YGOkid8 wrote:

General
IMO, the song sounds better with Soft sounds instead of Normal sounds.

Actually besides that, the rest is fine. Beautiful song. Star ~ ☆ + Kudosu! Star ~ ☆

Lizbeth wrote:

hihi!! n.n

Nice map! loved the skin
how about changing the color of the play-warningarrow too?? // changed to bluish

General
Capitalize song name // no. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151

Hard
00:14:577 - add note // changed to slider
00:33:636 (4,5,6,7) - space this more evenly // fixed
00:34:577 (8) - too close to prev circle imo // fixed
01:58:341 (2) - this is partially hide by drain bar in hard rock mode... please move it up a bit // fixed. But I think no one succeed with hard rock. XD

Normal and Easy
Flawless, nice job

Star!! ^^

VanMoNky wrote:

1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:518 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The white combo goes around in a triangle, but the light blue combo overlaps itself in a different way, it's awkward // fixed to same way

[Hard]
8 drain is a lot. // fixed to 7
03:41:048 (4) - ^, look how much the drain bar decreases on this slider

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Add some tags please. You can add "winter" and something else.

[Storyboarding]
What is null.png? Delete the .osb file and the null image. // No. For continue BG video when last note finished.

[Easy]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
01:41:401 (1) - Too far from the spinner center. It's hard for an easy diff. // fixed
02:20:459 (5) - Should be on 02:20:401.

[Normal]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
00:53:283 (4) - Should be on 00:53:224.
00:54:695 (2) - Should be on 00:54:636.
00:56:107 (4) - Should be on 00:56:048.
01:22:930 (2) - Should be on 01:22:871.
02:20:459 (6) - Should be on 02:20:401.
02:22:224 (2) - Should be on 02:22:165.
02:23:636 (4) - Should be on 02:23:577.
02:50:459 (2) - Should be on 02:50:401.
03:40:695 (3) - Add finish.

[Hard]
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this! // No... this song is based on 1/3 beat.
2. The spacing is too wide...
00:14:107 (2) - Should be on 00:14:048.
00:14:460 (4) - Should be on 00:14:401.
00:16:930 (1) - Should be on 00:16:871.
00:17:283 (2) - Should be on 00:17:224.
00:17:636 (3) - Should be on 00:17:577.
00:20:459 (5) - Should be on 00:20:401.
00:21:165 (6) - Should be on 00:21:107.
00:21:518 (8) - Should be on 00:21:459.
00:22:224 (2) - Should be on 00:22:165.
00:22:930 (4) - Should be on 00:22:871.
00:23:636 (6) - Should be on 00:23:577 or 00:23:665.
Sorry, but I stopped at here. But don't think there will be no mistake anymore. Fix these notes yourself, I believe you can.

Star.

Shulin wrote:

VanMoNky wrote:

1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!

This is a 1/3 song...

Easy:

02:34:342 (8) - Silence the return? Red tick return sounds strange.
02:45:636 (5) - ^

Normal:

02:03:989 (1) - Remove new combo? // fixed
03:26:812 (2) - Should start on 1/3. Some of the beats may hit 1/6 later though :/

Hard:

-- Imo lower the OD and HP drain by 1 tick, at the moment it plays like an Insane and since this is a relaxing song I'm not sure the high OD fits.
// I made this map like as hollow. But yes.. this is just Hard diff. So I decreased only HP Drain by 1 tick. >_<

00:25:165 (1) - Right one square. // fixed
01:25:636 (1) - Start on 1/3, looks better imo, end same point.
02:53:106 (1) - Start this on 1/3 instead of 1/8, end same point.
03:26:812 (5) - 1/3.
03:27:048 (6) - ^
03:27:518 (8) - 1/3? Not sure about this one. But 1/6 sounds off to me.

Great maps, but I'd double check the snaps and get a second opinion I might have missed some. I liked the way you mapped this
// Some notes were snapped by 1/4. I think they are fine. Because DJPop didn't point them. lol

~ Star.

sonnyc wrote:

IMO, what about Snow Angel? // Please check this web page. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151
If not, never mind..
Real mod later

Yes wrote:

bleh sorry i'm so late with mod ;_; i forgot!

hard
01:41:989 (4,5) - whistle at end // fixed
01:53:283 (4) - whistle beginning // fixed
02:02:224 (8) - (nazi) make this symmetric please. looks a little uneven // fixed
02:08:224 (2) - whistle beginning
02:11:048 (3) - whistle

hmm. i dont like the combination of normal hit + soft whistle :/

other difficulties I can't really find anything ^^ nice maps!!

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
Excellent!

Normal
See upper

Hard
00:20:224 (4,5) - quite forced jump... // fixed

Well,I seldon see such a well-storyboarded and mapped song like this one...
Let's incentivize it with another Proto-bubble!

• 02:55:00 - 03:17:00 - long break, i hope you won't be troubled about this.
  Also: i know this map can be mapped with 1/3 snap, but there are somethings that should be fixed with 1/4. There's a list of what I'm sure is wrong, but i think they may be some other beats here and there.

• .Errors/Mistakes:
  02:20:459 (5) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)

• .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:53:283 (4) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  00:54:695 (2) - ^
  00:56:107 (4) - ^
  02:20:459 (6) - ^
  02:22:224 (2) - ^
  02:23:636 (4) - ^

• .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:53:283 (6) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  02:20:401 (1,2,3,4) - all these must be on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  02:22:224 (2) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  02:23:636 (2) - ^

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:

• 02:55:00 - 03:17:00 - long break, i hope you won't be troubled about this.
  Also: i know this map can be mapped with 1/3 snap, but there are somethings that should be fixed with 1/4. There's a list of what I'm sure is wrong, but i think they may be some other beats here and there.

- Easy:

• .Errors/Mistakes:
  02:20:459 (5) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor) // fixed it with 1/8 snap divisor

- Normal:

• .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:53:283 (4) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  00:54:695 (2) - ^
  00:56:107 (4) - ^
  02:20:459 (6) - ^ // fixed it with 1/8 snap divisor
  02:22:224 (2) - ^
  02:23:636 (4) - ^

- Hard:

• .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:53:283 (6) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  02:20:401 (1,2,3,4) - all these must be on red tick (1/4 snap divisor) // fixed it with 1/8 snap divisor
  02:22:224 (2) - must start on red tick (1/4 snap divisor)
  02:23:636 (2) - ^

These sliders are all offtimed, you have to fix them.

minyeob wrote:

Reduce video size if you can....?
(20MB) is out of criteria.

ykcarrot wrote:

minyeob wrote:

Reduce video size if you can....?
(20MB) is out of criteria.

I hate low quality video. But... I did it for rankable. ;_; 19.9MB now.
I'll prepare something for people who want HQ video.

비민님 매우 감사!

YGOkid8 wrote:

Good thing I downloaded a while ago, so I have HQ video >:D

ykcarrot wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

Good thing I downloaded a while ago, so I have HQ video >:D

The prepared video has better quality than old day's one.
H.264 / 640*480 / 25.7MB - coming soon!

YGOkid8 wrote:

D:

and, if you aren't already thinking of it, with the HQ video, put it on first post. Say something like.

"The quality of original video was too high, so had to reduce . Anyone who wants the HQ one, here it is:
*enter link of HQ video here*"

ykcarrot wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

D:

and, if you aren't already thinking of it, with the HQ video, put it on first post. Say something like.

"The quality of original video was too high, so had to reduce . Anyone who wants the HQ one, here it is:
*enter link of HQ video here*"

sure, I'll do it after this map ranked.

minyeob wrote:

Please remove osb file it'll cause a problem for multiplayers.
Sorry :<