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Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes
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ehhh, you have just posted a copy of Lust's mod? for what? oOGAMEINSTALLER wrote:
Only little
Marathon
00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
Lust wrote:
Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks
Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL)
[Marathon]And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!
- 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
- 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
- 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
- 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
- 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
- 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
- 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
- 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
- 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
- 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
- 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
- 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
- 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
- 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
- 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
- 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
- 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
- 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
- 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
- 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
- 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
Nice song,nice hitsound,do it right and your beatmap will be rank
God bless that your beatmap will approve soon
God bless that your beatmap will approve soon
I thought I've played this before, but this was a 2013 lol
Good luck!
Good luck!
He was impressed by my superior mod quality, so impressed in fact that he thought it must be replicated.
/me runs
Anyway, eagerly awaiting the flame on this :3
/me runs
Anyway, eagerly awaiting the flame on this :3
DETECTIVE RAGE IS COMING FOR HELP
Maybe he ctrl+c Lust mod for some purpose, then wrote his own mod in txt document, copied again his mod and failed, so when he ctrl+v in thread he posted Lust's mod (and didn't notice).
And yes, approve, please.
Maybe he ctrl+c Lust mod for some purpose, then wrote his own mod in txt document, copied again his mod and failed, so when he ctrl+v in thread he posted Lust's mod (and didn't notice).
And yes, approve, please.
please
approve this
approve this
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20:18 Leader: ovo
20:18 *Leader is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/389398 Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes [Marathon]]
20:18 Aleks719: (ov=)/
20:18 Aleks719: yes?
20:18 Leader: just a couple things
20:19 Leader: before teh rank
20:19 Aleks719: :O
20:19 Aleks719: ofc, let's see!
20:21 Leader: 04:54:378 (2,4) - two similar sliders like that are not the best idea so I'd go for something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1797196 this]
20:22 Leader: well, I've noted them somewhere but seems like I lost the .txt
20:22 Leader: that wasn't nothing relevant so let me do just a little check
20:24 Aleks719: i'm okay with changing shapes, so i can turn it into straight slider~
20:27 Leader: 03:17:633 (4,5) - What about CTRL+G? would feel nice imo
20:28 Leader: 04:02:285 (6,7) - This kinda breaks the general flow, I'd add a note between them at least ;_;
20:33 Leader: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - shouldn't be reversed? if you want to manual stack this triplet..
20:36 Aleks719: yes for 03:17
20:37 Leader: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1797239 also, personal opinion about this slider] ovo
20:37 Aleks719: 04:02:285 (6,7) - added 1/2 slider, need to see your opinion later
20:39 Aleks719: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - okay, reversed
Awesome map, here you have my first flame!
Topic Starter
ffffffflaaaaaaaaameeeee! thank you!
Graz Aleks! This is awesome 
Awesome! Gratz :3
Congratz ^-^
Awesome!
Gratz :3
Yaaaaaay~
\o/
Congrats man!
YES! Ранки!!
Поздравляю, Арекс-сан!
Поздравляю, Арекс-сан!
Not sure if it's too late or i'm wrong, but to me it sounds like the timing is significantly off. if you slow it down to 25% the ticks aren't landing on the beats. it sounds like the offset should be closer to 1830, not 1820.
or maybe i'm just bad
or maybe i'm just bad
Yes, it is off, but for little differences, there is custom offset (press + to delay offset and - to put it earlier)Ricchii wrote:
Not sure if it's too late or i'm wrong, but to me it sounds like the timing is significantly off. if you slow it down to 25% the ticks aren't landing on the beats. it sounds like the offset should be closer to 1830, not 1820.
or maybe i'm just bad
reinstalled osu just for this map. Thanks for creating another one! (glad to see anything deorro related on osu lol)