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Chili Tomato - Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Kurokami
/me calls Irre back
Irreversible
sorry for the delay, i forgot about the map!

bubbled ~
Kyouren
Gratzz~ Asuna^^


call alacat for ranked this plz~
Deif
I AM MODDING IT AAAAAAAAAA (sorry for the fright)

[General & Metadata]
  1. Tags: Shouldn't you add "-Google-" with hyphens instead?
  2. Kiai: A bit strange to make your 2nd kiai end in 00:40:059 - in all your CtB diffs, where there's a blue tick and nothing really relevant. Sounds more logical to end it where the Standard diffs did, at 00:40:857 - .
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:644 (9) - Shouldn't a NC go there? Sounds strange to have a NC later, when the kiai starts here and you also finished that star pattern with the previous circle.
[Normal]
  1. AR0? Wtf... Use at least 5 for this diff.
[Rain]
  1. Hitsounds: The N-Whistles you used on the first part don't really fit in their current position. I'm referring to these ones:
    1. 00:01:920 -
    2. 00:04:474 -
    3. 00:07:027 -
    4. 00:12:133 -
    5. 00:17:240 -
    They'd sound better 1/1 earlier (e.g. 00:01:920 - in 00:01:282 - instead), but they're plainly too noisy for their current spot. Either put another hitsound there or reduce the volume to at least 30% so you don't pierce players' ears.
[Salad]
  1. Hitsounds: Maybe I'm a N-Whistle hater, but I think you overused it a bit. Like in [Rain], where a stanza has the beats 0123, N-Whistles fit much better in the beat #2. For the kiai times, they look much appropriate in the beats #0 and #2. For parts like 00:25:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you put them in #0, #1 and #3.5, which sounds slightly spammy.
[Cup]
  1. Hitsounds: Same goes for this diff, at least in the non-kiai parts. Also, take a look at the following beat:
  2. 00:26:814 - This is sadly still a bug in CtB, where some samplesets in sliders aren't correctly added. The hitsound you want sounds perfectly in the Editor, but not when you test it there (sounds a S-Whistle instead of the N-Whistle you wanted). Fix it adding the appropriate green line(s) to change that specific spot.
  3. 00:29:367 - Same happens with this hitsound too. Add green lines to fix it. 00:36:388 - and 00:37:665 - also have the same problem.
[]
All looks certainly clean here. Let me know when you've checked my mod \o/
Xinely
Normal whistles seem fit for me. since i use the whistle at the sound is calm i guess it emphasizes the music as well
well maybe it just a different taste but i prefer to use normal whistles for emphasize the power of each musics
Fix the baka bugs here. since the calm whistles i said above can't fix with greenlines, i decided to use soft whistles at their times
thanks 4 check Deif

Cup
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Title:Plaza
TitleUnicode:プラザ
Artist:Chili Tomato
ArtistUnicode:チリトマト
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Cup
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Tags:コズミックブレイク Online Video Game sawasaki yoshihiro mituo ikusa JAPAN BGM STG SAM kanpan Xinely Jekate Troogle Google kurokami
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Salad
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Artist:Chili Tomato
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Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Salad
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Tags:コズミックブレイク Online Video Game sawasaki yoshihiro mituo ikusa JAPAN BGM STG SAM kanpan Xinely Jekate Troogle Google kurokami
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That AR0 LOL
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Deif wrote:

I AM MODDING IT AAAAAAAAAA (sorry for the fright)

[General & Metadata]
  1. Tags: Shouldn't you add "-Google-" with hyphens instead? k
  2. Kiai: A bit strange to make your 2nd kiai end in 00:40:059 - in all your CtB diffs, where there's a blue tick and nothing really relevant. Sounds more logical to end it where the Standard diffs did, at 00:40:857 - .
repaired..
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:644 (9) - Shouldn't a NC go there? Sounds strange to have a NC later, when the kiai starts here and you also finished that star pattern with the previous circle. NC'd
[Normal]
  1. AR0? Wtf... Use at least 5 for this diff. xD
[Rain]
  1. Hitsounds: The N-Whistles you used on the first part don't really fit in their current position. I'm referring to these ones:
    1. 00:01:920 -
    2. 00:04:474 -
    3. 00:07:027 -
    4. 00:12:133 -
    5. 00:17:240 -
    They'd sound better 1/1 earlier (e.g. 00:01:920 - in 00:01:282 - instead), but they're plainly too noisy for their current spot. Either put another hitsound there or reduce the volume to at least 30% so you don't pierce players' ears. volume down to 30%
[]
All looks certainly clean here. Let me know when you've checked my mod \o/
ok.. waiting google update before call deif
Nepu
Sorry>< I'm so baka to leave it AR0 and send to you><.
Please help me change the AR of normal to 5 >< tkx!
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

-Google- wrote:

Sorry>< I'm so baka to leave it AR0 and send to you><.
Please help me change the AR of normal to 5 >< tkx!
changed AR to 5

and Updated.
Deif
So, with a bit of help, I found some sources to contrast your metadata, which is plainly wrong.

First of all, where did you get your mp3 file from? Any website or download link that could help?
  1. The first thing I found was this YT video, titled "エンジェル学園" or "Angel Academy" translated.
  2. Looking for your mp3's name, I found out this webpage, that compiles all the mp3s of Cosmic Break, whose name is "Angel Academy".
  3. Another YT video with the plain melody you have (you're awesome KSHR :3), where you can see the title "エンジェル学園の一日" or romanized "Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi".
Unfortunately, there's no information about who could've created that piece, apart of what you had in the metadata of your mp3. By now, we'll take the publisher's name, as in other ranked beatmaps of this kind.

tl;dr version: Your new metadata should be:
  1. Artist: CyberStep
  2. Title: Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi
  3. TitleUnicode: エンジェル学園の一日
Fix that, and I'll rank!
Kyouren
i think alacat want ranked this~

For Deif: you can't ranked but re-bubble~

I so agree with Deif for Tittle but the artist i am not sure~
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

gokugohan12468 wrote:

I so agree with Deif for Tittle but the artist i am not sure~
me too... "cyberstep" is not an artist
cyberstep is a corporate entity operation from japan , i see in CyberStep_Wiki

still find more info about this song..
for a while i keep the metadata song like :

Artist : チリトマト (Chili Tomato) since i see the contributing artist in music detail here and here

Tittle : エンジェル学園の一日 (Angel Gakuen no Ichinichi)
Deif
Confirmed the artist (FINALLY)

Ranked!!
KSHR
Oh, this map just got ranked when I saw the thread lol
Gratz anyway :3



EDIT:
About what gokugohan wrote, alacat is kinda inactive due to the exam now :p
Xinely
finally
grats on your first rank :3
Lecana
Gratz lol
litoluna

Lecana wrote:

Gratz lol
Gratz~ ;)
jyu
congratz!! :)
ARTPHONEY
Bravo! :)
Kyouren
Gratzz~ Asuna fo first ranked map~
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
thanks all~

finally first rank :3

thanks Deif
Kurokami
Nice. Grats~ o/
10nya
congrats on first ranked mapset! (:
Nepu
/me late
Grats on 1st rank~~
Vhy
yesss gratz for the first ranked
El SolarBeam
haha what a struggle

gratz for the first ranked~
Micka
gratz
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