Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.) · forum

smallboat

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Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-10T18:22:35+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月15日 at 下午 09:46:47

Artist: Sawai Miku
Title: Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.)
Source: アカメが斬る！
Tags: Akame ga Kill! tv size ending takahiro tetsuya square enix white fox gangan comic joker black red eye girl anigi king blood ice zan slash sword cut head kill death die night raid minakami yuki amamiya yuko skystar
BPM: 88
Filesize: 23249kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.11 stars, 79 notes)
Hard (2.56 stars, 182 notes)
Insane (3.76 stars, 225 notes)
Normal (1.62 stars, 121 notes)
Skystar's Insane (4.22 stars, 246 notes)
Yuki's Insane (4.14 stars, 232 notes)

Download: Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.)
Download: Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#10 Ranked Map.

Easy by me

Normal

Hard

Insane

Yuki's Insane by Minakami Yuki

Skystar's Insane by Amamiya Yuko

HW's Extra by Hollow Wings → Here
GD are full now.

Map Log

2014/8/11 Sumitted map & Hitsound added.(Video added ,too)
2014/8/12 Hitsound added & Offset ,video offset adjust.
2014/8/13 Skystar's Insane diff added.
2014/8/15 HW's Extra diff added.
2014/8/16 Yuki's Insane diff added.
2014/8/27 Combo color changed.
2014/8/29 Offset changed by Charles445
2014/9/13 Title fixed thanks by Lanturn (Gder redownload plz)
2014/9/14 Unrank element (Hisound <100ms) change by Lanturn

Thanks

nadapan (mod)
p3n (video offset adjust)
rinsukir
ts8zs
Regraz
Awaken
-Bakari-
CET 6
spring
bigfrog
NoHitter
Lanturn
Oracle

Last edited by smallboat 2014-10-31T07:00:36+00:00, edited 42 times in total.

Julie

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Joined March 2013

Julie 2014-08-11T14:34:51+00:00

SMALLBOAT ONII-CHAN BEST <3!!!

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2014-08-12T00:30:24+00:00

[General]

Change the Grid Snap from level 1 to level 3 or 4

[Easy]

For some reason so can't I see the video in this difficulty but in the other difficulty.

Sorry if my mod didn't help you I wasn't able to find that much to write down .__.

Good luck

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-12T13:03:13+00:00

can i make an ex gd?

p3n

Global Moderator

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Joined June 2009

p3n 2014-08-12T19:24:48+00:00

Video offset should be -310.

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg2.jpg",0,0
Video,-310,"video.avi"

No kd for this.

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-12T22:01:13+00:00

nadapan wrote:
[General]
Change the Grid Snap from level 1 to level 3 or 4
Keep it.
[Easy]
For some reason so can't I see the video in this difficulty but in the other difficulty.
Okay ,added the video.
Sorry if my mod didn't help you I wasn't able to find that much to write down .__. Nevermind
Good luck Thanks ~ !

Hollow Wings wrote:
can i make an ex gd? Sure.~~要良心一點哦ww~~

p3n wrote:
Video offset should be -310.
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg2.jpg",0,0
Video,-310,"video.avi"
No kd for this.Okay,fixed.
Thanks p3n's small help ~

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-08-13T15:00:50+00:00

I want make Insane diff but GD is full~

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-15T00:51:54+00:00

artist: 沢井美空
romanised: Sawai Miku

~~你真不收gd了？~~

smallboat

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Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-16T01:27:59+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
artist: 沢井美空
romanised: Sawai Miku

~~你真不收gd了？~~

想了想還是收了M醬的，只是現在的情況我該如何選擇....? 現在也沒辦法跟HW討論

~~所以我把他們2個diff都removed..~~

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-08-16T08:36:14+00:00

。我草我這邊也把我難度刪了啊至少先把我難度拿來

smallboat

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Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-16T13:58:41+00:00

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
。我草我這邊也把我難度刪了啊至少先把我難度拿來

照你說的增加了。

剛好777post

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2014-08-16T14:04:38+00:00

Why Hollow Wings diff is remove? and Can i make some diff?

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-08-16T17:33:54+00:00

irc modded (?) with mapper~

dont read I am so shy

00:11 smallboat: 能不能跟杏仁求簡單摸
00:11 happy623: ;w;
00:11 happy623: 什麼圖
00:11 smallboat:   /np
00:12 smallboat: 出不來!
00:12 smallboat: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201502
00:21 happy623: !
00:21 happy623: 一會看
00:21 happy623: 急嗎;w;
00:30 smallboat: 還好
00:44 happy623: 唔
00:44 happy623: 要看全部麼
00:45 smallboat: 都可以
00:45 happy623: ;w;
00:45 smallboat: ww
00:45 happy623: 可以不看嗎
00:45 happy623: 有點懶orz
00:45 smallboat: 速摸挑幾個就好(?
00:45 smallboat: 哭哭
00:45 smallboat: 好 先慢來
00:46 smallboat: 現在不摸也沒關係
00:46 happy623: 慢來船爺都rank了
00:48 happy623: 你的Insane不上8.5麼
00:49 smallboat: 能上?
00:49 happy623: 感覺kiai 可以難點也沒問題
00:49 smallboat: 低bpm一般不都最高8?
00:49 happy623: 一般已經
00:49 happy623: 而已*
00:49 happy623: 不過也是不上好了
00:50 happy623: 感覺不太難orz
00:51 smallboat: 恩@_@
00:51 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477089 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Hard]]
00:51 happy623: 01:11:080 (3) - 這裡加個note吧0 0
00:52 happy623: 始終那鼓也有點響
00:52 smallboat: 诶 這裡是放1/2滑條
00:52 happy623: BPM低不會有問題
00:53 smallboat: 哦不沒事
00:53 smallboat: 看錯
00:53 happy623: ;w;
00:53 happy623: 忘了刪 (3)字了
00:53 smallboat: ww
00:53 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477091 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Normal]]
00:53 happy623: 00:41:252 (5) - NC
00:53 happy623: 00:41:933 (7) - 這個放的有點太密(?
00:54 happy623: 可以放開點
00:54 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933619
00:54 happy623: 或者其他的滑條看你喜歡
00:54 smallboat: 好
00:55 happy623: 00:52:161 (5) - NC啊
00:55 happy623: 因為你Kiai之前的都是1節1NC了
00:55 happy623: kiai才2節1個
00:56 smallboat: 對哦~
00:56 happy623: 01:22:160 (8) - 雖然會毀了NC pattern
00:57 happy623: 但我覺得這裡加個也好0 0
00:57 happy623: 給人聽到節奏改變
00:57 smallboat: 好0.0
00:57 smallboat: 說的也堆
00:57 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477088 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Easy]]
00:58 happy623: 00:08:524 (1) - 刪NC keep pattern
00:58 smallboat: 好
00:58 happy623: 00:28:979 (2) - 這個off screen不好看 放下一點
00:59 happy623: 00:41:933 (5) - ;w; 這個放的有點怪啊
00:59 happy623: 這樣擺? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933640
01:00 smallboat: 好 可以
01:01 happy623: 00:54:888 (1) - 其實我在想這個刪不刪走好 感覺這個節奏換的在easy不太好按 不過如果你喜歡就keep吧 新手注意看應該沒問題的
01:02 happy623: 01:05:114 (5) - 同樣off screen問題
01:02 happy623: 01:14:660 (3) - ^
01:02 smallboat: 好
01:02 happy623: 01:21:478 (5) - 如果你Normal有加個NC這裡也加~
01:04 smallboat: 好
01:04 smallboat: 看到是沒加  那就keep
01:04 happy623: okay
01:05 happy623: 感覺Insane那些突然的跳怪怪的w''
01:05 happy623: 等我看看
01:05 smallboat: 好w
01:06 smallboat: 其餘兩個也會講嗎0.0
01:06 happy623: 不了 w
01:06 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477090 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Insane]]
01:06 happy623: 00:33:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
01:06 happy623: 這裡不跳後面卻跳起來
01:07 happy623: 不..
01:07 happy623: 00:35:456 (9,10) - 這2個建議不要跳
01:07 happy623: 00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這樣這個梗就不會怪了
01:09 happy623: 試試這個
01:09 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933656
01:10 happy623: 00:36:479 (5,6) - 由於前面的跳 這裡ds突然很小的話就好像很爽的時候給停了 很失落的;w;
01:10 happy623: 建議跟前的 00:36:308 (4,5) - 的ds一致, 或者你喜歡的其他跳
01:12 happy623: 00:41:933 (4,5,6) - nazi一下  這個6跟45的不是直線啊;w;
01:12 happy623: 你好了叫我
01:21 happy623: 唔 我還是繼續
01:21 happy623: 01:06:478 (6) - 這裡NC不? 如果覺得沒什麼用就不了
01:24 happy623: 01:11:421 (5) - 這裡漏了很多音;w; 自己聽一下吧
01:25 happy623: 沒了;w;

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-17T03:49:36+00:00

happy623 wrote:

irc modded (?) with mapper~

dont read I am so shy

00:11 smallboat: 能不能跟杏仁求簡單摸
00:11 happy623: ;w;
00:11 happy623: 什麼圖
00:11 smallboat:   /np
00:12 smallboat: 出不來!
00:12 smallboat: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201502
00:21 happy623: !
00:21 happy623: 一會看
00:21 happy623: 急嗎;w;
00:30 smallboat: 還好
00:44 happy623: 唔
00:44 happy623: 要看全部麼
00:45 smallboat: 都可以
00:45 happy623: ;w;
00:45 smallboat: ww
00:45 happy623: 可以不看嗎
00:45 happy623: 有點懶orz
00:45 smallboat: 速摸挑幾個就好(?
00:45 smallboat: 哭哭
00:45 smallboat: 好 先慢來
00:46 smallboat: 現在不摸也沒關係
00:46 happy623: 慢來船爺都rank了
00:48 happy623: 你的Insane不上8.5麼
00:49 smallboat: 能上?
00:49 happy623: 感覺kiai 可以難點也沒問題
00:49 smallboat: 低bpm一般不都最高8?
00:49 happy623: 一般已經
00:49 happy623: 而已*
00:49 happy623: 不過也是不上好了
00:50 happy623: 感覺不太難orz
00:51 smallboat: 恩@_@
00:51 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477089 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Hard]]
00:51 happy623: 01:11:080 (3) - 這裡加個note吧0 0
00:52 happy623: 始終那鼓也有點響
00:52 smallboat: 诶 這裡是放1/2滑條
00:52 happy623: BPM低不會有問題
00:53 smallboat: 哦不沒事
00:53 smallboat: 看錯
00:53 happy623: ;w;
00:53 happy623: 忘了刪 (3)字了
00:53 smallboat: ww
00:53 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477091 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Normal]]
00:53 happy623: 00:41:252 (5) - NC
00:53 happy623: 00:41:933 (7) - 這個放的有點太密(?
00:54 happy623: 可以放開點
00:54 happy623: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933619
00:54 happy623: 或者其他的滑條看你喜歡
00:54 smallboat: 好
00:55 happy623: 00:52:161 (5) - NC啊
00:55 happy623: 因為你Kiai之前的都是1節1NC了
00:55 happy623: kiai才2節1個
00:56 smallboat: 對哦~
00:56 happy623: 01:22:160 (8) - 雖然會毀了NC pattern
00:57 happy623: 但我覺得這裡加個也好0 0
00:57 happy623: 給人聽到節奏改變
00:57 smallboat: 好0.0
00:57 smallboat: 說的也堆
00:57 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477088 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Easy]]
00:58 happy623: 00:08:524 (1) - 刪NC keep pattern
00:58 smallboat: 好
00:58 happy623: 00:28:979 (2) - 這個off screen不好看 放下一點
00:59 happy623: 00:41:933 (5) - ;w; 這個放的有點怪啊
00:59 happy623: 這樣擺? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933640
01:00 smallboat: 好 可以
01:01 happy623: 00:54:888 (1) - 其實我在想這個刪不刪走好 感覺這個節奏換的在easy不太好按 不過如果你喜歡就keep吧 新手注意看應該沒問題的
01:02 happy623: 01:05:114 (5) - 同樣off screen問題
01:02 happy623: 01:14:660 (3) - ^
01:02 smallboat: 好
01:02 happy623: 01:21:478 (5) - 如果你Normal有加個NC這裡也加~
01:04 smallboat: 好
01:04 smallboat: 看到是沒加  那就keep
01:04 happy623: okay
01:05 happy623: 感覺Insane那些突然的跳怪怪的w''
01:05 happy623: 等我看看
01:05 smallboat: 好w
01:06 smallboat: 其餘兩個也會講嗎0.0
01:06 happy623: 不了 w
01:06 *happy623 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/477090 Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta (Anime Ver.) [Insane]]
01:06 happy623: 00:33:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
01:06 happy623: 這裡不跳後面卻跳起來
01:07 happy623: 不..
01:07 happy623: 00:35:456 (9,10) - 這2個建議不要跳
01:07 happy623: 00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這樣這個梗就不會怪了
01:09 happy623: 試試這個
01:09 happy623: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933656
01:10 happy623: 00:36:479 (5,6) - 由於前面的跳 這裡ds突然很小的話就好像很爽的時候給停了 很失落的;w;
01:10 happy623: 建議跟前的 00:36:308 (4,5) - 的ds一致, 或者你喜歡的其他跳
01:12 happy623: 00:41:933 (4,5,6) - nazi一下  這個6跟45的不是直線啊;w;
01:12 happy623: 你好了叫我
01:21 happy623: 唔 我還是繼續
01:21 happy623: 01:06:478 (6) - 這裡NC不? 如果覺得沒什麼用就不了
01:24 happy623: 01:11:421 (5) - 這裡漏了很多音;w; 自己聽一下吧
01:25 happy623: 沒了;w;

除了最後一項沒改，其他都改了，謝謝杏仁!

To 12468 : Guest diff are full , don't accept more GD now, sorry.

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-08-17T07:32:03+00:00

hi

[General]
两个gd都关掉宽屏支持?
删掉sc1的whistle? 虽然和默认的有差别但是差别好像不大..

[Easy]
直滑条有点少啊..考虑把一些曲线滑条改成直的?
00:22:161 - 无用绿线?
01:17:898 - ^
00:54:888 (1) - 删掉?
01:07:160 (1) - ds有点问题..

[Normal]
00:01:024 (3) - 修一下blanket? 后面好像还有一些..
00:04:433 (8) - 头的whistle放到尾巴?
00:07:161 (2) - 尾巴的whistle放到头上?
01:24:546 (2,3,4,5) - 试试这样?

[Hard]
00:04:433 (1) - 修一下形状?
00:03:752 (3) - 往上放一些?
00:25:911 (4) - 改成在00:26:252结束的滑条?
00:33:752 (3) - 改成这样可能好一些? 后面也是
00:48:752 (2,3) - 考虑改成两个1/4滑条?
01:06:478 (5,6,1) - ctrl+g? 或者5不折返然后在01:06:819放一个note?

[Insane]
感觉ar有点高_(:з」∠)_ ar8应该没问题吧..
00:19:263 - 感觉这里应该也要放一个note..
00:23:354 - ^
00:26:081 - ^
00:34:263 - ^ 后面有两处也是..
00:27:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里好像可以做成一个五角星
00:58:978 (1) - 可能不叠会比较好?
01:16:364 (5) - 复制前面的3然后放在3的附近可能会好一些?

[Yuki's Insane]
00:22:161 (1,2,3) - 改成这样? 后面也是
00:23:524 (3,4,5,6) - 改成弧线会不会好一些..
01:06:648 (2,3,4) - 试试这样?

[Skystar's Insane]
00:04:433 (3) - ctrl+j和h(?
00:28:638 (3) - 延长到00:29:320?
00:46:365 (2) - 这个不用nc吗o.o 后面有几个也是
00:58:296 (3,4) - 1/1滑条应该从3的时间点开始吧..

goodluck~

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-17T09:25:42+00:00

Hey:D
[Skystar's Insane]
怎么说呢……不愧是星爷，antiflow都没法吐槽啊，干得好！
01:16:194 (5) - Ctrl+G?have a jump between 5&1?
01:18:410 (3,4) - swap?fits music more:D
[Yuki's Insane]
00:54:206 (1) - a little overmap XD
00:55:399 (2) - NC?for stopped
01:03:069 (1) - Ctrl+G?better flow,40,240?
01:06:478 (1,2) - swap nc.better for read
[Insane]
…这风格略老吧，摸不动
[Hard]
Nothing found
[Normal]
00:07:161 (2) - 感觉和1在一起不太圆
[Easy]
Nothing found

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,368 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-08-18T03:30:54+00:00

船业教我找mod和dog啊

Hi!

Chuanye！
•This is Regraz's mod. Note that I am rather new to modding/mapping, so I am sorry if this cannot provide real help.
•This color means things that I highly suggest. But all the mods are just ideas, feel free to deny these because as to mapping, we need various ideas, right?
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The 0004 map modded since using the new modding framwork. (Dont care about this number , it is just used to remind me the number of maps I've modded.)

General and Song Setup

Fine

Easy

Overall: Solid work. Maybe patterns seem a little boring, but they are fine.
Consider using 2.5 CS or reduce Normal's CS to 3.2. A 2.0 to 3.5's CS jump is not a good spread.
Rhythm:
Fine, plain 1/2 seems a little boring anyway.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:41:933 (5,2) - They are in the same direction, which is not neat and also breaks the flow a little, consider this? : http://puu.sh/aX8Xs/38b2040ac3.jpg Also you need adjust 3's position. http://puu.sh/aX8ZZ/fe3dfaa259.jpg
2. 00:49:433 (1,2) - Better if you improve this blanket. http://puu.sh/aX92A/8d14001ecf.jpg
3. 01:05:114 (5,1) - Avoid this overlap, it is to some extend not beautiful.
Hitsounds:
Slidertick ruins the hitsounds, consider reducing slidertick rate.
1. Feels that using 24 whistle in the start part of the diff is not apprioprate, maybe following the piano's high pitch to add whistle is better. For example, 00:05:797 (1) - This slidertick-whistle is not at piano, whihc sounds a little weird. Why not add whistle at both the head and the reverse-point of this slider, since this slider is 3/2.
Other issues:
Feels like several greenline are not necessary, consider deleting them.

Normal

Overall: Better than Normal imo, nice flow, really a solid work.

Rhythm:
Nice.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:46:706 (1) - Consider changing thi place for a elbow flow here: http://puu.sh/aXtrd/2dd49178a2.jpg
2. 00:48:070 (3,4,1) - Nicer flow may be like this: http://puu.sh/aXttV/5064e8d172.jpg
3. 00:50:115 (2,3,4) - Same comment as 00:46:706 (1) - :http://puu.sh/aXtv4/b26f71a5a7.jpg
4. 01:13:296 (3,4) - Better if you fix this blanket. http://puu.sh/aXtCh/ed6dc230af.jpg
5. 01:23:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not very beautiful imo.
Hitsounds:
Also same comment as Easy.
1. 00:03:070 (6) - Add whistle to follow the piano?
Other issues:
1. 00:03:070 (6) - NC because of the piano's pitch.
2. 00:13:979 (5) - NC because of the vocal here.
3. 00:19:433 (5) - ^
4. 00:24:888 (5) - ^
These 4 NCs is meant to be consistent with your next sections.
5. 00:58:978 (6) - - NC?
6. 01:04:432 (6) - ^
Wont repeat same point. Just a suggestion.

Hard

Overall: Also a solid work, rhythm are nice, also player-friendly.
Rhythm:
1. 00:17:047 (2) - Maybe follow the vocal is better? Just imo. http://puu.sh/aYj9E/c6a051b993.jpg Also stack 1 and 2 to emphasize the vocal.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:03:070 (1,2,3) - Make the space consistent. http://puu.sh/aYj2e/aec1adae06.png
2. 00:19:433 (1,2) - Better if you use blanet here.
3. 00:41:933 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:45:342 (4,5,6) - This kind of overlap seems not appropriate in Hard.
5. 00:58:296 (7,1,2) - Why not make a circle? http://puu.sh/aYjop/cfb17dbad6.jpg
Hitsounds:
Nice, though slidertick sounds weird at some degree.
Other issues:
None

Insane

Overall: Fine, kinda old style lol.
Nearly fine, cannot mod it. So nothing to say here.

Yuki's Insane

Overall: Nice work. I especially appreciate the nnotes/rhythm in te section before the Kiai time very very much! They are fantastic!
Rhythm:
1. 00:33:752 (3) - Maybe better if you: http://puu.sh/aYnTP/e274a1c4db.jpg ?
2. 00:36:479 (3,4) - Maybe betterif you: http://puu.sh/aYnVh/843181e519.jpg ?
3. 00:55:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太帅太帅！忍不住说一句! 曲子的感觉一下就出来了
4. 01:06:137 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:18:069 (1,2) - Feels that single notes with small jumps are better for both vocal and rhythm. (感觉四个单点加点小跳更好一点)
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:01:024 (1) - Move to 225|202 for perfect stack.
2. 01:04:432 (1,3) - Check the stack
Hitsounds:
1. 00:29:661 (3) - whistle?
2. 00:30:343 (1) - Add another whistle to emphasize?
Other issues:
1. Unsnapped http://puu.sh/aYobJ/a107814344.png

Xingye

Overall: :3 It is really a pity that I cannot pass it. Xingye's work doesnt need any "overall comment". The map itself tells it.
Rhythm:
1. 00:58:296 (3,4) - Why not 2 1/4 sliders
2. 01:17:387 (9,10) - 4 1/8 short sliders?
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:29:661 (4,1,2) - For a better flow maybe like this?: http://puu.sh/aYtbJ/d724c1a34d.jpg
2. 00:48:752 (1,1) - Check this stack.
Hitsounds:
Nice
Other issues:
None

•That's all.
•In general, this map is so experiened. Also great work indeed!
•Finally, good luck on ranking!

And take my star~

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-19T15:59:51+00:00

rinsukir

rinsukir wrote:
[Yuki's Insane]
00:22:161 (1,2,3) - 改成这样? 后面也是听起来感觉怪怪的
00:23:524 (3,4,5,6) - 改成弧线会不会好一些.. 这个也没啥差别
01:06:648 (2,3,4) - 试试这样? 的确可以，不过我想保持

ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:
[Yuki's Insane]
00:54:206 (1) - a little overmap XD
00:55:399 (2) - NC?for stopped 不
01:03:069 (1) - Ctrl+G?better flow,40,240? 这里ctrl+g我觉得5和1就不是好flow了
01:06:478 (1,2) - swap nc.better for read 没啥必要

Regraz

Regraz wrote:
Yuki's Insane
Overall: Nice work. I especially appreciate the nnotes/rhythm in te section before the Kiai time very very much! They are fantastic!
Rhythm:
1. 00:33:752 (3) - Maybe better if you: http://puu.sh/aYnTP/e274a1c4db.jpg ?
2. 00:36:479 (3,4) - Maybe betterif you: http://puu.sh/aYnVh/843181e519.jpg ? 这里停顿是故意的，我个人也比较喜欢这个梗，不改
3. 00:55:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太帅太帅！忍不住说一句! 曲子的感觉一下就出来了
4. 01:06:137 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:18:069 (1,2) - Feels that single notes with small jumps are better for both vocal and rhythm. (感觉四个单点加点小跳更好一点) 不知道摆哪里好了
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:01:024 (1) - Move to 225|202 for perfect stack. fixed
2. 01:04:432 (1,3) - Check the stack ^
Hitsounds:
1. 00:29:661 (3) - whistle? 想了想没加
2. 00:30:343 (1) - Add another whistle to emphasize? ^
Other issues:
1. Unsnapped http://puu.sh/aYobJ/a107814344.png fixed
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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-08-20T15:04:46+00:00

这是沢井美空？跟卒业的音色一点都不像啊;w;

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-21T03:03:02+00:00

rinsukir

rinsukir wrote:
hi Hi

[General]
两个gd都关掉宽屏支持? 好
删掉sc1的whistle? 虽然和默认的有差别但是差别好像不大.. 沒關係保持這樣

[Easy]
直滑条有点少啊..考虑把一些曲线滑条改成直的? 考慮
00:22:161 - 无用绿线? ok刪了
01:17:898 - ^ ^
00:54:888 (1) - 删掉? 恩想了一下，刪掉好了
01:07:160 (1) - ds有点问题.. Fixed.

[Normal]
00:01:024 (3) - 修一下blanket? 后面好像还有一些.. 好
00:04:433 (8) - 头的whistle放到尾巴? 不了
00:07:161 (2) - 尾巴的whistle放到头上? 好
01:24:546 (2,3,4,5) - 试试这样? 好

[Hard]
00:04:433 (1) - 修一下形状? 考慮
00:03:752 (3) - 往上放一些? 好
00:25:911 (4) - 改成在00:26:252结束的滑条? 感覺還ok
00:33:752 (3) - 改成这样可能好一些? 后面也是好
00:48:752 (2,3) - 考虑改成两个1/4滑条? 雖然可以，但想keep it ,這就用在m醬那邊.
01:06:478 (5,6,1) - ctrl+g? 或者5不折返然后在01:06:819放一个note? Fixed,選擇加了note

[Insane]
感觉ar有点高_(:з」∠)_ ar8应该没问题吧.. 可以
00:19:263 - 感觉这里应该也要放一个note.. 選擇延伸了slider
00:23:354 - ^ 換了slider
00:26:081 - ^ 這個還好
00:34:263 - ^ 后面有两处也是.. 也還可以
00:27:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里好像可以做成一个五角星先保持
00:58:978 (1) - 可能不叠会比较好? 保持
01:16:364 (5) - 复制前面的3然后放在3的附近可能会好一些? 保持

goodluck~ :D

Thanks rinsukir ~ !

To Ts8zs : Fix some,thanks.

Regraz

Regraz wrote:
船业教我找mod和dog啊下次

Hi! Chuanye！ hi
•This is Regraz's mod. Note that I am rather new to modding/mapping, so I am sorry if this cannot provide real help.
•This color means things that I highly suggest. But all the mods are just ideas, feel free to deny these because as to mapping, we need various ideas, right?
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The 0004 map modded since using the new modding framwork. (Dont care about this number , it is just used to remind me the number of maps I've modded.)
General and Song Setup
Fine

Easy
Overall: Solid work. Maybe patterns seem a little boring, but they are fine.
Consider using 2.5 CS or reduce Normal's CS to 3.2. A 2.0 to 3.5's CS jump is not a good spread.Use Easy CS2.5 now,but Normal keep it.
Rhythm:
Fine, plain 1/2 seems a little boring anyway.Nothing,just do this.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:41:933 (5,2) - They are in the same direction, which is not neat and also breaks the flow a little, consider this? : http://puu.sh/aX8Xs/38b2040ac3.jpg Also you need adjust 3's position. http://puu.sh/aX8ZZ/fe3dfaa259.jpg Fixed the 2 position.
2. 00:49:433 (1,2) - Better if you improve this blanket. http://puu.sh/aX92A/8d14001ecf.jpg Moved a bit.
3. 01:05:114 (5,1) - Avoid this overlap, it is to some extend not beautiful. Keep it
Hitsounds:
Slidertick ruins the hitsounds, consider reducing slidertick rate. Will consider to this
1. Feels that using 24 whistle in the start part of the diff is not apprioprate, maybe following the piano's high pitch to add whistle is better. For example, 00:05:797 (1) - This slidertick-whistle is not at piano, whihc sounds a little weird. Why not add whistle at both the head and the reverse-point of this slider, since this slider is 3/2. Feel fine now,perhap will consider this.
Other issues:
Feels like several greenline are not necessary, consider deleting them.Will consider to this

Normal
Overall: Better than Normal imo, nice flow, really a solid work.
Rhythm:
Nice.
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:46:706 (1) - Consider changing thi place for a elbow flow here: http://puu.sh/aXtrd/2dd49178a2.jpg Fixed
2. 00:48:070 (3,4,1) - Nicer flow may be like this: http://puu.sh/aXttV/5064e8d172.jpg Fixed
3. 00:50:115 (2,3,4) - Same comment as 00:46:706 (1) - :http://puu.sh/aXtv4/b26f71a5a7.jpg Fixed
4. 01:13:296 (3,4) - Better if you fix this blanket. http://puu.sh/aXtCh/ed6dc230af.jpg Fixed
5. 01:23:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not very beautiful imo. Feel fine now.
Hitsounds:
Also same comment as Easy.
1. 00:03:070 (6) - Add whistle to follow the piano? Cool,added.
Other issues:
1. 00:03:070 (6) - NC because of the piano's pitch.
2. 00:13:979 (5) - NC because of the vocal here. Added.
3. 00:19:433 (5) - ^ Added.
4. 00:24:888 (5) - ^ Added.
These 4 NCs is meant to be consistent with your next sections.[/color] Fixed.
5. 00:58:978 (6) - - NC? Added.
6. 01:04:432 (6) - ^ Added.
Wont repeat same point. Just a suggestion.Okay.

Hard
Overall: Also a solid work, rhythm are nice, also player-friendly.
Rhythm:
1. 00:17:047 (2) - Maybe follow the vocal is better? Just imo. http://puu.sh/aYj9E/c6a051b993.jpg Also stack 1 and 2 to emphasize the vocal. Changed
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:03:070 (1,2,3) - Make the space consistent. http://puu.sh/aYj2e/aec1adae06.png Fixed.
2. 00:19:433 (1,2) - Better if you use blanet here.Feel fine now.
3. 00:41:933 (3,4) - ^ ^
4. 00:45:342 (4,5,6) - This kind of overlap seems not appropriate in Hard.It's okay to me.
5. 00:58:296 (7,1,2) - Why not make a circle? http://puu.sh/aYjop/cfb17dbad6.jpg Although can use this,but I think that pattern is fine.
Hitsounds:
Nice, though slidertick sounds weird at some degree.Perhaps will check and fix it.
Other issues:
None

Insane
Overall: Fine, kinda old style lol. LOL
Nearly fine, cannot mod it. So nothing to say here.Okay.

•That's all.
•In general, this map is so experiened. Also great work indeed! Yes.
•Finally, good luck on ranking! And take my star~

Thanks Regraz mod and star ~ !

Awaken

Awaken wrote:
aaa
[Easy]
真是得说几乎整张图都是1/2 kiai这样倒没什么主歌比较柔和的部分更好的应该用1/1甚至3/2来代替
Easy也没啥可说的我就写blanket好了好
SPOILER
00:35:797 (4,5) -
00:00:343 (1,2) -
00:38:524 (1,2) -
00:49:433 (1,2) -
移動了一點
00:00:343 (1,2) -
00:08:524 (2) - 这个和前面的节奏是一样的为什么不插同样的绿线做相同的音效？0.0 忘了
00:41:252 (4,5) - 类似这种的排列我觉得flow不怎么好这种就应该顺着摆下来是最佳把5 Ctrl+g了
我怀疑这easy十分钟做完花了一小吧
[Normal]
00:27:615 (1,3) - 虽然是个没啥用的nazi 不过最好把3往左略偏移一下与1和2之间的距离相等移動了一點
00:28:638 (2,3,1,2) - 现在这样节奏真不怎么样;_; 我建议这样更符合歌曲
SPOILER
不喜歡尾端放大白線，或許這能考慮下
然后是关于kiai的NC 如果按照前面的NC方法来看应该是属于太长可以改变一下NC格局比如这里01:04:432 (6) - 可以加个NC 后面类似
不过由于是在kiai 不改也没啥关系也可以说是两个部分做个分割恩，照Regeaz那個mod加NC了
[Hard]
00:24:888 (1,2,3,4) - 这这这太突然啦;_; 我建议把00:25:399 (2,3) - 结合成一个折返滑条然后00:25:911 (4,5) - 做一个1/2slider 好
[Insane]
00:28:979 (5) - 可能是我个人不过我觉得摆个五角星更好啊玩家在玩的时候能感受到你画五角星的美丽（。再考慮
01:06:478 (1,2) - 这里有几个鼓所以我觉得还是摆几个单点的好好
01:11:421 (5,6,7,1) - 我怎么老是读成1/2 01:12:103 这个位置还是加个单点或者重新摆下节奏比较好这个距离容易读成你是为了摆滑条与单点之间的跳好重擺了然後那邊加了單點
01:26:251 (1) - 放底下呗美观 x261y381 這不太美觀阿，不過放在 310 370了

Good Luck for rank ~

謝了阿瓦肯~ !

~~呼全部改完了累死~~

Last edited by smallboat 2014-08-22T06:35:10+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-08-21T16:30:11+00:00

aaa
[Easy]
真是得说几乎整张图都是1/2 kiai这样倒没什么主歌比较柔和的部分更好的应该用1/1甚至3/2来代替
Easy也没啥可说的我就写blanket好了

SPOILER

00:35:797 (4,5) -
00:00:343 (1,2) -
00:38:524 (1,2) -
00:49:433 (1,2) -

00:00:343 (1,2) -
00:08:524 (2) - 这个和前面的节奏是一样的为什么不插同样的绿线做相同的音效？0.0
00:41:252 (4,5) - 类似这种的排列我觉得flow不怎么好这种就应该顺着摆下来是最佳
我怀疑这easy十分钟做完
[Normal]
00:27:615 (1,3) - 虽然是个没啥用的nazi 不过最好把3往左略偏移一下与1和2之间的距离相等
00:28:638 (2,3,1,2) - 现在这样节奏真不怎么样;_; 我建议这样更符合歌曲

SPOILER

然后是关于kiai的NC 如果按照前面的NC方法来看应该是属于太长可以改变一下NC格局比如这里01:04:432 (6) - 可以加个NC 后面类似
不过由于是在kiai 不改也没啥关系也可以说是两个部分做个分割
[Hard]
00:24:888 (1,2,3,4) - 这这这太突然啦;_; 我建议把00:25:399 (2,3) - 结合成一个折返滑条然后00:25:911 (4,5) - 做一个1/2slider
[Insane]
00:28:979 (5) - 可能是我个人不过我觉得摆个五角星更好啊玩家在玩的时候能感受到你画五角星的美丽（。
01:06:478 (1,2) - 这里有几个鼓所以我觉得还是摆几个单点的好
01:11:421 (5,6,7,1) - 我怎么老是读成1/2 01:12:103 这个位置还是加个单点或者重新摆下节奏比较好这个距离容易读成你是为了摆滑条与单点之间的跳
01:26:251 (1) - 放底下呗美观 x261y381
[yUKi]
00:45:343 (4,4) - 这两个不是相同的音0.0? 怎么一个放w一个没放?
00:50:797 (3) - 这地方人声还是很重的建议加个音效的好
kiai的三连好像在打空气;_;
[sKYsTaR]
00:03:922 (6,2) - 这两个的whistle交换一下感觉更合适啊
00:17:388 (4) - 头头加个w？
00:53:865 (2) - 这个滑条有点拖拽的感觉有点难受音乐里面应该是乍停的感觉我建议00:53:524 (1) - 这个拉到1/8下的黄线然后后面红线放个1/4折返

Good Luck for rank ~

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2014-08-22T07:16:39+00:00

Yo, as requested.

[General]

The kiai times are inconsistent in your diffs. Which is unrankable. Please, try to keep kiais in your own diffs consistent, it is really important for the mapset.
Could you, please, make the red andblue coliurs a bit darker? They seem kinda bright and don't really atch with the colours/mood of the video.
For Easier diffs, Slider Tick Rate 2 feels exaggerated. I'd set it back to 1. STR 2 just doesn't sound suitable, in my opinion.

[Easy]

00:00:343 - the green line here bugs osu and isn't really necessary. Mind removing it?
For a low BPM song, I'd set HP Drain to 2. It will make the spread more balanced and icrease the playability of the diff.
00:12:615 (2,3) - minor - the transition does not feel smooth. this might convince you
00:30:343 (1,1) - newies need much more time to recover after the spinner. Making spinner shorter seems impossible and removing the following circle seems impossible, as well. So, I would suggest you to remove the spinner and try to map this part.
00:38:524 (1,2) - minor - the slider itself is noticeably different from the other sliders + the blanketing doesn't look perfect. So, i thought that you might want to fix that.
00:49:433 (1,2) - select them and press Ctrl+G. It will swapt them on the timeline and will make them sound much better. Try that and don't foret to fix their placement afterwards, if you agree.

Neat easy, seems okay.

[Normal]

You can get rid of some 1/2s like 00:15:002 (2) - or 00:41:593 (2) - to emphasize the 1/1 sound before and after them and to bring some variety to the song's trhythm. You get the idea, right? Just try to remove some minor circles to make your rhythm more interesting.
00:17:388 - mind dropping the volume here? Its sound is too loud and feels a bit forced here.
00:28:979 (3,1,2) - the pattern itself has some tricky transition and does not flow very well. The rhythm also feels a bit forced, so I would try to re-arrange rhythm and improve the placement as well. Here's an alternative example. It might look tricky, but I use polarity, so it is 100% playable in-game.
00:38:524 (1,2) - I'd rather use Ctrl+G on these two to emphasize the vocals. See if you like the sound and don't forget to fix the spacing, if you liked the idea.
01:16:023 (2,3,4) - I like how it mmatches with the guitar, sounds and plays really great! ♥

Pretty simple diff. Although constant 1/2 rhyth make it a bit boring, everything else seems well-done.

[Hard]

00:17:047 (2,3) - I recommend you to stack these two. It will make them more playable and readable + it will look neater.
00:23:865 (4,5) - starting the slider on the red tick doesn't feel natural here. Please, try to begin it on the white tick somehow. For example, you can simply swap these two object on the timeline.
00:25:911 (3,4) - the jump feels exaggerated. It just doesn't match with the song, I believe. Try to reduce the DS here in order to make this part more playable, please.
Note: 00:40:570 (6) - same here, try to Ctrl+g the slider to improve flow, structur and to make it more playable.
00:29:320 (4) - 00:31:706 (2) - both of these circle sound too weak. I would remove them in a hard diff and consider keeping them on the Insanes.
00:45:342 (5) - there is nothing to follow on the blue tick. Please, finish this slider on the red one or mute the tail to match with the music better.
01:16:705 (1,2,3) - the DS here feels broken. I understand that you do that in order to get a symmetrical pattern, but it does not match with the music. Try something like this instead. There're no random DS changes and therefore, it gives you better flow.

Pretty nice in general, just a few minor fixes that I'd prefer to see applied. Nice job.

[Insane]

00:24:206 (6) - the jump feels exaggerated for a calm part. At least Ctrl+G the slidr to make it more fitting and playable!
Note: 00:29:661 (6) - same here, the reason is the same, as well.
00:52:161 (1,2) - the music gets slower, and x4.0+ jup does not fit well. I would use stacks, instead. So, this part would get more playable.

Nothing else to say, you've manage to map a cute and pretty enjoyable Insane diff for a calm song! But I still recommend you to simplify some of the jumps.

[Yuki's Insane]

00:01:706 (1,2) - well, the jumps here don't really match with the song and feel weird since you had no any jumps before. Why not something like this?
Note: also, you might want to 00:03:752 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+G these circles, to keep the DS consistent for this part. Try it, it will fit nicely!
00:22:672 (2,3,4) - the DS feels sorta broken here. Mind re-adjusting it to make it consistent? I am sure that it is not meant to be played like this because it feels weird with the music.
Note: same happens in the next combo.00:25:399 (2,3) - just reminding you to check this as well
00:54:206 (1) - the beginneg of the slider is inaudible and feels unfitting with the track. Please, remove it and place just one circle at 00:54:888 - to follow the song's rhythm.
01:03:836 - I recommend you to place a circle here since the beat is really well-hearable here and remove the circle from 01:04:006 (5) - because it sounds forced.
01:15:341 (1,2,3) - minor - I'd make consistent DS here, this part tricked me at least 3 times while checking. I was thinking there's some sort of 3/4 rhythm, due to the way it's placed. @.@

Might need a bit more work on the placemnt, but it is fine in general.

[Skystar's Insane]
The diff itself feels harder than an average Insane, I'd call it something like Skystar's Extra or something creative lik Skystar Rage. The diff is too hard for an Insane and too easy for an extra, so a custom name would be great.

00:31:365 (2) - we've already discussed it with the host-mapper in-game.
00:44:831 (4) - mind adding a new combo here? It sounds and feels different from the previous sliders.
00:47:388 - are you sure about ignoring the beat here? It feels really confusing and doesn't really match with the rhythm you've used before. I'd just place a circle here.
01:26:251 (1) - minor - the loop does not look perfect. Read me and try to improve the shape a bit!

A bit easier than a typical Skystar diff. I'd rename it to emphasize the fact, that this is somewhat like a light-Extra diff. Otherwise it's fine.

Having 3 Insanes for a low-BPM song is somewhat new to me. Anyway, the mapset seems quite alright.

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Best of luck!

Last edited by riffy 2014-08-22T11:42:15+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

CET 6

365 posts

Joined August 2012

CET 6 2014-08-22T08:41:11+00:00

Hi hi~

好好听啊！

Easy

适合新人嗯
00:16:706 (1) - 觉得放在前个物件尾左下45°的位子比较好看

Normal

有点小难也可能是CS和AR的原因
00:03:070 (1,2,3) - 个人真心觉得这个排列不好看虽然打起来不错一定要用到这种排列的时候我比较喜欢两个滑条对称
00:51:138 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我称之为毛毛虫排列···觉得像是随意排的试着弄了下 00:51:479 (4,1,2,3) - 如果弄成正方形（00:51:479 (4) - 的尾部和00:52:161 (1,2,3) - 的头部）就觉得有梗了很多哈哈哈不过flow好像不好= =
01:02:387 (3) - 觉得ctrl+J的方向比较顺不过发现你好像喜欢用这种方向在easy也是

Hard

00:14:661 (2,3) - 这里是想弄距离渐变吗？嗯没事就问问
00:17:047 (2) - 觉得和00:17:218 (3) - 重叠比较顺不过觉得你是故意放和1叠的吧
00:33:070 (1) - 觉得不用折返后面加个note 或者2个1/8滑条因为觉得00:33:411vocal 的音用note比较有打击感但是00:35:797 (1) - 又感觉还行可能是前面那个“do” 唱的比较重点
01:23:012 (1) - 觉得用横向滑条然后01:23:523 (1) - 也用平行的横向滑条会顺些

~~这歌儿觉得到Hard难度就差不多啦 insane什么真是为难我这种渣子不过还是看看吧！~~

Insane

00:35:456 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - 上面貌似说到了（又一个和我一样不怎么会拼五角星的嘛？哈哈哈学会了要教我啊！00:35:456 (9,5) - 不是要重叠吗？

Yuki's Insane

觉得AR太高了点也 8.5就可以了吧
00:42:615 (3) - 觉得这尾巴可以在drum基础上加finish
01:05:114 (3) - 没叠好？
还有不太好说呐- - 跟原曲的鼓点好但觉得音效单薄了点多加些normal觉得会好点具体的建议吧我还说不出来╮(╯_╰)╭ 后来看了星爷的觉得大概是kiai那样的音效

Skystar's Insane

难度名不用现在的名字嘛？
00:13:979 (2,3,4) - 觉得三个分别ctrl+G 比较顺
00:22:843 这个空的好啊
00:23:013 (3) - 觉得滑条尾巴如果加上长铃声好
00:31:365 (2) - 没有长铃声的音效吗？
00:33:070 (1,2,3) - 高AR距离又近觉得晃眼不小心以为是连打觉得用2.5左右的DS会好看点
~~00:43:979 (1,2,3,4) - 强迫症觉得这里的间距变化太多然后发现是个人作图习惯- -~~
00:57:614 (1,2) - 觉得可以用和00:58:978 (1) - 这样倾斜点的滑条
01:20:285 (4) - 觉得X不变Y移到154比较好看 (个人强迫症···

好啦
大概就这样了~

Spring

117 posts

Joined March 2013

Spring 2014-08-22T08:44:59+00:00

摸得渣不要见怪T.T（怀疑摸不动）
这曲子真好听，回头放进手机里！

insane
00:15:343 (4) - 我觉得Ctrl+G可能更好，不改动也不错
00:17:388 (4,5) - 4到5改作微微弯曲的滑条感觉不错
00:18:922 (9) - 建议改成弯滑条(我怎么这么喜欢弯滑条(拍飞))
00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角对角跳难度有些高，间距降低一些可能比较好
00:43:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个弧不太对称，摆对称些好些(逼死强迫症系列233）
00:59:660 (2) - 这个滑条有些单调，形状可以改动下0.0

Yuki's Insane
00:27:274 (6) - 也是感觉Ctrl+G会更好0.0
00:34:263 - 这个位置加一个note会更好

船爷我爱你啊hhhhh

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2014-08-22T10:56:18+00:00

Hello~from in-game :3
~~可以容許我問一下這是哪部的op還是ed嗎~~ XD

Easy
00:38:524 (1,2) - blanket,雖然不想抓,可是你其他部分感覺都包的很好 :<
01:25:569 (3) - 其實我覺得可以弄成滑條到01:25:910...可是有些人不喜歡,請隨意 (?)
00:29:661 (3) - ^同上

Normal
00:04:433 (3) - 這裡有點抖音(是這樣講嗎)我覺得可以有點變化說 :

01:02:387 (3) - 個人覺得這樣彎比較好 :

Hard
00:16:706 (1,2) - 把(2)覆蓋在(3)的開頭,然後(1)拉開距離應該比較好,雖然知道是故意的不過還是想建議 XD

Insane
01:20:114 (5) - 移到右上角打起來會比較順手呢 :

對不起沒mod出什麼,大概就這些 XDD
這真是首好歌~GL!!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-23T09:38:54+00:00

Awaken

Awaken wrote:
[yUKi]
00:45:343 (4,4) - 这两个不是相同的音0.0? 怎么一个放w一个没放? whistle根本不一样
00:50:797 (3) - 这地方人声还是很重的建议加个音效的好可以
kiai的三连好像在打空气;_;

-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:
[Yuki's Insane]
00:01:706 (1,2) - well, the jumps here don't really match with the song and feel weird since you had no any jumps before. Why not something like this? imo it's not a jump, very easy to play
Note: also, you might want to 00:03:752 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+G these circles, to keep the DS consistent for this part. Try it, it will fit nicely! fine, this fixed
00:22:672 (2,3,4) - the DS feels sorta broken here. Mind re-adjusting it to make it consistent? I am sure that it is not meant to be played like this because it feels weird with the music. it's not weird for me
Note: same happens in the next combo.00:25:399 (2,3) - just reminding you to check this as well
00:54:206 (1) - the beginneg of the slider is inaudible and feels unfitting with the track. Please, remove it and place just one circle at 00:54:888 - to follow the song's rhythm. i'll consider about removing this
01:03:836 - I recommend you to place a circle here since the beat is really well-hearable here and remove the circle from 01:04:006 (5) - because it sounds forced. ok
01:15:341 (1,2,3) - minor - I'd make consistent DS here, this part tricked me at least 3 times while checking. I was thinking there's some sort of 3/4 rhythm, due to the way it's placed. @.@ fixed

Might need a bit more work on the placemnt, but it is fine in general. plz teach me placement

CET 6

CET 6 wrote:
Yuki's Insane

觉得AR太高了点也 8.5就可以了吧先不动
00:42:615 (3) - 觉得这尾巴可以在drum基础上加finish good
01:05:114 (3) - 没叠好？自动stack问题懒得改了
还有不太好说呐- - 跟原曲的鼓点好但觉得音效单薄了点多加些normal觉得会好点具体的建议吧我还说不出来╮(╯_╰)╭ 后来看了星爷的觉得大概是kiai那样的音效

Spring

没改就不quote了

thanks for modding

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264,86,61023,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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125,128,62898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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16,124,63751,1,8,1:0:0:0:
232,61,63921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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282,138,64432,6,0,L|264:286,1,150.000005722046,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,372,64944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,344,65114,2,0,P|336:290|263:287,1,150.000005722046,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,372,65626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,236,65796,5,0,0:0:0:0:
473,322,65966,1,0,1:0:0:0:
403,92,66137,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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334,193,66819,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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309,313,67841,2,0,P|258:365|186:358,1,150.000005722046,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,183,68353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,171,68438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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237,201,72102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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435,79,73296,2,0,L|353:72,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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290,110,73807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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122,195,74319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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393,202,75597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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443,142,84887,6,0,L|433:292,1,150.000005722046,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,34,85569,1,8,1:0:0:0:
372,50,86251,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86336,12,0,88807,0:0:0:0:

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-08-25T12:45:30+00:00

[Yuki's Insane]
OD -1
00:53:865 (2,1) - 試試這樣放? http://puu.sh/b7chp/bc4245f8b3.jpg
因為00:54:036 - 這裡沒音而且節奏聽上去也不太舒服
01:06:819 (3) - x339 y79 flow順點
01:14:660 (4) - 縮短到01:15:001 - ?

[Insane]
OD HP -1 掉血有點快最簡單的insane還是od7好已經沒od7 diff了
00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這跳確實有點急...而且這理沒合適的理由去增加ds 除去跳有點急這點這五角星放好點
00:53:524 (4) - 拆分成兩個circle
00:55:740 (1) - 這slider再快點用0.75x
01:23:012 (1) - stack在01:23:182 (2) - 上面然後放近點01:22:160 (1) -

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-08-27T02:27:32+00:00

-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested. o /

[General]
The kiai times are inconsistent in your diffs. Which is unrankable. Please, try to keep kiais in your own diffs consistent, it is really important for the mapset. Okay,fixed the kiai time in my diffs.
Could you, please, make the red andblue coliurs a bit darker? They seem kinda bright and don't really atch with the colours/mood of the video. Okay,wiil be adjust more deeper colors here.
For Easier diffs, Slider Tick Rate 2 feels exaggerated. I'd set it back to 1. STR 2 just doesn't sound suitable, in my opinion. Sure,fixed the STR 1 in Easy diff.
[Easy]
00:00:343 - the green line here bugs osu and isn't really necessary. Mind removing it? Fixed
For a low BPM song, I'd set HP Drain to 2. It will make the spread more balanced and icrease the playability of the diff. Fixed to 2.
00:12:615 (2,3) - minor - the transition does not feel smooth. this might convince you Changed.
00:30:343 (1,1) - newies need much more time to recover after the spinner. Making spinner shorter seems impossible and removing the following circle seems impossible, as well. So, I would suggest you to remove the spinner and try to map this part. Sure,deleted this spinner.
00:38:524 (1,2) - minor - the slider itself is noticeably different from the other sliders + the blanketing doesn't look perfect. So, i thought that you might want to fix that. Fixed this slider.
00:49:433 (1,2) - select them and press Ctrl+G. It will swapt them on the timeline and will make them sound much better. Try that and don't foret to fix their placement afterwards, if you agree. Cool,seems good better before.

Neat easy, seems okay. : )
[Normal]
You can get rid of some 1/2s like 00:15:002 (2) - or 00:41:593 (2) - to emphasize the 1/1 sound before and after them and to bring some variety to the song's trhythm. You get the idea, right? Just try to remove some minor circles to make your rhythm more interesting.Has been used idea in Easy diff,so these notes feel fine to me.
00:17:388 - mind dropping the volume here? Its sound is too loud and feels a bit forced here. Use a 25% here.
00:28:979 (3,1,2) - the pattern itself has some tricky transition and does not flow very well. The rhythm also feels a bit forced, so I would try to re-arrange rhythm and improve the placement as well. Here's an alternative example. It might look tricky, but I use polarity, so it is 100% playable in-game. Cool fixed.
00:38:524 (1,2) - I'd rather use Ctrl+G on these two to emphasize the vocals. See if you like the sound and don't forget to fix the spacing, if you liked the idea. So good idea,fixed.
01:16:023 (2,3,4) - I like how it mmatches with the guitar, sounds and plays really great! ♥ <3

Pretty simple diff. Although constant 1/2 rhyth make it a bit boring, everything else seems well-done. Okay.
[Hard]
00:17:047 (2,3) - I recommend you to stack these two. It will make them more playable and readable + it will look neater. Fixed.
00:23:865 (4,5) - starting the slider on the red tick doesn't feel natural here. Please, try to begin it on the white tick somehow. For example, you can simply swap these two object on the timeline. Okay,changed.
00:25:911 (3,4) - the jump feels exaggerated. It just doesn't match with the song, I believe. Try to reduce the DS here in order to make this part more playable, please.Sure, reduce a bit DS here.
Note: 00:40:570 (6) - same here, try to Ctrl+g the slider to improve flow, structur and to make it more playable. Sure,fixed.
00:29:320 (4) - 00:31:706 (2) - both of these circle sound too weak. I would remove them in a hard diff and consider keeping them on the Insanes. Fixed.
00:45:342 (5) - there is nothing to follow on the blue tick. Please, finish this slider on the red one or mute the tail to match with the music better. Reduce the red one here,fixed.
01:16:705 (1,2,3) - the DS here feels broken. I understand that you do that in order to get a symmetrical pattern, but it does not match with the music. Try something like this instead. There're no random DS changes and therefore, it gives you better flow.
Fixed.
Pretty nice in general, just a few minor fixes that I'd prefer to see applied. Nice job. Okay.
[Insane]
00:24:206 (6) - the jump feels exaggerated for a calm part. At least Ctrl+G the slidr to make it more fitting and playable!
Note: 00:29:661 (6) - same here, the reason is the same, as well. Feel this two parts looks fine to me.
00:52:161 (1,2) - the music gets slower, and x4.0+ jup does not fit well. I would use stacks, instead. So, this part would get more playable. Reduce a bit distance,but do not use stack here.

Nothing else to say, you've manage to map a cute and pretty enjoyable Insane diff for a calm song! But I still recommend you to simplify some of the jumps. Will be changed a bit for this diff ~ !

Having 3 Insanes for a low-BPM song is somewhat new to me. Anyway, the mapset seems quite alright. Right.

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Best of luck! Thanks -Bakari- ~ !

CET 6

CET 6 wrote:
Hi hi~ Hi

好好听啊！對阿 ww

Easy

适合新人嗯
00:16:706 (1) - 觉得放在前个物件尾左下45°的位子比较好看恩，調了一下

Normal

有点小难也可能是CS和AR的原因應該還好
00:03:070 (1,2,3) - 个人真心觉得这个排列不好看虽然打起来不错一定要用到这种排列的时候我比较喜欢两个滑条对称恩不用了沒關係ww
00:51:138 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我称之为毛毛虫排列···觉得像是随意排的试着弄了下 00:51:479 (4,1,2,3) - 如果弄成正方形（00:51:479 (4) - 的尾部和00:52:161 (1,2,3) - 的头部）就觉得有梗了很多哈哈哈不过flow好像不好= = 那就保持原來的了
01:02:387 (3) - 觉得ctrl+J的方向比较顺不过发现你好像喜欢用这种方向在easy也是先保持這樣好了

Hard

00:14:661 (2,3) - 这里是想弄距离渐变吗？嗯没事就问问應該是保持同距的,fixed
00:17:047 (2) - 觉得和00:17:218 (3) - 重叠比较顺不过觉得你是故意放和1叠的吧好像是這先前的mod改過了這裡，現在也變動了些
00:33:070 (1) - 觉得不用折返后面加个note 或者2个1/8滑条因为觉得00:33:411vocal 的音用note比较有打击感但是00:35:797 (1) - 又感觉还行可能是前面那个“do” 唱的比较重点這個節奏好，但 1/8 那個就不用了，在Hard有點難，fixed.
01:23:012 (1) - 觉得用横向滑条然后01:23:523 (1) - 也用平行的横向滑条会顺些改了一點

~~这歌儿觉得到Hard难度就差不多啦 insane什么真是为难我这种渣子不过还是看看吧！哈哈好w~~

Insane

00:35:456 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - 上面貌似说到了哈哈，先保持這樣，自己擺的五角我覺得也是一個特色ww（又一个和我一样不怎么会拼五角星的嘛？哈哈哈学会了要教我啊！00:35:456 (9,5) - 不是要重叠吗？

好啦
大概就这样了~

Thanks CET 6 ~ !

spring

spring wrote:
摸得渣不要见怪T.T（怀疑摸不动）沒關係
这曲子真好听，回头放进手机里！hh

insane
00:15:343 (4) - 我觉得Ctrl+G可能更好，不改动也不错不改還比較好
00:17:388 (4,5) - 4到5改作微微弯曲的滑条感觉不错感覺現在用這個壓vocal 較好
00:18:922 (9) - 建议改成弯滑条(我怎么这么喜欢弯滑条(拍飞)) 恩改成彎的
00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角对角跳难度有些高，间距降低一些可能比较好間距還可以
00:43:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个弧不太对称，摆对称些好些(逼死强迫症系列233）稍微改了點弧度
00:59:660 (2) - 这个滑条有些单调，形状可以改动下0.0 不覺得，因為是對應(1)的滑條。

船爷我爱你啊hhhhh hhh~ :3

Thanks spring ~ !

bigfrog wrote:
Hello~from in-game :3 : 3
~~可以容許我問一下這是哪部的op還是ed嗎~~ XD 呵呵跟你說了w

Easy
00:38:524 (1,2) - blanket,雖然不想抓,可是你其他部分感覺都包的很好 :< 抓了也沒差，不過這個我已經照先前mod改過了w
01:25:569 (3) - 其實我覺得可以弄成滑條到01:25:910...可是有些人不喜歡,請隨意 (?) 是可以，但據說Easy不能放這麼近了，否則會被QAT挑剔被un，所以不動這裡了
00:29:661 (3) - ^同上 ^

Normal
00:04:433 (3) - 這裡有點抖音(是這樣講嗎)我覺得可以有點變化說 :
這個好 !
01:02:387 (3) - 個人覺得這樣彎比較好 :
好

Hard
00:16:706 (1,2) - 把(2)覆蓋在(3)的開頭,然後(1)拉開距離應該比較好,雖然知道是故意的不過還是想建議 XD 改了一點

Insane
01:20:114 (5) - 移到右上角打起來會比較順手呢 :
考慮看看

對不起沒mod出什麼,大概就這些 XDD 沒關係 ww
這真是首好歌~GL!! 呵呵對w

Thanks bigfrog ~ !

Kawaiwkyik

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Insane]
OD HP -1 掉血有點快最簡單的insane還是od7好已經沒od7 diff了都減了，但HP減到6.5
00:35:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這跳確實有點急...而且這理沒合適的理由去增加ds 除去跳有點急這點這五角星放好點說的也堆，那我考慮下
00:53:524 (4) - 拆分成兩個circle 想弄個滑條對稱，不換這裡
00:55:740 (1) - 這slider再快點用0.75x 還不錯，fixed了
01:23:012 (1) - stack在01:23:182 (2) - 上面然後放近點01:22:160 (1) - 感覺現在還比較好

Thanks Kawaiwkyik ~ !

EDIT : Mods reply all finish done. Ready check from BATs.

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

3,785 posts

Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2014-09-12T14:44:06+00:00

[General]
- Use アカメが斬る! as the Source. Add the romanization in the tags.
- Also why not just use bg2. It looks much better!

[Skystar's Insane]
- 00:01:369 (1,2) - This change in spacing here isn't intuitive. I don't hear anything in the music to indicate a change in spacing. A suggestion would be to swap (2) here with 00:01:881 (2) -. This allows the next combo to transition into one slowly lowering spacing up until 00:03:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
- 00:13:642 (1) - Stack this on the head of (4) instead?
- 00:16:028 (5,1) - The anti-jump here doesn't really play nicely

IMO move them further apart.
- 00:17:392 (4,5,6) - Here also, the spacing is inconsistent. IMO keep it the same throughout the combo here.
- 00:20:460 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing here again. Instead of blanketing, why not make a similar pattern with (1,2)?
- 00:24:551 (6) - Place this perfectly in the middle of (5) and (1)? http://puu.sh/bvWH5/ee75b93fa2.jpg
- 00:27:278 (6) - Make the spacing here similar to (4,5)? http://puu.sh/bvWK9/7ba43e9da0.jpg
- 00:50:460 (2,3) - I kind of understand why it seems alright to place them closely like this... Why not try a stack instead?
- 01:12:533 (6,1) - That jump is a bit sudden

Make these two closer to the previous hitobject? Or maybe make the note go right between them for better spacing?
- 01:15:260 (5,1) - Same as above.
- The chorus plays nicely. The low BPM with the fast parts in between definitely fit your jumpy mapping style for this map.

[Yuki's Insane]
- 00:20:119 (2,3) - Maybe to prevent spacing inconsistency within the combo itself, you can just stack these two like you normally do? http://puu.sh/bvXgq/94c3c90c1e.jpg
- 00:39:551 (3,4) - (3) is too close to (2). I can't think of a better pattern though which will fix it. It's an anti-jump and I'm not sure if it plays nicely.
- 00:47:222 (2,3) - Lower the spacing a bit here or just stack it normally. You've been using that pattern for 1/2 spaced notes as "stacks" so far, so changing it to 1/4 suddenly is confusing.
- 00:48:074 (4,5) - Same here.
- 00:51:312 (4,5) - Also here.
- 00:52:676 (2,3,4,1) - ^ Last ones here. DW after chorus, you can alter your spacing a bit due to music change.
- 01:06:141 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Nice part here

- Chorus also checks out nicely here!

[Insane]
- 00:00:347 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - No need to NC every 2 sliders. Every 4 should be fine. (You can actually make this a single combo if you want)
- 00:08:528 (1) - Adjust note a bit to the right for better flow coming from previous note http://puu.sh/bvXOv/47aa80027e.jpg
- 00:37:847 (8) - Move this a bit left to make slider lead into it.
- 01:01:027 (4) - Sounds awkward IMO. Better if you have a beat at 01:01:368 instead. Change into slider + note combo?
- 01:06:823 (1) - No big need for NC here.
- 01:08:357 (4) - I'm not sure about this jump.
- 01:11:255 (4) - Same as above.

[Hard]
- 00:02:392 (7) - IMO this looks better as a straight slider when it comes to flow to next note. http://puu.sh/bvYcI/fb3ada8e39.jpg
- 00:32:051 (3,4) - I would prefer if this was spaced a bit further for DS consistency.

[Normal]
- 00:39:551 (2,3,4,1) - May I suggest thi spattern for better flow? http://puu.sh/bvYt9/e7090b6666.jpg

[Easy]
- All good here.

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