Hi, returning the favor :3
Take in mind everything here are suggestions so feel free to reject if they don't fit your style. (Unless I put a mark).
[General]
Disable Widescreen Support in all difficulties as you don't have a SB.
Artist: kanon*kanon kanon x kanon
Title: Calendula Requiem (TV Size) Calendula Requiem -Shiki TV size- (カレンデュラ レクイエム-屍鬼 TV size-)
Source: http://vgmdb.net/album/22235
[EmingK's Easy]
I'd suggest you to use slidertick 2 to be consistent with all difficulties
00:02:325 (4) - You forgot to put a whistle in the beginning.
00:05:753 (3) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here to keep following the vocals.
01:14:325 (3,4) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here so you follow the hold in vocals nicely.
01:22:896 (1,2) - Put the slider first here and then the circle, it'd fit better with the hold in vocals.
I'd also want to suggest to remove a few notes too, to have a few time of recovery for newbies
00:31:039 (5) -
00:37:896 (5) -
00:44:753 (5) -
00:51:611 (3) -
00:58:468 (5) -
01:05:325 (4) -
01:08:753 (4) -
01:15:611 (5) -
[Oracle's Normal]
00:02:325 (4) - Remove NC, this combo is too short in comparison with the other ones.
00:09:182 (1) - ^
00:14:753 (1,2) - I'd suggest to remove this notes to give the players some time to recover from the spinner. You could only remove (1), but that'd play very awkward, so if you remove something, remove the two.
00:21:825 (2) - Maybe remove this note.
00:26:325 (4) - Move this around x:148 y:72 to make the curve smooth and better looking, remember to fix spacing if you do this.
00:31:253 (5,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, it may be a bit misleading for players.
00:32:968 (3,4) - ^
00:38:111 (5,1) - ^
00:39:825 (3,4) - ^
00:46:896 (3,4) - Maybe use this rhythm, this way you'll keep following the drums as you did for the two previous sliders.
00:55:468 (1,2) - This sliders looks a bit messed up as how they direct the flow, how about doing something like this?
01:06:396 (2,3) - Maybe unstack this, as I've said before.
01:23:111 (1) - Make this spinner end in 01:26:325, it'd fit better with vocals and players won't be confused after all these spinners.
[Hard]
00:13:468 (3) - Ctrl+G here, it'd create a nice circular motion.
00:14:325 (1) - Maybe end the spinner in 00:17:325 and add a note in 00:17:753, it'd feel nicer to play imo.
00:20:325 (7) - This touches a bit the HP bar, move it just a bit down.
00:28:468 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:30:182 (4,5) - ^
00:33:611 (4,5,6) - Something similar
00:35:325 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:37:039 (4,5) - ^
00:38:753 (4,5) - Hey, you did it here, you can tell the difference right?
00:46:896 (1) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song.
00:56:753 (6) - ^
00:57:182 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:59:753 (6,7) - ^
01:05:753 (3,4) - ^
01:10:468 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song.
01:10:896 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
01:21:182 (3,1,1) - These 1/4 spacings are a bit harsh for a Hard imo, you should move it closer or remove one repeat to each slider. Also, make this in a single combo along with 01:22:468 (1).
01:27:825 (1) - A circle would emphasize better the end
[Insane]
00:27:182 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd match nicely the music.
00:44:968 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Well, I know this is an Insane, but this one is really goes over the board, so better toning down this part and decrease the jumps.
00:48:396 (4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing here, this somehow breaks with your jumpy pattern before.
01:06:182 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G to not make the 1/4 jump too harsh.
01:08:753 (3) - Using circles instead would play nicely to introduce the next kiai
01:21:182 (2) - Use a 1/2 slider here and add a note in 01:21:503.
01:26:646 (3) - Remove this note, the stream in the music begins in 01:26:753.
[wkyik's Extra]
Even if isn't the style of maps I like, I should congratulate you because this difficulty is very consistent about spacing and use of jumps, making it nice to play, good job here.
I have a few spots to complain tho:
00:18:396 (3,4,5,6) - I'd be nicely to make this consistent about spacing, like in other parts, not a must tho.
00:26:111 (9,10,1) - I'd suggest you to make this triple consistent in spacing, it'd look better imo.
00:45:611 (1) - 00:46:468 (1) - This would still fit as 1/2 sliders, they'd match better the music and keep the sped up feeling.
That'd be all from my part here, good luck \o/
Take in mind everything here are suggestions so feel free to reject if they don't fit your style. (Unless I put a mark).
[General]
Disable Widescreen Support in all difficulties as you don't have a SB.
Artist: kanon*kanon kanon x kanon
Title: Calendula Requiem (TV Size) Calendula Requiem -Shiki TV size- (カレンデュラ レクイエム-屍鬼 TV size-)
Source: http://vgmdb.net/album/22235
[EmingK's Easy]
I'd suggest you to use slidertick 2 to be consistent with all difficulties
00:02:325 (4) - You forgot to put a whistle in the beginning.
00:05:753 (3) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here to keep following the vocals.
01:14:325 (3,4) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here so you follow the hold in vocals nicely.
01:22:896 (1,2) - Put the slider first here and then the circle, it'd fit better with the hold in vocals.
I'd also want to suggest to remove a few notes too, to have a few time of recovery for newbies
00:31:039 (5) -
00:37:896 (5) -
00:44:753 (5) -
00:51:611 (3) -
00:58:468 (5) -
01:05:325 (4) -
01:08:753 (4) -
01:15:611 (5) -
[Oracle's Normal]
00:02:325 (4) - Remove NC, this combo is too short in comparison with the other ones.
00:09:182 (1) - ^
00:14:753 (1,2) - I'd suggest to remove this notes to give the players some time to recover from the spinner. You could only remove (1), but that'd play very awkward, so if you remove something, remove the two.
00:21:825 (2) - Maybe remove this note.
00:26:325 (4) - Move this around x:148 y:72 to make the curve smooth and better looking, remember to fix spacing if you do this.
00:31:253 (5,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, it may be a bit misleading for players.
00:32:968 (3,4) - ^
00:38:111 (5,1) - ^
00:39:825 (3,4) - ^
00:46:896 (3,4) - Maybe use this rhythm, this way you'll keep following the drums as you did for the two previous sliders.
00:55:468 (1,2) - This sliders looks a bit messed up as how they direct the flow, how about doing something like this?
01:06:396 (2,3) - Maybe unstack this, as I've said before.
01:23:111 (1) - Make this spinner end in 01:26:325, it'd fit better with vocals and players won't be confused after all these spinners.
[Hard]
00:13:468 (3) - Ctrl+G here, it'd create a nice circular motion.
00:14:325 (1) - Maybe end the spinner in 00:17:325 and add a note in 00:17:753, it'd feel nicer to play imo.
00:20:325 (7) - This touches a bit the HP bar, move it just a bit down.
00:28:468 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:30:182 (4,5) - ^
00:33:611 (4,5,6) - Something similar
00:35:325 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:37:039 (4,5) - ^
00:38:753 (4,5) - Hey, you did it here, you can tell the difference right?
00:46:896 (1) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song.
00:56:753 (6) - ^
00:57:182 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:59:753 (6,7) - ^
01:05:753 (3,4) - ^
01:10:468 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song.
01:10:896 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
01:21:182 (3,1,1) - These 1/4 spacings are a bit harsh for a Hard imo, you should move it closer or remove one repeat to each slider. Also, make this in a single combo along with 01:22:468 (1).
01:27:825 (1) - A circle would emphasize better the end
[Insane]
00:27:182 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd match nicely the music.
00:44:968 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Well, I know this is an Insane, but this one is really goes over the board, so better toning down this part and decrease the jumps.
00:48:396 (4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing here, this somehow breaks with your jumpy pattern before.
01:06:182 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G to not make the 1/4 jump too harsh.
01:08:753 (3) - Using circles instead would play nicely to introduce the next kiai
01:21:182 (2) - Use a 1/2 slider here and add a note in 01:21:503.
01:26:646 (3) - Remove this note, the stream in the music begins in 01:26:753.
[wkyik's Extra]
Even if isn't the style of maps I like, I should congratulate you because this difficulty is very consistent about spacing and use of jumps, making it nice to play, good job here.
I have a few spots to complain tho:
00:18:396 (3,4,5,6) - I'd be nicely to make this consistent about spacing, like in other parts, not a must tho.
00:26:111 (9,10,1) - I'd suggest you to make this triple consistent in spacing, it'd look better imo.
00:45:611 (1) - 00:46:468 (1) - This would still fit as 1/2 sliders, they'd match better the music and keep the sped up feeling.
That'd be all from my part here, good luck \o/