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wowaka - World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix) [Osu|Taiko]

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Mira-san
Updated.

Thanks! :D
mintong89
Taiko is fine now.

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Bubbled!~
Stefan

mintong89 wrote:

Bubbled!~
How I do feel at the moment
Topic Starter
Mira-san

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko is fine now.

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Bubbled!~
Ok. FINALLY. hauehauehae :)
mintong89
Rebubbled, he's change something accidentally and fixed.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

mintong89 wrote:

Rebubbled, he's change something accidentally and fixed.
My bad. hahah
Yumeno Himiko
gratz for the bubble!!
AruOtta
GOOOO \:D/
izzydemon
FINALLY GOD DAMN
Eni

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Topic Starter
Mira-san
Thanks for the support everyone. :D
sheela
Finally!
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[General]
  1. Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For widescreen mode (recommended) the maximum is 960x540 pixels for 16:9 aspect ratio images. ← this is what I found in Ranking Criteria. Having an image with bigger dimensions is pointless, because it'll be downscaled (in case of 1366×768 it will be exactly 960×540) and then upscaled and only then used. It'll also reduce folder's size, so please consider using this (1366×768, filesize reduced) or this (960×540).
[AI's Extra]
  1. 00:29:209 (2,3) - when playtesting, I read this as 1/4 with no gap in between, several times in a row. Increase the spacing to make it readable, maybe (or is it just me?)
  2. 00:37:279 (1,2) - patterns like this one are confusing as hell to me, because they don't follow the song. Why?

    What I expect to play and also see on most of vocals: http://puu.sh/bifMG/19799053d9.jpg
    What I actually see: http://puu.sh/bifPJ/fb5533560d.jpg

    I'd strongly recommend you to fix every pattern that does not follow the vocals, because it is misleading. And, most of the nowadays maps (hel;l, even Mira's Insane in this mapset) have 1/4 spaced out as 1/2 on your difficulty. You also make it deceiving by using the same spacing b/ween 1/2 and 1/4 within a few seconds; example: 01:11:314 (4,5) -

  3. 00:56:928 (3) - missed a finish
  4. 01:07:366 (4,5,6,7) - please start them on red/white ticks because blue ones are insanely hard to catch and follow
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:402 − 00:11:665 — this is oddly hitsounded. You can clearly hear the clapping sound appearing on 2nd and 4th white ticks, not on 1st: http://puu.sh/bidqL/81e58c1b84.jpg
  2. 00:19:033 (1) - well, its end looks broken. How about you consider a better (at least it looks better to me) shape: http://puu.sh/bidDe/df4f6de393.jpg
  3. 00:33:770 (3,4,5,6,1) - there's a clear 1/4 beat inthe background, yet you left it unmapped. Why?
  4. 01:22:191 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - needs to be 1 + 3 + 1 + 3, according to vocals you're trying to follow: http://puu.sh/biepy/6b594af984.jpg
  5. 01:41:840 (1) - you skipped a finish
  6. 02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as before; remove (2) to get a correct notes placement
  7. 03:11:665 (1) - you skipped a finish
  8. 03:22:893 (1) - consider using drum finish
idk I like it even though you mapped only a few vocal parts the way they should've been mapped

[Hard]
  1. 02:21:840 (2,3,4,5,6) - shouldn't these have equal spacing?
  2. 02:24:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - same, you keep switching between 0.8? and 0.6
  3. 03:17:980 (3,4) - may be too harsh for a Hard, consider reducing it
[neonat's Normal]
  1. 00:12:016 (5) - that'd be cool to use a new combo here, because the storyboard gains colour exactly at this time
  2. 02:35:173 (1,2) - why did you use claps on vocals? They're horrible to listen to, and I am pretty sure you wanted to put a clap on 02:36:226 (3) - 's head
  3. 02:52:016 (1,2) - same as above
  4. 02:54:823 (1,1) - ^
  5. 03:12:717 (4) - missed a clap?
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
OD-1
  1. 00:11:665 (2) - I'd like you to replace it with two notes to not skip the downbeat at 00:12:016
  2. 00:34:472 (7) - should have a new combo instead of 00:34:823 (1) -
  3. 00:37:279 (2) - same

    well whatever, I'll just paste lolcubes' words as a good explanation:

    Generally, every combo should be a part of a section as a whole, usually one or two measures (stanzas) long. This may not always be the case (there are times when you can have a single note in a combo which fits, it all depends on what the objects follow in the music), however comboing should not be random.
    A lot of mapping styles tend to use their own new combo placements and the purpose of a new combo may have shifted it's meaning, but it's still easy to notice if the comboing makes no sense. Starting a new musical section with, lets say an object with a number 6, doesn't really make much sense.


    AND NOW BACK TO MODDING (I ASSUME YOU FIXED ALL NEW COMBO PROBLEMS AFTER CHECKING THE WHOLE DIFFICULTY BY YOURSELF)

  4. 00:55:524 (3) - I'd like you to replace it with two notes to not skip the downbeat on its end
  5. 01:42:191 (2) - reverse it? plays a bit better, I think
  6. 01:53:419 - you don't need this offset
  7. 04:02:191 (7) - missed finish
  8. 04:13:419 (5) - ^ (also remove clap, sounds out of place)
neonat
Changed some claps, added the new combo

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
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Title:World's End Dancehall (ROCKETMAN Remix)
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール (ROCKETMAN Remix)
Artist:wowaka
ArtistUnicode:wowaka
Creator:Mira-san
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Source:
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Topic Starter
Mira-san
Updated. Major changes within the Insane. Thank you. :D
_AI

TicClick wrote:

[General]
[AI's Extra]
  1. 00:29:209 (2,3) - when playtesting, I read this as 1/4 with no gap in between, several times in a row. Increase the spacing to make it readable, maybe (or is it just me?) Fixed! My bad mistake...
  2. 00:37:279 (1,2) - patterns like this one are confusing as hell to me, because they don't follow the song. Why? Why is it confusing you? It fit just the way I thought.

    What I expect to play and also see on most of vocals: http://puu.sh/bifMG/19799053d9.jpg
    What I actually see: http://puu.sh/bifPJ/fb5533560d.jpg

    I'd strongly recommend you to fix every pattern that does not follow the vocals, because it is misleading. And, most of the nowadays maps (hel;l, even Mira's Insane in this mapset) have 1/4 spaced out as 1/2 on your difficulty. You also make it deceiving by using the same spacing b/ween 1/2 and 1/4 within a few seconds; example: 01:11:314 (4,5) -

  3. 00:56:928 (3) - missed a finish Fixed
  4. 01:07:366 (4,5,6,7) - please start them on red/white ticks because blue ones are insanely hard to catch and follow
Fixed
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/bpfti/3450a80736.osu
Topic Starter
Mira-san
Updated. Thanks! :)
TicClick

_AI wrote:

00:37:279 (1,2) - why do you insist on keeping this? Patterns like this one need to follow vocals, which are on 3/4:


You should really, really consider to map it properly. Even Insane, which is easier than Extra, has all of these patterns fixed, so that they match the vocaloid's voice now, and it has resulted in a much better play experience one can achieve while playing the map.
TicClick
Recheck

[AI's Extra]
  1. 00:34:998 (3,4,5) - why the antijump? Consider increasing the spacing
  2. 00:35:875 (1,2) - what. This looks too random and not really suitable right here
  3. 00:37:630 (2,3) - increase the spacing, it's horribly low
  4. 00:38:682 (6) - extend by 1/4
  5. 00:40:524 (3) - this is mapped to nothing. Remove the note and move 00:40:612 (4) - somewhere (it's not worth stacking)
  6. 00:43:156 - there should be a note or something to match vocals; I don't know how to fix, though
  7. 00:45:700 (1,2) - mind increasing the spacing?
  8. 00:48:770 - there should be a note or something to match vocals
  9. 00:55:524 (1,2) - increase the spacing a bit, 0.5 works great
  10. 00:56:577 (2) - use normal sampleset on head
  11. 01:10:963 (1,2) - I'd decrease the spacing because I didn't expect this to start on the red tick, because you were using blue ones just half a second before
  12. 01:43:595 (3,4) - why the low spacing? It only breaks the movement
  13. 01:44:384 (5) - the sound you were trying to follow starts on the white tick 1/4 before. Shorten 01:43:945 (4) - by 1/4 and start 01:44:384 (5) - from the white tick, extending it by one repeat
  14. 01:50:261 (2) - why is this 3/4? It doesn't follow the song, please cut by 1/4
  15. 01:50:963 (1) - same as above
  16. 02:03:595 (3,4,5,6,7) - if you listen closely, you'll notice there should be no gaps between 5 and 6 AND 6 and 7 and the whole part is a short stream
  17. 02:14:647 (5,6) - increase the spacing for a better movement after bouncing off the repeat arrow
  18. 02:28:156 (1) - extend by 1/4 (move the note)
  19. 02:30:963 (1) - ^
  20. 02:42:366 (2) - well.. there's a sound on the blue tick you missed, and I'd recommend to map it for consistency: 02:42:454
  21. 03:14:998 (1,2) - swap them on the time line because it plays better (vocals on 03:15:173 are stronger than these on the red tick)
  22. 03:16:665 (4) - this is mapped to nothing, vocals are plain 1/2
  23. 03:18:068 (4) - same as above. Why don't you use a slider instead of the whole triplet?
  24. 03:36:577 (1,2,3,4) - sorry, but this is overmapped
  25. 03:56:577 (1,2) - claps are unnecessary and don't go well with vocals
  26. 04:02:191 (1) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:37:542 - should be mapped for consistency
  2. 00:56:489 (12) - like I recommended on Extra, use normal sampleset on tail
  3. 01:11:226 - same; I'd replace 01:11:314 (4) - with 2 notes after that
  4. 02:04:296 (1) - extend it by 1/4; not critical, but it's really worth it
  5. 02:33:419 (5,6) - what's with this sudden spacing drop? Consider moving 6 somewhere to the rright for a better readability
  6. 02:55:349 (3,4,5,6,7) - idk why I skipped this a week ago, but it should start with 1/4 notes (don't use the slider!): http://puu.sh/btmKY/74da83cd31.jpg
  7. 03:55:524 (2,3,4) - instead of ignoring 1/4 from the music, you could map it. Why don't you remove these sliders and map a tiny stream of 7 or 9 notes?
  8. 03:56:577 (1) - as said before, extend it by 1/4 for a better play
  9. 04:02:191 (1) - I'd do ^ (remove note + extend by 1/4), but it's "fine"
  10. 04:07:279 (7) - and again, there's clear 1/4 notes you skipped and covered with a repeating slider
  11. 04:08:068 - map it!
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:612 (1) - remove clap from the head
  2. 00:39:998 (6) - mapped to nothing
  3. 00:50:173 (2) - ^
  4. 00:51:226 (9) - ^
  5. 00:54:033 (5) - ^
  6. 00:56:577 (3) - like I recommended on Extra, use normal sampleset?
  7. 01:10:875 (8) - and again, these notes that are mapped to nothing. Yes, you can use them to shake the player, but you don't need to do it this often; it's pointless to add many notes that don't follow anything in the song
  8. 01:13:682 (9) - ^
  9. 01:33:945 (5,1) - this is not really comfortable to play, because the next note is placed behind the slider's repeating arrow, which sends you in the opposite direction
  10. 01:40:086 (4) - could you please rotate it, because it's uncomfortable to play due to its direction? It will be much easier to follow after you change it: example: http://puu.sh/btnWp/d1ad49c13d.jpg
  11. 02:26:752 - and again, this part has many unnecessary 1/4s. Let's say, remove each second of them
  12. 03:03:770 (3,4) - this is not really comfortable to play, because the next note is placed behind the slider's repeating arrow, which sends you in the opposite direction
  13. 03:21:489 (3,4) - space them out, because this looks like 1/2 and can be misread
  14. 03:56:489 (1,2) - new combo should be on 2, not 1
  15. 03:59:384 (3) - new combo (NC for short) should be here, not before
  16. 04:00:787 (8) - ^
  17. 04:03:594 (6) - NC should be here, not later
  18. 04:04:998 (4) - add NC
  19. 04:07:805 (1) - missed finish
  20. 04:09:910 (1) - missed whistle
  21. 04:09:208 (5) - add NC and remove it from 04:09:910 (1) -
  22. 04:10:612 (3) - add NC. It will be easier if I just tell you to put them on every big white tick and remove these which aren't there, okay?
[Fr33z3R's Easy]
  1. 00:11:665 (2) - add clap
  2. 00:12:016 (3) - add NC? looks cool, just like on neonat's

    Once again, I'll ask you to go through the whole difficulty and add new combos ONLY on downbeats (big white ticks), removing the rest of them that don't follow this requirement.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

TicClick wrote:

Recheck

[Insane]
  1. 00:37:542 - should be mapped for consistency
  2. 00:56:489 (12) - like I recommended on Extra, use normal sampleset on tail
  3. 01:11:226 - same; I'd replace 01:11:314 (4) - with 2 notes after that
  4. 02:04:296 (1) - extend it by 1/4; not critical, but it's really worth it
  5. 02:33:419 (5,6) - what's with this sudden spacing drop? Consider moving 6 somewhere to the rright for a better readability
  6. 02:55:349 (3,4,5,6,7) - idk why I skipped this a week ago, but it should start with 1/4 notes (don't use the slider!): http://puu.sh/btmKY/74da83cd31.jpg
  7. 03:55:524 (2,3,4) - instead of ignoring 1/4 from the music, you could map it. Why don't you remove these sliders and map a tiny stream of 7 or 9 notes?
  8. 03:56:577 (1) - as said before, extend it by 1/4 for a better play
  9. 04:02:191 (1) - I'd do ^ (remove note + extend by 1/4), but it's "fine"
  10. 04:07:279 (7) - and again, there's clear 1/4 notes you skipped and covered with a repeating slider
  11. 04:08:068 - map it!
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:612 (1) - remove clap from the head
  2. 00:39:998 (6) - mapped to nothing
  3. 00:50:173 (2) - ^
  4. 00:51:226 (9) - ^
  5. 00:54:033 (5) - ^
  6. 00:56:577 (3) - like I recommended on Extra, use normal sampleset?
  7. 01:10:875 (8) - and again, these notes that are mapped to nothing. Yes, you can use them to shake the player, but you don't need to do it this often; it's pointless to add many notes that don't follow anything in the song
  8. 01:13:682 (9) - ^
  9. 01:33:945 (5,1) - this is not really comfortable to play, because the next note is placed behind the slider's repeating arrow, which sends you in the opposite direction
  10. 01:40:086 (4) - could you please rotate it, because it's uncomfortable to play due to its direction? It will be much easier to follow after you change it: example: http://puu.sh/btnWp/d1ad49c13d.jpg
  11. 02:26:752 - and again, this part has many unnecessary 1/4s. Let's say, remove each second of them
  12. 03:03:770 (3,4) - this is not really comfortable to play, because the next note is placed behind the slider's repeating arrow, which sends you in the opposite direction
  13. 03:21:489 (3,4) - space them out, because this looks like 1/2 and can be misread
  14. 03:56:489 (1,2) - new combo should be on 2, not 1
  15. 03:59:384 (3) - new combo (NC for short) should be here, not before
  16. 04:00:787 (8) - ^
  17. 04:03:594 (6) - NC should be here, not later
  18. 04:04:998 (4) - add NC
  19. 04:07:805 (1) - missed finish
  20. 04:09:910 (1) - missed whistle
  21. 04:09:208 (5) - add NC and remove it from 04:09:910 (1) -
  22. 04:10:612 (3) - add NC. It will be easier if I just tell you to put them on every big white tick and remove these which aren't there, okay?
I'm actually too lazy to deny something lol.
Thanks!
_AI

TicClick wrote:

Recheck

[AI's Extra]
  1. 00:34:998 (3,4,5) - why the antijump? Consider increasing the spacing
  2. 00:35:875 (1,2) - what. This looks too random and not really suitable right here
  3. 00:37:630 (2,3) - increase the spacing, it's horribly low
  4. 00:38:682 (6) - extend by 1/4
  5. 00:40:524 (3) - this is mapped to nothing. Remove the note and move 00:40:612 (4) - somewhere (it's not worth stacking)
  6. 00:43:156 - there should be a note or something to match vocals; I don't know how to fix, though
  7. 00:45:700 (1,2) - mind increasing the spacing?
  8. 00:48:770 - there should be a note or something to match vocals
  9. 00:55:524 (1,2) - increase the spacing a bit, 0.5 works great
  10. 00:56:577 (2) - use normal sampleset on head
  11. 01:10:963 (1,2) - I'd decrease the spacing because I didn't expect this to start on the red tick, because you were using blue ones just half a second before
  12. 01:43:595 (3,4) - why the low spacing? It only breaks the movement
  13. 01:44:384 (5) - the sound you were trying to follow starts on the white tick 1/4 before. Shorten 01:43:945 (4) - by 1/4 and start 01:44:384 (5) - from the white tick, extending it by one repeat
  14. 01:50:261 (2) - why is this 3/4? It doesn't follow the song, please cut by 1/4
  15. 01:50:963 (1) - same as above
  16. 02:03:595 (3,4,5,6,7) - if you listen closely, you'll notice there should be no gaps between 5 and 6 AND 6 and 7 and the whole part is a short stream
  17. 02:14:647 (5,6) - increase the spacing for a better movement after bouncing off the repeat arrow
  18. 02:28:156 (1) - extend by 1/4 (move the note)
  19. 02:30:963 (1) - ^
  20. 02:42:366 (2) - well.. there's a sound on the blue tick you missed, and I'd recommend to map it for consistency: 02:42:454
  21. 03:14:998 (1,2) - swap them on the time line because it plays better (vocals on 03:15:173 are stronger than these on the red tick)
  22. 03:16:665 (4) - this is mapped to nothing, vocals are plain 1/2
  23. 03:18:068 (4) - same as above. Why don't you use a slider instead of the whole triplet?
  24. 03:36:577 (1,2,3,4) - sorry, but this is overmapped
  25. 03:56:577 (1,2) - claps are unnecessary and don't go well with vocals
  26. 04:02:191 (1) - ^
[/list]
Done everything!
Mira-san : http://puu.sh/buI9e/528a6449de.osu
TicClick
okay, sooooo here are m,y (probably) last complaints.

You don't need epilepsy warning!

[Fr33z3R's Easy]
  1. 00:12:016 (1) - make it green, and 00:23:244 (1) - too
  2. 01:01:489 (1,2) - idk if that's needed, a full break would probably be better
[Hard]
  1. 03:46:752 (7) - NC missing, remove from 03:47:279 (1) -
  2. 03:59:384 (3) - NC missing, remove from 03:59:208 (1) -
  3. 04:00:787 (6) - NC missing, remove from 04:01:314 (1) -
[AI's Extra]
  1. 00:37:630 (2) - missing clap
  2. 00:38:682 (6) - forgot to extend by 1/4
  3. 02:03:945 (6) - head is missing a clap. Also add it to the head of 02:03:770 (5) - if you wish
  4. 03:21:314 (7,1,2) - awful to read because 7-1 has higher spacing than 1-2, and 7-1 are 1/2 apart, while 1-2 are 3/4 apart. Looks like a spacing error, could be fixed by moving 03:21:489 (1) - up and left, so it forms a square of some kind: http://puu.sh/bvRnS/f273b12a53.jpg
  5. 03:57:279 (2) - forgot to remove clap
TicClick
double post because why not
Rebubbled!

I couldn't rank it right away because of significant changes, so I restored the bubble. Cheer up! I'll try to find someone to check your map.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

TicClick wrote:

double post because why not
Rebubbled!

I couldn't rank it right away because of significant changes, so I restored the bubble. Cheer up! I'll try to find someone to check your map.
Finally, again. :D
Asagi
Tangina i rank na to putek
newtoniorock8

Asagi wrote:

Tangina i rank na to putek
Please someone translate this ^ lol
Frostmourne
General
seems good ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

Fr33z3R's Easy
AR 3-3.5 could do great job here. 4 is too fast imo.
mostly about new combo at some positions that I find a bit strange.
01:09:910 (1) - remove NC
01:21:138 (1) - remove NC
03:29:910 (1) - remove NC
03:32:717 (1) - remove NC
03:38:331 (1) - remove NC
03:52:366 (1) - remove NC
04:13:068 (2,3) - finish should be swapped here like you did on 04:07:454 (2,3) -
04:17:630 (1) - remove NC
mostly about 1 combo and NC again afterwards. It can destroy the HP drain the most. I highly suggest you fix all of them if possible. Don't forget to be aware of colorhax you did there too.

neonat's Normal
00:55:173 (2) - there is still significant vocal on 00:54:998 like what you have done placing sliders on such 00:49:384 (2) - 00:52:191 (2) - so keep it similar to the previous you did so it won't confuse players for Normal diff one.
Great vocal followed diff.

Hard
AR 7.5 feels better so please give it a try
the rest is fine~

AI's Extra
HP-7 could be better on this because it has a number of NCs. The HP drain could be harsh in some parts.
You could rename the diff to "AI's Insane" as it doesn't play much differently from Insane and the star rating shows that it should be an Insane.
From 01:22:191 (1) - to 01:23:331 (2) -
I highly suggest you change to this way. The end of sliders for 01:22:542 (4) - and 01:23:068 (8) - have really strong beats on there. Making it able to be hit by using a circle and placing using triplet on such points will tend to be much more easier to read as 01:22:191 (1,2,3) - suggested in the first time.
I hope you get what I mean from the picture... If not, I will elaborate.
02:33:770 (7,8,9,10) - spacings there are quite hard to read in some parts, example, 02:33:770 (7,8) - between these should be far more than 02:34:121 (9,10) - if you see the timeline of beat placement.
I suggest you add a new combo on 02:33:770 (7) - and move it to around x:232 y:236
02:40:086 (5,6,7) - similar to above, I would move these to where 02:38:682 (4,5,6) - is placed. It will be much better spacing to read imo.
02:52:366 (4,5,6,7) - similar to 01:22:191 (1) - to 01:23:331 (2) -
Something like this
03:22:191 (4) - this really needs NC because spacing is changed drastically with the rhythm you used.
03:22:542 (3,1) - jump too far? just in my opinion..

Insane
03:21:489 (1) - you may try this rhythm instead. The current one is a bit hard to read because it actually has no sound on 03:21:928 so I suggest you try this rhythm to see if you would like to change it or not.
03:22:893 (1) - the music itself doesn't guide that obviously that it is going to be this slower. I suggest you make a stop jump and then place a slider later this way.
Players would tend to react in time and get understood to the change from combo color change between these two notes 03:22:893 (1,2) -
so they will not tend to slip on the suddenly slow slider like I did in test play.

Feel free to ask TicClick for a rebubble and I will rank afterwards, just to make sure everything is rechecked carefully ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ
neonat
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Kyouren
Ranked plz~
TicClick
что ты тут делаешь?
Topic Starter
Mira-san
None of these 'updates' are submitted properly. Hahaha. :(
The maps change, but the first post doesn't.



This is so fun.
TicClick
[AI's Extra]
  1. 01:11:314 (4) - missing clap
  2. 01:14:296 (4,5,6,7) - mapped to nothing; you could use a slider or something if you wanted to follow that wwwwhew sound from the track
  3. "02:40:086 (5,6,7) - similar to above, I would move these to where 02:38:682 (4,5,6) - is placed. It will be much better spacing to read imo" < I'd apply
  4. 02:53:068 (9,10) - fix the spacing! 9 should be stacked under 02:52:542 (5) -
  5. 03:00:437 - custom colours are broken on the second kiai, there should be no grey! Use blue instead, and also fix the next section (only grey) and the section after the next one (pale green/pale purple)
  6. 03:17:103 (7) - missing clap?
  7. 03:32:717 (2) - add new combo, remove it from 03:32:542 (1) -
  8. 03:41:138 (5) - new combo?
REGARDING 01:22:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the most preferable way to map it is just to follow the music WITHOUT using 1/4th short sliders, as they aren't necessary this time. Seriously, consider using this (example — Mira's Insane):
Topic Starter
Mira-san

TicClick wrote:

[AI's Extra]
  1. 01:11:314 (4) - missing clap
  2. 01:14:296 (4,5,6,7) - mapped to nothing; you could use a slider or something if you wanted to follow that wwwwhew sound from the track
  3. "02:40:086 (5,6,7) - similar to above, I would move these to where 02:38:682 (4,5,6) - is placed. It will be much better spacing to read imo" < I'd apply
  4. 02:53:068 (9,10) - fix the spacing! 9 should be stacked under 02:52:542 (5) -
  5. 03:00:437 - custom colours are broken on the second kiai, there should be no grey! Use blue instead, and also fix the next section (only grey) and the section after the next one (pale green/pale purple)
  6. 03:17:103 (7) - missing clap?
  7. 03:32:717 (2) - add new combo, remove it from 03:32:542 (1) -
  8. 03:41:138 (5) - new combo?
REGARDING 01:22:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 02:52:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the most preferable way to map it is just to follow the music WITHOUT using 1/4th short sliders, as they aren't necessary this time. Seriously, consider using this (example — Mira's Insane):
Applied lolzozlozlzo ;)
DakeDekaane
Doing a check for Taiko diffs requested by TicClick.

Honestly, the diffs arent bad, good work Stefan, buuut I really think you should tone them down, they're considerably harder than they should be, so they could benefit of some note removal.

[ Muzukashii]
Muzukashii is full of long of 1/2 patterns mixed with 1/4 triples which fits more an Oni, also the song doesn't sound too complex to deserve this difficulty level.

00:00:787 - 00:12:016 - This part is really similar in both difficulties, while this is not a bad thing, but consider removing some notes as it feels a bit overloaded, as it's relatively calm.

00:12:016 - 00:23:244 - This part could be easier, use some patterns similar to this one, they'd follow better the drums and give some small breaks.

00:23:244 - Here you could just remove the notes in spots like 00:25:875 (109), but may be not so needed as music is stronger here.

00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - In this section you could focus a bit more on vocals than complementing them with the drums, i.e, remove some notes that are mapped on the drums and leave more vocals here. This helps to not make 00:34:472 - 00:56:928 - mapped in a very similar way, which may be a bit boring while playing.
00:44:647 (189,190,191,192,193) - Deleting dons here would help a lot to make vocals feel stronger, due being more isolated.

01:19:384 - tbh I liked this part, I don't think there's too many problems if we leave it like this, but I'd suggest to remove 01:24:472 (369) - to give some small break after those patterns.
01:30:086 (1) - I think this spinner isn't really needed, a pause would help to create some tension before the kiai, same with 02:59:910 (1).

The kiai is actually nice, just a few suggestions.
01:32:893 (13,15) - Removing these could be nice to emphasize vocals
01:38:858 (39) - ^
01:44:121 (64,66) - ^

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

[ Oni]
Oni has a lot of consecutive 1/2 notes, while some of them aren't bad, putting some 1/1 gaps could help a bit here.
Also I think SV 1.60 is forcing difficulty, 1.40 should be better here.
00:00:787 - 00:06:402 - This section is really weird when you pass to the next where drums begins, as it's harder, while the song is calmer, some deletions could be nice here.
00:14:559 (61,62) - 00:17:366 (81,82) - I consider this optional, you could remove these to not make this pattern too long.
00:20:173 (101,102,103) - ^
In fact, you could delete notes in similar spots.

00:22:279 (117) - The stream in the music begins in the red tick so yeah, better removing this.
00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - Something similar as I said in Muzukashii, focus a bit more on vocals, you could remove notes like 00:36:577 (223) and follow a similar structure for this spot.
00:45:700 - 00:56:928 - You could remove notes like 00:47:805 (293,297) - to emphasize vocals a bit more.
00:50:524 (313,318,319,320) - ^
00:53:331 (334,335,339) - ^
01:30:086 (1) - Same as in Muzukashii, and for 02:59:910 (1).

Kiai was nice here too, and again, some note removal suggestions.
01:32:893 (18) -
01:34:296 (27,28,29) -
01:36:051 (39) -
01:38:507 (55) -
01:39:296 (59) -
01:39:910 (63,64,65,66) -
01:44:121 (97) -
01:45:524 (106,107) -
01:50:524 (135) -
01:51:226 (139,140) -

:!: 02:15:524 (166) - I'm pretty sure we're not allowing finisher on streams unless its ...oxxxxO, so please fix it.

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

You should consider all this I posted, so the map could represent better the song with some of the new breaks the diffs will get, and fit better without being too difficult. Good luck.
Stefan

DakeDekaane wrote:

Doing a check for Taiko diffs requested by TicClick.

Honestly, the diffs arent bad, good work Stefan, buuut I really think you should tone them down, they're considerably harder than they should be, so they could benefit of some note removal.

[ Muzukashii]
Muzukashii is full of long of 1/2 patterns mixed with 1/4 triples which fits more an Oni, also the song doesn't sound too complex to deserve this difficulty level.

00:00:787 - 00:12:016 - This part is really similar in both difficulties, while this is not a bad thing, but consider removing some notes as it feels a bit overloaded, as it's relatively calm. Did stuff here.

00:12:016 - 00:23:244 - This part could be easier, use some patterns similar to this one, they'd follow better the drums and give some small breaks. So simple the idea, so great the effect. Changed this secting

00:23:244 - Here you could just remove the notes in spots like 00:25:875 (109), but may be not so needed as music is stronger here. Yes, did that here.

00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - In this section you could focus a bit more on vocals than complementing them with the drums, i.e, remove some notes that are mapped on the drums and leave more vocals here. This helps to not make 00:34:472 - 00:56:928 - mapped in a very similar way, which may be a bit boring while playing. Ehrrrruhmmmm... I think it's clearer now what I intended to focus.
00:44:647 (189,190,191,192,193) - Deleting dons here would help a lot to make vocals feel stronger, due being more isolated. Yes Yes Yes, done here.

01:19:384 - tbh I liked this part, I don't think there's too many problems if we leave it like this, but I'd suggest to remove 01:24:472 (369) - to give some small break after those patterns. Good thing for the vocal.
01:30:086 (1) - I think this spinner isn't really needed, a pause would help to create some tension before the kiai, same with 02:59:910 (1). Hard decision but yes, agree.

The kiai is actually nice, just a few suggestions.
01:32:893 (13,15) - Removing these could be nice to emphasize vocals hmhmhm I think I will remove 01:33:244 (15) instead. But I will think about your suggestion to remove this one as well.
01:38:858 (39) - ^ Done.
01:44:121 (64,66) - ^ Same like 01:32:893 (13,15).

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

[ Oni]
Oni has a lot of consecutive 1/2 notes, while some of them aren't bad, putting some 1/1 gaps could help a bit here.
Also I think SV 1.60 is forcing difficulty, 1.40 should be better here. I partly agree, 1.60x is pretty cool for Kiai so I will keep it there. For the rest it will be 1.40x.
00:00:787 - 00:06:402 - This section is really weird when you pass to the next where drums begins, as it's harder, while the song is calmer, some deletions could be nice here. Done here.
00:14:559 (61,62) - 00:17:366 (81,82) - I consider this optional, you could remove these to not make this pattern too long. I don't agree here. That's a fairly appropriate lenght of combos.
00:20:173 (101,102,103) - ^ ^
In fact, you could delete notes in similar spots.

00:22:279 (117) - The stream in the music begins in the red tick so yeah, better removing this. Removed.
00:34:472 - 00:45:700 - Something similar as I said in Muzukashii, focus a bit more on vocals, you could remove notes like 00:36:577 (223) and follow a similar structure for this spot. Good, remove some notes, made some changes and yep.. replied on the things below.
00:45:700 - 00:56:928 - You could remove notes like 00:47:805 (293,297) - to emphasize vocals a bit more.
00:50:524 (313,318,319,320) - ^
00:53:331 (334,335,339) - ^
01:30:086 (1) - Same as in Muzukashii, and for 02:59:910 (1). ~

Kiai was nice here too, and again, some note removal suggestions.
01:32:893 (18) - ~
01:34:296 (27,28,29) - No. They're pretty fine here
01:36:051 (39) - ~
01:38:507 (55) - ~
01:39:296 (59) - Removed 01:38:858 instead.
01:39:910 (63,64,65,66) - nope.
01:44:121 (97) - ~
01:45:524 (106,107) - Triplet fits well with vocal/music in general.
01:50:524 (135) - Removed 01:50:086 instead.
01:51:226 (139,140) - Sounds quite empty then.

:!: 02:15:524 (166) - I'm pretty sure we're not allowing finisher on streams unless its ...oxxxxO, so please fix it. changed to ddkkddkkkkD.

Repeat the suggestions for similar sections.

You should consider all this I posted, so the map could represent better the song with some of the new breaks the diffs will get, and fit better without being too difficult. Good luck.
Thanks. http://puu.sh/byQri/cf10dbed40.rar
Topic Starter
Mira-san
aha haha

Finally, I've seen this happen again.

TicClick
Rebubbled again! I hope Taiko is alright now.
Squigly
ranked soon hopefully V:
Frostmourne
Still wonder why this happens though.. http://puu.sh/bAkBS.png

I was concerned about the difficulty spread but after investigating once again, Easy is pretty much easier than Normal although the star rating doesn't look that way. Hard is not completely harder apart from Normal so I have some confidence to rank it, and hopefully it won't get in trouble afterwards.

Tell me when you are done updating that above screenshot to make everything consistent throughout the whole mapset.
Topic Starter
Mira-san

Frostmourne wrote:

Still wonder why this happens though.. http://puu.sh/bAkBS.png
Tell me when you are done updating that above screenshot to make everything consistent throughout the whole mapset.
Fixed. :o

Frostmourne wrote:

I was concerned about the difficulty spread but after investigating once again, Easy is pretty much easier than Normal although the star rating doesn't look that way. Hard is not completely harder apart from Normal so I have some confidence to rank it, and hopefully it won't get in trouble afterwards.
Considering how this map got un-qualified due to "map icons", it looks like we're going to have a problem.
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