denies pitch
00:29:836 - how about move this to 00:29:719 - to match the trumpet and create more interesting rhythm I don't wanna skip the lyric or make the pattern complex for the weaker trumpet

00:51:868 - , 00:51:985 - consider to add k to make the kiai a bit denser? it would make better spread between Muzu and Fluffy Oni
01:00:305 - maybe remove this note and add d at 00:59:368 - and 00:59:602 - instead? it makes better build up imo

01:12:844 - add a note here for the vocal? feels weird if empty imo. and maybe delete 01:14:133 - instead for the break
01:18:704 - move to 01:18:821 - to match the drum

01:29:368 - , 01:29:485 - add note, same as 1st kiai
02:01:243 - , 02:01:360 - add note, same as ^
02:16:243 - , 02:16:360 - add note, same as ^ added 1sts, but did not make triplets because thats excessive for a part of the song that i dont want to emphasize

02:09:678 - change to d? same as muzu, this denies vocal pitch

[Fluffy Oni]
00:24:680 - change to k? i think it sounds better since the vocal has same pitch with 00:24:797 -
00:37:336 - or 00:37:454 - add d? i think filling the drum or the melody could help create more stable rhythm
00:40:735 - maybe add d to mirror 00:39:446 (1,2,3,4) - ? too intense for this section

00:58:199 ~ 01:00:540 - how about this arrangement: I like the way my current arrangement emphasizes both the vocals and the trumppet

i think this way would give better emphasis to vocal at 00:58:899 - and trumpet at 01:00:071 -

01:14:836 - or 01:14:954 - add d? same as before
01:17:649 ~ 01:19:290 - how about: removes some vocal ep

this way would fits the vocal and drum in a way better

01:34:407 - change to d? more fits with the low pitch
02:06:282 - same as ^
02:17:649 - consider to add note here, since it's supposed to be the climax, feels weird if you suddenly have break here


call me back when it's ready~

Marianna wrote:

Shira's Light Insane

1. PLEASE FIX THOSE UNSNAPPED THINGS haha yea the sv was messed up when he copied the hs fixed !!
   
   
2. You ignored many of the audible tripplets to follow the undergrounds, this is not at all productive in gameplay, you expect to follow something and in the end you are forced to follow something that you are not even listening to, a very large example of this is here 00:08:508 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - where I am not even listening to the tripplet, but where it is necessary it is not. I mean, he's audible, but no more than the other, and the emphasis should be on what stands out most and you do this in the whole map. i chose not to follow most of the triplet sounds on purpose. im sure you realized that most of the map has the same melody. if i decided to add triplets here 00:09:329 - & 00:09:797 - it would be too overwhelming imo.. there would be like a triplet every single beat which i dont really want a pretty simple map to have. thats why i decided to go with the first triplet sound only
   
   
3. 00:34:758 (2,3,4) - Nazi³ this can be more straight.
   note: 00:46:008 (2,3,4) - 01:27:258 (2,3,4) - (etc) same how can a linear slider become more straight ?_?
   
   
4. 00:39:915 (1) - Put this in x:0 y:304 to be more emphasized than 00:39:446 (5) - (or somewhere else). nah i think the curve is enough
   
   
5. 00:43:665 (1) - This can be circles, just like 00:22:102 (1,2,3,4) -
   note: 01:21:165 (1) - 01:53:040 (1) - same mm i dont want a note spam before the kiai since i want to differentiate it
   
   
6. 01:22:805 - Be consistant and put something here, just like the first (and last) Kiai. there is no sound here unlike the first and last kiai
   
   
7. 01:37:805 (6,1) - If here is a jump, here should be too 01:00:305 (7,1) - yup

hi 2018, gl!

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Marianna wrote:

Hellow (v1 kills me)

General

1. Personally I find the hitsound a bit bland, you literally use the same on 80% of the map, the other 20% are the kiai with addition of claps. This is definitely not intuitive to play, it gets boring listening to the same sound the whole map, maybe adding some good whistles accompanying the instrumental would be of great help. not really necesary
   
2. Wheres the video on Shira's Diff? xd
   
3. Take a look at your AiMod (Light insane and Normal diff), theres is so many unsnapped objects lol

Easy

1. 00:09:915 (3,4) - This would flow better with a vertical movement, not straight, since the curved slider points up, it would be good to follow this movement. Just like this. but that breaks the obvious symmetry
   
2. 00:17:883 (4,1) - It's a little Nazi, though, using two equal sliders for two sessions with different sounds does not sound very good to me. Here 00:17:883 - the sound extends normally, but here 00:19:290 - the sound has a variant, maybe changing that leave the session a little less monotone. too detailed... symmetry is allowed even if the sounds aren't quite the same
   
3. 00:21:633 (3) - This slider covers something that does not exist, as pointed out previously, two equal sliders that follow completely different things, here you could have a little more creativity to follow the pause and beats of the music, this way sounds very strange. but it plays nice and easy for the player here
   
4. 00:21:633 (3,1) - This is a really a bad moviment x.x
   
5. 00:53:508 (2,3) - It's a very personal thing, but I really think that kind of thing very "eww", maybe something like that flows better?
   
6. 01:37:102 (4,5,1) - This curve is a bit repetitive, since many sliders before it have the same shape, how about letting it straight to emphasize the session? Like this. it's just a curve, it looks fine
   
7. 02:08:040 (3,4,1) - 01:37:102 (4,5,1) - 00:58:665 (3,4,1) - Those three should be consistant since theyre the basically the same sound in the same place. :thinking: (I highly prefer 3 circles). slight variation is allowed here

Normal

1. Strangely enough, this diff contains more 1/1 longs than the Easy difficulty (in the beginning of the map), I do not know if this is something necessarily bad, but it is inconsistent, the difficulty should increase and not decrease. (A larger SV does not make something necessarily harder than something). this is more 1/2
   
2. 00:29:836 (7) - That sounds very strange, the pace of these two 00:29:133 (6,7) - is changed, ctrl + g?
   note: 01:06:633 (6,7) - 01:36:633 (4,5) - the same goes here
   
3. 00:45:071 - Easy difficulty followed this rhythm, how about following here too? normal uses 1/2 rhythm here, easy only used 1/1 and it happened to work better
   
4. 00:49:290 (1,2) - Nazi², but it can be aesthetically better xD this looks pretty good without that

Advanced

1. 00:43:665 (1,2) - This should be different from 00:43:196 (3) - to have more emphasis than the previous note to these.
   note: 01:21:165 (1,2) - same er that makes the structure too confusing
   
   pretty solid diff lol

Hard

1. 00:13:430 (5,1) - Since you've done this here, you should do this here too 00:09:680 - 00:11:555 - (etc), at least where have the same sound.
   
2. 00:22:102 (3,4,5,6) - These notes should differentiate themselves from 00:23:040 (1) - , seem to be in the same sequence, this does not sound good since (1) should be emphasized because of the new session. how so?
   
3. 00:37:571 (5) - I do not think here is a good place to use a tripplet, there are places with greater instrumental emphasis (and with a more audible tripplet) to use this. it's a reverse slider so it hardly counts
   
4. 01:12:258 (3,4) - Another very personal thing, but aesthetically that is not cool. Maybe this?

hi 2018, gl!