1. Easy (1.57 stars, 125 notes)
2. Hard (3.13 stars, 281 notes)
3. Normal (2.09 stars, 176 notes)

CDFA wrote:

My goat in life

CDFA wrote:

Difficulties Available:

1. Normal (3.96 stars, 145 notes)
2. Normal (4.97 stars, 279 notes)

double normal owo

My goal in life is to be able to lay on the comfort of my sheets and feel the warmth of Hatsune Miku's body on me, not only lusting for my body, but lusting for my inner person, my soul, the depth of who I am. I wish to not only take her womanhood, but rather to make her into a woman, and to unleash her true potential, for love is a curious sort of deal. We are born in two halves until we find the one that we love, and upon finding that lover, we unlock things we never knew about each other before. Sometimes, the things found aren't the happiest, and pain comes from it, but my bond with Hatsune Miku shall bring nothing but happiness and success, for this is not simply a petty marriage, this is true love.

asdasdasd lolol *rofl*

1. 00:06:915 (3) - Make this slider less scrunched up
2. 00:09:915 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved
3. 00:39:915 (4) - Invert the curve so it looks better and flows nicer maybe
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:46:665 (5) - NC
5. 02:20:040 (1) - Map this damn spinner out, no way will Easy players be able to spin through this without dying, plus there is a beat for you to map to so please i swear if you pull that EBA spinner bullcrap on me i will hurt u

1. 00:00:165 (1) - This is actually pretty cool
2. 00:26:978 (2) - Haha what the jump
3. 00:38:978 (5) - ^
4. 00:44:040 (1) - Map this out like in the Easy
5. 01:13:665 (1) - Yeah not going to point these out anymore just fix
6. 01:32:040 (1) - Spinner please map out

1. 02:19:853 (1) - Spinner please map out

1. Your mp3 is unrankable. First of all, it is way too long and more than 20% of it is unused. Secondly, the bitrate is too high. I've made a simple cut and reducded the bitrae for you. Just click here!
   Note: get someone to check your offset or do it on your own, it might get a bit off.
2. Consider adding some tags? Anything like genre orso. Just help us to find this map faster!
3. The song starts so sudden, players have no time to focus and get ready. Add audioLeadIn. I'd go with 2000ms or something like that. I guess you already know that you have to edit .osu files in order to do that.
4. Please, disable the Widescreen support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled unless you have a widescreen storyboard.
5. Consider using custom colours? I bet you can pick some really cute and fitting ones! The song deserves something better than the default colors.
6. Make your hitsounds 10-15% louder? It is pretty hard to hear them now. I think that louder hitsounds will provide more understandable audio feedback, so players will be able to keep following the rhythm.

1. 00:02:040 (2,3) - minor - looks like you were trying to make a blanket slider but then gave up because of laziness. Come on, we both know that you have enough experience to do it much better! Well, if you're still feeling lazy, just click the spoilerbox below.
   
   Click me!

   
   

   36,200,2415,2,0,B|92:211|136:160|136:160|208:212,1,200,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:04:665 (1,2) - the sudden 3/2 gap here feels really confusing. I strongly recommend you to avoid it since it doesn't really match with your rhythm and makes your pattern inconsistent. It is also very tricky for beginners. Using a 2/1 slider would be the best solution. As for the beat at the red tick, you can just cuve the slider at this point to emphasize it.
3. 00:16:290 (4) - ignoring the downbeat here is a really weird idea, imo. A new instrument kicks in and makes this beat quite important. At least hitsound the slidertick or replace this slider with a circle + 1/1 slider. an example
   Note: 01:24:915 (4) - pretty much the same. This time ou can make this slider 1/1 shorter and place a circle at 01:25:665. The reason is exactly the same.
4. 00:19:665 (4) - feels like you've missed a new combo here. Listen to the instruments and vocals and see if a new combo here looks suitable for you or not.
5. 00:42:915 (1,2) - either swap NCs here or do the same with 01:18:540 (5,1) - either way is cool and will make your comboing a bit more consistent. Personally, I'd recommend you to swap NCs on 00:42:915 (1,2) to follow your pattern.
   Note: 01:30:915 (1,2) and 02:06:915 (1,2,3) and 02:12:915 (5,6,1) - depends on what did you do with the previous patterns, you might want to change this one as well.
6. 01:56:415 (2) - minor - it is quite weird to see how the slider goes up wwhen he clearly sings "bring me down". Using Ctrl+G on this slider would make your pattern a bit more interesting. That'd look awesome
   
   The diff feels quite good. Nice flow, refreshing patterns and consistent hitsounding. What else do I have to say? Good job!

1. You could make the DS a bit higher to avoid those slight overlaps of 1/2 notes. Please set DS to x1.1 and try to fix all those overlaps. It will take like 10 minutes or so, but the map will look much btter.
2. 00:00:165 (1) - I don't think that holding the same slider for so long would be fun for players. Consider replacing it, please.
3. 00:25:665 (1,2) - please, avoid using jumps. The diff is already hard enough. Fast SV and active usage of 1/2 beats make it really hard.
   Note: 00:37:665 (4,5) - same. For every jump pattern. Please, do not use them in this diff, the SV is already fast enough and using jumps makes this diff too hard.
4. 00:26:790 - I guess you've already seen the video about polarity. So, the same happens here. Those 3/2 patterns are really hard to hit. I've changed it a bit to make it fit better and tried to make it more playable. Example1/ Example2
   Note: it's quite clear that you'd better fix similar patterns, as well. Like 00:33:915 - this, and 00:36:165 - that and so on.
5. 01:10:665 (1) - well, since you have no any NCs here in Easy and Hard and this one doesn't look really fitting here.. I recommend you to remove this new combo. It looks totally off your comboing, anyway.
   
   Apart from the 3/2 beats and untidy 1/2s the diff is ok. Your Sv is fast, so I don't recommend you t use any jumps or similar things.

1. 00:00:165 (1) - if you've changed this pattern on the Normal, you might want to do the same here. Obviously, it will help you to be more consistent and to make your rhythm a bit more interesting.
2. 00:36:540 (1,2) - I would swap NCs to be consistent with the previous pattern.
3. 01:29:040 (3) - I'd rather use a straight slider here. It will fit with your flow better, I guess.Or you can try this, it looks like flow here feels much better.
4. 01:54:165 (4,5) - minor the lyrics are "bring me down" and the slider goes up. Just to make your sliders a bit more logicals, make them go down, please.
5. 02:01:665 (2) - you should plcae a new combo here to be consistent. Seriously, this pattern sounds just like 00:24:915 (1,2,1) - therefore, it should hav a new combo, too.
   
   Great diff, i really liked this one!

1. 00:05:790 add a note
2. 00:14:040 http://puu.sh/a0h4A/f7f9690339.jpg
3. 00:18:915(2) sounds off with the vocals
4. 00:45:915(4,1) blanket these better
5. 00:50:040 why insert breaks? it was playable here

1. 00:05:978(3,2) blanket these better
2. 00:22:665 a 1/2 slider here sounds nice
3. 01:58:665 spinner starts here

1. 00:28:103 http://puu.sh/a0hwt/6f4157b43e.jpg
2. 01:52:478 nc
3. 02:19:665 http://puu.sh/a0hEy/14516a7cc5.jpg

1. Offset -11 sound alot better for me
2. Both kiai in all diffs are unsnapped! Make sure to snap them.
3. Preview time unsnapped! Make sure to snap it.
4. Untick Widescreen in Easy and Normal.
5. Yay Miku, tho it doesnt have any connections with the song lol
6. Dat copy paste ;w;
7. There is a unused file in your folder, Make sure to delete it (hatsune_miku_wallpaper_by_kyoar-d61y239). :
   

1. Overall the hitsounds (whistles) are kinda inconsistent imo, idk if it was your intention.
2. Flow here is not really my taste but it should be fine
3. 00:00:207 (1) - Why not give all the repeats drum sample?
4. 00:35:457 (3) - Missing clap on the end?
5. 01:23:457 (3) - ^
6. 02:02:832 (6) - Missing clap
7. 02:11:832 (4) - ^
8. 02:12:572 (1) - Missing clap on the head
9. 02:14:832 (4) - Missing clap
10. 02:16:332 (8) - ^
11. 02:01:707 (2) - I suppose a NC here to follow the music? Also to stay consistent with the previous choruses.
12. 00:27:020 (4) - Perhaps a whistle on the repeat?
13. 00:08:270 (3) - Perhaps move this a bit up so it forms a line with (1) and (2)
14. 00:09:582 (6) - Hmmm remove the NC I think o-o. Don't really understand the NCing (especially the intro yea) but pretty sure this one doesnt need one.
15. 00:13:707 (1) - Nitpicking. Looool wut
    
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16. 00:16:332 (7) - How about a slight curve towards (1), flows a bit better
17. 02:04:332 (1) - Remove NC? consitency with 00:28:332 (6) - and 01:16:332 (6) -
18. 02:06:582 (6,1) - NC should be on (6) instead of (1) by looking at your previous measures on the previous choruses
19. 02:18:582 (6,1) - ^
20. 01:50:457 (4,5,6) - How about using the same slider than rotate it, to make it look more structured?
    like this:
    
    box

    
21. 01:52:707 - this would be better as a active beat imo as it is pretty loud and so in results it loses it's impact. Consider a rythm like this perhaps?:
    
    This is also consistent with the other ''HAPPY'' in this section
22. 02:10:707 (1,2,3,4) - Hmmm imo this doesn't play really comfy, as your mostly following vocal, but here your missing some of them and the emphasize is kinda off.
    Consider something like this to follow the vocal:
    

1. Pls check the hard for the missing claps
2. Not really fan of jumps in a normal, but oh well
3. 00:18:020 (3) - I suppose missing whistle on the head.
4. 00:25:707 (1,2) - Rythm feels pretty much a bit awkward imo. Consider something like this instead?
   
   This also applies for the other ones in this diff, also this way you can get rid of the jumps.
5. 00:33:020 (3) - Idk but they are slighly overlapping, move it a bit to the right to fix it up
6. 00:37:707 (4) - Missing NC I suppose
7. 00:28:707 (1) - Here aswell
8. 00:43:707 (1) - ^
9. 00:48:957 (1) - How about an NC here the music changes a bit. (Outro of the kiai)
10. 01:06:957 (4) - Nitpicking. Totally not affecting gameplay but I don't think the second red anchor is needed here lol

1. Same about the claps
2. Pls recheck your NC's, idk to me they don't make much sense >< as they are inconsistent
3. 00:11:082 (4) - Perhaps a NC here? fits with the music IMO
4. 00:21:957 (6) - Breaking it into a circle+slider would fit the music alot better imo
5. 00:39:957 (4) - How about this:
   
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   Flows alot better imo.
6. 01:27:957 (4) - same as 00:39:957 (4) - as they are copy pasted lol
7. 01:51:582 (3) - Breaking this into a circle+slider would follow the music better imo.

1. Your preview time isn't in the correct place so can check it by yourself.
2. "hatsune_miku_wallpaper_by_kyoar-d61y239" is unnecessary since you're not using it for nothing.
3. the colors that you're using are a bit ugly to me, what about to use these?
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 190,190,190
   Combo2 : 181,222,234
   Combo3 : 103,133,203
   Combo4 : 219,130,232

1. 00:02:082 (2,3) - This is just a suggestion but what do you think about to implementing a blanket for both objects? it can be ideal imo.
2. 00:28:332 - Missing a clap here.
3. 00:36:582 - Same as above.
4. 00:43:332 - ^
5. 02:12:957 (5) - NC should be here instead 02:13:707 - to be consistent with 02:06:957

1. 00:00:207 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I think you should have consistency with your hitsounds since in easy are you used a couple of whistles and compared with the hard you used only drums.
2. 00:37:707 (4) - NC?
3. 00:37:707 (4,5) - This is a pretty big jump, consider reduction of this as it is quite confusing.
   00:25:707 (1,2) - ^
4. 02:16:332 (1) - remove this NC because is inconsistent with your previous patterns.

1. 00:02:457 (2,3) - This looks a bit weird for me, how about to use a simple slider instead this?
2. 00:06:020 (4,5) - Blanket?
3. 00:17:457 (3,4) - the change of space is quite noticeable so my recommendation would be move both objects to closer to avoid sudden changes.
4. 00:39:395 (5) - What about to use CTRL + G in this slider to improve the flow?
5. 01:53:832 (3) - ^
6. 01:50:457 (4,5,6) - Nazi* this pattern looks a bit strange, try to do another thing with them since i'm sure that you can do it more nicer.
   01:52:520 (10) - You are completely ignoring a strong beat so it can be quite rare when you play this part, would be geat if you change this by 2 circles.
7. 02:11:832 (4) - missing a clap.
8. 02:12:582 - ^

1. i bought a miku body pillow yesterday
   i approve BG unlike some other ppl q:
   
2. Maybe add some custom combo colors c:?
3. (optional) cut ur mp3 a bit more or u can map out the rest maybe q:
4. silence the sliderslide?
5. one of the background files aren't being used i think
6. the CS spread is kinda weird, either make easy or normal CS3 for a more even spread

1. 00:02:082 (2,3) - optional but u can blanket these owo?
2. 00:16:707 - there is a really heavy guitar beat that ur missing here, i highly recommend u adding something to it
   maybe u can try a rhythm like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   that way u can keep the symmetry ur choice tho
3. im sure already mentioned, but kiai is unsnapped and there are some uesless green lines
4. 01:51:957 - maybe have something here as well for the "happy"
5. 02:11:457 (3,4) - use a similar rhythm as 02:05:457 (2) - ? i think it fits better
6. 00:38:457 - this is a bit optional but maybe try to have something on every one of the "tss" sounds. it would be more interesting imo q:
7. 01:55:707 (1) - flows better into (2) if u curve it the opposite way, or if not, can u blanket this slider with 01:55:332 (5) - ?
   itll look neater imo
8. 00:04:707 (1,2) - how bout using this rhythm instead so u can avoid the 3/2 gap which is a bit more awkward to play
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:11:082 - use a similar rhythm as above with the 3/2 reverse slider, i think it fits better
   
   hitsounds and stuff
10. 00:28:332 - missing clap
    00:36:582 - ^
    00:43:332 - ^
    02:10:332 (1) - ^
    02:14:082 - ^
    
    solid q:

1. 00:09:770 - it doesn't really make sense why you're skipping out this vocal when u mapped this one out 00:10:145 -
   simple fix woudl just be change the circle into 1/2 slider
2. 01:06:770 - this guitar should be mapped out imo :/
3. 01:51:207 - so should this "happy" vocal thing. It's something different coming in the music so it stands out and therefore should be mapped.
   01:54:207 - ^
   01:57:207 - ^
4. 02:16:332 (1) - uh i don't think this NC here is consistent with the rest of this section
5. 
   
   hitsounds
6. 00:14:832 - missing clap
   00:20:832 - ^
   01:05:832 - ^
   02:14:832 - ^

1. 00:00:207 (1,1) - ds slightly off lol
2. 00:06:020 (4,5) - would look better imo if u blanketed these
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:47:457 (4,5) - ^
3. 00:33:582 - at least in hard difficulty, try to have something on all the clap sounds in the music so u can hitsound properly like what you did here 00:39:020 -
4. 01:06:770 - can you map out these two sounds? 01:07:145 -
   the same applies to similar areas like
   00:06:582 -
   00:12:582 -
5. 00:19:707 - i don't think you should ignore this downbeat here it also has an interesting guitar sound which would be fun if mapped out
   
   
   hitsounds
6. 00:27:020 - add normal whistles to the other similar parts so u can be consistent with the last kiai?
7. 00:09:582 (1) - missing a normal sample here?
   00:19:332 (2) - ^
   01:11:832 - ^
8. 00:35:832 - missing clap
   02:02:832 - ^
   02:11:832 - ^
   02:12:582 - ^
   02:14:832 - ^
9. 01:51:770 - is this clap suppose to be there?