Hi :3
[Normal]
00:13:105 (2) - mm How about add a circle here? It's fine as it is, but would be nice since you have rhythms like this later 00:19:282 (4,5,1) -
00:15:458 (4) - Same as above
00:29:310 (5,6,1) - This feel a bit sudden imo. I find deleting 00:29:604 (6) - this nice and keeps the same rhythm
01:33:427 (4) - Wouldn't this be a nice place to cut combo?
01:35:192 (5,6,1) - This part needs timing check
01:47:581 (2,3,4,5) - Check distance here. Unless this was intentional
[Hard]
00:39:015 (2,1) - This jump is kinda awkward for me. 00:39:015 (2) - this is very weak melody, and having a jump doesn't feel right imo.
00:49:897 (2) - This part needs timing check
01:31:074 (1,2) - I find this way too jumpy considering it is almost the same melody as 01:26:368 (1,2,3,4) -
01:32:250 (2,3,4,5,6) - timing check?
01:53:515 (1) - I would prefer if there wasn't a NC here :3
Nice map. But I think you're gonna need more timing checks :3
Some of them were really off.
I only pointed out that were obvious to me.
[Normal]
00:13:105 (2) - mm How about add a circle here? It's fine as it is, but would be nice since you have rhythms like this later 00:19:282 (4,5,1) -
00:15:458 (4) - Same as above
00:29:310 (5,6,1) - This feel a bit sudden imo. I find deleting 00:29:604 (6) - this nice and keeps the same rhythm
01:33:427 (4) - Wouldn't this be a nice place to cut combo?
01:35:192 (5,6,1) - This part needs timing check
01:47:581 (2,3,4,5) - Check distance here. Unless this was intentional
[Hard]
00:39:015 (2,1) - This jump is kinda awkward for me. 00:39:015 (2) - this is very weak melody, and having a jump doesn't feel right imo.
00:49:897 (2) - This part needs timing check
01:31:074 (1,2) - I find this way too jumpy considering it is almost the same melody as 01:26:368 (1,2,3,4) -
01:32:250 (2,3,4,5,6) - timing check?
01:53:515 (1) - I would prefer if there wasn't a NC here :3
Nice map. But I think you're gonna need more timing checks :3
Some of them were really off.
I only pointed out that were obvious to me.