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Kodora wrote:
Йоу
[General][Marathon]
- Может заглушить слайдеры? имхо они звучат не очень на тихих частях не, пусть остаются пока
У меня всё, удачи о/
- 00:02:285 (2) - на этом и двух последующих репитах я бы убрал свисток с хвоста и повесил бы на реверс вместо этого - так лучше звучит имхо кое-что поменял
- 00:09:726 (1) - может свисток на начало? Если добавишь, то повесь и на 00:13:447 (2) - на начало ок
- 00:33:447 (4,1) - не очень нравится как флоу здесь идёт - поапробуй заменить на 00:33:447 (4) - на 1/2 слайдер + ноту и сделать небольшой джамп - так будет играться интереснее и переход будет не такой резкий поменял объекты, но расположение мне не очень, сделал своё
- 00:40:889 (4) - может подвинуть её чуть выше чтоб не было оверлапа с 00:39:959 (2) - ? ноуп
- 01:07:866 (1,2,3,4) - в принципе эта часть играется нормально, но внезапные антиджампы из ниоткуда после частей с обычным спейсингом, учитывая то, что эта часть в музыке абсолютно такая же, чувствуются сами по себе не очень при игре. Их всё равно тут всего четыре ноты, может вместо этого заменить двумя 1/2 слайдерами с таким же спейсингом как и до этого? Или просто сами ноты проспейсить. не, оставлю как есть, сладеров слишком много, ноты со спейсингом не видятся
- 01:24:145 (2) - я бы убрал финиш (ну или может быть хотя бы приглушить его немного?) чойта? ненене, он-то как раз по музыке
- 01:26:006 (2) - убери финиш с головы этого и повесь на 01:25:540 (1) - ммм,ок
- 01:37:168 (2,3) - не очень нравится сама конструкция - нота довольно подлая, да и по музыке тяжеловато понять когда кликать следующий слайдер - может заменить на два 1/3 слайдера с большим спейсингом? Что-то типа такого: пасиб, не нравится
- 01:40:889 (5) - имхо, тут тоже лучше юзать 2 1/3 слайдера вместо двойного репита - второй репит появляется быстро, по музыке предугадать его сложно, да и в целом 2 1/3 слайдера будут играться приятнее, особенно учитывая флоу а тут сменю
- 01:41:587 (6) - закончи его на голубом тике (на 1/4 раньше) - так же, как и в предыдущей такой же части я попробовал, и здесь, среди сладеров, это звучит хуже. поэтому как есть оставлю
- 01:44:610 (4) - same as 01:40:889 (5) нет
- 02:06:936 (5,6) - имхо, не стоит тут антиджамп делать - он и к музыке не очень модходит, и ноты положены немного подло (новод играется хорошо, а вот любителей хд/дт может позлить) - может, подвинуть куда-нибудь или сделать что-то типа бланкета с 02:06:936 (5) - ? с первого раза не пройдут с этими модами энивей, пусть как есть будет. я ж для номода мапаю, а не под дт
- 02:10:657 (7,8) - same as above ^
- 02:31:819 (3) - подвинь чуть выше чтоб не было оверлапа с предыдущими слайдерами ну ок, хотел оверлапом показать 1/4, но никто не оценил
- 02:32:517 (1,2,3,4) - мб стакнуть их как-нибудь поинтереснее? не, норм
- 02:49:261 (2,3) - Довольно подлое место для модов, может быть как-нибудь его выделить для читабельности? Например, удалить нк с 02:48:331 (1) - и повесить на 02:49:261 (2) - так антиджамп будет легче прочитать потестил, лучше чем есть не стало
- 03:07:866 (1) - ненужное НК я думаю? нужное, как и на три ноты перед ним
- 03:29:029 (6) - подвинь чуть ниже чтоб не было оверлапа с 03:28:331 (4) - ок, немного перекидал ноты
- 03:47:866 (4) - стрим, начинающийся хвостом слайдера обычно трудновато поймать при игре. попробуй закончить 03:47:866 (4) - на голубом тике, заглушить конец и добавить ноту на 03:48:331 - так стрим будет легче поймать против концов слайдеров, где явно даже намёка на звук нет. знаю, что с синих сложнее, но ни у кого при тестплее именно тут проблем не было
- 03:55:773 (9,1) - даже с АР8 эта 1/1 подлянка работает очень подло - её трудновато прочитать, к тому же это почти середина мапы. Попробуй просто стакнуть (1) с (9), так её будет легче поймать да хорош, там 1/1, (1) появляется гораздо позже. потенциальные проблемы могут быть только с дт, но если берешься дтшить 10мин мапу, значит такое уж прочитаешь
- 04:29:726 (1) - ctrl+g? ибо не очень хорошее флоу по отношению к 04:30:657 (2) - мне под мышку идеально ложится, я хз
- 05:00:889 (2,1) - раздвинь их чуть-чуть чтоб не пересекались ну ок
- 05:11:122 - 05:14:378 - имхо очень много финишей тут, попробуй удалить каждый второй или хотя бы сбить громкость немного на всех. Точно так же на 05:18:098 - 05:23:680 - 1/1, как в музыке
- 05:19:959 (5,1) - может анстакнуть их совсем чуть-чуть для читабельности? по ходу движения выглядело не очень, против хода двигалось не очень, 0.4 дает читабельность, оставлю как есть
- 05:23:680 (1,1) - вот это самая большая подлянка в карте для хиддена - с учётом твоей stack leniency 05:25:540 (1) - очень сложно прочитать, + она появляется сразу же после довольно быстрого 1/4 слайдера, что усложняет задачу. Попробуй отодвинуть её куда-нибудь, или просто сделать так же как ты сделал на 09:14:378 (1,2) - ок, сдвинул
- 06:29:261 (1,2,3) - вот имхо это лишнее - было бы лучше сначала дать игрокам прослушать эту часть и ставить 1/3 репит сюда, а в других подобных частях уже использовать ноты - так внезапные 1/3 ноты, да ещё и почти сразу после спиннера только увеличат кол-во 100/50 у игроков пока оставлю, суть в спейсинге увиличивающемся
- 06:55:773 (3) - questionable slider :V не уверен что такие ещё можно юзать :Y
- 06:58:564 - 07:00:657 - имхо рано секцию с клэпами начал, они по музыке больше подходят позже, я б отсюда их убрал они чуть тише и есть в музыке
- 07:11:587 (5,6) - опять, не очень одобряю эту идею с 1/1 стаком посреди мапы.. orz меньше играйте с модами! :3
- 07:28:447 (1) - D: очень утомляющий спиннер. пожайста, попробуй как-то замать эту чать - она мапается в принципе нормально, ну или хотя бы просто как-нибудь укоротить этот спиннер - он очень утомляет, тем более учитывая что это уже 3/4 мапы я подумаю, но забивать 1/1 слайдерами некруто, ставить 1/2 из ничего - тоже. И вообще, я вот отдыхаю на спиннерах
- 08:57:168 (2,3,1) - попробуй этот стак поинтереснее сделать: ничего пока не придумал, ещё подумаю
- 08:59:029 (13) - нк на него мб? почему бы и нет
- 10:25:773 (8) - может заменить нотами? конец мапы как-никак, хотелось бы чего-нибудь посложнее да хз, там дальше триплы есть, пусть тут останется слайдер
йей, спасибо за мод о/
Updated!Lust wrote:
Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks Thank you! glad to see your mod here!
Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL) (do you think i can read it? pfffff)
[Marathon]And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!
- 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well uh, i'd bad in this "catch the pixel to make it perfect" but i tried at least.
- 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better have fixed slider,whole pattern has been remade
- 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well thanks o.o
- 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this i tried :Y
- 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like tried 3point sliders, didn't find good shape for next patterns w/o remapping, left as is
- 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely! t-thanks o.o"
- 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that okay
- 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better hmmm, agree, let's try
- 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well guess fixed
- 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition? yeah, normal whistles start too early, fixed
- 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle? yes
- 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this probably fixed :S
- 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier :I
- 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section after this slider/note there is a gap w/o break. if player will pass stream bad, he'll fail before1st object after gap, cuz HP loses about half for this gap. slider gives more guarantee for hp drain. hope you understand
- 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it remapped :Y
- 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER! lolyes
- 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this. fixed
- 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) - let's see how will it work with next (3). changed, but ready to fix it back
- 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern idk how to fix w/o remap ._.
- 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this fixed probably x2
- 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit? +0.1x to spacing
thank you for this mod and positive feedback! hope to rank it before autumn, lol
Thats because 2013 had terrible music :pLizzy wrote:
I personally hate the 2013 version....
thanks you for mod and star <3HandHeldPillow wrote:
newbie modNotes: Overall nice map, plays well and has great flow, i couldn't really find much to bitch about, anyways star for you great mapMarathon
06:13:215 (4,5,6) - increase the spacing a bit, chance for a good triangle jump alright, raised a bit
08:56:471 (3) - possibly move to x:188 y:103, makes for a good jump mmm, moved farer, but closer than you suggested
02:32:750 (2) - throws off the flow a bit uh-oh, i moved it a bit down, hope it helps. want to save pattern
10:17:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe add more curve here to keep with the flow noo, want to leave it staight!
I disagree, I really like the songs in the 2013 versionRad- wrote:
Thats because 2013 had terrible music :pLizzy wrote:
I personally hate the 2013 version....
thank you for your mod! i'm too tired to write full comments if you want to clear something, pm me for explanations!Secretpipe wrote:
Heyo !
Random Mod !
[2013]
- 00:11:588 (2,3) - You can better blanket ! ok
- 00:57:633 (6,1) - Maybe curv one of these sliders ? no
- 01:16:703 (2) - I'd NC this ! ok
- 01:24:145 (2) - Same as above ! ok
- 01:26:006 (2) - Maybe Ctrl+G ? no
- 01:37:866 (4) - I don't get rythm here ! Why map on a blue tick ? no
- 02:08:796 (1,2,3,4) - I'd space these notes a bit ! Don't stack'em ! no
- 02:20:075 (3) - Do a slider like (2) ? no
- 04:13:913 (5) - I'd blanket this ! no
- 05:47:401 (6,7,1) - Make a straight line or a triangle ? no
- 06:13:447 (5,1) - Fix the little overlap here !ok
- 06:14:378 (2) - Ctrl+J this ? no
- 06:24:610 (3,4) - A blanket'd be better here ! no
- 06:25:540 (2) - Mayybe do a slider like (1) ? fixed in another way
- 07:03:680 (6,7) - This overlap ! Fix it \o3o/ no
- 08:08:099 (3,4) - You can improve blanket here ! \o3o/ ok
- 08:20:657 (6,3) - I'd stack this ! no
- 08:52:750 (4) - Curv it a bit for make a blanket ! no
- 09:46:703 (1,2) - Pretty akward flow here ! no
- 10:15:773 (1,2,3,4) - Flow and transition can be much better ! no
- 10:33:215 (10,11,12) - I'd Ctrl+G this ! no
Gabe wrote:
Bubble #2 ---
I can't q.q
Yay! i thought rhythm errors has been caught, but i was wrong. Thank you for modding!p3n wrote:
Hoo! (ovo) hoot hoot!
[Marathon]
01:41:587 (7) - shorten to end on blue tick to match the song okie, also had same suggestion before
01:43:099 - add note to match the song and keep your melody follow up for this combo alright
01:47:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - "silent" stream makes me furious. Why don't you keep the drum sampleset or use soft with drum finish at slightly reduced volume? mmm, drumset is done, 1/4 rhythm is not loud in music, so in map too
02:02:285 (4) - drum whistle seems odd here. Could be just me but personally I'd stick to the soft whistle on this note as well from the previous pattern
i tried it, but drum whistle fits better to the music imo. soft whistle are not loud enough for hearing it there...
02:17:866 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - (♥v♥)/
02:38:099 (1,2,3) - maybe increase distance to 1,20x to make it somewhat consistent with the previous patterns - same for 02:38:680 (4,5) - fixed spacing
02:49:726 (3) - forgot to add the whistle here yeah, agree
03:28:680 - maybe consider adding a note here to reflect the feint triplet in the baseline - would be fine to leave it as is as well, just feels a bit more dynamic for me with the triplet agree, new track needed more dynamic places
04:28:215 - missed a note here? Feels much better with the triplet: http://puu.sh/9TTUm/7252db49c7.jpg missed
09:12:750 (1) - shouldn't this slider end on the following 1/6 to match the song? http://puu.sh/9TYjT/4974d38dff.jpg nice catch, it should. idk why i thought it's blue
09:19:959 (1) - maybe start the spinner with the pulse on the red tick (previous or next...anything would work) to make it fit in. Either way it is just a spinner so the starting point after the break is not THAT important. moved 1/2 next for extending break as 2nd target. but i don't see much difference
09:48:796 (1,2,3,4) - reverse each slider individually to increase the flow of this part...seems like this was originally intended...why would you change this??? probably i was drunk. or mad. or both. changed, fixed pattern.
So far so good.
Also stop trolling 2nd bubbles, Gabe I could've accidentially approved this...imagine the shitstorm and the deep concern of the modding community! Madness!
ehhh, you have just posted a copy of Lust's mod? for what? oOGAMEINSTALLER wrote:
Only little
Marathon
00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
Lust wrote:
Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks
Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL)
[Marathon]And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!
- 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
- 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
- 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
- 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
- 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
- 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
- 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
- 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
- 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
- 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
- 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
- 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
- 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
- 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
- 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
- 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
- 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
- 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
- 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
- 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
- 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
20:18 Leader: ovo
20:18 *Leader is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/389398 Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes [Marathon]]
20:18 Aleks719: (ov=)/
20:18 Aleks719: yes?
20:18 Leader: just a couple things
20:19 Leader: before teh rank
20:19 Aleks719: :O
20:19 Aleks719: ofc, let's see!
20:21 Leader: 04:54:378 (2,4) - two similar sliders like that are not the best idea so I'd go for something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1797196 this]
20:22 Leader: well, I've noted them somewhere but seems like I lost the .txt
20:22 Leader: that wasn't nothing relevant so let me do just a little check
20:24 Aleks719: i'm okay with changing shapes, so i can turn it into straight slider~
20:27 Leader: 03:17:633 (4,5) - What about CTRL+G? would feel nice imo
20:28 Leader: 04:02:285 (6,7) - This kinda breaks the general flow, I'd add a note between them at least ;_;
20:33 Leader: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - shouldn't be reversed? if you want to manual stack this triplet..
20:36 Aleks719: yes for 03:17
20:37 Leader: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1797239 also, personal opinion about this slider] ovo
20:37 Aleks719: 04:02:285 (6,7) - added 1/2 slider, need to see your opinion later
20:39 Aleks719: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - okay, reversed