Zero__wind wrote:

DARKNESS
00:05:368 (2,3) - I think they're too far away from each other, considering they're only in the beginning part where the music is still soft. maybe move 00:05:368 (2) - to around (432,40) and change the slider shape a bit
the current spacing is fine imo.. short repeat sldiers plays a bit hard than circle but not too hard
00:07:414 - add a circle here for better rhythm?
I only follow the piano and the electric sound here(the sound stop at about 00:07:338 - )..
00:18:263 (4) - whistle instead of clap on head? I think the drum is similar to 00:14:409 -
clap sounds better to me
00:42:768 (5) - move it up a bit? to around (48,40), it currently dosen't flow good from 00:42:492 (3,4) - imo
current pattern is better imo
00:47:999 (3,4) - move the whistle from 3 to 4 will match with the music better
current one sounds also nice imo
00:48:825 (2,3) - similar stuff, move the whistle from 3 to 2's tail?
same as before
00:55:708 (4) - sounds good with a S:C1 whistle?
only hitnormal here, sounds better imo
01:02:867 (1,3) - I recommend normal clap on their tails. only sof claps sounds too weak for these beats
extra claps don't fit the song well, though they the make the part more intense
01:06:446 - you could apply to many similar beats like this one, if you like the idea above
hitsound suggestions also work for other diffs

Insane
00:20:191 (4) - unstack this by moving it to (280,8)? you have stacked similar kind of beats before and this plays a bit uncomfortable, referring to 00:11:380 (4) - and so
00:22:393 (4) - ^
the current stack looks fine to me

Hard
00:20:191 (3) - same as that in Insane diff, I recommend to unstack this kind of notes, also like 00:22:393 (3) -
same as before
00:35:885 (5,6,7) - this is the only case where you stacked 3 notes together in the whole diff, I suggest that you replace them with a 1/2 reverse slider, or murge 00:36:022 (6,7) - into a 1/2 slider
maybe you're talking about Normal diff.. cuz these're the only heavy beats in the diff, so I stacked them
00:51:303 (3,4) - move them a bit together to form blanket between 00:50:615 (1,4) - ?
the current pattern is also fine imo
01:18:010 (3) - make it reverse once less so it would be suitable for a Hard diff, currently kinda too hard here. you could also move 01:18:285 (1) - closer to it though
the repeat is fine imo. cuz the last repeat direction is to the next slider, not a big problem here

Normal
00:10:279 (1) - remove this note to give new players more recovery time after a spinner
1/1 time gap after spinner for Normal is fine imo, the distance is also small
01:14:431 (3,4) - hiding sliderhead under previous slider like this is way too confusing for this diff, plz avoid this by moving 4 out to the left
01:16:633 (2,3) - ^
01:21:039 (2,3) - ^ this is a bit better, but still confusing
those overlapping is not too hard to read imo, I overlapped them a bit to lower the difficulty of these pattern, due to slider speed changing