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blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2014-03-24T04:01:44+00:00

IRC mod of Hard, Insane, and partially Extra

20:13 *blissfulyoshi is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386616 kanon*kanon - Calendula Requiem (TV Size) [Hard]]
20:15 blissfulyoshi: not bad
20:15 blissfulyoshi: some of the overlaps need fixing
20:15 smallboat:

20:15 blissfulyoshi: but will point those out later
20:15 smallboat: okay
20:17 blissfulyoshi: gah, your short combos in the end really screw up teh hp drain
20:17 blissfulyoshi: since hp drain is dependent on how many combos you have
20:17 smallboat: lol really?
20:17 smallboat: so hp-1?
20:17 blissfulyoshi: did you see how low my hp was in the beginning of th song
20:18 blissfulyoshi: I would either fix the combos
20:18 blissfulyoshi: or lower drain by 1-2
20:18 smallboat: okay
20:18 blissfulyoshi: and srsly, that was way harder than hard
20:18 smallboat: okay I "ll fix it
20:18 blissfulyoshi: you need something to bridge it
20:18 blissfulyoshi: besides that, the diff wasn't bad
20:18 blissfulyoshi: lets do extra and then review
20:18 smallboat: understand
20:18 smallboat: okay
20:20 blissfulyoshi: oh my
20:20 smallboat: lol
20:20 smallboat: need improve it ?
20:20 blissfulyoshi: going from 0.75 to 1.5
20:20 blissfulyoshi: is just stupid
20:21 smallboat: SV?
20:21 blissfulyoshi: the song does not suggest double teh slider speed
20:21 blissfulyoshi: bpm multiplier
20:21 smallboat: okay
20:21 blissfulyoshi: 1-> 1.2x is usually enough to tell a song is going faster
20:21 blissfulyoshi: not 0.75-> 1.5-> 1.8x
20:21 blissfulyoshi: completely unexpected
20:22 smallboat: yes I usually use 1.2 or 1.3
20:22 blissfulyoshi: if wkyik wants to map at 1.5, map the rest at 1.2 or 1.3
20:22 smallboat: okay I"ll tell him
20:23 blissfulyoshi: okay, played just the chorus by itself
20:23 blissfulyoshi: it is really not that hard
20:23 blissfulyoshi: it is jsut really unexpected
20:23 smallboat: perhap reduce the SV in kiai?
20:23 smallboat: okay
20:24 smallboat: indeed his kiai time a bit quick...1.8 sv
20:24 blissfulyoshi: as long as the transition is within 0.3x of the last one
20:24 blissfulyoshi: 30% of the last one*
20:25 blissfulyoshi: I'll be okay with it
20:25 blissfulyoshi: if more than that, pls give me a good reason
20:25 smallboat: okay I"ll tell him
20:26 blissfulyoshi: `oh yeah, I said I'll review the diffs
20:26 blissfulyoshi: 00:01:039 (2,3) - personally I don't think this overlap works that well
20:26 blissfulyoshi: usually when you see ppl do it
20:26 smallboat: hard?
20:26 blissfulyoshi: they have both curves lead toward teh same point
20:26 blissfulyoshi: yeah hard
20:26 blissfulyoshi: sry
20:27 smallboat: okay then i keep DS don"t overlap
20:27 blissfulyoshi: okay
20:27 blissfulyoshi: works for me
20:28 blissfulyoshi: 01:05:753 (3,5) - don't like how these 2 overlap
20:28 blissfulyoshi: msotly because ytou can still see 3 a bit as you do 5
20:28 blissfulyoshi: which is slightly annoying
20:29 blissfulyoshi: 01:09:182 (3,5) - ^
20:29 blissfulyoshi: same case tehre
20:29 smallboat: okay,I"ll consider it
20:29 blissfulyoshi: 01:15:610 (5,3) - more overlaps xD
20:30 blissfulyoshi: as I said before, I don't have much to complain about in ahrd
20:30 blissfulyoshi: so lets move on
20:30 blissfulyoshi: xD
20:30 smallboat: nevermind :>>
20:30 smallboat: xd
20:30 smallboat: xD
20:30 blissfulyoshi: okay besides the fact that insane is way harder than hard
20:31 smallboat: okay
20:31 smallboat: I feel my ins have many problems
20:31 blissfulyoshi: tbh, it is not that bad
20:32 blissfulyoshi: just not great
20:32 blissfulyoshi: xD
20:32 smallboat: maybe my ins diff is sent score (?
20:32 smallboat: XD
20:32 smallboat: easy play
20:32 smallboat: orz
20:32 blissfulyoshi: 00:13:361 (3) - itwould probably look better if directly on top of 2
20:32 blissfulyoshi: or to the right of 2
20:32 blissfulyoshi: not somewhere in between
20:33 blissfulyoshi: since 2 is not acting like it is part of the curve righ tnow
20:33 smallboat: okay will fix
20:33 blissfulyoshi: 00:17:539 (9,10,1) - probably will look best if they all form a single curve
20:33 blissfulyoshi: so either change 1's curve
20:33 blissfulyoshi: or reposition 1
20:34 smallboat: okay will move a bit

20:35 blissfulyoshi: 00:28:039 (1) - I feel a lot of these streams should be jumped to
20:35 blissfulyoshi: so make this further from teh next note
20:35 blissfulyoshi: 00:30:503 (6) - ^
20:35 blissfulyoshi: tell me what you think about that
20:35 smallboat: make a jump?
20:35 blissfulyoshi: yeah
20:35 blissfulyoshi: small one
20:35 smallboat: feel the vocal can make jump
20:35 blissfulyoshi: but yeah, a jump
20:36 smallboat: can"t too far ? (5 to 6)
20:36 blissfulyoshi: oh yeah
20:36 blissfulyoshi: let me playtest that one again
20:37 smallboat: okay
20:37 blissfulyoshi: yeah, make it a little futhre
20:37 blissfulyoshi: but not too far
20:37 smallboat: Then I"ll move close it
20:37 smallboat: okay
20:37 blissfulyoshi: didn't even realize it was a blue tick difference when playing
20:37 blissfulyoshi: xD
20:37 smallboat: XD
20:39 blissfulyoshi: your chorus is a bit wierd
20:39 blissfulyoshi: becasue you have a lot of compresssed streams combined with jumps
20:39 smallboat: really?
20:39 smallboat: yes
20:39 blissfulyoshi: 00:57:932 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -
20:39 blissfulyoshi: that for example
20:40 blissfulyoshi: you go slow through the stream
20:40 smallboat: so suggest change the rhythm?
20:40 smallboat: yes
20:40 blissfulyoshi: then you go fast to the next note
20:40 blissfulyoshi: so hmmmm
20:40 blissfulyoshi: lets see for that one
20:40 blissfulyoshi: lets try make 4 a small jump
20:40 smallboat: okay
20:40 blissfulyoshi: like in the verse
20:40 blissfulyoshi: and then make 7 a quarter long slider
20:41 smallboat: okay I"ll try it
20:41 blissfulyoshi: 01:05:111 (6,7,1) - this is probably the worse pattern in the chorus
20:41 blissfulyoshi: you go slowly upward
20:41 blissfulyoshi: and then you are forced to jump in the opposite direction
20:42 smallboat: indeed
20:42 smallboat: Then I"ll change place here
20:42 blissfulyoshi: try something a bit more intiuitve
20:42 smallboat: okay
20:43 blissfulyoshi: 01:13:039 (5,6,7,8,9) - jump sizes seem to vary a lot
20:43 blissfulyoshi: you go from crazy quarter note jumps
20:43 blissfulyoshi: to erally small quarter note jumps
20:43 smallboat: really?
20:44 blissfulyoshi: try it
20:44 smallboat: okay
20:44 blissfulyoshi: 01:05:539 (1) - play your map from here onward
20:44 blissfulyoshi: and tell me what you think
20:44 smallboat: well..
20:44 smallboat: because the vocal is up here?
20:45 blissfulyoshi: yes.....
20:45 blissfulyoshi: but the jumps don't have to be that small
20:45 blissfulyoshi: 01:15:825 (1) - and yay combo spam
20:45 smallboat: XD
20:45 smallboat: okay
20:45 blissfulyoshi: 01:17:753 (1) - more combos
20:45 blissfulyoshi: this is what is screwing up the drain
20:46 smallboat: easy fail?
20:46 blissfulyoshi: easier
20:46 blissfulyoshi: 01:21:396 (1) - don't really like stopping in the middle of jumps/streams
20:46 smallboat: okay orz
20:46 blissfulyoshi: that part is actually pretty annoying
20:47 blissfulyoshi: since you need to go from stream to jumps
20:47 smallboat: indeed
20:47 smallboat: then I replace this part here
20:47 smallboat: okay
20:47 blissfulyoshi: okay
20:47 blissfulyoshi: that is all for insane
20:47 blissfulyoshi: for now anyway
20:47 blissfulyoshi: xD
20:47 smallboat: XD
20:49 smallboat: so this map quality is normal, not bad ?
20:50 blissfulyoshi: yep
20:51 smallboat: except Extra diff)
20:51 smallboat: lol
20:51 blissfulyoshi: lol
20:51 blissfulyoshi: yeah
20:51 blissfulyoshi: was going to say that
20:51 smallboat: okay
20:53 blissfulyoshi: I guess besides that, best of luck
20:55 smallboat: lol?
20:57 smallboat: btw,thanks Bliss suggestion ~ !

20:58 blissfulyoshi: yw
20:58 smallboat:

20:59 smallboat: maybe you can post IRC?
20:59 blissfulyoshi: sure if you want

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-03-25T05:36:22+00:00

lkx_Shore

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Insane]
你的finish我觉得选得很怪，还不如直接用默认的soft-finish 再考慮 thx
00:10:682 (6,1) - flow有点牵强的感觉移動了一點
00:17:539 (9,10,1) - 这三个whistle加进去以后显得不是很自然，remove然后给00:17:753 (1) - 的头加个默认soft的finish whistle去除了，但finish是用S:C1的自定義finish，不太喜歡太響的soft finish
00:21:182 (1) - 头加默认的soft-finish 同上
00:22:039 (4,5,1) - 白线3whistle还是算了...真的不自然的確
00:23:647 (6) - add whistle 好
00:26:325 (3) - 默认的soft-finish 同上理由也使用S:C1
00:47:218 (2) - 这个换成1/2滑条然后在00:47:539 - 加note 好

不想吐槽了...音效选得莫名排版也莫名节奏也莫名看來人聲部分別加音效好了..我把whistle有些remove...排版我還會微調一下

[Hard]
00:31:468 (3) - 换1/2滑条好
00:38:325 (3) - ^ ^
00:50:325 (3,4) - 好好跟人声好

謝謝拉克修 ~ !

liangv587

liangv587 wrote:
hi~ I have come to fight the soy sauce.LOL

[Hard]

00:01:468 (3) - CTRL+G，00:02:325 (1) - CTRL+G 不了，現在覺得這樣比較好
00:26:111 (1,2,3) - 移到156，168 雖然可以，但我想良心點就不變了
00:40:682 (2) - hard不要下串，可以换成转盘這樣轉盤太短了不換
00:56:111 (3) - CTRL+G 這個能接受
01:21:075 (2,3,1,1) - 折返一次就够了這個先納入考慮，如果後面再有2人說要換我就換。

很明显的就这些，感觉问题还很多，但是不能指明方向，还是太弱，~~纯属骗kd~~ 還會改進
小船君还需要积累好

謝謝 liangv587 ~ !

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2014-03-27T16:04:53+00:00

新手mod，有不周到的请见谅。

[EmingK's Easy]
00:30:182 (4) - 虽然听起来感觉没什么问题，但是第一次玩的时候略显奇怪。

00:37:039 (4) - ^

00:46:896 (3) - Tail加上whistle?

Overall - Almost Fine. 只不过个人觉得音效略空了点（个人觉得soft-normal太软了，节奏感太弱）。可以用Soft-whistle适当点缀一下。

[Oracle's Normal]
00:09:182 (1) - 把每个节奏点(slidertick)都按到锚点（白点或者是红点）上吧。或者是直接把最后一个白点点红。这个样子不甚美观，也没有很体现出节奏。

01:21:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1,2,3和3,4,5还是在一条直线上好一些？这个形状不懂。

Overall - 你不觉得声音很小吗？到高潮基本上就听不到音效了……Kiai也没加，汗|||
除此之外，AiMod里面的那些距离控制适当注意一下。你在高潮部分的1/2拍的间距反而比开始部分更短了？！略不懂用意。在Normal当中，间距尽量还是不变，变小什么的还是不要吧。

[Hard]
00:03:182 (3) - 你是想把它和00:01:468 (3)的tail对齐么？还差了点位置。

00:11:325 (2,3,4,5) - 所以直线是？这里的节奏不适合。

00:40:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个距离在Hard当中大丈夫？就算BPM只有140也略凶。还有，这个地方背景音乐的音效有特点，你也可以用一些奇葩的音效来托出效果。

00:47:539 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

01:20:968 (1,2,3) - 噗。1.29x+1.19x，这距离挺High。仅为吐槽，可不改。

01:27:182 (2) - NC?

01:27:825 (1) - 为什么用滑条？要我就直接略跳，点一个单点。毕竟后面没音了。（不同于Insane，Ins的SV较高，那种Finish音效拖出来的感觉有，但是Hard这种SV我只觉得拖沓）

Overall - 同Easy的感觉。音效略空，软绵绵的，可以考虑略加点whistle之类的音效来修饰。

[Insane]

时间也晚了，我自己本身mod技术也不佳，打也较苦手，估计后面的diff也没什么能帮忙的。只是我觉得这个diff的连打跳略莫名，完全没有任何预期和节奏变化，打得挺憋屈的。

[wkyik's Extra]

吓CRY！！Kawaiwkyik果然又是一个Extra……BPM140神马的完全不是障碍。打不动。Sorry。

同时新手图求mod：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/194540， thx.

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2014-03-28T02:06:48+00:00

对不起最近有点没空所以迟了 >_<

[wkyik's Extra]

....pro D:

[Insane]
HP 会不会太高了点? 前面打错一个note差点要死
感觉图note一直转圆圈...

00:30:825 (9) - 不如 CTRL+J 吧?

[Hard]

00:13:468 (3) - CTRL+G? 可能比较flow

对不起感觉图还好真心mod不出什么...
射个星好了...加油rank!

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-03-28T03:28:26+00:00

bear961023 wrote:
[EmingK's Easy]
00:30:182 (4) - 虽然听起来感觉没什么问题，但是第一次玩的时候略显奇怪。好前面也有人提改卡节拍了

00:37:039 (4) - ^ ^

00:46:896 (3) - Tail加上whistle? 猴

Overall - Almost Fine. 只不过个人觉得音效略空了点（个人觉得soft-normal太软了，节奏感太弱）。可以用Soft-whistle适当点缀一下。现在的whistle还不适合，打爆小船让他找音效去

感谢mod!

Mintong haven't wrote:
[EmingK's Easy]

捅米桶

P.S. ~~update坏掉了所以等修复了我再把diff更上来~~没救了，diff已私下传完，一圈打包蠢屁屁

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-03-28T09:13:16+00:00

bear961023

bear961023 wrote:
新手mod，有不周到的请见谅。

[Hard]
00:03:182 (3) - 你是想把它和00:01:468 (3)的tail对齐么？还差了点位置。移動了點

00:11:325 (2,3,4,5) - 所以直线是？这里的节奏不适合。好，改了一點蛇行

00:40:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个距离在Hard当中大丈夫？就算BPM只有140也略凶。还有，这个地方背景音乐的音效有特点，你也可以用一些奇葩的音效来托出效果。點與點之間的距離還好，不過我把00:41:753 (1) 拉近了，至於音效還會再考慮

00:47:539 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 同理，然後有fix。

01:20:968 (1,2,3) - 噗。1.29x+1.19x，这距离挺High。仅为吐槽，可不改。間距檢查很仔細，結果我還是改了w

01:27:182 (2) - NC? 好

01:27:825 (1) - 为什么用滑条？要我就直接略跳，点一个单点。毕竟后面没音了。（不同于Insane，Ins的SV较高，那种Finish音效拖出来的感觉有，但是Hard这种SV我只觉得拖沓）說這樣也沒錯，不過如果這樣跟ins差個1s了，個人是想自己diff Total Time保持相同

Overall - 同Easy的感觉。音效略空，软绵绵的，可以考虑略加点whistle之类的音效来修饰。之前人聲是有加whistle被噴很慘，那麼既然這樣說我再考慮看看

[Insane]

时间也晚了，我自己本身mod技术也不佳，打也较苦手，估计后面的diff也没什么能帮忙的。只是我觉得这个diff的连打跳略莫名，完全没有任何预期和节奏变化，打得挺憋屈的。謝謝你的建議，那麼我會稍微微調一下，但連打應該是不會變，音為是跟vocal。

[wkyik's Extra]

吓CRY！！Kawaiwkyik果然又是一个Extra……BPM140神马的完全不是障碍。打不动。Sorry。

同时新手图求mod：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/194540， thx. 好

謝謝 bear961023 的mod ，有空會去摸你圖的 ~ ! ~~話說是怎找到我的..?~~

Mintong

Mintong wrote:
对不起最近有点没空所以迟了 >_< 沒關係

[Insane]
HP 会不会太高了点? 前面打错一个note差点要死好 HP-1到6
感觉图note一直转圆圈... ~~也許這是我的flow風格~~

00:30:825 (9) - 不如 CTRL+J 吧? 再考慮

[Hard]

00:13:468 (3) - CTRL+G? 可能比较flow 好

对不起感觉图还好真心mod不出什么...沒關係，謝謝你的check
射个星好了...加油rank! 3Q
謝謝米桶 ~ !

EmingK wrote:
P.S. update坏掉了所以等修复了我再把diff更新上来腦皮没救了 ~~啥時喪女能rank?~~

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-04-01T10:45:10+00:00

BBQ
超赞的歌

[EmingK's Easy]
可以考虑用clap的声音作为tick的声音然后有些滑条有tick的地方使用绿线造成一个伪clap
00:35:325 (2) - 这个我知道是跟歌唱，可是突然来了个梯形的形状，而且第一次玩的时候，对这个感觉会不好
01:04:039 (3) - 可以考虑头加finish
01:19:468 (1) - ^

[Oracle's Normal]
有些是会改了你的节奏的，请尝试一下然后再判断是否采用
00:12:825 (1) - 强烈建议变成滑条加单点，然后转盘改少些，超喜欢在结尾那里打击，变成转盘太可惜了，最后那个note加finish

SPOILER

00:45:182 (1,2) - 都换成折返？然后折返后的尾巴加上finish，挺好，1/2滑条这里节奏有些空
00:52:039 (1,2) - ^，或者换成1/1滑条也可以
00:55:468 - 01:20:646这段滑条全部出错啦，拉长些ww

[Hard]
00:13:468 (3) - ctrl+g?
00:18:611 (2,3) - 只是一个建议，后面也有几个类似的，这些三连其实没有什么要跳的理由，人声不是特别重要，因为是第三个连才是最重音，第一个跳的话有种头重脚轻的感觉。建议减少DS放，我觉得是太远了，很容易读错类似00:52:682 (1,2,3,4) 这些的
00:40:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 个人感觉在hard这略难，如果想保持的话可以考虑将2放到最后，可以降低难度

[Insane]
有些是会改了你的节奏的，请尝试一下然后再判断是否采用
有些超大跳还是建议减少一下，如00:56:753 (6,1)
00:15:289 (6) - 这里拉滑条音实在太奇怪了，改成连打或者小折返会好点
00:23:647 (6) - 这个whistle..删除它
00:33:075 (2) - 弯一下会更好看
00:44:968 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - 为什么不和前面的梗一样呢..超喜欢这梗，推荐这个节奏，有个地方用了1.5速，你应该知道的

SPOILER

01:13:467 (7,9) - 关于这两个whistle，有些不合群，建议换另一种音效，或者前面那样也行

[wkyik's Extra]
有些是会改了你的flow的，请尝试一下然后再判断是否采用
01:01:468 (1,2) - 个人觉得一个很爽的加困难flow，就是这两个滑条都头尾换一下，爽！
01:03:825 (1) - 应该是特意设置的读图梗，但整个kiai的风格不适合这个梗的出现，建议移开
01:08:325 (1,2) - 这个的摆法与前面的有些不同，所以这个就这么保持下去好了，上面那个真的是爽啊！
01:13:468 (1,2,3) - 嗯..这个flow有点棘手，不是很爽，改一下？1和2可以对调一下
这个难度超爽的1111

hope it help you！
good luck~

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-04-01T11:09:12+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
[wkyik's Extra]
有些是会改了你的flow的，请尝试一下然后再判断是否采用
01:01:468 (1,2) - 个人觉得一个很爽的加困难flow，就是这两个滑条都头尾换一下，爽！
01:03:825 (1) - 应该是特意设置的读图梗，但整个kiai的风格不适合这个梗的出现，建议移开 OK
01:08:325 (1,2) - 这个的摆法与前面的有些不同，所以这个就这么保持下去好了，上面那个真的是爽啊！
01:13:468 (1,2,3) - 嗯..这个flow有点棘手，不是很爽，改一下？1和2可以对调一下
这个难度超爽的1111

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EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-04-02T03:00:32+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
[EmingK's Easy]
可以考虑用clap的声音作为tick的声音然后有些滑条有tick的地方使用绿线造成一个伪clap 不喜欢tick clap
00:35:325 (2) - 这个我知道是跟歌唱，可是突然来了个梯形的形状，而且第一次玩的时候，对这个感觉会不好猴
01:04:039 (3) - 可以考虑头加finish 柑橘会把句子生生切断，不好
01:19:468 (1) - ^ 猴

谢摸

四暗刻

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-02T10:15:43+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
BBQ
超赞的歌 :D

[Hard]
00:13:468 (3) - ctrl+g? 恩..前面遵照米桶的改，不過覺得這好像又順，所以又改了
00:18:611 (2,3) - 只是一个建议，后面也有几个类似的，这些三连其实没有什么要跳的理由，人声不是特别重要，因为是第三个连才是最重音，第一个跳的话有种头重脚轻的感觉。建议减少DS放，我觉得是太远了，很容易读错类似00:52:682 (1,2,3,4) 这些的位置都有調整了些
00:40:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 个人感觉在hard这略难，如果想保持的话可以考虑将2放到最后，可以降低难度交換節奏了

[Insane]
有些是会改了你的节奏的，请尝试一下然后再判断是否采用
有些超大跳还是建议减少一下，如00:56:753 (6,1) 覺得還OK
00:15:289 (6) - 这里拉滑条音实在太奇怪了，改成连打或者小折返会好点換了1/4滑條跳
00:23:647 (6) - 这个whistle..删除它 好
00:33:075 (2) - 弯一下会更好看好
00:44:968 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - 为什么不和前面的梗一样呢..超喜欢这梗，推荐这个节奏，有个地方用了1.5速，你应该知道的
SPOILER
覺得現在這節奏比較好，pattern也看得比較舒適
01:13:467 (7,9) - 关于这两个whistle，有些不合群，建议换另一种音效，或者前面那样也行好，那我先把音效去掉我再想想要用什麼

hope it help you！有
good luck~ 謝謝Sellenite ~ !

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-04-02T17:15:06+00:00

Yo!

General

有張BG的Size是1140*768,頗奇怪,我幫你找了一張高清的,然後裁成1366*768了
SPOILER

Hard

這歌跟歌詞map的話不夠刺激,下次可以嘗試一下跟樂器,特別是鼓
00:28:039 - 多餘綠線
00:22:361 - 漏了音, 3連的話不會影響你的節奏一致性
00:23:646 - ^
00:30:075 - 跟歌詞的話這個漏了
00:35:218 - ^ 00:36:932 都是
00:40:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這段分得好奇怪,在藍線開始折返,然後vocal在00:41:325開始,00:41:646漏了,建議這樣放:
SPOILER
00:54:396 (3,4) - 誤導的DS 00:54:075 (2,3) 應該比00:54:396 (3,4) 的DS更大才對
01:13:896 (7) - blanket
01:27:825 (1) - 最後是1/6
00:27:182 (1,2) - 加點whistle
00:40:039 (1) - 這個clap放在00:40:896 (4,5,6,7) 才對哇,後面的鼓點強好多,當然60%太大聲,用35就可以
00:45:396 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這段的音效沒有帶出那漸進的效果,其實00:51:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) 做得不錯,但因為放的節奏不同所以不能抄,所以我只建議00:46:039 (4)放個finish;然後就是為何這兩段的音效不一樣?233 我聽好像兩段是一樣的
00:58:896 (3) - 頭弄一個小聲點(45%)的finish,那裏的歌詞好高音
01:05:753 (3) - ^
01:09:182 (3) - head漏了finish
01:12:611 (3) - 跟前面00:58:896 (3)一樣

Normal

00:18:396 (2) - 這個圓圈del了,中間沒啥特別的樂器
00:20:325 (5,6,1,2,3) - 這段果斷太難 (怎麼小船的H特別容易,師傅的N特別難 D:
00:25:468 (2,3,4) - 這個flow有點彆扭,一係(2)的尾node上一點,或者(3)跟(4)放下一點
後面的滑條全都unsnapped
00:57:611 (4,5,6) - 太難啦,用折返就好
節奏實在太難,需要remap
後面那些unsnapped改好了,我可以再摸 ;w;

EZ我也懶得摸了 (/me runs

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-04-05T03:09:18+00:00

@lkx add note的地方是个滑条。。后面那个跟的是重音
@liangv587 基本没改;w; 感觉都还好
@bear961023 音量加大了 KIAI的间距变小是降低难度不叠一起的话移动会很难
@Sellenite 转盘不改了降低下难度。折返换了排版会巨难所以就不动了。 unsnap都怪小船打爆
@徒弟那个圈删掉了，flow也改了。不过太难的部分没动，因为这bpm太低，应该不会有事~
thanks for modding！！

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-05T03:45:05+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Yo!

General
有張BG的Size是1140*768,頗奇怪,我幫你找了一張高清的,然後裁成1366*768了
SPOILER
好，採用。

Hard
這歌跟歌詞map的話不夠刺激,下次可以嘗試一下跟樂器,特別是鼓 OK
00:28:039 - 多餘綠線好
00:22:361 - 漏了音, 3連的話不會影響你的節奏一致性好
00:23:646 - ^ ^
00:30:075 - 跟歌詞的話這個漏了是可以加，不過照這樣加的話，會玩得更像INS了，還是省略點吧(BAT如果有提就加這裡)
00:35:218 - ^ 00:36:932 都是 ^
00:40:682 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這段分得好奇怪,在藍線開始折返,然後vocal在00:41:325開始,00:41:646漏了,建議這樣放: 好
SPOILER
00:54:396 (3,4) - 誤導的DS 00:54:075 (2,3) 應該比00:54:396 (3,4) 的DS更大才對忘了注意改了
01:13:896 (7) - blanket 好
01:27:825 (1) - 最後是1/6 沒改，因為我聽不出來1/6
00:27:182 (1,2) - 加點whistle 改了
00:40:039 (1) - 這個clap放在00:40:896 (4,5,6,7) 才對哇,後面的鼓點強好多,當然60%太大聲,用35就可以好
00:45:396 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這段的音效沒有帶出那漸進的效果,其實00:51:825 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) 做得不錯,但因為放的節奏不同所以不能抄,所以我只建議00:46:039 (4)放個finish;然後就是為何這兩段的音效不一樣?233 我聽好像兩段是一樣的已加，另外00:51:825改成S:C2
00:58:896 (3) - 頭弄一個小聲點(45%)的finish,那裏的歌詞好高音好
01:05:753 (3) - ^ 好 ^
01:09:182 (3) - head漏了finish ^
01:12:611 (3) - 跟前面00:58:896 (3)一樣 ^

謝謝君媽 ~ !

Rizia

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Rizia 2014-04-09T10:04:39+00:00

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Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-04-22T09:58:17+00:00

m4m gl

[EZ]
00:13:468 (4) - 尾巴上其实倒不太需要finish 从音乐上来说头上提供了一个finish点建议加上尾巴你自己考虑一下
00:22:896 (3) - 考虑这类滑条加个tick音效？
00:42:611 (2,3,4) - 感觉这类地方不够平滑
01:19:468 (1) - 删了FIN 这里音不重你下的节奏也不支持音乐本身是在 01:20:325 - 为什么说下的节奏不支持 01:04:039 (3) - 比如这个因为你下的节奏再加之VOCAL 所以就算这里音乐本身没提供FIN 自己加上一个也跟合曲
01:26:325 (1) - 不太好听

[NM]
00:05:325 (3) - 头上加个whis?
00:52:039 (1) - 不要OVERLAP吧
00:57:611 (4,5) - 注意spacing 老实说我不反对这样的情况在NM出现但这里也不好看还是挑一下好了 01:08:753 (5,6,1) - 01:11:325 (4,5,6) - 01:16:896 (3,4,5) - 而且我注意到你第一个KIAI就用了一次第二个KIAI用了很多次音乐本身没太大难度变化这

又有何意义
00:59:753 (2) - 这接下来3个NOTE不太好看而且这没blanket好更能看出来我建议 http://puu.sh/8iHPx.jpg
01:02:325 (1,2,3,4) - 菱形?

[HD]
00:48:611 (1,2) - CTRL G试试
00:53:753 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑一下123做正三角 4放在重心
00:56:539 (4,5) - 这漏了clap 我很同意有人对我说过的一句话漏音效=下错节奏你试试把这俩延后1/4拍然后5头上+CLAP 合曲 http://puu.sh/8iI5y.jpg
00:58:896 (3) - 绿线垃圾完全没必要违和的一比
01:05:753 (3) - ^ 看了一下这边好多变音量... 再说一下好了不是变来变去就神音效关键要看曲子这曲我认为你KIAI一种音量足够了音乐本身并不支持
01:26:325 (4) - 没必要NC

[INSANE]
00:20:539 (5) - 删NC加在00:20:861 (1) -
00:20:861 (1,2,3,1) - ... 想尝试jb? 请根据音乐来持续提供这样的输出 00:15:825 (1) - 从这里开始就要这样做了保持连贯性不要想到了就放一串这样的毁DIFF影响质量
00:31:896 (4,5,6,7,8) - 其实我想说这样的4连一直放击打感坠毁的一比音是踩对了玩起来就感觉节奏坑爹
00:34:896 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 坠毁的一比强烈建议不要这样放.... 示范一下好了如果是我这里就会这样 http://puu.sh/8iIuC.jpg 美感啊美感鸡吧就是为了突出美感提升才降低了play快感你这样乱的一笔又不漂亮又不爽只能让质量坠毁
00:45:503 (2,3) - 这边几组也是击打感坠毁..
00:48:611 (1) - 减速试试0.5sv
01:21:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这边其实还行

总体来说建议直接狠一点remap 鸡吧非一朝一夕可练成欢迎你加入大屎盖屎大教 ;a;

[EX]
00:07:361 (3) - add 打打看就懂
00:15:825 (9,1) - 00:17:646 (7,1) - 这附近音乐一样为什么节奏有出入而且后者打起来坠毁的一比
00:26:111 (9,10,1) - 间距太大缩小
00:28:146 (2) - 这里不要跟VOCAL3连把这个删了
00:56:218 (2) - 不要OVERLAP 或者00:56:111 (1) - NC 这组3连间距有点大建议缩小
01:16:361 (2) - ^

我感觉KIAI之前做的不错 KIAI只能算还行

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-04-22T11:53:41+00:00

Chloe wrote:
[EZ]
00:13:468 (4) - 尾巴上其实倒不太需要finish 从音乐上来说头上提供了一个finish点建议加上尾巴你自己考虑一下我觉得这里是人声段结束前奏段开始，放fin没啥问题吧0.0
00:22:896 (3) - 考虑这类滑条加个tick音效？莫名不喜欢在tick上下太重口的音效
00:42:611 (2,3,4) - 感觉这类地方不够平滑改了
01:19:468 (1) - 删了FIN 这里音不重你下的节奏也不支持音乐本身是在 01:20:325 - 为什么说下的节奏不支持 01:04:039 (3) - 比如这个因为你下的节奏再加之VOCAL 所以就算这里音乐本身没提供FIN 自己加上一个也跟合曲好
01:26:325 (1) - 不太好听点掉了

谢谢克洛姨！

http://puu.sh/8iNCn.osu

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-04-23T14:11:00+00:00

Chloe wrote:
[EX]
00:07:361 (3) - add 打打看就懂
00:15:825 (9,1) - 00:17:646 (7,1) - 这附近音乐一样为什么节奏有出入而且后者打起来坠毁的一比
00:26:111 (9,10,1) - 间距太大缩小
00:28:146 (2) - 这里不要跟VOCAL3连把这个删了
00:56:218 (2) - 不要OVERLAP 或者00:56:111 (1) - NC 这组3连间距有点大建议缩小
01:16:361 (2) - ^

我感觉KIAI之前做的不错 KIAI只能算还行

thanks for mod

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Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-04-23T14:18:42+00:00

姨 ;w;

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-04-25T03:27:12+00:00

Chloe wrote:
m4m gl 恩

[HD]
00:48:611 (1,2) - CTRL G试试跟vocal,不換
00:53:753 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑一下123做正三角 4放在重心換了
00:56:539 (4,5) - 这漏了clap 我很同意有人对我说过的一句话漏音效=下错节奏你试试把这俩延后1/4拍然后5头上+CLAP 合曲 http://puu.sh/8iI5y.jpg 你說的堆，不過擺放沒照圖片的這樣擺放，有點看唔懂。
00:58:896 (3) - 绿线垃圾完全没必要违和的一比刪了也把finish去了
01:05:753 (3) - ^ 看了一下这边好多变音量... 再说一下好了不是变来变去就神音效关键要看曲子这曲我认为你KIAI一种音量足够了音乐本身并不支持拔掉上面所說的綠線了，但音量可能還會在變動，目前先不改音量。
01:26:325 (4) - 没必要NC 好

[INSANE]
00:20:539 (5) - 删NC加在00:20:861 (1) - 雖然蠻奇怪的NC但還是改了
00:20:861 (1,2,3,1) - ... 想尝试jb? 请根据音乐来持续提供这样的输出 00:15:825 (1) - 从这里开始就要这样做了保持连贯性不要想到了就放一串这样的毁DIFF影响质量了，那麼我再想想要怎改這裡(我先標籤)
00:31:896 (4,5,6,7,8) - 其实我想说这样的4连一直放击打感坠毁的一比音是踩对了玩起来就感觉节奏坑爹雖然感覺世沒什麼問題那麼我再想要怎改這裡(已標籤)
00:34:896 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 坠毁的一比强烈建议不要这样放.... 示范一下好了如果是我这里就会这样 http://puu.sh/8iIuC.jpg 美感啊美感鸡吧就是为了突出美感提升才降低了play快感你这样乱的一笔又不漂亮又不爽只能让质量坠毁這樣放的話我感覺很坑我再想要怎放
00:45:503 (2,3) - 这边几组也是击打感坠毁.. 不覺得，給神觸們test都說ok
00:48:611 (1) - 减速试试0.5sv 好
01:21:611 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这边其实还行可能還會改一些

总体来说建议直接狠一点remap 鸡吧非一朝一夕可练成欢迎你加入大屎盖屎大教 ;a; 蠻懶的re了，就這樣吧，不過你說的地方我會大改些，至於加入再考慮

Thank Chloe ~ !

最後我看了看，我從00:28:039 (1) 開始看起，我試著搬動NOTE發現節奏不合我味，所以我乾脆把00:28:253 (3,4)這種長VOCAL 合併成一個1/4slider 看起來就沒那麼多串了就先改到這裡 ~~不過pattern太jb是真的~~

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-26T09:49:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-04-25T16:55:38+00:00

@chloe
all fixed except for 1/2*3.
因为有EZ了,想略微提高一点难度

123

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DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-05-05T18:04:46+00:00

Hi, returning the favor :3

Take in mind everything here are suggestions so feel free to reject if they don't fit your style. (Unless I put a

mark).

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Disable Widescreen Support in all difficulties as you don't have a SB.

Artist: kanon*kanon kanon x kanon

Title: Calendula Requiem (TV Size) Calendula Requiem -Shiki TV size- (カレンデュラレクイエム-屍鬼 TV size-)
Source: http://vgmdb.net/album/22235

[EmingK's Easy]
I'd suggest you to use slidertick 2 to be consistent with all difficulties
00:02:325 (4) - You forgot to put a whistle in the beginning.
00:05:753 (3) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here to keep following the vocals.
01:14:325 (3,4) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here so you follow the hold in vocals nicely.
01:22:896 (1,2) - Put the slider first here and then the circle, it'd fit better with the hold in vocals.
I'd also want to suggest to remove a few notes too, to have a few time of recovery for newbies
00:31:039 (5) -
00:37:896 (5) -
00:44:753 (5) -
00:51:611 (3) -
00:58:468 (5) -
01:05:325 (4) -
01:08:753 (4) -
01:15:611 (5) -

[Oracle's Normal]
00:02:325 (4) - Remove NC, this combo is too short in comparison with the other ones.
00:09:182 (1) - ^
00:14:753 (1,2) - I'd suggest to remove this notes to give the players some time to recover from the spinner. You could only remove (1), but that'd play very awkward, so if you remove something, remove the two.
00:21:825 (2) - Maybe remove this note.
00:26:325 (4) - Move this around x:148 y:72 to make the curve smooth and better looking, remember to fix spacing if you do this.
00:31:253 (5,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, it may be a bit misleading for players.
00:32:968 (3,4) - ^
00:38:111 (5,1) - ^
00:39:825 (3,4) - ^
00:46:896 (3,4) - Maybe use this rhythm, this way you'll keep following the drums as you did for the two previous sliders.

00:55:468 (1,2) - This sliders looks a bit messed up as how they direct the flow, how about doing something like this?

SPOILER

01:06:396 (2,3) - Maybe unstack this, as I've said before.
01:23:111 (1) - Make this spinner end in 01:26:325, it'd fit better with vocals and players won't be confused after all these spinners.

[Hard]
00:13:468 (3) - Ctrl+G here, it'd create a nice circular motion.
00:14:325 (1) - Maybe end the spinner in 00:17:325 and add a note in 00:17:753, it'd feel nicer to play imo.
00:20:325 (7) - This touches a bit the HP bar, move it just a bit down.
00:28:468 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:30:182 (4,5) - ^
00:33:611 (4,5,6) - Something similar

00:35:325 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:37:039 (4,5) - ^
00:38:753 (4,5) - Hey, you did it here, you can tell the difference right?

00:46:896 (1) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song.
00:56:753 (6) - ^
00:57:182 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
00:59:753 (6,7) - ^
01:05:753 (3,4) - ^
01:10:468 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song.
01:10:896 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.
01:21:182 (3,1,1) - These 1/4 spacings are a bit harsh for a Hard imo, you should move it closer or remove one repeat to each slider. Also, make this in a single combo along with 01:22:468 (1).
01:27:825 (1) - A circle would emphasize better the end

[Insane]
00:27:182 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd match nicely the music.
00:44:968 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Well, I know this is an Insane, but this one is really goes over the board, so better toning down this part and decrease the jumps.
00:48:396 (4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing here, this somehow breaks with your jumpy pattern before.
01:06:182 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G to not make the 1/4 jump too harsh.
01:08:753 (3) - Using circles instead would play nicely to introduce the next kiai

01:21:182 (2) - Use a 1/2 slider here and add a note in 01:21:503.
01:26:646 (3) - Remove this note, the stream in the music begins in 01:26:753.

[wkyik's Extra]
Even if isn't the style of maps I like, I should congratulate you because this difficulty is very consistent about spacing and use of jumps, making it nice to play, good job here.
I have a few spots to complain tho:
00:18:396 (3,4,5,6) - I'd be nicely to make this consistent about spacing, like in other parts, not a must tho.
00:26:111 (9,10,1) - I'd suggest you to make this triple consistent in spacing, it'd look better imo.
00:45:611 (1) - 00:46:468 (1) - This would still fit as 1/2 sliders, they'd match better the music and keep the sped up feeling.

That'd be all from my part here, good luck \o/

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-05-05T18:51:24+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
[wkyik's Extra]
Even if isn't the style of maps I like, I should congratulate you because this difficulty is very consistent about spacing and use of jumps, making it nice to play, good job here. lol thanks ><
I have a few spots to complain tho:
00:18:396 (3,4,5,6) - I'd be nicely to make this consistent about spacing, like in other parts, not a must tho. fixed the spacing
00:26:111 (9,10,1) - I'd suggest you to make this triple consistent in spacing, it'd look better imo. ok
00:45:611 (1) - 00:46:468 (1) - This would still fit as 1/2 sliders, they'd match better the music and keep the sped up feeling. seem good, changed

thanks for mod ><

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EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-05-06T03:16:19+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
[EmingK's Easy]
I'd suggest you to use slidertick 2 to be consistent with all difficulties ok
00:02:325 (4) - You forgot to put a whistle in the beginning. fixed
00:05:753 (3) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here to keep following the vocals. well tried but get ugly placement D:
01:14:325 (3,4) - Maybe use a 2/1 slider here so you follow the hold in vocals nicely. ok
01:22:896 (1,2) - Put the slider first here and then the circle, it'd fit better with the hold in vocals. fixed
I'd also want to suggest to remove a few notes too, to have a few time of recovery for newbies well.. most of the sentences in this song starts at red ticks which is hard to follow therefore beat patterns are used. I think breaking rhythm beats is worse than intenseve patterns
00:31:039 (5) -
00:37:896 (5) -
00:44:753 (5) -
00:51:611 (3) -
00:58:468 (5) -
01:05:325 (4) -
01:08:753 (4) -
01:15:611 (5) -

Thank you for modding

chuanyehuti

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 51825
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TitleUnicode:カレンデュラレクイエム (TV Size)
Artist:kanon*kanon
ArtistUnicode:kanon*kanon
Creator:smallboat
Version:EmingK's Easy
Source:Shiki
Tags:Kanon Wakeshima An Cafe blood black sunako ghost toshio rose Ono Fuyumi Fujisaki Ryū EmingK Oracle Kawaiwkyik
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Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-05-06T05:27:39+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi, returning the favor :3 congratz for being a BAT! xD

Take in mind everything here are suggestions so feel free to reject if they don't fit your style. (Unless I put a mark).

[Oracle's Normal]
00:02:325 (4) - Remove NC, this combo is too short in comparison with the other ones.
00:09:182 (1) - ^
00:14:753 (1,2) - I'd suggest to remove this notes to give the players some time to recover from the spinner. You could only remove (1), but that'd play very awkward, so if you remove something, remove the two. I removed 1 to increase the recovering time for players since removing 2 is rather useless because the gap between 00:12:825 (1,1) - is still small
00:21:825 (2) - Maybe remove this note.
00:26:325 (4) - Move this around x:148 y:72 to make the curve smooth and better looking, remember to fix spacing if you do this.
00:31:253 (5,1) - I'd suggest to unstack this, it may be a bit misleading for players.I think it's okay as is... We still have an easier diff here. So i would like to introduce various patterns for this diff >_<
00:32:968 (3,4) - ^^
00:38:111 (5,1) - ^^
00:39:825 (3,4) - ^^
00:46:896 (3,4) - Maybe use this rhythm, this way you'll keep following the drums as you did for the two previous sliders.Agreed while i think the here is ralatively the strongest track here. That's the reason i change the track i'm following.

00:55:468 (1,2) - This sliders looks a bit messed up as how they direct the flow, how about doing something like this?brilliant idea!!
SPOILER
01:06:396 (2,3) - Maybe unstack this, as I've said before.allow me to keep this ;w;
01:23:111 (1) - Make this spinner end in 01:26:325, it'd fit better with vocals and players won't be confused after all these spinners.

That'd be all from my part here, good luck \o/

thank you for helping me improve my diff!!!

not mentioned=fixed!

~

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 51825
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Calendula Requiem (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:カレンデュラレクイエム (TV Size)
Artist:kanon*kanon
ArtistUnicode:kanon*kanon
Creator:smallboat
Version:Oracle's Normal
Source:Shiki
Tags:Kanon Wakeshima An Cafe blood black sunako ghost toshio rose Ono Fuyumi Fujisaki Ryū EmingK Oracle Kawaiwkyik
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BeatmapSetID:157988

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-05-06T11:33:02+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi, returning the favor :3 : 3

Take in mind everything here are suggestions so feel free to reject if they don't fit your style. (Unless I put a mark).

[General]
Disable Widescreen Support in all difficulties as you don't have a SB. fixed
Artist: kanon*kanon kanon x kanon fixed
Title: Calendula Requiem (TV Size) Calendula Requiem -Shiki TV size- (カレンデュラレクイエム-屍鬼 TV size-) This title which I decided to keep it ,because this : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/25042 , so I think this title is fine
Source: http://vgmdb.net/album/22235 I think the "Shiki " is the anime source ,no need add the title(it is not song title).

[Hard]
00:13:468 (3) - Ctrl+G here, it'd create a nice circular motion. fixed
00:14:325 (1) - Maybe end the spinner in 00:17:325 and add a note in 00:17:753, it'd feel nicer to play imo. Good,added.
00:20:325 (7) - This touches a bit the HP bar, move it just a bit down. Sure ,move a bit.
00:28:468 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song. fixed
00:30:182 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:33:611 (4,5,6) - Something similar fixed

00:35:325 (4,5) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song. Sure,fixed
00:37:039 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:38:753 (4,5) - Hey, you did it here, you can tell the difference right? Oh~ I forget change the same rhythm here,fixed (But 00:39:610 (6,7) this I select for 2 notes follw vocal)
00:46:896 (1) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song. Sure,fixed
00:56:753 (6) - ^ ^
00:57:182 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song.If use this,it can"t follow the 24 clap,so no fix here.But change a bit.
00:59:753 (6,7) - ^ Change (2) into a 1/2 slider.
01:05:753 (3,4) - ^ Change (3) into a 1/2 slider.
01:10:468 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd fit better the song. Sure,fixed
01:10:896 (1,2) - Use first the 1/2 slider and then de 3/4 slider, it'd match correctly the song. If use this,it can"t follow the 24 clap,so no fix here.But change a bit.
01:21:182 (3,1,1) - These 1/4 spacings are a bit harsh for a Hard imo, you should move it closer or remove one repeat to each slider. Also, make this in a single combo along with 01:22:468 (1). Use 1.2x DS for every sliders to close,fixed.
01:27:825 (1) - A circle would emphasize better the end I think this should use 1/2 here,is a long sound,so I keep it.

[Insane]
00:27:182 (8) - Use a 1/2 slider here, it'd match nicely the music. fixed
00:44:968 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Well, I know this is an Insane, but this one is really goes over the board, so better toning down this part and decrease the jumps. Okay,reduce a bit DS here.
00:48:396 (4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing here, this somehow breaks with your jumpy pattern before. Sure,fixed
01:06:182 (1) - Maybe Ctrl+G to not make the 1/4 jump too harsh. I think it is fine ,so I keep it.
01:08:753 (3) - Using circles instead would play nicely to introduce the next kiai I think it is fine ,so I keep it.
01:21:182 (2) - Use a 1/2 slider here and add a note in 01:21:503. Good fixed.
01:26:646 (3) - Remove this note, the stream in the music begins in 01:26:753. Sure,deleted.

That'd be all from my part here, good luck \o/ Sure!

Thanks DakeDekaane ~ !

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2014-05-10T05:27:34+00:00

我只是来凑mod=L=

[EX]
00:03:825 (6) - 建议不要叠在尾巴因为这个很重的音感觉放出去比较好
00:33:825 (3,4) - 这里长白线那个音感觉不建议空。。不过这样的自创节奏应该也行吧=L=
[insane]
你这flow有点单一啊0.0
00:00:182 (1,2,3) - 像这种我感觉不如1 2换位置然后间距稍微小一点全是一条线flow不好玩
00:21:932 这里有音连打是从红线开始的白线起连打难受死了
00:20:218 这里也是 00:20:325 (3,4) - 这种连打别从白线起好多地方都这样玩着难受
然后我发现你kiai反而用的小间距那你一开始那段那么跳是干嘛。。间距都那么大
[normal]
01:12:611 (1,3) - 把这两个叠一下？

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-10T06:47:59+00:00

Hi ~~boatye~~ smallboat

[wkyik]
00:28:146 - 這裡不加? 00:29:861 - 像這些地方你都加了
00:34:146 - 這裡是需要鼓點的根據前後你也都加了 00:39:075 (5,6) - 可以與這個類似
00:55:896 - 沒有弄成物件真的有點破壞kiai時的節奏了
01:00:182 (3,4,1) - 有些近和kiai的氣氛有些不合
01:12:289 - 加一個會不會感覺更好呢

SPOILER

這個難度音效有些欠缺尤其是kiai部份只聽到默認clap 但原曲的鼓點還是很靈活的啊...

[Insane]
00:11:539 (3) -

SPOILER

00:13:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 擺圓
00:15:825 (1,2,3) - 檢查間距
00:26:753 (4,5,6,7,8) - 擺圓
00:40:039 (1,2,3) - 檢查間距
00:44:968 (1,1) - 個人認為配合原曲的話加速應該放在後面的滑條上
00:49:253 (3,4,5,6,7) - 擺圓
01:08:968 (1,2,1) - 間距
01:25:682 (5,6) - 有點近和之前保持一致

[Hard]
01:21:611 (1,1) - 沒啥必要NC
01:26:968 - 加點啥

[Oracle]
00:45:182 (1,2) - 这俩我觉得加上折返比较好...看得出你是想跟vocal来着(? 但是前后可都是跟鼓点啊加上好一些吧
00:52:039 (1,2) - ^
00:57:611 (4,5,6) - 不友好还叠的这么近新人读不来啊...可以把前两个换成滑条
01:08:753 (5,6,1) - ^
01:11:325 (4,5,6) - ^
01:16:896 (3,4,5) - ^

[EmingK]
Nice

Good luck~

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-05-10T09:44:20+00:00

As requsted。
Nice Mapset Indeed!
========================
[EmingK's Easy]
00:08:325 (2) - 这里加一个音效？
00:13:468 (4,1) - 背景音乐声音变大了，可以加大一些音量
00:40:039 (3) - 这里加一个音效？
还是感觉可以多用一些whistle，尤其是KIAI Time里面大白线上有时候高亢的vocal可以加上whitsle凸显一下。
Very Nice！

[Oracle's Normal]
00:08:325 (2) - 开头加一个clap
00:12:825 (1) - 做一个音量渐增。
00:15:182 (1) - 这一段用自带的clap感觉有些不太适合
00:41:753 (1,3) - 1的尾巴没有完全叠在3上，差一个坐标，小修一下。
00:59:753 (2,3) - blanket小修一下：http://puu.sh/8GrhK.jpg
01:14:325 (3,4) - 这个还是不要这样叠，对于Normal来说很难了

[Hard]
00:11:753 (4,3) - 没有叠好，也是坐标差了一个格。
00:10:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 增大一些音量？
00:39:075 (5,1) - 也是没有叠好，再修一下吧
00:52:682 (1,2,3) - 这个也是没叠好，不过比较明显
01:08:325 (1,2) - 感觉这段可以做连打，或像这里做两个slider：00:40:896 (4,5) -

Insane 和 Extra 真的看不懂（不能pass，所以就不摸了）
Good Luck！

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-05-10T11:26:20+00:00

Regraz wrote:
[EmingK's Easy]
00:08:325 (2) - 这里加一个音效？前后都是两小节一加0.0 感觉会别扭
00:13:468 (4,1) - 背景音乐声音变大了，可以加大一些音量好
00:40:039 (3) - 这里加一个音效？加了
还是感觉可以多用一些whistle，尤其是KIAI Time里面大白线上有时候高亢的vocal可以加上whitsle凸显一下。现在的whistle加进去听起来还是比较别扭.. 应该去找个比较重的kit-kat啥的..不过懒D:
Very Nice！谢谢ww

Thx for modding! /w\

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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-05-10T14:31:03+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
Hi ~~boatye~~ smallboat

[wkyik]
00:28:146 - 這裡不加? 00:29:861 - 像這些地方你都加了 原本有但刪了詳看之前的mod
00:34:146 - 這裡是需要鼓點的根據前後你也都加了 00:39:075 (5,6) - 可以與這個類似 ok
00:55:896 - 沒有弄成物件真的有點破壞kiai時的節奏了 有人說這個不能不要
01:00:182 (3,4,1) - 有些近和kiai的氣氛有些不合 我覺得還好
01:12:289 - 加一個會不會感覺更好呢
SPOILER

好

這個難度音效有些欠缺尤其是kiai部份只聽到默認clap 但原曲的鼓點還是很靈活的啊...

Good luck~

黃瓜的沒fix
thanks for mod

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-05-10T15:51:45+00:00

Thanks kamisamaaa , yf_bmp , Regraz "s plus mod ! This is my mod reply .

kamisamaaa wrote:
我只是来凑mod=L= 猴阿

[insane]
你这flow有点单一啊0.0 真的，但不想改了，這就所謂的亂擺流吧
00:00:182 (1,2,3) - 像这种我感觉不如1 2换位置然后间距稍微小一点全是一条线flow不好玩好縮小了一點間距沒那麼JB了
00:21:932 这里有音连打是从红线开始的白线起连打难受死了好吧加了
00:20:218 这里也是 00:20:325 (3,4) - 这种连打别从白线起好多地方都这样玩着难受好建議，那麼我就把白線起的連打note都加一加滑條連打就不了
然后我发现你kiai反而用的小间距那你一开始那段那么跳是干嘛。。间距都那么大好我等下回覆完從頭看一下

謝謝黃瓜

yf_bmp wrote:
Hi ~~boatye~~ smallboat LOL

[Insane]
00:11:539 (3) -
SPOILER
好
00:13:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 擺圓再重新擺正了一下
00:15:825 (1,2,3) - 檢查間距好
00:26:753 (4,5,6,7,8) - 擺圓好
00:40:039 (1,2,3) - 檢查間距好
00:44:968 (1,1) - 個人認為配合原曲的話加速應該放在後面的滑條上也是
00:49:253 (3,4,5,6,7) - 擺圓感覺還好
01:08:968 (1,2,1) - 間距連打縮小了點
01:25:682 (5,6) - 有點近和之前保持一致

[Hard]
01:21:611 (1,1) - 沒啥必要NC 好
01:26:968 - 加點啥好吧加一個note

Good luck~

謝謝老爺

Regraz wrote:
As requsted。 Sure
Nice Mapset Indeed!
========================

[Hard]
00:11:753 (4,3) - 没有叠好，也是坐标差了一个格。fixed
00:10:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 增大一些音量？好,增加到了70%
00:39:075 (5,1) - 也是没有叠好，再修一下吧沒看出來有什麼偏差
00:52:682 (1,2,3) - 这个也是没叠好，不过比较明显好
01:08:325 (1,2) - 感觉这段可以做连打，或像这里做两个slider：00:40:896 (4,5) - 好建議，改了

Insane 和 Extra 真的看不懂（不能pass，所以就不摸了）Nevermind
Good Luck！

謝謝Regraz

All updated.

Last edited by smallboat 2014-05-11T03:50:12+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-05-10T16:35:17+00:00

@kamisamaaa all fixed!
@yf 加上折返的话就做不了对称了，排版也很难OAO。1/2是想增加一点难度来着，1/1spam太无聊了，毕竟有个更简单的Easy
@regraz 只修了那个stack.其他感觉不是太有必要
thanks for modding guys!!

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DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-06-05T06:15:40+00:00

uguu :w

[wkyik's Extra]
Volume here is very low, increase it at least by 20% in the beginning (00:00:611 - 00:14:325 - ) and by 10% in the rest of the song.
00:32:968 (6,7,1) - Spacing consistent here would be cool
00:45:182 (1,1,1,1) - I know I pointed something here already, but I think the whole pattern being 1/2 would fit better with the instrumental here.
00:51:825 (2) - I think the NC should be here, and maybe remove the NC in 00:51:611 (1).
For the kiai, I'd want to extend a bit, but I don't want to make this post too long as the suggestions will be very similar, there are some really big 1/4 jumps, remember they're 1/4, I know this is aimed to top players, but I think you should really change some of them, specially the circle-slider, like 00:59:218 (2,3) - , 01:00:932 (2,3) - , 01:04:361 (4,5) - , 01:09:503 (2,3) - , 01:11:432 (3,4) - and a few more, keeping the spacing consistent for this parts, like 01:06:611 (1,2,3) would be nicer and it'll also help a lot for consistency. I'll point some other suggestions added to this.
00:56:111 (3) - Remove NC?
00:58:468 (3,4) - I really think the spacing is very big here, better reduce it.
01:06:182 (3) - Try Ctrl+G here, it'd help the flow a lot.
01:13:039 (2) - ^
01:16:361 (1) - Remove NC?

[Insane]
00:00:182 (1,2) - Maybe remove this to help the player to guess the speed of the song? or maybe a use a slider instead.
00:15:396 (5,6) - Move (5) in a way it's between (4) and (6), or move (6) a bit farther, it's actually too close and kills the jumpy flow a bit.
00:17:539 (9,1) - Swap NC
00:18:825 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:253 (2,1) - Swap NC
00:20:861 (1) - Remove NC?
00:37:361 (1) - ^
00:38:753 (1) - ^
00:41:753 (1) - You could move this a bit farther, so you keep the jumpy feeling here.
00:44:968 (6) - Maybe make something like this? it'd improve the flow a bit.

SPOILER

00:45:182 (1) - Why did you speed up this slider but not the others which has similar intensity in the song? 00:46:039 (1,5)? Also I noted your comboing is a bit weird here.
00:46:361 (2,3,4,5) - I still think this is a bit large for a 1/4 jump in this diff, try something like this?

SPOILER

00:48:611 (1) - Better not reduce the speed for this, it doesn't fit too much as the vocals doesn't feel this slow.
01:01:468 (1) - Remove NC?
01:08:968 (1) - ^
01:13:039 (1) - ^
01:18:396 (1) - ^
01:20:111 (1) - ^
01:21:611 (1) - ^
01:26:753 (1) - ^
01:27:825 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:38:753 (4) - This slider has the drum sampleset, change it to auto, the drum clap sounds in game because this.
01:09:182 (4) - NC?
01:13:896 (7) - Same as the first suggestion.

That'd be all, feel free to get more mods/testplays for the high diffs, call me back when you're ready to go further.

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-06-05T09:11:44+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
uguu :w

[wkyik's Extra]
Volume here is very low, increase it at least by 20% in the beginning (00:00:611 - 00:14:325 - ) and by 10% in the rest of the song. vol. 40% now
00:32:968 (6,7,1) - Spacing consistent here would be cool ok
00:45:182 (1,1,1,1) - I know I pointed something here already, but I think the whole pattern being 1/2 would fit better with the instrumental here. changed to 1/2
00:51:825 (2) - I think the NC should be here, and maybe remove the NC in 00:51:611 (1). ok
For the kiai, I'd want to extend a bit, but I don't want to make this post too long as the suggestions will be very similar, there are some really big 1/4 jumps, remember they're 1/4, I know this is aimed to top players, but I think you should really change some of them, specially the circle-slider, like 00:59:218 (2,3) - , 01:00:932 (2,3) - , 01:04:361 (4,5) - , 01:09:503 (2,3) - , 01:11:432 (3,4) - and a few more, keeping the spacing consistent for this parts, like 01:06:611 (1,2,3) would be nicer and it'll also help a lot for consistency. I'll point some other suggestions added to this. all fixed on this part~~
00:56:111 (3) - Remove NC? ok
00:58:468 (3,4) - I really think the spacing is very big here, better reduce it. i don't think so
01:06:182 (3) - Try Ctrl+G here, it'd help the flow a lot. i think now is more fun~~
01:13:039 (2) - ^ ok
01:16:361 (1) - Remove NC? ok

thanks for mod again><~

11111

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-06-07T05:53:21+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
uguu :w 030

[Insane]
00:00:182 (1,2) - Maybe remove this to help the player to guess the speed of the song? or maybe a use a slider instead.
00:15:396 (5,6) - Move (5) in a way it's between (4) and (6), or move (6) a bit farther, it's actually too close and kills the jumpy flow a bit.
00:17:539 (9,1) - Swap NC
00:18:825 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:253 (2,1) - Swap NC
00:20:861 (1) - Remove NC?
00:37:361 (1) - ^
00:38:753 (1) - ^
00:41:753 (1) - You could move this a bit farther, so you keep the jumpy feeling here.
00:44:968 (6) - Maybe make something like this? it'd improve the flow a bit.
SPOILER
00:45:182 (1) - Why did you speed up this slider but not the others which has similar intensity in the song? 00:46:039 (1,5)? Also I noted your comboing is a bit weird here.
00:46:361 (2,3,4,5) - I still think this is a bit large for a 1/4 jump in this diff, try something like this?
SPOILER
00:48:611 (1) - Better not reduce the speed for this, it doesn't fit too much as the vocals doesn't feel this slow.
01:01:468 (1) - Remove NC?
01:08:968 (1) - ^
01:13:039 (1) - ^
01:18:396 (1) - ^
01:20:111 (1) - ^
01:21:611 (1) - ^
01:26:753 (1) - ^
01:27:825 (1) - ^

Except 01:27:825 (1) don"t move NC (because I think add speed here,so need a New combo here ), another parts are fixed.

[Hard]
00:38:753 (4) - This slider has the drum sampleset, change it to auto, the drum clap sounds in game because this.fixed
01:09:182 (4) - NC? fixed
01:13:896 (7) - Same as the first suggestion. fixed

That'd be all, feel free to get more mods/testplays for the high diffs, call me back when you're ready to go further.

Okay,I"ll do it,thanks DakeDekaane recheck ~!

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-06-07T14:37:49+00:00

too much water

[General]

[Extra]
00:00:182 不从这里开始？
玛德kiai真难

[Insane]
00:00:611 (2) - 这都没finish？
00:19:467 (3,4) - 衔接怒视很顺
00:26:968 (6,7) - 间距有些大了吧
00:28:468 (4,5) - 间距不能统一一下？
柑橘kiai有些地方如01:10:468 (5,1,2) - 节奏比较松散，而其他地方又很紧

[Hard]
00:00:611 (1) - finish
00:40:039 (1) - 为毛clap突然就萎了
01:07:468 (1,2) - 间距拉大点

[Normal]
00:16:039 (2) - 没包好

低难度没啥可说的咯

GL

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2014-06-08T04:06:14+00:00

As requested, I will only mod I and X.
我不清楚中文mod ok不ok，但是真的不想打英文了！
还有，懒得弄格式了。

[Extra]
00:44:968 (7,8,1) - 可以和00:44:539 (5) - 搭配起来，摆成一个连打的样子，这样远不远近不近挺难看的。

SPOILER

00:47:753 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好。
01:03:825 (1,2,3) - 这个地方要看你map的理念。如果你还是把这张图的Kiai当作140BPM的Overmap连打在做，这里就不好了。从我的角度看，这里最好要改。
01:10:896 (1,5) - 可以考虑重合？
01:12:611 (1,2) - 为什么感觉略近啊？可能因为我是M，XD 可以考虑blanket？
01:13:468 (1,2,3) - 这里真是凶残。。。我会以为是星爷让你把3做Ctrl+G的...
01:24:611 (1) - 把红点稍微往上移一点？这种拐弯太短有点丑。。。
01:27:611 (1) - 这里摆的歪了...感觉这个01:27:182 (1,2,3,4,1) - 弧度太aji了
01:26:325 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这一段前面1234先不说，我觉得适当的尾杀是有必要的，尤其是最后一个，因为音乐是戛然而止的。反正就是，这一段太简单了。。。

[Insane]
00:13:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 最后一个点我先不说，前面这个弧度太nazi了...可以多看看连打图是怎么转弯的。（我怎么记得你喜欢用多边形工具做连打？）
00:35:646 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:01:253 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:03:075 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:21:503 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 哇，看到这个连打我觉得你要服用金克拉了。。。
00:22:682 (2) - 同我建议的Ex的梗，这里可以放到(292,232)
00:55:039 (3) - 为何加速？
00:57:611 (2,3,4) - nazi神器...你就这么见不得我1pc pass么？
01:02:325 (1,2) - 和^结合起来就真的有点受不了了。
Kiai还有一些距离JB的地方我就不一一指出了...

Good Luck~

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2014-06-08T07:27:29+00:00

簡單看了一下
[EX]
00:20:753 (5) - 換成串試試？背景有音可以加
01:15:825 (4,5) - Ctrl+G之後flow感覺會好一點

[Insane]
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Rizia

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Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-06-08T10:58:29+00:00

thx for mod

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smallboat 2014-06-09T13:52:10+00:00

YoshinoSakura wrote:
too much water

[Insane]
00:00:611 (2) - 这都没finish？忘了加，fixed.
00:19:467 (3,4) - 衔接怒视很顺覺得還好
00:26:968 (6,7) - 间距有些大了吧看了一下還蠻大的，改了位置。
00:28:468 (4,5) - 间距不能统一一下？好吧 45就接上去了
柑橘kiai有些地方如01:10:468 (5,1,2) - 节奏比较松散，而其他地方又很紧因為跟vocal所以放這樣，現在也想不出要怎放了，就這樣吧(個人認為是質量最差的一個diff sad)

[Hard]
00:00:611 (1) - finish fixed
00:40:039 (1) - 为毛clap突然就萎了加大了音量
01:07:468 (1,2) - 间距拉大点的確有點近，fixed

GL

謝了615 ~ !

F D Flourite wrote:
As requested, I will only mod I and X.
我不清楚中文mod ok不ok，但是真的不想打英文了！
还有，懒得弄格式了。好

[Insane]
00:13:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 最后一个点我先不说，前面这个弧度太nazi了...可以多看看连打图是怎么转弯的。（我怎么记得你喜欢用多边形工具做连打？）修了一點弧度
00:35:646 (5,6,7,8) - ^ 恩..6稍微移動了點
01:01:253 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 修了一點
01:03:075 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:21:503 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 哇，看到这个连打我觉得你要服用金克拉了。。。我竟然沒發現這個，還好妳有看到不然unrank了，fixed.
00:22:682 (2) - 同我建议的Ex的梗，这里可以放到(292,232) 好
00:55:039 (3) - 为何加速？好像不小心加到，fixed.
00:57:611 (2,3,4) - nazi神器...你就这么见不得我1pc pass么？改了一點位置
01:02:325 (1,2) - 和^结合起来就真的有点受不了了。好，改了一點。
Kiai还有一些距离JB的地方我就不一一指出了...恩有些都修了一點

Good Luck~

謝謝FD ~ !

Autumn wrote:
簡單看了一下

[Insane]
00:52:039 (3) - 朝裏微調一點 fixed
SPOILER
00:57:503 (2) - 提前1/4跟vocal？和01:02:325 (1) - 一樣 fixed
SPOILER
01:11:325 (2) - ^ fixed

GL

謝謝Autumn ~ !

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