Gabe wrote:

Bubble #2 ---



I can't q.q

p3n wrote:

Hoo! (ovo) hoot hoot!


[Marathon]
01:41:587 (7) - shorten to end on blue tick to match the song okie, also had same suggestion before
01:43:099 - add note to match the song and keep your melody follow up for this combo alright
01:47:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - "silent" stream makes me furious. Why don't you keep the drum sampleset or use soft with drum finish at slightly reduced volume? mmm, drumset is done, 1/4 rhythm is not loud in music, so in map too
02:02:285 (4) - drum whistle seems odd here. Could be just me but personally I'd stick to the soft whistle on this note as well from the previous pattern
i tried it, but drum whistle fits better to the music imo. soft whistle are not loud enough for hearing it there...
02:17:866 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - (♥v♥)/
02:38:099 (1,2,3) - maybe increase distance to 1,20x to make it somewhat consistent with the previous patterns - same for 02:38:680 (4,5) - fixed spacing
02:49:726 (3) - forgot to add the whistle here yeah, agree
03:28:680 - maybe consider adding a note here to reflect the feint triplet in the baseline - would be fine to leave it as is as well, just feels a bit more dynamic for me with the triplet agree, new track needed more dynamic places
04:28:215 - missed a note here? Feels much better with the triplet: http://puu.sh/9TTUm/7252db49c7.jpg missed
09:12:750 (1) - shouldn't this slider end on the following 1/6 to match the song? http://puu.sh/9TYjT/4974d38dff.jpg nice catch, it should. idk why i thought it's blue
09:19:959 (1) - maybe start the spinner with the pulse on the red tick (previous or next...anything would work) to make it fit in. Either way it is just a spinner so the starting point after the break is not THAT important. moved 1/2 next for extending break as 2nd target. but i don't see much difference
09:48:796 (1,2,3,4) - reverse each slider individually to increase the flow of this part...seems like this was originally intended...why would you change this??? probably i was drunk. or mad. or both. changed, fixed pattern.



So far so good.


Also stop trolling 2nd bubbles, Gabe I could've accidentially approved this...imagine the shitstorm and the deep concern of the modding community! Madness!

GAMEINSTALLER wrote:

Only little

Marathon
00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?

Lust wrote:

Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks

Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL)

[Marathon]

1. 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
2. 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
3. 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
4. 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
5. 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
6. 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
7. 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
8. 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
9. 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
10. 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
11. 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
12. 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
13. 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
14. 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
15. 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
16. 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
17. 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
18. 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
19. 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
20. 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
21. 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?

And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!

full speed ahead~

Ricchii wrote:

Not sure if it's too late or i'm wrong, but to me it sounds like the timing is significantly off. if you slow it down to 25% the ticks aren't landing on the beats. it sounds like the offset should be closer to 1830, not 1820.

or maybe i'm just bad