Hi Hinsvar :3
[General]
- Disable Letterbox during breaks, and consider disable countdown which it's your decision.
- You don't set the preview time right now. Although it's no problem, but has it would be better imo. So I will suggest you set it in 00:00:498 or 01:15:486.
- 00:00:492 (1,2) - Reduce spacing between these, because this spacing is 1.3x, and another one. I don't like this pattern. So I want you reduce the slider curve of (1). It would look better.
- 00:05:198 (2,3) - I think these notes should make it to more relaxed than like slider in 00:00:492 (1) - which you can use like that or use 2 circles.
- 00:10:165 (3) - Slider repeat was out of mapping grid. So you must move this note to aviod that, which it's unrankable.
- 00:18:105 (2) - The whistle wasn't fit with anything in song. Please remove it.
- 00:19:282 (4) - I'm not sure, but I want you add wishtle on slider begin.
- 00:26:929 (2) - Please add whistle here.
- 00:39:309 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlapping of both, since it causes me confuse and flow weird.
- 00:48:721 (1) - The pattern is similar with 00:00:492 (1) - . So reducing the slider curve would cause looking better, and I want to add whistle on slider begin and remove on slider end. I think it would more fit with listening than.
- 00:49:897 (2) - Add whistle here, which the reason like my previously suggestion.
- 01:07:545 (1,2) - Add whistle on slider begin of both, and remove it on slider end of (1), too.
- 00:00:785 (2) - Move to down and left a bit, to cause the pattern stream of (1,2,3,4,5) is look better.
- 00:04:021 (1,2) - Please stack this by move (2) to stack with (1), because it causes me really confused.
- 00:10:753 (3,1) - I want this is perfect stream by move (3) to down a bit and (1) to left a bit.
- 00:16:929 (2) - Remove whistle on slider repeat would be better? I felt really weird when heard.
- 00:22:811 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern was weird when compared with the melody. Sorry that I can't think idea, but I want you consider about this to can fix these appropriately.
- 00:36:956 (1) - The flow is little weird. So I want to move last point of sliderto left a bit, which I would be betterto read notes (1,2).
- 00:44:897 (3) - Add whistle on slider begin like the melody in 00:40:192 (4) - & 00:42:545 (2) - .
- 01:02:839 (1) - You can change to 1/4 slider+1 repeat or 3 circles, because it has the rhythm sound in the blue tick.
- 01:16:398 (3) - I felt noisy when I heard whistle consecutively 3 notes. So please remove whistle here will be fit imo.
- 01:48:538 (2) - Since here was change rhythm. You should add NC this note to the player can read it.
- 01:50:998 (2) - ^
- 01:54:470 (2) - ^ , and it cause me felt so awkward, because it's overlap with 01:53:515 (1) - . So please move (2) to somewhere that fit with playing.
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Good luck~