Hello; modding here!
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>General
Good luck on the way
*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
- 01:33:022 - What about ending the kiai time here instead? I feel that the song gets noticeably weaker here, and thus, keeping the kiai time is just unfitting. Try adding a kiai flash at 01:35:330 - 01:35:445 if you want.
- 00:08:099 (1,2,3) - The flow here is unnatural due to (1)'s curve and the straight movement from (1)'s tail to (2) and then to (3)'s head which conflicts with the curve of (1). Try something like this?
- 00:20:561 - Try adding a whistle? I think the instrument sound supports it quite well here.
- 00:45:945 (3) - ^
- 00:46:868 - ^ (I know these two ticks already have finishes on them. However, I think these are not enough to emphasize the notes here, and coupling them with whistles would work better.)
- 01:00:253 - Any reason of leaving this unmapped? There is a clear cymbal sound here, and I also see no reason why should you leave this out in the stronger part of the song.
- 01:03:945 - ^
- 01:49:983 - I'm sure a drum clap would fit more than a finish since the clap definitely resembles the instrument's sound more than the finish here.
- 00:25:637 (5) - Rotate 25 degrees clockwise (with Selection Centre) for a better flow from 00:25:176 (4)?
- 00:55:176 (3) - Move to (354,223)? Again, creates a better flow (and more natural cursor movement, which in turn means a more comfortable play), and it also looks neater.
- 01:02:099 (2) - Consider moving this to 01:01:984 and add a circle at 01:02:330. This rhythm fits the music nicely, and is easier to follow by players.
- 01:35:330 (1) - Try using a 1/2 slider? It'll create a better transition from 01:35:330 (1), and I think 01:35:560 should be mapped because it just... feels more natural I guess, and it'll also create a sense of consistency since you mapped 01:36:022 (the tick that has basically the same sound as 01:35:560).
- 00:50:561 (5) - Make it a 1/1 slider to follow the vocal? Usign a 1/2 slider doesn't really work since it's ambiguous about what the slider is trying to follow.
- 00:53:561 (6,7) - Try spacing them normally, but place them in the same x-axis value so they'll be in line horizontally? I know what are you trying to do with this anti-jump, but it can be uncomfortable since the instrument is quite strong and constant. Also, making them horizontally parallel would make sure these notes fit the music nicely. (Applies to similar anti-jumps.)
- 00:59:561 (7) - Is there any need of using a 1/4 slider? There is nothing at 00:59:676, and I personally can't see any reason why should you overmap this. Try changing this slider to a circle instead?
- 01:01:984 (3,4) - Similar to what I've said on the same spot in Hard, but with a difference: Add two circles at 01:02:214 - 01:02:330 after moving 01:01:984 (3,4) to create a small stream.
Good luck on the way