thank you for helping me improve my diff!!!DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi, returning the favor :3 congratz for being a BAT! xD
Take in mind everything here are suggestions so feel free to reject if they don't fit your style. (Unless I put a mark).
[Oracle's Normal]
00:02:325 (4) - Remove NC, this combo is too short in comparison with the other ones.
00:09:182 (1) - ^
00:14:753 (1,2) - I'd suggest to remove this notes to give the players some time to recover from the spinner. You could only remove (1), but that'd play very awkward, so if you remove something, remove the two. I removed 1 to increase the recovering time for players since removing 2 is rather useless because the gap between 00:12:825 (1,1) - is still small
00:21:825 (2) - Maybe remove this note.
00:26:325 (4) - Move this around x:148 y:72 to make the curve smooth and better looking, remember to fix spacing if you do this.
00:31:253 (5,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, it may be a bit misleading for players.I think it's okay as is... We still have an easier diff here. So i would like to introduce various patterns for this diff >_<
00:32:968 (3,4) - ^^
00:38:111 (5,1) - ^^
00:39:825 (3,4) - ^^
00:46:896 (3,4) - Maybe use this rhythm, this way you'll keep following the drums as you did for the two previous sliders.Agreed while i think the here is ralatively the strongest track here. That's the reason i change the track i'm following.
00:55:468 (1,2) - This sliders looks a bit messed up as how they direct the flow, how about doing something like this?brilliant idea!!
01:06:396 (2,3) - Maybe unstack this, as I've said before.allow me to keep this ;w;
01:23:111 (1) - Make this spinner end in 01:26:325, it'd fit better with vocals and players won't be confused after all these spinners.
That'd be all from my part here, good luck \o/
not mentioned=fixed!
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