Dusty wrote:
[Normal]
00:37:518 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The white combo goes around in a triangle, but the light blue combo overlaps itself in a different way, it's awkward // fixed to same way
[Hard]
8 drain is a lot. // fixed to 7
03:41:048 (4) - ^, look how much the drain bar decreases on this slider
VanMoNky wrote:
As your request. Sorry for the delay.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.[General]Star.
Add some tags please. You can add "winter" and something else.
[Storyboarding]
What is null.png? Delete the .osb file and the null image. // No. For continue BG video when last note finished.
[Easy]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
01:41:401 (1) - Too far from the spinner center. It's hard for an easy diff. // fixed
02:20:459 (5) - Should be on 02:20:401.
[Normal]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
00:53:283 (4) - Should be on 00:53:224.
00:54:695 (2) - Should be on 00:54:636.
00:56:107 (4) - Should be on 00:56:048.
01:22:930 (2) - Should be on 01:22:871.
02:20:459 (6) - Should be on 02:20:401.
02:22:224 (2) - Should be on 02:22:165.
02:23:636 (4) - Should be on 02:23:577.
02:50:459 (2) - Should be on 02:50:401.
03:40:695 (3) - Add finish.
[Hard]
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this! // No... this song is based on 1/3 beat.
2. The spacing is too wide...
00:14:107 (2) - Should be on 00:14:048.
00:14:460 (4) - Should be on 00:14:401.
00:16:930 (1) - Should be on 00:16:871.
00:17:283 (2) - Should be on 00:17:224.
00:17:636 (3) - Should be on 00:17:577.
00:20:459 (5) - Should be on 00:20:401.
00:21:165 (6) - Should be on 00:21:107.
00:21:518 (8) - Should be on 00:21:459.
00:22:224 (2) - Should be on 00:22:165.
00:22:930 (4) - Should be on 00:22:871.
00:23:636 (6) - Should be on 00:23:577 or 00:23:665.
Sorry, but I stopped at here. But don't think there will be no mistake anymore. Fix these notes yourself, I believe you can.
Thanks for your mods and stars, Dusty, VanMoNky and Shulin.Shulin wrote:
This is a 1/3 song...VanMoNky wrote:
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!
Easy:
02:34:342 (8) - Silence the return? Red tick return sounds strange.
02:45:636 (5) - ^
Normal:
02:03:989 (1) - Remove new combo? // fixed
03:26:812 (2) - Should start on 1/3. Some of the beats may hit 1/6 later though :/
Hard:
-- Imo lower the OD and HP drain by 1 tick, at the moment it plays like an Insane and since this is a relaxing song I'm not sure the high OD fits.
// I made this map like as hollow. But yes.. this is just Hard diff. So I decreased only HP Drain by 1 tick. >_<
00:25:165 (1) - Right one square. // fixed
01:25:636 (1) - Start on 1/3, looks better imo, end same point.
02:53:106 (1) - Start this on 1/3 instead of 1/8, end same point.
03:26:812 (5) - 1/3.
03:27:048 (6) - ^
03:27:518 (8) - 1/3? Not sure about this one. But 1/6 sounds off to me.
Great maps, but I'd double check the snaps and get a second opinion I might have missed some. I liked the way you mapped this
// Some notes were snapped by 1/4. I think they are fine. Because DJPop didn't point them. lol
~ Star.
sonnyc wrote:
IMO, what about Snow Angel? // Please check this web page. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151
If not, never mind..
Real mod later