Thanks for your stars, SiRiRu, MF and hutka.
Thanks for your mod and star.Sushi971 wrote:
Snow Angel <3
[Easy]
02:45:636 (5,1) - align? // fixed
[Normal]
01:22:930 (2) - better on red tick (01:22:871), imo. // I withhold it. I wanna listen more other's opinions. >_<
02:50:459 (2) - ^
03:37:871 (1) - finish ^
[Hard]
01:22:929 (2) - better on red tick (01:22:871), imo.
02:00:106 (1,3) - symetry // fixed
02:01:400 (5,6) - center these? // fixed
02:50:400 (2) - better on red tick, imo.
03:38:459 (2) - ^
nice map. go for it.
Thanks for your mod and star.DJPop wrote:
~Easy~
00:25:871 (2) - looks weird imo
01:47:754 (2) - ^
~Normal~
01:59:048 (5) - looks weird imo
02:20:459 (6) - move up 6 grids (Lv3) // omg! fixed >_<
03:27:871 (3) - start on red tick // fixed
~Hard~
02:21:459 (4) - move 1/6 left (put on red tick) // fixed
Those sliders are just only weird for me, you don't have to change them.
+Star
Thanks for your mod and stars!YGOkid8 wrote:
General
IMO, the song sounds better with Soft sounds instead of Normal sounds.
Actually besides that, the rest is fine. Beautiful song. Star ~ ☆ + Kudosu! Star ~ ☆
Thanks for your mod and star~Lizbeth wrote:
hihi!! n.n
Nice map! loved the skin
how about changing the color of the play-warningarrow too?? // changed to bluish
General
Capitalize song name // no. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151
Hard
00:14:577 - add note // changed to slider
00:33:636 (4,5,6,7) - space this more evenly // fixed
00:34:577 (8) - too close to prev circle imo // fixed
01:58:341 (2) - this is partially hide by drain bar in hard rock mode... please move it up a bit // fixed. But I think no one succeed with hard rock. XD
Normal and Easy
Flawless, nice job
Star!! ^^
This is a 1/3 song...VanMoNky wrote:
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!
Dusty wrote:
[Normal]
00:37:518 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The white combo goes around in a triangle, but the light blue combo overlaps itself in a different way, it's awkward // fixed to same way
[Hard]
8 drain is a lot. // fixed to 7
03:41:048 (4) - ^, look how much the drain bar decreases on this slider
VanMoNky wrote:
As your request. Sorry for the delay.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.[General]Star.
Add some tags please. You can add "winter" and something else.
[Storyboarding]
What is null.png? Delete the .osb file and the null image. // No. For continue BG video when last note finished.
[Easy]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
01:41:401 (1) - Too far from the spinner center. It's hard for an easy diff. // fixed
02:20:459 (5) - Should be on 02:20:401.
[Normal]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
00:53:283 (4) - Should be on 00:53:224.
00:54:695 (2) - Should be on 00:54:636.
00:56:107 (4) - Should be on 00:56:048.
01:22:930 (2) - Should be on 01:22:871.
02:20:459 (6) - Should be on 02:20:401.
02:22:224 (2) - Should be on 02:22:165.
02:23:636 (4) - Should be on 02:23:577.
02:50:459 (2) - Should be on 02:50:401.
03:40:695 (3) - Add finish.
[Hard]
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this! // No... this song is based on 1/3 beat.
2. The spacing is too wide...
00:14:107 (2) - Should be on 00:14:048.
00:14:460 (4) - Should be on 00:14:401.
00:16:930 (1) - Should be on 00:16:871.
00:17:283 (2) - Should be on 00:17:224.
00:17:636 (3) - Should be on 00:17:577.
00:20:459 (5) - Should be on 00:20:401.
00:21:165 (6) - Should be on 00:21:107.
00:21:518 (8) - Should be on 00:21:459.
00:22:224 (2) - Should be on 00:22:165.
00:22:930 (4) - Should be on 00:22:871.
00:23:636 (6) - Should be on 00:23:577 or 00:23:665.
Sorry, but I stopped at here. But don't think there will be no mistake anymore. Fix these notes yourself, I believe you can.
Thanks for your mods and stars, Dusty, VanMoNky and Shulin.Shulin wrote:
This is a 1/3 song...VanMoNky wrote:
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!
Easy:
02:34:342 (8) - Silence the return? Red tick return sounds strange.
02:45:636 (5) - ^
Normal:
02:03:989 (1) - Remove new combo? // fixed
03:26:812 (2) - Should start on 1/3. Some of the beats may hit 1/6 later though :/
Hard:
-- Imo lower the OD and HP drain by 1 tick, at the moment it plays like an Insane and since this is a relaxing song I'm not sure the high OD fits.
// I made this map like as hollow. But yes.. this is just Hard diff. So I decreased only HP Drain by 1 tick. >_<
00:25:165 (1) - Right one square. // fixed
01:25:636 (1) - Start on 1/3, looks better imo, end same point.
02:53:106 (1) - Start this on 1/3 instead of 1/8, end same point.
03:26:812 (5) - 1/3.
03:27:048 (6) - ^
03:27:518 (8) - 1/3? Not sure about this one. But 1/6 sounds off to me.
Great maps, but I'd double check the snaps and get a second opinion I might have missed some. I liked the way you mapped this
// Some notes were snapped by 1/4. I think they are fine. Because DJPop didn't point them. lol
~ Star.
sonnyc wrote:
IMO, what about Snow Angel? // Please check this web page. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151
If not, never mind..
Real mod later
Thanks for your mod and starYes wrote:
bleh sorry i'm so late with mod ;_; i forgot!
hard
01:41:989 (4,5) - whistle at end // fixed
01:53:283 (4) - whistle beginning // fixed
02:02:224 (8) - (nazi) make this symmetric please. looks a little uneven // fixed
02:08:224 (2) - whistle beginning
02:11:048 (3) - whistle
hmm. i dont like the combination of normal hit + soft whistle :/
other difficulties I can't really find anything ^^ nice maps!!
Thanks a lot Lokamp.Lokamp wrote:
Easy
Excellent!
Normal
See upper
Hard
00:20:224 (4,5) - quite forced jump... // fixed
Well,I seldon see such a well-storyboarded and mapped song like this one...
Let's incentivize it with another Proto-bubble!
I tried using each Beat Snap Divisors(1/3, 1/4, 1/8) at those parts so many times since when I started mapping this song.Card N'FoRcE wrote:
- General:- Easy:
- 02:55:00 - 03:17:00 - long break, i hope you won't be troubled about this.
Also: i know this map can be mapped with 1/3 snap, but there are somethings that should be fixed with 1/4. There's a list of what I'm sure is wrong, but i think they may be some other beats here and there.- Normal:
- .Errors/Mistakes:
02:20:459 (5) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor) // fixed it with 1/8 snap divisor- Hard:
- .Errors/Mistakes:
00:53:283 (4) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
00:54:695 (2) - ^
00:56:107 (4) - ^
02:20:459 (6) - ^ // fixed it with 1/8 snap divisor
02:22:224 (2) - ^
02:23:636 (4) - ^These sliders are all offtimed, you have to fix them.
- .Errors/Mistakes:
00:53:283 (6) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
02:20:401 (1,2,3,4) - all these must be on red tick (1/4 snap divisor) // fixed it with 1/8 snap divisor
02:22:224 (2) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
02:23:636 (2) - ^
I hate low quality video. But... I did it for rankable. ;_; 19.9MB now.minyeob wrote:
Reduce video size if you can....?
(20MB) is out of criteria.
Good thing I downloaded a while ago, so I have HQ video >:Dykcarrot wrote:
I hate low quality video. But... I did it for rankable. ;_; 19.9MB now.minyeob wrote:
Reduce video size if you can....?
(20MB) is out of criteria.
I'll prepare something for people who want HQ video.
비민님 매우 감사!
The prepared video has better quality than old day's one.YGOkid8 wrote:
Good thing I downloaded a while ago, so I have HQ video >:D
D:ykcarrot wrote:
The prepared video has better quality than old day's one.YGOkid8 wrote:
Good thing I downloaded a while ago, so I have HQ video >:D
H.264 / 640*480 / 25.7MB - coming soon!
sure, I'll do it after this map ranked.YGOkid8 wrote:
D:
and, if you aren't already thinking of it, with the HQ video, put it on first post. Say something like.
"The quality of original video was too high, so had to reduce . Anyone who wants the HQ one, here it is:
*enter link of HQ video here*"
actually, it's best to do it before-hand. ztrot told me that it is not recommended to edit the 1st post of a ranked map, for it could screw up downloads for the map, and something like that, soykcarrot wrote:
sure, I'll do it after this map ranked.YGOkid8 wrote:
D:
and, if you aren't already thinking of it, with the HQ video, put it on first post. Say something like.
"The quality of original video was too high, so had to reduce . Anyone who wants the HQ one, here it is:
*enter link of HQ video here*"