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general stuff・the soft-hitclap youre using now doesnt fit the beats in this song well, its too tough imo. in the easiest difficulty u have a lot of 2/1 and 3/1 sliders, where u can hear the clap sound in music while slider ticks and it sounds kinda awkward when u hear one type of clap while these sliders and completely another clap hitsound on all of the objects. u could try
this one and tell me what u think about it
・ mmm also u could add
this whistle for sounds like 00:09:595 - , 00:33:595 - , 01:03:595 - , etc. just a suggestion
・not sure if the diff spread there is fine tho. i also saw Lust mentioning this before.. i think the problem can be solved by making in Hard a bit less spacing changes.
hard・i noticed that you have lots of spacing changes on average parts but during the kiai ure following mostly1.2x.. it does feel pretty awkward D: and for the sake of solving the diff gap issue i'd recommend to reduce some spacing changes and the spacing of them as well
・00:11:845 (3) - i see you trying for a triangle pattern but it doesnt look neat overall with the (3) being there. u started with 1.0x spacing there and only this lonely slider has 1.2, looks pretty out of place. to keep the triangle pattern and leave the diff beginning neat move (2) to 379|180 and (3) to 327|235
・00:14:470 (2) - maybe its nazi but make it 1.1x after (1), so the spacing will be like 1.0x-> (1)1.1x-> (2)-> 1.2x(3) ~
・00:32:845 (3) - ^
・00:42:595 (1,4) - this overlap is almost but pretty visible during the gameplay. i've read that u like blankets and stuff so i'd suggest u making a rhombus pattern and make (5) be blanketed with already dissapeared (1). people remember what they've just played so i think its a good idea.
SPOILERif u apply then:
00:43:157 (2,3) - 278|301
00:43:720 (4) - 351|344
00:43:907 (5) - 335|234
・00:44:095 (1) - 00:50:095 (1) - why did u stop using claps? >:
・00:21:595 (1,2) - blanket them somehow? ;_; looks not pretty. maybe like this 03:12:595 (1,2) -
・01:18:595 (1) - whistle on the head. it sounds suddenly empty without it
・02:15:407 (1) - i'd suggest to change this slider to a note-slider because of the hard beat and because of the inconsistency in comboing with this NC. smth like this?
・02:31:345 (3,4) - curve them a bit less? like 02:33:220 (3) - this one looks. your sliders have slight curve mostly and i like it, but these are not good-looking imo >:
・02:34:720 (4) - *nazi* but move it like
this to make the flow natural?
・02:41:470 (2,3,1) - is it possible to make them not overlapped/blanketed? the 02:39:220 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - part this is pretty much clamped, would be better if you go out of this corner earlier
・02:42:220 (1) - mind placing an object because of the reason i mentioned before there 02:15:407 (1) - ?
・02:50:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - beats are becoming kinda stronger and exciting, THIS is the place where better to make a bit bigger spacing. try to lower it a bit before the pattern i mentioned and/or make a bit bigger there
・03:08:095 (1,2) - ummmm make them a bit more vertical like you did the same pattern before? overlapped (2) looks baaad
・the ending feels weird for me.. i dont actually like this sudden pause and the idea of the spinner at the very end.. maybe better to ask more people about this part but i believe that the spinner works not well there. same goes with normal.
overall its a nice diff with a nice flow. just make the spacing have more sense there and watch out for not breaking good-looking patterns and flow xD
normal・00:14:095 (4) - change it to 3/2 slider to make the rhythm consistent with these 00:11:095 (3) - , 00:23:095 (3) - , 00:26:095 (3) -
・00:39:595 (1,4) - blanket them? owo
・00:45:595 (1) - finish on head? you always have finisher on this part :о
・00:48:595 (1) - whistle on head
・01:18:220 (4,1) - make (4) blanketed better
・01:32:095 - move the break starting on the big white tick
・02:33:407 (6,1) - blanket with (5) or move them a bit to make it more obvious
・02:36:220 (1,2) - the gap between your diff is already high and would be better if you shorten the amount of long sliders like these. stick to the 1/1 rhythm you had before. 02:38:095 (2) - finisher on the tail sounds out of place tho o.o
・02:41:095 (3) - whistle, empty there
・02:50:095 - the pause feels pretty awkward. you could place a 1/1 slider there but the overall structure for your next patterns could be ruined
and thats all from me, good luck :>~