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Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes

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Aurele
hope there is no Skrillex this time.
Asphyxia
omg, have my support
Avena
IRC modded the map~ It was really nice and cool, I really liked the hitsounds!

Boop
21:44 Priti: AYE GURL
21:44 Priti: GUESS WHAT TIME IT IS
21:44 Aleks719: ADVENTURE TIME /o/
21:44 Priti: NO
21:44 Priti: IRC MOD TIME
21:44 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/389398 Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes [Marathon]]
21:44 Aleks719: OH SHI
21:45 *Aleks719 runs as fast as he can
21:45 Priti: NUH UH
21:47 Priti: 00:37:168 (4,1) - PLS
21:47 Priti: Stack is a bit off
21:47 Priti: move 00:38:099 (1) - to x:295 y:268
21:48 Aleks719: ufff, it doesn't stack in game even if i'll move it a bit
21:49 Priti: huh
21:49 Aleks719: once i spent 2h for stacks and tested after
21:49 Aleks719: and d;grkgkdgke'g
21:49 Aleks719: it was awful
21:49 Priti: 00:14:843 (6) - Following the previous logic of the finish emphasis, why not put a finish on the ending?
21:50 Aleks719: too many loud sounds
21:50 Priti: ur faic is too loud bby o3o
21:50 Aleks719: there should be a quiet sound
21:50 Priti: 01:07:866 (1,2,3,4) - I really don't feel like antijumps fit a buildup which should be an intense thing.
21:51 Aleks719: b-but i use sliders after
21:51 Priti: still
21:51 Aleks719: what's a point to speed up
21:51 Priti: pls
21:51 Aleks719: if you should be slow after
21:51 Priti: 01:22:517 (3,4,5,6,1) - SUDDENLY LEGACY
21:51 Priti: THIS IS LOVELY
21:52 Aleks719: yeah, that's how speed up works :Y
21:52 Priti: 01:30:889 (8) - Remove the repeat and place a circle where it should be so there's more impact to the cymbal?
21:52 Aleks719: imo
21:52 Aleks719: mmm, maybe even triple?
21:53 Priti: hmph, good point.
21:53 Aleks719: kay
21:54 Aleks719: done
21:54 Priti: 02:45:540 (1) - Is this NC really needed?
21:54 Aleks719: not so
21:55 Priti: 02:56:703 (1) - This wave is lacking waviness tbh, maybe make a wavier wave?
21:55 Aleks719: okay.jpg
21:55 Priti: 03:19:726 (3,4,5,6) - fnjsdknfkjdsnfdkjs
21:55 Priti: Stack leniency makes the spacing really bad ingame
21:55 Priti: and causes the circles to almost touch03:19:726 (3) -
21:56 Priti: pls manually unstack and then respace
21:57 Priti: 03:56:238 - Gayest song ever
21:57 Priti: 04:11:122 - Use soft sounds here instead? the normals feel too strong for this
21:57 Aleks719: too fast
21:58 Aleks719: i can't handle
21:58 Priti: ikr
21:58 Aleks719: added waveness
21:58 Aleks719: stack fixed
21:58 Aleks719: gayest song is gayest
21:59 Priti: 05:10:657 (4,1) - switch combo locations?
21:59 Aleks719: yeah, will change to soft
21:59 Aleks719: and fix sound
21:59 Priti: 05:18:098 (9,1) - &
21:59 Priti: ^
21:59 Aleks719: yep
21:59 Aleks719: 2nd - no
21:59 Priti: y
21:59 Aleks719: it breaks triple
22:00 Priti: multicolor triples r best
22:00 Priti: aleks pls
22:00 Priti: 05:38:564 (1,2) - I really hate this odd overlap these have
22:00 Aleks719: r u srs
22:00 Priti: consider redoing the shapes here so it doesn't touch eachother ewly
22:00 Aleks719: deal with it
22:01 Priti: k
22:01 Priti: 06:26:006 (1) - Start this 1/4 later and put a note where it used to start?
22:01 Priti: for better impact
22:02 Aleks719: uhhh
22:02 Aleks719: there vocals start
22:02 Aleks719: will sound odd imo
22:02 Priti: 06:43:215 (10) - Use 70% volume for this?
22:02 Priti: for the tail*
22:02 Priti: 06:52:052 (3,5) - blankt pls
22:03 Aleks719: 70% ok
22:03 Priti: 07:06:936 (6,7) - I doubt these vocals are snappable to map them.
22:03 Priti: 07:15:540 (2,4) - blankt
22:04 Priti: 07:35:773 - THIS SONG DESERVES WHISTLE SPAM
22:05 Aleks719: blaket'd
22:05 Priti: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - Manually unstack so it actually starts from the center of the star?
22:05 Aleks719: 1/2 is too boring about vocals
22:05 Aleks719: mmm, i'll think about whistles, ok
22:06 Priti: 07:57:633 (4) - Change into 1/2 slider and put a note on 07:58:099 - For better impact?
22:06 Priti: 08:01:819 - SAFTS
22:07 Priti: 08:17:633 (4) - Ctrl + G can make a really cool intuitive jump and nicer flow
22:07 Priti: 08:38:796 (5) - Change into a triple for better impact
22:07 Priti: I'LL STOP NOW
22:07 Aleks719: phew
22:09 Priti: god that Clarity part sounds so good.
22:12 Aleks719: what is safts?
22:12 Priti: 08:46:238 (6) - Again, change into triple for better impact
22:12 Priti: Softs, lol
22:13 Aleks719: ah
22:13 Aleks719: agreed about ctrl+g btw
22:13 Priti: :D
22:13 Aleks719: and changed 1/1 slider
22:13 Priti: 08:53:447 (1,3) - Switch combo locations to emphasise the buildup change better?
22:14 Priti: 08:59:029 (13) - Again, remove a repeat and add a circle where it was for nicer emphasis.
22:14 Priti: 09:14:378 (1) - ^
22:14 Priti: 09:16:238 (2) - New combo bcuz reasons
22:15 Priti: 09:34:843 (1,2,3,4) - These anti-jumps are really dangerous since you used similiar spacing for 1/4 in this section, consider changing this, maybe put the circles on top of the slider starts that are after them or something along these lines?
22:16 Aleks719: combo changed, no for removing last repeat, cuz it will be tough
22:16 Aleks719: for next one - okay
22:16 Priti: ohsnap, I skipped an important section
22:16 Priti: 09:01:354 - This whole section plays really strangely
22:17 Priti: 09:02:052 (3,4,5,6) - This is really bad to play since the actual 1/3 starts where (3) ends, causing the sliders followed by it to feel unintuitive and off beat
22:17 Priti: It would make more sense to start the 1/3 slider pattern from where the 1/3 starts
22:17 Priti: 09:03:913 (2,3) - Same applies for this one
22:17 Priti: 09:06:006 (3,4) - Well executed here
22:18 Priti: 09:09:494 (3,4) - again
22:18 Priti: I don't really think I need to point out more of these, I think you understand the concept.
22:19 Priti: 10:03:215 (6,1) - Shouldn't (6) be 1/4 longer to be better with the rhythm?
22:21 Priti: 09:57:866 (4) - This is really offbeat ._.
22:21 Priti: 10:23:215 - This section deserves a full kiai, not just a burst
22:22 Priti: 10:38:215 (1) - Use 5% volume for the end
22:23 Priti: 09:14:378 (1) - Random Idea, maybe make this a sliderstream with no repeats instead?
22:23 Priti: One last thing, I honestly think that OD8 can work well for this, but it's your choice.
22:23 Aleks719: take a pause for answers
22:24 Priti: No pause because that's all o3o
22:24 Priti: no more~
22:24 Aleks719: oh, cool
22:24 Aleks719: theeeen
22:24 Priti: sexu map
22:24 Aleks719: 09:16:238 (1) - done
22:25 Aleks719: got your 1/3 concept, gonna take a look closer later
22:25 Aleks719: 10:03:215 (6,1) - nice catch
22:25 Priti: okie
22:26 Aleks719: 09:57:866 (4) - main rhythm is too quiet already, but vocal sounds bad, agree
22:26 Aleks719: will think about this place
22:26 Priti: Oh, one more thing
22:26 Aleks719: kiai to the last slider?
22:26 Priti: What's up with the combo colors?
22:27 Aleks719: well, i can put 5% ok
22:27 Aleks719: what's up with them?
22:27 Priti: 6 colors
22:27 Aleks719: i used same from 2012 ver
22:27 Priti: 3 weak, 3 strong
22:27 Priti: didn't 2012 only have 3?
22:27 Aleks719: nope
22:27 Priti: huh.
22:27 Aleks719: they had 6 as well
22:27 Priti: tbh I think maybe like
22:27 Aleks719: *it has
22:27 Priti: a rainbow scheme can work better
22:27 Priti: it can work nicely with the BG
22:27 Aleks719: uhm
22:28 Priti: and the song's concept of a mixture of a lot of things.
22:28 Aleks719: i'll try out this idea, right
22:28 Priti: lemme post the log now, okie?
22:28 Priti: o3o
Topic Starter
Aleks719
i'd like to thank everyone for their support to make this map finished~ Guys, really, i didn't post anything, but it motivated me to continue!

now i'll try to polish it, any kind of help (modding mostly) is highly appreciated!
Thanks to Priti for helpful mod, it's semi finished, largest changes will be done a bit later and offline!
Secretpipe
I love you Aleks <3
Reiji-RJ
Детектив Рейджи прибыл! <o

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20:44 Aleks719: готов
20:48 Aleks719: смотри
20:48 Aleks719: 01:13:913 (1,2) -
20:48 Aleks719: тут 2 стоило отделять
20:48 Aleks719: или лучше загнать в слайдер обратно
20:49 Reiji-RJ: мне кажется, лучше загнать
20:49 Reiji-RJ: там вроде не такая сильная нота О:
20:49 Aleks719: да
20:49 Reiji-RJ: 00:39:959 (2,3,4,5) -
20:49 Reiji-RJ: они как-то некрасиво накладываются 3:
20:50 Aleks719: го дальше, мне тут паттерн стремно переделывать
20:50 Aleks719: могу 4 дальше убрать
20:51 Aleks719: но будет слишком
20:51 Reiji-RJ: ну он просто смотрится
20:51 Reiji-RJ: как будто рандом
20:51 Reiji-RJ: щащ
20:51 Reiji-RJ: минутку
20:51 Reiji-RJ: меня отвлекают >_<
20:51 Aleks719: ну так-то да, рандом
20:51 Aleks719: ок
20:54 Reiji-RJ: 01:23:680 (1) - вот тут свисток не звучит, по-моему
20:54 Reiji-RJ: но не знаю
20:54 Reiji-RJ: ._.
20:55 Aleks719: софтовый
20:55 Aleks719: ок, убрал
20:55 Reiji-RJ: да
20:56 Reiji-RJ: 01:46:006 - вот отсюда может драм поставить?
20:56 Reiji-RJ: пустой драм
20:57 Aleks719: пустой драм?
20:57 Aleks719: ?
20:57 Reiji-RJ: ага
20:57 Reiji-RJ: ну, в семплсете драм
20:57 Aleks719: эээм
20:57 Reiji-RJ: ну там звук другой же 3:
20:57 Aleks719: ну ок
20:58 Reiji-RJ: под биты как раз тихие...
20:58 Reiji-RJ: 01:57:168 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - вот это круто
20:59 Reiji-RJ: 02:28:331 (6) - попробуйте сюда нормал свисток
20:59 Reiji-RJ: 02:28:796 (1) - а отсюда убрать наоборот
20:59 Reiji-RJ: если понравится, то и дальше так же
20:59 Aleks719: на 6 в начало?
20:59 Reiji-RJ: на конец
21:00 Reiji-RJ: вместо софтового
21:00 Aleks719: а если и там и там
21:00 Reiji-RJ: и там и там не звучит
21:01 Reiji-RJ: 02:26:936 - и вообще тут на всю часть можно подабовлять драм свисточки, под звуки, похожие на них, в музыке
21:01 Aleks719: смотри
21:01 Aleks719: по прошлым свисткам
21:02 Aleks719: на красных одиночные теряются
21:02 Aleks719: если со слайдербодивистлом, то норм
21:02 Aleks719: а там не везде слайдеры
21:02 Reiji-RJ: куда слайдерборд о_о
21:02 Aleks719: 02:28:331 (6) -
21:02 Aleks719: слайдервистл
21:02 Aleks719: +в конец
21:02 Reiji-RJ: хм
21:03 Aleks719: а потом 3 ноты
21:03 Reiji-RJ: просто вначале были софт вистлы и музыка не такая сильная
21:03 Aleks719: где 3 ноты, и вистл на 3ей
21:03 Aleks719: там ущербно звучит
21:03 Reiji-RJ: а тут сильнее и переход в нормал был бы неплохой...
21:03 Reiji-RJ: хм
21:04 Reiji-RJ: 02:30:308 (7) - а если сюда драм вистл, например?
21:04 Reiji-RJ: ну и на предыдущих нотах
21:04 Reiji-RJ: драм вистлы
21:04 Reiji-RJ: 02:29:610 (4) - на начало 02:29:959 (5) -
21:04 Aleks719: лучше
21:04 Reiji-RJ: и тут
21:04 Aleks719: но хз, хз
21:04 Reiji-RJ: ну, там подумайте О:
21:05 Reiji-RJ: по мне, так нормально воде
21:05 Reiji-RJ: вроде*
21:05 Reiji-RJ: 02:48:331 (1) - вистл на конец?
21:05 Reiji-RJ: 02:44:610 (1) - тут есть
21:06 Reiji-RJ: 02:52:052 (1) - и сюда
21:15 Aleks719: ага
21:15 Aleks719: я фиксил вистлы прошлые
21:15 Reiji-RJ: йей!
21:16 Reiji-RJ: 06:37:013 (2) - вот тут вистл хорошо звучит
21:16 Reiji-RJ: 06:37:168 (3) - сюда на конец и далее не хотите добавить?
21:16 Reiji-RJ: 06:37:944 (5) -
21:16 Reiji-RJ: 06:38:409 (7) -
21:17 Aleks719: ммм
21:17 Aleks719: смысл есть, да
21:18 Reiji-RJ: 07:13:447 - вот тут дико не хватает вистла на теле слайдеров
21:19 Reiji-RJ: 07:13:913 (2) - вот тут
21:19 Reiji-RJ: 07:15:540 (2) -
21:19 Reiji-RJ: 07:17:633 (2) -
21:19 Reiji-RJ: и так далее
21:19 Reiji-RJ: нормал вистла*
21:20 Reiji-RJ: подобавляйте нормал секции только для слайдера
21:22 Aleks719: мехмех
21:22 Aleks719: тьма секций
21:23 Aleks719: потом как-нить
21:23 Aleks719: я сам хотел
21:23 Aleks719: но мне стало лень
21:23 Reiji-RJ: не ленитесь
21:23 Reiji-RJ: 08:33:215 (4) -
21:23 Reiji-RJ: вот сюда на начало лучше нормал финиш
21:23 Reiji-RJ: 08:35:308 (2) - и сюда
21:23 Reiji-RJ: ну и дальше
21:23 Aleks719: ага
21:23 Aleks719: что дальше
21:24 Aleks719: драм/нормал?
21:24 Reiji-RJ: в смысле дальше?
21:24 Aleks719: это я тебя спрашиваю
21:24 Aleks719: что ну и дальше
21:24 Reiji-RJ: ну и дальше на такие места финиши нормал
21:24 Reiji-RJ: ._.
21:24 Reiji-RJ: 08:36:471 (6) - на конец
21:25 Reiji-RJ: 08:39:029 (7) -
21:25 Aleks719: я так и переспросил
21:25 Reiji-RJ: 08:40:657 (3) - начало
21:25 Reiji-RJ: а
21:25 Reiji-RJ: я запуталась
21:25 Reiji-RJ: ._.
21:25 Aleks719: стоп
21:25 Aleks719: нет
21:25 Aleks719: не так
21:25 Aleks719: там драмы идут парой
21:25 Reiji-RJ: ну да
21:25 Aleks719: на длинном слайдере
21:25 Reiji-RJ: а я говорю вместо одного драма сделать нормал финиш
21:25 Aleks719: нормал 2й
21:25 Aleks719: а тут предлагаешь 1й
21:26 Reiji-RJ: ват
21:26 Aleks719: 1й из пары
21:26 Reiji-RJ: 08:36:471 (6) - вы про это?
21:26 Aleks719: ай забей, я понял про что ты
21:26 Reiji-RJ: ну там в музыке
21:26 Reiji-RJ: типо финиши
21:26 Aleks719: да
21:26 Reiji-RJ: тыщ тыщ
21:27 Reiji-RJ: 09:03:215 (7) - нормал финиш, у вас дальше нормалы
21:28 Reiji-RJ: 09:06:936 (1) - вот этот клап как-то не прижился, по-моему
21:28 Reiji-RJ: выселить!
21:29 Aleks719: он же в музыке
21:29 Reiji-RJ: там и 09:10:657 (7) - тут клап
21:29 Reiji-RJ: но не стоит
21:29 Aleks719: нееее
21:29 Aleks719: там другой
21:29 Reiji-RJ: :S
21:30 Reiji-RJ: по-моему, такой же...
21:30 Reiji-RJ: ну ладно
21:30 Reiji-RJ: домовладелец-барин
21:30 Aleks719: да
21:30 Aleks719: B*
21:30 Aleks719: * B(
21:30 Reiji-RJ: теремок
21:31 Aleks719: 09:14:378 (1,2) -
21:31 Aleks719: тут 2 не лишняя тож?
21:32 Reiji-RJ: нет, вроде
21:32 Reiji-RJ: для разнообразия можно оставить
21:32 Reiji-RJ: х3
21:32 Aleks719: ну ок
21:32 Reiji-RJ: 10:27:866 (7) - 10:28:564 (1) - куда свистки пропали
21:36 Aleks719: чо-то наляпал
21:36 Reiji-RJ: все
21:36 Reiji-RJ: Детектив Рейдж распутал это дело!
Kodora
Йоу

[General]

  1. Может заглушить слайдеры? имхо они звучат не очень на тихих частях
[Marathon]

  1. 00:02:285 (2) - на этом и двух последующих репитах я бы убрал свисток с хвоста и повесил бы на реверс вместо этого - так лучше звучит имхо
  2. 00:09:726 (1) - может свисток на начало? Если добавишь, то повесь и на 00:13:447 (2) - на начало
  3. 00:33:447 (4,1) - не очень нравится как флоу здесь идёт - поапробуй заменить на 00:33:447 (4) - на 1/2 слайдер + ноту и сделать небольшой джамп - так будет играться интереснее и переход будет не такой резкий

  4. 00:40:889 (4) - может подвинуть её чуть выше чтоб не было оверлапа с 00:39:959 (2) - ?
  5. 01:07:866 (1,2,3,4) - в принципе эта часть играется нормально, но внезапные антиджампы из ниоткуда после частей с обычным спейсингом, учитывая то, что эта часть в музыке абсолютно такая же, чувствуются сами по себе не очень при игре. Их всё равно тут всего четыре ноты, может вместо этого заменить двумя 1/2 слайдерами с таким же спейсингом как и до этого? Или просто сами ноты проспейсить.
  6. 01:24:145 (2) - я бы убрал финиш (ну или может быть хотя бы приглушить его немного?)
  7. 01:26:006 (2) - убери финиш с головы этого и повесь на 01:25:540 (1) -
  8. 01:37:168 (2,3) - не очень нравится сама конструкция - нота довольно подлая, да и по музыке тяжеловато понять когда кликать следующий слайдер - может заменить на два 1/3 слайдера с большим спейсингом? Что-то типа такого:

  9. 01:40:889 (5) - имхо, тут тоже лучше юзать 2 1/3 слайдера вместо двойного репита - второй репит появляется быстро, по музыке предугадать его сложно, да и в целом 2 1/3 слайдера будут играться приятнее, особенно учитывая флоу
  10. 01:41:587 (6) - закончи его на голубом тике (на 1/4 раньше) - так же, как и в предыдущей такой же части
  11. 01:44:610 (4) - same as 01:40:889 (5)
  12. 02:06:936 (5,6) - имхо, не стоит тут антиджамп делать - он и к музыке не очень модходит, и ноты положены немного подло (новод играется хорошо, а вот любителей хд/дт может позлить) - может, подвинуть куда-нибудь или сделать что-то типа бланкета с 02:06:936 (5) - ?
  13. 02:10:657 (7,8) - same as above
  14. 02:31:819 (3) - подвинь чуть выше чтоб не было оверлапа с предыдущими слайдерами
  15. 02:32:517 (1,2,3,4) - мб стакнуть их как-нибудь поинтереснее?
    SPOILER


    344,96,152517,5,4,0:3:0:0:
    448,72,152750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    337,107,152982,1,4,0:3:0:0:
    331,118,153099,1,2,0:3:0:0:
  16. 02:49:261 (2,3) - Довольно подлое место для модов, может быть как-нибудь его выделить для читабельности? Например, удалить нк с 02:48:331 (1) - и повесить на 02:49:261 (2) - так антиджамп будет легче прочитать
  17. 03:07:866 (1) - ненужное НК я думаю?
  18. 03:29:029 (6) - подвинь чуть ниже чтоб не было оверлапа с 03:28:331 (4) -
  19. 03:47:866 (4) - стрим, начинающийся хвостом слайдера обычно трудновато поймать при игре. попробуй закончить 03:47:866 (4) - на голубом тике, заглушить конец и добавить ноту на 03:48:331 - так стрим будет легче поймать
  20. 03:55:773 (9,1) - даже с АР8 эта 1/1 подлянка работает очень подло - её трудновато прочитать, к тому же это почти середина мапы. Попробуй просто стакнуть (1) с (9), так её будет легче поймать
  21. 04:29:726 (1) - ctrl+g? ибо не очень хорошее флоу по отношению к 04:30:657 (2) -
  22. 05:00:889 (2,1) - раздвинь их чуть-чуть чтоб не пересекались
  23. 05:11:122 - 05:14:378 - имхо очень много финишей тут, попробуй удалить каждый второй или хотя бы сбить громкость немного на всех. Точно так же на 05:18:098 - 05:23:680 -
  24. 05:19:959 (5,1) - может анстакнуть их совсем чуть-чуть для читабельности?
  25. 05:23:680 (1,1) - вот это самая большая подлянка в карте для хиддена - с учётом твоей stack leniency 05:25:540 (1) - очень сложно прочитать, + она появляется сразу же после довольно быстрого 1/4 слайдера, что усложняет задачу. Попробуй отодвинуть её куда-нибудь, или просто сделать так же как ты сделал на 09:14:378 (1,2) -
  26. 06:29:261 (1,2,3) - вот имхо это лишнее - было бы лучше сначала дать игрокам прослушать эту часть и ставить 1/3 репит сюда, а в других подобных частях уже использовать ноты - так внезапные 1/3 ноты, да ещё и почти сразу после спиннера только увеличат кол-во 100/50 у игроков
  27. 06:55:773 (3) - questionable slider :V не уверен что такие ещё можно юзать
  28. 06:58:564 - 07:00:657 - имхо рано секцию с клэпами начал, они по музыке больше подходят позже, я б отсюда их убрал
  29. 07:11:587 (5,6) - опять, не очень одобряю эту идею с 1/1 стаком посреди мапы.. orz
  30. 07:28:447 (1) - D: очень утомляющий спиннер. пожайста, попробуй как-то замать эту чать - она мапается в принципе нормально, ну или хотя бы просто как-нибудь укоротить этот спиннер - он очень утомляет, тем более учитывая что это уже 3/4 мапы
  31. 08:57:168 (2,3,1) - попробуй этот стак поинтереснее сделать:

    SPOILER


    336,256,537168,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    420,200,537401,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    333,232,537633,5,2,0:3:0:0:
  32. 08:59:029 (13) - нк на него мб?
  33. 10:25:773 (8) - может заменить нотами? конец мапы как-никак, хотелось бы чего-нибудь посложнее
У меня всё, удачи о/
Lust
Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks

Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL)

[Marathon]
  1. 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
  2. 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
  3. 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
  4. 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
  5. 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
  6. 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
  7. 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
  8. 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
  9. 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
  10. 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
  11. 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
  12. 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
  13. 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
  14. 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
  15. 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
  16. 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
  17. 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
  18. 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
  19. 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
  20. 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
  21. 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!
mancuso_JM_
I'll mod this later (I felt bad because I couldn't mod the 2012 version :P) but make sure to fix those previous mods first!
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Kodora wrote:

Йоу

[General]

  1. Может заглушить слайдеры? имхо они звучат не очень на тихих частях не, пусть остаются пока
[Marathon]

  1. 00:02:285 (2) - на этом и двух последующих репитах я бы убрал свисток с хвоста и повесил бы на реверс вместо этого - так лучше звучит имхо кое-что поменял
  2. 00:09:726 (1) - может свисток на начало? Если добавишь, то повесь и на 00:13:447 (2) - на начало ок
  3. 00:33:447 (4,1) - не очень нравится как флоу здесь идёт - поапробуй заменить на 00:33:447 (4) - на 1/2 слайдер + ноту и сделать небольшой джамп - так будет играться интереснее и переход будет не такой резкий поменял объекты, но расположение мне не очень, сделал своё
  4. 00:40:889 (4) - может подвинуть её чуть выше чтоб не было оверлапа с 00:39:959 (2) - ? ноуп
  5. 01:07:866 (1,2,3,4) - в принципе эта часть играется нормально, но внезапные антиджампы из ниоткуда после частей с обычным спейсингом, учитывая то, что эта часть в музыке абсолютно такая же, чувствуются сами по себе не очень при игре. Их всё равно тут всего четыре ноты, может вместо этого заменить двумя 1/2 слайдерами с таким же спейсингом как и до этого? Или просто сами ноты проспейсить. не, оставлю как есть, сладеров слишком много, ноты со спейсингом не видятся
  6. 01:24:145 (2) - я бы убрал финиш (ну или может быть хотя бы приглушить его немного?) чойта? ненене, он-то как раз по музыке
  7. 01:26:006 (2) - убери финиш с головы этого и повесь на 01:25:540 (1) - ммм,ок
  8. 01:37:168 (2,3) - не очень нравится сама конструкция - нота довольно подлая, да и по музыке тяжеловато понять когда кликать следующий слайдер - может заменить на два 1/3 слайдера с большим спейсингом? Что-то типа такого: пасиб, не нравится
  9. 01:40:889 (5) - имхо, тут тоже лучше юзать 2 1/3 слайдера вместо двойного репита - второй репит появляется быстро, по музыке предугадать его сложно, да и в целом 2 1/3 слайдера будут играться приятнее, особенно учитывая флоу а тут сменю
  10. 01:41:587 (6) - закончи его на голубом тике (на 1/4 раньше) - так же, как и в предыдущей такой же части я попробовал, и здесь, среди сладеров, это звучит хуже. поэтому как есть оставлю
  11. 01:44:610 (4) - same as 01:40:889 (5) нет
  12. 02:06:936 (5,6) - имхо, не стоит тут антиджамп делать - он и к музыке не очень модходит, и ноты положены немного подло (новод играется хорошо, а вот любителей хд/дт может позлить) - может, подвинуть куда-нибудь или сделать что-то типа бланкета с 02:06:936 (5) - ? с первого раза не пройдут с этими модами энивей, пусть как есть будет. я ж для номода мапаю, а не под дт
  13. 02:10:657 (7,8) - same as above ^
  14. 02:31:819 (3) - подвинь чуть выше чтоб не было оверлапа с предыдущими слайдерами ну ок, хотел оверлапом показать 1/4, но никто не оценил
  15. 02:32:517 (1,2,3,4) - мб стакнуть их как-нибудь поинтереснее? не, норм
  16. 02:49:261 (2,3) - Довольно подлое место для модов, может быть как-нибудь его выделить для читабельности? Например, удалить нк с 02:48:331 (1) - и повесить на 02:49:261 (2) - так антиджамп будет легче прочитать потестил, лучше чем есть не стало
  17. 03:07:866 (1) - ненужное НК я думаю? нужное, как и на три ноты перед ним
  18. 03:29:029 (6) - подвинь чуть ниже чтоб не было оверлапа с 03:28:331 (4) - ок, немного перекидал ноты
  19. 03:47:866 (4) - стрим, начинающийся хвостом слайдера обычно трудновато поймать при игре. попробуй закончить 03:47:866 (4) - на голубом тике, заглушить конец и добавить ноту на 03:48:331 - так стрим будет легче поймать против концов слайдеров, где явно даже намёка на звук нет. знаю, что с синих сложнее, но ни у кого при тестплее именно тут проблем не было
  20. 03:55:773 (9,1) - даже с АР8 эта 1/1 подлянка работает очень подло - её трудновато прочитать, к тому же это почти середина мапы. Попробуй просто стакнуть (1) с (9), так её будет легче поймать да хорош, там 1/1, (1) появляется гораздо позже. потенциальные проблемы могут быть только с дт, но если берешься дтшить 10мин мапу, значит такое уж прочитаешь
  21. 04:29:726 (1) - ctrl+g? ибо не очень хорошее флоу по отношению к 04:30:657 (2) - мне под мышку идеально ложится, я хз
  22. 05:00:889 (2,1) - раздвинь их чуть-чуть чтоб не пересекались ну ок
  23. 05:11:122 - 05:14:378 - имхо очень много финишей тут, попробуй удалить каждый второй или хотя бы сбить громкость немного на всех. Точно так же на 05:18:098 - 05:23:680 - 1/1, как в музыке
  24. 05:19:959 (5,1) - может анстакнуть их совсем чуть-чуть для читабельности? по ходу движения выглядело не очень, против хода двигалось не очень, 0.4 дает читабельность, оставлю как есть
  25. 05:23:680 (1,1) - вот это самая большая подлянка в карте для хиддена - с учётом твоей stack leniency 05:25:540 (1) - очень сложно прочитать, + она появляется сразу же после довольно быстрого 1/4 слайдера, что усложняет задачу. Попробуй отодвинуть её куда-нибудь, или просто сделать так же как ты сделал на 09:14:378 (1,2) - ок, сдвинул
  26. 06:29:261 (1,2,3) - вот имхо это лишнее - было бы лучше сначала дать игрокам прослушать эту часть и ставить 1/3 репит сюда, а в других подобных частях уже использовать ноты - так внезапные 1/3 ноты, да ещё и почти сразу после спиннера только увеличат кол-во 100/50 у игроков пока оставлю, суть в спейсинге увиличивающемся
  27. 06:55:773 (3) - questionable slider :V не уверен что такие ещё можно юзать :Y
  28. 06:58:564 - 07:00:657 - имхо рано секцию с клэпами начал, они по музыке больше подходят позже, я б отсюда их убрал они чуть тише и есть в музыке
  29. 07:11:587 (5,6) - опять, не очень одобряю эту идею с 1/1 стаком посреди мапы.. orz меньше играйте с модами! :3
  30. 07:28:447 (1) - D: очень утомляющий спиннер. пожайста, попробуй как-то замать эту чать - она мапается в принципе нормально, ну или хотя бы просто как-нибудь укоротить этот спиннер - он очень утомляет, тем более учитывая что это уже 3/4 мапы я подумаю, но забивать 1/1 слайдерами некруто, ставить 1/2 из ничего - тоже. И вообще, я вот отдыхаю на спиннерах
  31. 08:57:168 (2,3,1) - попробуй этот стак поинтереснее сделать: ничего пока не придумал, ещё подумаю
  32. 08:59:029 (13) - нк на него мб? почему бы и нет
  33. 10:25:773 (8) - может заменить нотами? конец мапы как-никак, хотелось бы чего-нибудь посложнее да хз, там дальше триплы есть, пусть тут останется слайдер
У меня всё, удачи о/
йей, спасибо за мод о/

Lust wrote:

Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks Thank you! glad to see your mod here!

Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL) (do you think i can read it? pfffff)

[Marathon]
  1. 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well uh, i'd bad in this "catch the pixel to make it perfect" but i tried at least.
  2. 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better have fixed slider,whole pattern has been remade
  3. 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well thanks o.o
  4. 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this i tried :Y
  5. 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like tried 3point sliders, didn't find good shape for next patterns w/o remapping, left as is
  6. 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely! t-thanks o.o"
  7. 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that okay
  8. 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better hmmm, agree, let's try
  9. 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well guess fixed
  10. 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition? yeah, normal whistles start too early, fixed
  11. 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle? yes
  12. 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this probably fixed :S
  13. 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier :I
  14. 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section after this slider/note there is a gap w/o break. if player will pass stream bad, he'll fail before1st object after gap, cuz HP loses about half for this gap. slider gives more guarantee for hp drain. hope you understand :P
  15. 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it remapped :Y
  16. 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER! lolyes
  17. 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this. fixed
  18. 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) - let's see how will it work with next (3). changed, but ready to fix it back
  19. 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern idk how to fix w/o remap ._.
  20. 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this fixed probably x2
  21. 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit? +0.1x to spacing
And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!
thank you for this mod and positive feedback! hope to rank it before autumn, lol
Updated!
Rad-

Lizzy wrote:

I personally hate the 2013 version....
Thats because 2013 had terrible music :p
Magnolia
newbie mod :D

Marathon

06:13:215 (4,5,6) - increase the spacing a bit, chance for a good triangle jump
08:56:471 (3) - possibly move to x:188 y:103, makes for a good jump
02:32:750 (2) - throws off the flow a bit
10:17:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe add more curve here to keep with the flow
Notes: Overall nice map, plays well and has great flow, i couldn't really find much to bitch about, anyways star for you great map
Topic Starter
Aleks719

HandHeldPillow wrote:

newbie mod :D

Marathon

06:13:215 (4,5,6) - increase the spacing a bit, chance for a good triangle jump alright, raised a bit
08:56:471 (3) - possibly move to x:188 y:103, makes for a good jump mmm, moved farer, but closer than you suggested
02:32:750 (2) - throws off the flow a bit uh-oh, i moved it a bit down, hope it helps. want to save pattern
10:17:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe add more curve here to keep with the flow noo, want to leave it staight!
Notes: Overall nice map, plays well and has great flow, i couldn't really find much to bitch about, anyways star for you great map
thanks you for mod and star <3
WolferZ_old

Rad- wrote:

Lizzy wrote:

I personally hate the 2013 version....
Thats because 2013 had terrible music :p
I disagree, I really like the songs in the 2013 version

also, please make this Ar9!
Secretpipe
Heyo !
Random Mod !

[2013]
  1. 00:11:588 (2,3) - You can better blanket !
  2. 00:57:633 (6,1) - Maybe curv one of these sliders ?
  3. 01:16:703 (2) - I'd NC this !
  4. 01:24:145 (2) - Same as above !
  5. 01:26:006 (2) - Maybe Ctrl+G ?
  6. 01:37:866 (4) - I don't get rythm here ! Why map on a blue tick ?
  7. 02:08:796 (1,2,3,4) - I'd space these notes a bit ! Don't stack'em !
  8. 02:20:075 (3) - Do a slider like (2) ?
  9. 04:13:913 (5) - I'd blanket this !
  10. 05:47:401 (6,7,1) - Make a straight line or a triangle ?
  11. 06:13:447 (5,1) - Fix the little overlap here !
  12. 06:14:378 (2) - Ctrl+J this ?
  13. 06:24:610 (3,4) - A blanket'd be better here !
  14. 06:25:540 (2) - Mayybe do a slider like (1) ?
  15. 07:03:680 (6,7) - This overlap ! Fix it \o3o/
  16. 08:08:099 (3,4) - You can improve blanket here ! \o3o/
  17. 08:20:657 (6,3) - I'd stack this !
  18. 08:52:750 (4) - Curv it a bit for make a blanket !
  19. 09:46:703 (1,2) - Pretty akward flow here !
  20. 10:15:773 (1,2,3,4) - Flow and transition can be much better !
  21. 10:33:215 (10,11,12) - I'd Ctrl+G this !

Sorry if I haven't found anything else ! This marathon is still awesome but I prefered the 2012 version !
Hope my mod will be useful !
Good luck o/
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Secretpipe wrote:

Heyo !
Random Mod !

[2013]
  1. 00:11:588 (2,3) - You can better blanket ! ok
  2. 00:57:633 (6,1) - Maybe curv one of these sliders ? no
  3. 01:16:703 (2) - I'd NC this ! ok
  4. 01:24:145 (2) - Same as above ! ok
  5. 01:26:006 (2) - Maybe Ctrl+G ? no
  6. 01:37:866 (4) - I don't get rythm here ! Why map on a blue tick ? no
  7. 02:08:796 (1,2,3,4) - I'd space these notes a bit ! Don't stack'em ! no
  8. 02:20:075 (3) - Do a slider like (2) ? no
  9. 04:13:913 (5) - I'd blanket this ! no
  10. 05:47:401 (6,7,1) - Make a straight line or a triangle ? no
  11. 06:13:447 (5,1) - Fix the little overlap here !ok
  12. 06:14:378 (2) - Ctrl+J this ? no
  13. 06:24:610 (3,4) - A blanket'd be better here ! no
  14. 06:25:540 (2) - Mayybe do a slider like (1) ? fixed in another way
  15. 07:03:680 (6,7) - This overlap ! Fix it \o3o/ no
  16. 08:08:099 (3,4) - You can improve blanket here ! \o3o/ ok
  17. 08:20:657 (6,3) - I'd stack this ! no
  18. 08:52:750 (4) - Curv it a bit for make a blanket ! no
  19. 09:46:703 (1,2) - Pretty akward flow here ! no
  20. 10:15:773 (1,2,3,4) - Flow and transition can be much better ! no
  21. 10:33:215 (10,11,12) - I'd Ctrl+G this ! no
thank you for your mod! i'm too tired to write full comments if you want to clear something, pm me for explanations!
updated!
Asphyxia
IRC Mod
22:26 Aleks719: i wanna play with you in one interesting game
22:26 Aleks719: it calls
22:26 Aleks719: . . .
22:26 Aleks719: MODMYMAP
22:26 *Aleks719 runs
22:28 Asphyxia: wT
22:28 Asphyxia: WAT
22:29 Aleks719: nvm, just tired of searching bats
22:29 Asphyxia: but which map thp
22:29 Asphyxia: tho
22:30 Aleks719: long one ofc
22:30 Aleks719: krewella is wip
22:31 Asphyxia: lemme test it
22:31 Aleks719: ticclick gave up to even mod it
22:31 Aleks719: gogo
22:32 Asphyxia: ass pro streamer
22:33 Aleks719: dt is too stronk
22:39 Aleks719: i can't spin that fast
22:39 Asphyxia: this map was so long that every suggestion i had in mind
22:39 Asphyxia: i can't even recall which part was which
22:39 Asphyxia: gosh
22:39 Aleks719: lol'd
22:40 Asphyxia: uhh
22:40 Asphyxia: im gonna suggest something random at some places
22:40 Asphyxia: if that's k
22:41 Aleks719: alright
22:41 Asphyxia: 08:59:029 (1) - It'd be better imho if you would take the 1 repeat off from this slider and add a note at the stanza
22:41 Asphyxia: that'd feel a bit better at least for me
22:41 Asphyxia: and how the music goes
22:42 Aleks719: isn't it hard? i tried not to combine sliders with repeats between notes
22:43 Asphyxia: I don't think it's that hard to play if you place the note somewhere near the repeat slider itself
22:43 Aleks719: okay then
22:45 Asphyxia: 00:18:099 (4) - Im somewhat against this slider because this ignores the most important beat, stanza
22:45 Asphyxia: I think if you would shorten this slider up by 1/4 and then adding a note at the stanzas
22:45 Asphyxia: stanza*
22:45 Asphyxia: that could work quite well
22:48 Aleks719: hum, i'm against 1/4 from nowhere
22:48 Asphyxia: it's all good
22:49 Aleks719: shorting slider doesn't work
22:49 Aleks719: 1/2 or 2 notes probably
22:49 Asphyxia: 00:40:889 (4) - I think that the overlap with 00:39:959 (2) - is kinda bothering (at least for me) so a good place for that note could be x:176 y:204
22:49 Aleks719: but it'll break symmetry
22:49 Asphyxia: yeah if you want to, either way it's okay for me
22:50 Asphyxia: kk my net is doing something weird today, idk what that was
22:50 Aleks719: hope that jump is not so giant now -. -
22:50 Asphyxia: i tested it and it should be all good
22:51 Aleks719: i
22:51 Aleks719: will save that line
22:51 Aleks719: as proof
22:51 Asphyxia: haha sure
22:53 Asphyxia: 00:55:773 (3,4) - even though this plays alright, it could be visually more appealing, e.g http://puu.sh/9JSHo/8beb12a9ff.jpg
22:53 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9JSIA/6a721867b1.jpg <-- Pic with 3-4 showing
22:56 Asphyxia: 01:12:052 (13,9,1) - Since the stream is quite curvy, it'd make sense to put curvy sliders too so you can make those straight sliders curvy; http://puu.sh/9JSWN/5d8ac5f64d.jpg and http://puu.sh/9JSXK/4f7df1893d.jpg
22:58 Asphyxia: 01:13:913 (1) - If you want to keep consistency, you can take the one repeat off from this and add note to the stanza but variety is also fine so do whatever fits better
23:02 Aleks719: 00:55 - fixed somehow
23:03 Aleks719: about curved 1/4 sliders
23:03 Aleks719: i think it doesn't affect cuz of short length
23:03 Asphyxia: kk
23:04 Aleks719: but i don't like how short curved sliders look
23:04 Asphyxia: 01:16:238 (4,1) - Switch NC's?
23:05 Aleks719: lol, switched 15mins before your mod
23:05 Asphyxia: lmao
23:05 Aleks719: pattern starts from 1
23:05 Aleks719: but i agree, strong sound goes from prev note
23:06 Aleks719: it's like puting nc here too: 01:23:680 (7) -
23:07 Asphyxia: :3
23:07 Aleks719: so, you prefer to see nc's on prev notes mentioned above?
23:08 Asphyxia: yes most definently
23:08 Aleks719: ok, done
23:10 Asphyxia: 03:10:889 (2) - somehow the claps on this slider sound off
23:10 Asphyxia: maybe it's just me?
23:11 Aleks719: idk, imo they fit, but can remove
23:11 Aleks719: don't hear so much difference
23:11 Asphyxia: if you wanna, leave them as they are
23:13 Asphyxia: 03:46:936 (3) - Hmm, I think maybe something ''softer'' would fit better here, well here's an example what I mean; http://puu.sh/9JUwz/e7c52f93e4.jpg
23:14 Asphyxia: but the current ones are cool too so, feel free to keep them if you prefer those
23:14 Aleks719: gosh i don't see difference
23:14 Aleks719: i see you habr one more point
23:14 Aleks719: *have
23:14 Aleks719: but they look same for me D:
23:16 Asphyxia: but overall I would prefer to see a slider like this http://puu.sh/9JULV/6ad133a54d.jpg / http://puu.sh/9JUOh/39d7330010.jpg&#39;
23:16 Asphyxia: only problem that it might give is that these look imho more appealing but yours fit better with 03:46:471 (2) -
23:16 Asphyxia: so there's that
23:18 Aleks719: i like shape of 2nd one
23:19 Aleks719: but imo used already shape is good
23:19 Aleks719: since 3 goes farer with stream
23:19 Aleks719: *4
23:20 Asphyxia: 04:26:238 (2) - Listen this part with 25%, there isn't a beat in the red tick, the actual beat or sound is on the blue tick (04:26:354 - ) so move your note (2) there and stack it with 3?
23:20 Asphyxia: like
23:20 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9JVcn/20a350dbb4.jpg
23:20 Asphyxia: this
23:20 Asphyxia: well i guess there's a small, small sound on the red tick, but it seems more reasonable to move it to the blue tick
23:21 Aleks719: agree
23:21 Aleks719: let's see how to change..
23:21 Asphyxia: i gave you an example ok
23:22 Aleks719: yes i saw
23:23 Asphyxia: 04:54:378 (2) - Try to adjust the curve a bit, as you can see it doesn't fit with 04:53:913 (1) - nor 04:55:075 (4) - so making it more similar would help
23:24 Aleks719: nah, let's leave stack.
23:25 Aleks719: i'll better change shape of 4 then o/
23:25 Asphyxia: sure
23:26 Asphyxia: 05:38:564 (1) - Can you move this more to the left so it wouldn't overlap with 05:39:494 (2) - ? Kinda annoying xD
23:26 Aleks719: <<
23:26 Aleks719: http://puu.sh/72Fc
23:27 Asphyxia: ;_;;;,,,:.--;;.m
23:28 Asphyxia: 06:43:215 (10) - Honestly, I'd shorten this up with 1/4 and then add a note to the stanza, I think that'd make it play more epic
23:28 Asphyxia: and give it a better effect too before the break
23:28 Aleks719: 1/4?
23:28 Aleks719: in 1/3 part?
23:28 Aleks719: ВЖ
23:28 Aleks719: D:*
23:29 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9JW3U/00b3de5238.jpg e le plaza
23:30 Aleks719: end of slider sounds out of music :<
23:30 Asphyxia: rip then
23:31 Asphyxia: 06:55:773 (3) - Is there a way you could like, make this slider a bit more clear in the bump area because that actually surprised me
23:31 Aleks719: let's see..
23:32 Asphyxia: you could do a slider like this; http://puu.sh/9JWjn/e8846c48c0.jpg
23:32 Aleks719: i'd like to leave it vertical
23:32 Aleks719: let's see what can i do here
23:34 Aleks719: kay i failed
23:34 Asphyxia: 07:58:099 (5) - NC here?
23:34 Aleks719: let's do it horizontal
23:34 Asphyxia: 07:28:331 (1) - you did it here too so i don't see why not
23:34 Aleks719: okay
23:37 Asphyxia: 09:46:006 (3,1) - overlap? pls no
23:37 Asphyxia: 09:45:773 (2) - move this to x:382 y:96 and then 09:46:006 (3) - to x:432 y:80
23:37 Asphyxia: that would fix it and then the spacing wouldn't look too bad
23:37 Asphyxia: or maybe you wanna center 2 a bit though
23:39 Aleks719: moved 3
23:39 Asphyxia: 09:53:447 (5) - NC 10:38:099 (4) - NC?
23:39 Asphyxia: 01:31:122 (10) - ^
23:39 Asphyxia: 01:49:726 (3) - ?
23:41 Aleks719: can say "maybe yes" only for last one
23:42 Asphyxia: well, you can decide
23:42 Asphyxia: let me know when updated so i can shoot the first bubble~
23:44 Aleks719: :O
23:44 Aleks719: let me check stuff
23:52 Asphyxia: and yes
23:52 Asphyxia: you keep ar8
23:52 Asphyxia: since ar8 lets you dt this
23:52 Asphyxia: and trust me, dt is so fun
23:52 Aleks719: okie
23:53 Aleks719: ar9 in 2012 was my mistake
00:02 Aleks719: updated (ovo)7
00:05 Asphyxia: kk well i checked your changes and yeah
00:05 Asphyxia: i think it looks p good now
00:06 Aleks719: yay!
00:06 Asphyxia: kk let's hope i wont miss anything now o3o
00:07 Aleks719: you couldn't!

Bubble #1 ~
Aurele
Bubble #2 ---



I can't q.q
Secretpipe

Gabe wrote:

Bubble #2 ---



I can't q.q

you wish
Topic Starter
Aleks719
;__;
p3n
Hoo! (ovo)


[Marathon]
01:41:587 (7) - shorten to end on blue tick to match the song
01:43:099 - add note to match the song and keep your melody follow up for this combo
01:47:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - "silent" stream makes me furious. Why don't you keep the drum sampleset or use soft with drum finish at slightly reduced volume?
02:02:285 (4) - drum whistle seems odd here. Could be just me but personally I'd stick to the soft whistle on this note as well from the previous pattern
02:17:866 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - ♥
02:38:099 (1,2,3) - maybe increase distance to 1,20x to make it somewhat consistent with the previous patterns - same for 02:38:680 (4,5) -
02:49:726 (3) - forgot to add the whistle here
03:28:680 - maybe consider adding a note here to reflect the feint triplet in the baseline - would be fine to leave it as is as well, just feels a bit more dynamic for me with the triplet
04:28:215 - missed a note here? Feels much better with the triplet: http://puu.sh/9TTUm/7252db49c7.jpg
09:12:750 (1) - shouldn't this slider end on the following 1/6 to match the song? http://puu.sh/9TYjT/4974d38dff.jpg
09:19:959 (1) - maybe start the spinner with the pulse on the red tick (previous or next...anything would work) to make it fit in. Either way it is just a spinner so the starting point after the break is not THAT important.
09:48:796 (1,2,3,4) - reverse each slider individually to increase the flow of this part...seems like this was originally intended...why would you change this???



So far so good.


Also stop trolling 2nd bubbles, Gabe :o I could've accidentially approved this...imagine the shitstorm and the deep concern of the modding community! Madness!
Topic Starter
Aleks719

p3n wrote:

Hoo! (ovo) hoot hoot!


[Marathon]
01:41:587 (7) - shorten to end on blue tick to match the song okie, also had same suggestion before
01:43:099 - add note to match the song and keep your melody follow up for this combo alright
01:47:866 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - "silent" stream makes me furious. Why don't you keep the drum sampleset or use soft with drum finish at slightly reduced volume? mmm, drumset is done, 1/4 rhythm is not loud in music, so in map too
02:02:285 (4) - drum whistle seems odd here. Could be just me but personally I'd stick to the soft whistle on this note as well from the previous pattern
i tried it, but drum whistle fits better to the music imo. soft whistle are not loud enough for hearing it there...
02:17:866 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - (v♥)/
02:38:099 (1,2,3) - maybe increase distance to 1,20x to make it somewhat consistent with the previous patterns - same for 02:38:680 (4,5) - fixed spacing
02:49:726 (3) - forgot to add the whistle here yeah, agree
03:28:680 - maybe consider adding a note here to reflect the feint triplet in the baseline - would be fine to leave it as is as well, just feels a bit more dynamic for me with the triplet agree, new track needed more dynamic places
04:28:215 - missed a note here? Feels much better with the triplet: http://puu.sh/9TTUm/7252db49c7.jpg missed
09:12:750 (1) - shouldn't this slider end on the following 1/6 to match the song? http://puu.sh/9TYjT/4974d38dff.jpg nice catch, it should. idk why i thought it's blue
09:19:959 (1) - maybe start the spinner with the pulse on the red tick (previous or next...anything would work) to make it fit in. Either way it is just a spinner so the starting point after the break is not THAT important. moved 1/2 next for extending break as 2nd target. but i don't see much difference :D
09:48:796 (1,2,3,4) - reverse each slider individually to increase the flow of this part...seems like this was originally intended...why would you change this??? probably i was drunk. or mad. or both. changed, fixed pattern.



So far so good.


Also stop trolling 2nd bubbles, Gabe :o I could've accidentially approved this...imagine the shitstorm and the deep concern of the modding community! Madness!
Yay! i thought rhythm errors has been caught, but i was wrong. Thank you for modding!
p3n
Great map. Good job Owleks!

Bubble #2
Topic Starter
Aleks719
wooooow! thank youu! *v*
Secretpipe
Amazing ! 1 left !
Gogogo Aleks~
Topic Starter
Aleks719

GAMEINSTALLER wrote:

Only little

Marathon
00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
ehhh, you have just posted a copy of Lust's mod? for what? oO

Lust wrote:

Modding by request
Welcome back Aleks

Hopefully my mod won't be too much like Kodora's. (Like I can read it anyway LOL)

[Marathon]
  1. 00:19:494 (6,7) - Blanket can be improved. Use 6's approach circle to help you with this. Also if you change that slider remember to change 00:18:099 (4) - this one as well
  2. 00:24:145 (2) - Perhaps you can turn this in to a 1/1 slider to reflect the music better. You can have the slider shaped like 00:24:843 (3) - and have it blanket it. This will emphasize the vocals better
  3. 00:54:843 (1,2,3) - Nice use of anti-jumps! Works very well
  4. 01:49:261 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you with this
  5. 02:05:540 (3) - This slider shape looks a bit forced, maybe just make it a regular 3 point slider to make it look less cramped. You can still have that stack effect if you would like
  6. 02:34:959 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Cool pattern and flow, works very well with the music and plays nicely!
  7. 02:36:819 (3) - Slider is a bit too short to pull of something like this, maybe just make it straight or something like that
  8. 02:41:238 (6) - Maybe have a 1/4 slider here to accent the sound going on here better
  9. 03:14:843 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 03:14:843 (3) - 's approach circle to assist you in this, also if you fix this make sure you fix 03:16:238 (2) - 's shape as well
  10. 03:30:192 (1) - The current hitsound here doesn't sit right with me. Maybe make it a normal sampleset, with a soft whistle addition?
  11. 04:24:145 (1) - Add a whistle?
  12. 04:33:447 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
  13. 04:52:982 (5) - Eh to maintain consistency with the rest of this section might as well not make this a bezier
  14. 05:23:680 (1) - Why not try to make this a stream instead? Would provide for a cool and climaxing end to this kiai section
  15. 06:33:447 (2,4) - This overlap seems a bit messy, maybe try to incorporate the overlap in to your pattern or avoid it
  16. 07:22:982 (2) - LONG LIVE THE MOUSTACHE SLIDER!
  17. 07:39:494 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to help you out with this.
  18. 07:52:982 (2) - Maybe invert the curve here so that it fits better with 07:52:517 (1) -
  19. 08:10:889 (5,1) - Have 1 fit to 5's slider shape for a cleaner looking pattern
  20. 08:30:657 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
  21. 08:57:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The curve on this stream is a bit extreme here and kind of hard to read/play, maybe space it out or elongate it a bit?
And thats it! Very clean map and most of my suggestions were basically nitpicking. Get this ranked quick before 2014 is over!
GAMEINSTALLER
Nice song,nice hitsound,do it right and your beatmap will be rank

God bless that your beatmap will approve soon
Sonnyc
I thought I've played this before, but this was a 2013 lol

Good luck!
Lust
He was impressed by my superior mod quality, so impressed in fact that he thought it must be replicated.

/me runs

Anyway, eagerly awaiting the flame on this :3
Reiji-RJ
DETECTIVE RAGE IS COMING FOR HELP
Maybe he ctrl+c Lust mod for some purpose, then wrote his own mod in txt document, copied again his mod and failed, so when he ctrl+v in thread he posted Lust's mod (and didn't notice).







And yes, approve, please.
Akiyama Mizuki
please
approve this
quiz-chan_DELETED
DAAAMN aleks I told you to call me when you had finished the map :(

Just checking for visual errors now, because this is bubbled and that means I will most likely not find blatant issues.
edit: apart from occasional NC issues and minor things, this is good to go!

full speed ahead~

Leader
IRC
20:18 Leader: ovo
20:18 *Leader is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/389398 Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes [Marathon]]
20:18 Aleks719: (ov=)/
20:18 Aleks719: yes?
20:18 Leader: just a couple things
20:19 Leader: before teh rank
20:19 Aleks719: :O
20:19 Aleks719: ofc, let's see!
20:21 Leader: 04:54:378 (2,4) - two similar sliders like that are not the best idea so I'd go for something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1797196 this]
20:22 Leader: well, I've noted them somewhere but seems like I lost the .txt
20:22 Leader: that wasn't nothing relevant so let me do just a little check
20:24 Aleks719: i'm okay with changing shapes, so i can turn it into straight slider~
20:27 Leader: 03:17:633 (4,5) - What about CTRL+G? would feel nice imo
20:28 Leader: 04:02:285 (6,7) - This kinda breaks the general flow, I'd add a note between them at least ;_;
20:33 Leader: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - shouldn't be reversed? if you want to manual stack this triplet..
20:36 Aleks719: yes for 03:17
20:37 Leader: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1797239 also, personal opinion about this slider] ovo
20:37 Aleks719: 04:02:285 (6,7) - added 1/2 slider, need to see your opinion later
20:39 Aleks719: 07:46:238 (1,2,3) - okay, reversed

Awesome map, here you have my first flame!
Topic Starter
Aleks719
ffffffflaaaaaaaaameeeee! thank you!
Asphyxia
Graz Aleks! This is awesome ;)
Mao
Awesome! Gratz :3
Myxo
Congratz ^-^
[ Mephisto ]
Awesome!
Lally
Gratz :3
Aurele
Yaaaaaay~
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