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Chili Tomato - Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hallooooo from my Queue :)

[General]
  1. Failsound sama cs_1050 di folder didelete aja deh, kayanya engga butuh-butuh banget
    hee...??maksud'a ?? cs_1050 itu file mp3nya.. kalo dihapus pake mp3 yang mana ??


[Hard]
  1. 00:01:601 (5) - Normal whistle is not fit, you can change into clap instead, banyak bagian yang pake normal whistle dicari sendiri aja ho'oh kali ya.. hmm.. ok changed
  2. 00:19:154 (3) - You need to add Normal slider slide to silence that slider part, especialy from (3) to the reverse arrow k..
  3. 00:25:218 (1) - Delete whistle Nazzeee... ;w;
  4. 00:26:495 (1) - Same ^ dakara.. nandde... `3`
  5. 00:31:601 (3) - Delete whistle from head okay ._.
[]
Good luck~
`3` thanks for mod

xxdeathx wrote:

+54 sp...is a mod really necessary... `3`


[Hard]
  1. OD 7 is a lil high for hard hhmm.. really ?
  2. 00:14:367 (6,7) - make this arrangement parallel to 00:15:006 (1,2) - it's fine i guess..
  3. 00:15:644 (3,4) - isn't quite parallel...if you turn off distance snap and drag 3 right next to 4 you'll see. copy/paste them actually it's already repaire.. before you mods it
  4. 00:33:197 (7,1) - blanket like this is better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1736506 okay for this one.. ._.
almost looks like it's ranked! Hope this will ranked soon~!
Thanks for mod~!
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Oh iya cs_1050 tuh nama file mp3 nya ya, kalo gitu mungkin delete failsoundnya aja, tp ya terserah ding :p
Kinshara
823 posts
Joined November 2013
Kinshara
Hi! From my modding queue~

General

00:40:908 - okay here, the song ends VERY abruptly while playing..please get a new mp3 that's a little longer.

Jekate's Easy

SV is too high for Easy. Please change it to 0.80 or something close to that.

00:01:601 (2) - I don't think starting sliders on red ticks for easy is a good idea. Consider this: http://puu.sh/9DWta/534247e460.jpg This looks better too imo: http://puu.sh/9DWyW/83a7342c78.jpg
00:04:154 (4) - same here
00:11:814 (2) - same here
00:14:367 (4) - same here
00:19:474 (5) - here, place circle on white tick
00:40:908 - okay here, the song ends right when the slider finished; it's not nice (but it's the fault of the mp3 not of the mapper)

Is this hitsounded yet?

Troogle's Normal

SV is too High for Normal. Please change it to 1.0 or 1.1 or something close to that.

00:02:559 (1) - fix blanket
00:03:835 (3) - maybe make it something like: http://puu.sh/9DXb6/072d91c2aa.jpg
00:05:112 (1,2,3,4) - favorite part of the map .3.
00:08:942 (2,1) - ehh, change it to this: http://puu.sh/9DXiR/5494555bd5.jpg
00:28:091 (1,2,3,4) - maybe change the orientation of this? Instead of horizontally, try a 45 degree angle?
00:30:006 (4,1) - align slider 1's head with slider 4's tail.

Hard

Why is the SV so high for each difficulty? o: Please change it to 1.4 or 1.5

00:02:240 (1,2,3) - consider making this a stacked triplet
00:04:793 (1,2,3) - same here; a triple looks better imo
00:10:218 (4) - put this below slider 3's tail
00:17:559 (1,2,3) - bring these closer
00:18:197 (1,2,3) - ^
00:18:835 (1,2,3) - ^
00:23:623 (3,4,5) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/9DXQ1/4361fa706a.jpg

I don't do CtB, sorry!

Good luck!
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Kinshara wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue~

General

00:40:908 - okay here, the song ends VERY abruptly while playing..please get a new mp3 that's a little longer.


Hard

Why is the SV so high for each difficulty? o: Please change it to 1.4 or 1.5

00:02:240 (1,2,3) - consider making this a stacked triplet Nope.. still like dat
00:04:793 (1,2,3) - same here; a triple looks better imo not really.. i guess
00:10:218 (4) - put this below slider 3's tail Nope.. `3`i want to keep the distance.. i know it's a Hard diff but yea just want to keep the distance.. no reason else
00:17:559 (1,2,3) - bring these closer it's fine to use 1.2x DS i guess..
00:18:197 (1,2,3) - ^ ^^ same as above
00:18:835 (1,2,3) - ^ ^^ same as above
00:23:623 (3,4,5) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/9DXQ1/4361fa706a.jpg hhmm...00:22:665 (1,2,3,4) - Repaired placement

I don't do CtB, sorry!

Good luck!
Thanks for modding
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
ayy extremely-late mod i'm sorry __(:'3__
ctb udah dikasi icon fruit /okay

ini udah bagus apa yg di-mod only suggestions btw, so no kds

[Hard]

idk only opinion but the sound of whistle and clap combined isn't really good to me. prefer if you use the same clap/same clap volume like in normal diff

00:10:218 (4,1) - ok idk why im doing nc suggestions butif you switch nc the rhythm pattern will make sense
00:13:729 (5) - only suggestion, the shape is too 'curvy' than the previous one, and it kinda makes the flow weird
SPOILER

if you follow, you might want to re-position 00:14:367 (6,7,1,2) - a bit upward violating DS in hard diff won't hurt /slapped
00:14:367 (6,1) - eeh i don't think these two are parallel. i suggest to make them so
00:24:580 (5) - moving it upward (to 156|296) would make the appearance better
00:33:197 (7,1) - also switch nc
00:34:793 (2,3,4) - i suggest to re-position these so (2) won't be too close with previous slide
SPOILER

you can make it more symmetrical if you want, i'm bad at it
and if you follow, you might want to re-position 00:35:750 (1,2,3) - too
SPOILER
00:39:580 (4,5) - only suggestions, make more space between them like previous sliders
SPOILER


[Troogle's Normal]

00:19:792 (4,1) - i strongly suggest you not to ignore distance snap for slider art reason
00:29:367 (3) - only suggestion, add finish at slider's head?
00:37:027 (3) - ^


[Jekate's Easy]

i would suggest raising the SV a bit to 1.3, it won't hurt the beginners. but changing SV will took a while, so it's only a mere opinion
and i also don't recommend using stacks in Easy diff, but it's all up to you
00:39:580 (4) - why not end it at 00:40:218 - ? idk it fits the song more, but it's up to you

yay unhelpful mod gomen \:'D/
good luck~ call a BAT
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

ayy extremely-late mod i'm sorry __(:'3__
ctb udah dikasi icon fruit /okay

ini udah bagus apa yg di-mod only suggestions btw, so no kds

[Hard]

idk only opinion but the sound of whistle and clap combined isn't really good to me. prefer if you use the same clap/same clap volume like in normal diff hhmm..

00:10:218 (4,1) - ok idk why im doing nc suggestions butif you switch nc the rhythm pattern will make sense NC'd
00:13:729 (5) - only suggestion, the shape is too 'curvy' than the previous one, and it kinda makes the flow weird Fixed
SPOILER

if you follow, you might want to re-position 00:14:367 (6,7,1,2) - a bit upward repairedviolating DS in hard diff won't hurt /slapped
00:14:367 (6,1) - eeh i don't think these two are parallel. i suggest to make them so k..
00:24:580 (5) - moving it upward (to 156|296) would make the appearance better k.. also repaired 00:25:218 (1,2,3) -
00:33:197 (7,1) - also switch nc -_- oki..
00:34:793 (2,3,4) - i suggest to re-position these so (2) won't be too close with previous slide hhmm oki..
SPOILER

you can make it more symmetrical if you want, i'm bad at it

and if you follow, you might want to re-position 00:35:750 (1,2,3) - too Time to broken DS.. oky keeping Ds for Hard maybe.. it's bad Idea..
SPOILER
00:39:580 (4,5) - only suggestions, make more space between them like previous sliders Nope.. i want keep the distance here..
SPOILER



yay unhelpful mod gomen \:'D/
good luck~ call a BAT how to call BAT ? no one of them want respond all busy.. :P
i've check every days.. woke up at 01:00 am until morning neva take sleep.. just check all BAT profil.. maybe someone of them Open Request..
i'm bored read "not taking any request".. what can i do ? m4m ? i do m4m but still no respond.. i'm afraid bothering them if i pm in game..
if forum pm.. still no respond or maybe will get reply "sorry i'm not take any request" or something else

ahh.. maybe i just need more mod and more waiting.. yea i'm bad at mapping Std.. `3`

Thanks for modding.. but i hate this word ''only suggestions btw, so no kds''.. i shouldnt give kds for who is so much helped.. but i must give kds for who isnt really helped -_-)a

maa ii ka..
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
[General]

Dat end of the mp3. Can't you get something like fade off? Like this it's really.. derp

[Jekate's Easy]

00:15:325 (1) - blanket? :3

really nice easy

[Troogle's Normal]

Cute Normal!

[Hard]

00:13:729 (5,6,7) - These hitsounds Sound a bit loud to me, maybe delete one clap?
00:28:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please get a better Pentagon shape with Ctrl + Shift + D!
00:40:218 (6) - End on White, because the song Ends there.

why wasn't this bubbled yet? call me back
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

i've check every days.. woke up at 01:00 am until morning neva take sleep.. just check all BAT profil.. maybe someone of them Open Request..
i'm bored read "not taking any request".. what can i do ? m4m ? i do m4m but still no respond.. i'm afraid bothering them if i pm in game..
if forum pm.. still no respond or maybe will get reply "sorry i'm not take any request" or something else
lol i feel you so hard

oh look there's irre ciee mau rank ciee

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Thanks for modding.. but i hate this word ''only suggestions btw, so no kds''.. i shouldnt give kds for who is so much helped.. but i must give kds for who isnt really helped -_-)a
ah i thought my mod was going to be useless :'D it's up to you tho
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Irreversible wrote:

[General]

Dat end of the mp3. Can't you get something like fade off? Like this it's really.. derp still not finding a new mp3 ;w;
i'll try to edit by my self


[Hard]

00:13:729 (5,6,7) - These hitsounds Sound a bit loud to me, maybe delete one clap? deleted clap and unherited timming point at 00:14:048
00:28:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please get a better Pentagon shape with Ctrl + Shift + D! wooo... Nice idea.. idk if can do dat cuz i'm newb lol changed~
00:40:218 (6) - End on White, because the song Ends there. Fix~

why wasn't this bubbled yet? there isnt BAT response call me back
Thanks for mod Irre.. thanks for quick response


AlpacaCokelat wrote:

lol i feel you so hard

oh look there's irre ciee mau rank ciee dia langsung respon.. gk kaya yang lain.. syukur deh ada yang respon.. dan mungkin dia baca spoiler'a lol.. mrasa kasian.. lol
-_- yaelah.. masih tahap rechecking.. kalo udah paling bubble.. setelah bubble.. nunggu 4 tahun baru dirank.. \o/

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Thanks for modding.. but i hate this word ''only suggestions btw, so no kds''.. i shouldnt give kds for who is so much helped.. but i must give kds for who isnt really helped -_-)a
ah i thought my mod was going to be useless :'D it's up to you tho

cie maunya.. no kds ya no kds sesuai permintaan `3`
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

-_- yaelah.. masih tahap rechecking.. kalo udah paling bubble.. setelah bubble.. nunggu 4 tahun baru dirank.. \o/
jyah jangan pesimis gitu bro, map pendek biasanya cepet ranked kok \:D/

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

cie maunya.. no kds ya no kds sesuai permintaan `3`
lmao
Kyouren
5,657 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
jangan-jangan mapnya mau dilamai agak menjadi map paling lama diosu! (biasa saja) kalau mau niat, sebaiknya jangan deh! :P
Last edited by Kyouren , edited 1 time in total.
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

-_- yaelah.. masih tahap rechecking.. kalo udah paling bubble.. setelah bubble.. nunggu 4 tahun baru dirank.. \o/
jyah jangan pesimis gitu bro, map pendek biasanya cepet ranked kok \:D/
ya..ya ya.. kalo ada yang cek.. kalo gk... ya tunggu 4 tahun \o/

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

cie maunya.. no kds ya no kds sesuai permintaan `3`
lmao
butuh banget ya.. kds'a.. `3` tak pesenin nnti dua porsi.. lol

gokugohan12468 wrote:

jangan-jangan mapnya mau dilamain agak menjadi map paling lama diosu! (biasa saja) kalau mau niat, sebaiknya jangan deh! :P
gk tau bener gk Bolded word Fixed~ lol.. berharap sih.. cepet dirank.. karna ini bisa jadi first rank
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hey M4M ~

[General]
  1. Did you use "soft-sliderwhistle" file ? Please remove it If you didn't
  2. Please unify kiai times and combo colors :3
[Easy]
  1. 00:39:580 (4) - I feel this end of the slider follows nothing here. So consider remaking it to follow this sound 00:40:697 - . It would fit well with this kind of music. also you should fix kiai time too.
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:792 (4,1) - I don't agree this part. I feel this sudden decrement of distance would confuse beginners. well, Please use a normal distace same other parts.
[Hard]
  1. Approach Rate +1. It's a bit low for this difficulty.
  2. 00:25:378 (2,3) - Flow suggestion : Please try to use Ctrl + g to these notes. It would be fun for playing imo.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:40:218 (6) - Same as Easy diff.
Please poke me after getting Irre's bubble :3 I'll rank ~
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

alacat wrote:

Hey M4M ~

[General]
  1. Did you use "soft-sliderwhistle" file ? Please remove it If you didn't
  2. Please unify kiai times and combo colors :3 :3 my hard have a different sequence of combo color fixed~ about kiai i think no..;w;

[Hard]
  1. Approach Rate +1. It's a bit low for this difficulty. k..
  2. 00:25:378 (2,3) - Flow suggestion : Please try to use Ctrl + g to these notes. It would be fun for playing imo. ctrl+g'd and also 00:26:654 (2,3) - :3
    SPOILER
  3. 00:40:218 (6) - Same as Easy diff. idk how to fix this maybe 00:40:218 (6) - to 3/4 slider or anything else ?
    eehhmm.. change back to 3/4 `3`
Please poke me after getting Irre's bubble :3 I'll rank ~
waiting all GD update.. but.. -_- i never see jekate again.. where are you jekate
btw still finding new mp3
thanks for mod alacat
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
Ranked.

*runs
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu

AnreFM wrote:

Ranked.

*runs
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
Yauxo

Yauxo wrote:

[Troogle's Normal]
  1. 00:00:006 (1) - rotate by ~ -9 selection centre for better flow into 2?
  2. 00:03:835 (3,4) - I'd have 3 flow directly into 4 w/o this offset
Sry didn;t quite get them > < Leave them as-is

Rakuen

Rakuen wrote:

[Troogle's Normal]
00:03:516 (2) - Can blanket this oneK
00:12:771 (1,2,3) - Maybe can make this same shape and placement with 00:10:218 (1,2,3) - I think they are the same
00:20:431 (1) - It's a bit bad to space it like this in Easy or Normal, try to remain 1.0x spacing I tried but failed Q。Q

Nozhomi

Nozhomi wrote:

-Troogle's Normal :
  1. 00:08:942 (2,1)- Blanket them. I think they are already blanketed
  2. 00:12:771 (1,2,3)- Improve blanket. ^
  3. 00:22:665 (4,1)- ^ ^

gokugohan12468

gokugohan12468 wrote:

[Troogle's Normal]

  • Why don't use Google's Normal?I prefer Troogle :3
    AR -1, OD +0,5, and HP +1I think the current one just fit in easy/hard
    Perfect~Thx!

Mako Sakata

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:00:006 (1) - The cymbal sound still too loud, maybe you should lower the volume or you can use S:C1 whistle as cymbal sound
  2. 00:20:431 (1) - Same ^
  3. 00:28:091 (1) - Same ^
  4. 00:30:644 (1) - Same ^
  5. 00:35:750 (1,4) - Same ^
I think the current hitsound is acceptable > < sry no fix

xxdeathx

xxdeathx wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:729 (2,3) - (nazi as hell) drag the end slider point down a bit to blanket
  2. 00:17:878 (1,2,3) - make the blanket distances the same; (3) looks a little closer to (2) than (1) does
fixed some

Kinshara

Kinshara wrote:

Troogle's Normal

SV is too High for Normal. Please change it to 1.0 or 1.1 or something close to that.I really don't think it's high

00:02:559 (1) - fix blanket K
00:03:835 (3) - maybe make it something like: http://puu.sh/9DXb6/072d91c2aa.jpg I think current one is fine enough
00:05:112 (1,2,3,4) - favorite part of the map .3.tkx!
00:08:942 (2,1) - ehh, change it to this: http://puu.sh/9DXiR/5494555bd5.jpg DS will break then Q.Q
00:28:091 (1,2,3,4) - maybe change the orientation of this? Instead of horizontally, try a 45 degree angle?It's really hard to do so when keep the DS
00:30:006 (4,1) - align slider 1's head with slider 4's tail.Actually I have pull 1's head away from 4's tail just before

AlpacaCokelat

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

[Troogle's Normal]
00:19:792 (4,1) - i strongly suggest you not to ignore distance snap for slider art reasonI prefer art to DS since it's normal and DS can be ignored. Also a 1/4 snap will leave enough time for player to react
00:29:367 (3) - only suggestion, add finish at slider's head? finish here is a bit loud imo
00:37:027 (3) - ^^

Thank you all for modding!

Irreversible wrote:

[Troogle's Normal]

Cute Normal!Thx for that :)

alacat wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:792 (4,1) - I don't agree this part. I feel this sudden decrement of distance would confuse beginners. well, Please use a normal distace same other parts.I really want to keep this.My reason to keep it was first that there is a sudden 'stop' in the music and I think a smaller DS could fit it(better letting 00:19:792 (4,1) - stacked but I didn't manage to do so). Second is that the normal diff could have some part not following DS, And I think the previous one looker more nicer.But since I'm only the GDer I have changed as requested. :o
Thx for modding :3

@-[ Asuna ]- Plz help me fix the aimod/combo color/kiai uniform issues...if any... Thx!
updated
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: cs_1050.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 20271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.5999999

[Metadata]
Title:Plaza
TitleUnicode:プラザ
Artist:Chili Tomato
ArtistUnicode:チリトマト
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Troogle's Normal
Source:Cosmic Break
Tags:コズミックブレイク Online Video Game sawasaki yoshihiro mituo ikusa JAPAN BGM STG SAM kanpan Xinely Jekate Troogle Google kurokami
BeatmapID:418042
BeatmapSetID:172967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4.5
ApproachRate:0
SliderMultiplier:1.92
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Plaza.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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20431,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
28091,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
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35750,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
38623,-100,4,2,1,45,0,1
40697,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 159,170,247
Combo2 : 255,81,168
Combo3 : 33,147,239
Combo4 : 255,142,253

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Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
@-[ Asuna ]- Plz help me fix the aimod/combo color/kiai uniform issues...if any... Thx!
i think now better..

updated
osu file format v13

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Title:Plaza
TitleUnicode:プラザ
Artist:Chili Tomato
ArtistUnicode:チリトマト
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Troogle's Normal
Source:Cosmic Break
Tags:コズミックブレイク Online Video Game sawasaki yoshihiro mituo ikusa JAPAN BGM STG SAM kanpan Xinely Jekate Troogle Google kurokami
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[/quote]

Thanks for update..
-_- yabari.. jekate totally vacuum..
but.. Updated.

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

AnreFM wrote:

Ranked.

*runs
`3`
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
-_- Douvle Vost... fvv...

oki.. i find new mp3 ...

Updated. Please Re-Download...
ready for re-check i guess..
since jekate totally vacuum ..
Jekate
Jekate
Sorry I'm bussy with univ, I'm so sorry for this super late reply

Irreversible wrote:

[General]

Dat end of the mp3. Can't you get something like fade off? Like this it's really.. derp

[Jekate's Easy]

00:15:325 (1) - blanket? :3 yes it should be a blanket :3

really nice easy thanks Irreversible

alacat wrote:

Hey M4M ~

[General]
  1. Did you use "soft-sliderwhistle" file ? Please remove it If you didn't @alacat: don't you think he also need to remove the soft-hitwhistle? because the default and custom soft sound that he use is same, please corect me if I was wrong
  2. Please unify kiai times and combo colors :3
[Easy]
  1. 00:39:580 (4) - I feel this end of the slider follows nothing here. So consider remaking it to follow this sound 00:40:697 - . It would fit well with this kind of music. also you should fix kiai time too. Yes, but Asuna already fix the mp3 especialy on the end of the song and also the orchestra sound still playing until the white tick and It still fit the song imo so I decide not to change that
Please poke me after getting Irre's bubble :3 I'll rank ~ Thanks moecat :3
Sorry no update from me ;(

Thanks for both BATs and also for the people who mod this map and gives amazing sugestion, I just can't mention It one by one and good luck Asuna 8-)
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Almost ranked. \:3/
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
jekate pls. I wanted to say that you should improve the blanket XD
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
should i fix it.. orwaiting.. jekate's back from hiatus.. -_-

*Runs
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
Jekate disappeared again :o

tbh,I think this map should at least get bubbled.....
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

-Google- wrote:

Jekate disappeared again :o '3')b

tbh,I think this map should at least get bubbled..... just need to improved the blanked right?
ok..i'll improved it.. xD



no no no waiting.. again.. call irre back..
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
/me calls Irre back
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
sorry for the delay, i forgot about the map!

bubbled ~
Kyouren
5,657 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Gratzz~ Asuna^^


call alacat for ranked this plz~
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
I AM MODDING IT AAAAAAAAAA (sorry for the fright)

[General & Metadata]
  1. Tags: Shouldn't you add "-Google-" with hyphens instead?
  2. Kiai: A bit strange to make your 2nd kiai end in 00:40:059 - in all your CtB diffs, where there's a blue tick and nothing really relevant. Sounds more logical to end it where the Standard diffs did, at 00:40:857 - .
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:644 (9) - Shouldn't a NC go there? Sounds strange to have a NC later, when the kiai starts here and you also finished that star pattern with the previous circle.
[Normal]
  1. AR0? Wtf... Use at least 5 for this diff.
[Rain]
  1. Hitsounds: The N-Whistles you used on the first part don't really fit in their current position. I'm referring to these ones:
    1. 00:01:920 -
    2. 00:04:474 -
    3. 00:07:027 -
    4. 00:12:133 -
    5. 00:17:240 -
    They'd sound better 1/1 earlier (e.g. 00:01:920 - in 00:01:282 - instead), but they're plainly too noisy for their current spot. Either put another hitsound there or reduce the volume to at least 30% so you don't pierce players' ears.
[Salad]
  1. Hitsounds: Maybe I'm a N-Whistle hater, but I think you overused it a bit. Like in [Rain], where a stanza has the beats 0123, N-Whistles fit much better in the beat #2. For the kiai times, they look much appropriate in the beats #0 and #2. For parts like 00:25:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you put them in #0, #1 and #3.5, which sounds slightly spammy.
[Cup]
  1. Hitsounds: Same goes for this diff, at least in the non-kiai parts. Also, take a look at the following beat:
  2. 00:26:814 - This is sadly still a bug in CtB, where some samplesets in sliders aren't correctly added. The hitsound you want sounds perfectly in the Editor, but not when you test it there (sounds a S-Whistle instead of the N-Whistle you wanted). Fix it adding the appropriate green line(s) to change that specific spot.
  3. 00:29:367 - Same happens with this hitsound too. Add green lines to fix it. 00:36:388 - and 00:37:665 - also have the same problem.
[]
All looks certainly clean here. Let me know when you've checked my mod \o/
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Normal whistles seem fit for me. since i use the whistle at the sound is calm i guess it emphasizes the music as well
well maybe it just a different taste but i prefer to use normal whistles for emphasize the power of each musics
Fix the baka bugs here. since the calm whistles i said above can't fix with greenlines, i decided to use soft whistles at their times
thanks 4 check Deif

Cup
osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:プラザ
Artist:Chili Tomato
ArtistUnicode:チリトマト
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Cup
Source:Cosmic Break
Tags:コズミックブレイク Online Video Game sawasaki yoshihiro mituo ikusa JAPAN BGM STG SAM kanpan Xinely Jekate Troogle Google kurokami
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Salad
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 20271
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Plaza
TitleUnicode:プラザ
Artist:Chili Tomato
ArtistUnicode:チリトマト
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Salad
Source:Cosmic Break
Tags:コズミックブレイク Online Video Game sawasaki yoshihiro mituo ikusa JAPAN BGM STG SAM kanpan Xinely Jekate Troogle Google kurokami
BeatmapID:418498
BeatmapSetID:172967

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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That AR0 LOL
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Deif wrote:

I AM MODDING IT AAAAAAAAAA (sorry for the fright)

[General & Metadata]
  1. Tags: Shouldn't you add "-Google-" with hyphens instead? k
  2. Kiai: A bit strange to make your 2nd kiai end in 00:40:059 - in all your CtB diffs, where there's a blue tick and nothing really relevant. Sounds more logical to end it where the Standard diffs did, at 00:40:857 - .
repaired..
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:644 (9) - Shouldn't a NC go there? Sounds strange to have a NC later, when the kiai starts here and you also finished that star pattern with the previous circle. NC'd
[Normal]
  1. AR0? Wtf... Use at least 5 for this diff. xD
[Rain]
  1. Hitsounds: The N-Whistles you used on the first part don't really fit in their current position. I'm referring to these ones:
    1. 00:01:920 -
    2. 00:04:474 -
    3. 00:07:027 -
    4. 00:12:133 -
    5. 00:17:240 -
    They'd sound better 1/1 earlier (e.g. 00:01:920 - in 00:01:282 - instead), but they're plainly too noisy for their current spot. Either put another hitsound there or reduce the volume to at least 30% so you don't pierce players' ears. volume down to 30%
[]
All looks certainly clean here. Let me know when you've checked my mod \o/
ok.. waiting google update before call deif
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
Sorry>< I'm so baka to leave it AR0 and send to you><.
Please help me change the AR of normal to 5 >< tkx!
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

-Google- wrote:

Sorry>< I'm so baka to leave it AR0 and send to you><.
Please help me change the AR of normal to 5 >< tkx!
changed AR to 5

and Updated.
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
So, with a bit of help, I found some sources to contrast your metadata, which is plainly wrong.

First of all, where did you get your mp3 file from? Any website or download link that could help?
  1. The first thing I found was this YT video, titled "エンジェル学園" or "Angel Academy" translated.
  2. Looking for your mp3's name, I found out this webpage, that compiles all the mp3s of Cosmic Break, whose name is "Angel Academy".
  3. Another YT video with the plain melody you have (you're awesome KSHR :3), where you can see the title "エンジェル学園の一日" or romanized "Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi".
Unfortunately, there's no information about who could've created that piece, apart of what you had in the metadata of your mp3. By now, we'll take the publisher's name, as in other ranked beatmaps of this kind.

tl;dr version: Your new metadata should be:
  1. Artist: CyberStep
  2. Title: Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi
  3. TitleUnicode: エンジェル学園の一日
Fix that, and I'll rank!
Kyouren
5,657 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
i think alacat want ranked this~

For Deif: you can't ranked but re-bubble~

I so agree with Deif for Tittle but the artist i am not sure~
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

gokugohan12468 wrote:

I so agree with Deif for Tittle but the artist i am not sure~
me too... "cyberstep" is not an artist
cyberstep is a corporate entity operation from japan , i see in CyberStep_Wiki

still find more info about this song..
for a while i keep the metadata song like :

Artist : チリトマト (Chili Tomato) since i see the contributing artist in music detail here and here

Tittle : エンジェル学園の一日 (Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi)
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Confirmed the artist (FINALLY)

Ranked!!
KSHR
osu! Alumni
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
Oh, this map just got ranked when I saw the thread lol
Gratz anyway :3



EDIT:
About what gokugohan wrote, alacat is kinda inactive due to the exam now :p
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
finally
grats on your first rank :3
Lortelle
253 posts
Joined March 2012
Lortelle
Gratz lol
litoluna
1,074 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna

Lecana wrote:

Gratz lol
Gratz~ ;)
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
congratz!! :)
ARTPHONEY
132 posts
Joined November 2012
ARTPHONEY
Bravo! :)
Kyouren
5,657 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Gratzz~ Asuna fo first ranked map~
Arlecchino
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
thanks all~

finally first rank :3

thanks Deif
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Nice. Grats~ o/
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
congrats on first ranked mapset! (:
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
/me late
Grats on 1st rank~~
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
yesss gratz for the first ranked
El SolarBeam
1,022 posts
Joined September 2011
El SolarBeam
haha what a struggle

gratz for the first ranked~
Micka
349 posts
Joined June 2013
Micka
gratz
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