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KOTOKO - snow angel

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Sure
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 2월 17일 수요일 at 오전 10:09:12

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: snow angel
Source: Onegai Teacher
BPM: 170
Filesize: 20419kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Hard (4.93 stars, 454 notes)
  3. Normal (3.55 stars, 247 notes)
Download: KOTOKO - snow angel
Download: KOTOKO - snow angel (no video)
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My 7th Raked Beatmap.
From Music Clip of the anime 'Onegai Teacher'.

Enjoy with video please! ^^
If you want HQ video, download this file. And move it into this song folder(~11585 KOTOKO - snow angel).

Thanks for your cooperation!
[Les]
star
Ra-s
star
Topic Starter
Sure
Thanks for your star ;)
Cyril Scarlet
Nice Hard Nice Skin ^^b
ztrot
Just passing by I saw that the hitsounds samples are quite repitive you could easly make some nice custom hitsounds I don't think the whistle spam is such a good move.
Topic Starter
Sure

ztrot wrote:

Just passing by I saw that the hitsounds samples are quite repitive you could easly make some nice custom hitsounds I don't think the whistle spam is such a good move.
Where do you come from? I'm considering make hitsound better now.
MoonFragrance

ztrot wrote:

Just passing by I saw that the hitsounds samples are quite repitive you could easly make some nice custom hitsounds I don't think the whistle spam is such a good move.
this map is working in progress now, nobody know about that hitsounds will be fixed how yet.
La Valse
star :)
Topic Starter
Sure
Thanks for your stars, SiRiRu, MF and hutka. :D
Scar
<3
Sushi
Snow Angel <3

[Easy]
02:45:636 (5,1) - align?

[Normal]
01:22:930 (2) - better on red tick (01:22:871), imo.
02:50:459 (2) - ^
03:37:871 (1) - finish ^

[Hard]
01:22:929 (2) - better on red tick (01:22:871), imo.
02:00:106 (1,3) - symetry
02:01:400 (5,6) - center these?
02:50:400 (2) - better on red tick, imo.
03:38:459 (2) - ^


nice map. go for it.
Topic Starter
Sure

Sushi971 wrote:

Snow Angel <3

[Easy]
02:45:636 (5,1) - align? // fixed

[Normal]
01:22:930 (2) - better on red tick (01:22:871), imo. // I withhold it. I wanna listen more other's opinions. >_<
02:50:459 (2) - ^
03:37:871 (1) - finish ^

[Hard]
01:22:929 (2) - better on red tick (01:22:871), imo.
02:00:106 (1,3) - symetry // fixed
02:01:400 (5,6) - center these? // fixed
02:50:400 (2) - better on red tick, imo.
03:38:459 (2) - ^


nice map. go for it.
Thanks for your mod and star. :D
Also thank you, scar1410! :)
orioncomet
KOTOKO!!!∑(`□´/)/彡☆

yk Gogogo ~❤
Topic Starter
Sure
Thank you orion :)
KOTOKO <3
DJPop
~Easy~
00:25:871 (2) - looks weird imo
01:47:754 (2) - ^

~Normal~
01:59:048 (5) - looks weird imo
02:20:459 (6) - move up 6 grids (Lv3)
03:27:871 (3) - start on red tick

~Hard~
02:21:459 (4) - move 1/6 left (put on red tick)

Those sliders are just only weird for me, you don't have to change them.


+Star
Topic Starter
Sure

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:25:871 (2) - looks weird imo
01:47:754 (2) - ^

~Normal~
01:59:048 (5) - looks weird imo
02:20:459 (6) - move up 6 grids (Lv3) // omg! fixed >_<
03:27:871 (3) - start on red tick // fixed

~Hard~
02:21:459 (4) - move 1/6 left (put on red tick) // fixed

Those sliders are just only weird for me, you don't have to change them.


+Star
Thanks for your mod and star. :D
YGOkid8
General
IMO, the song sounds better with Soft sounds instead of Normal sounds.

Actually besides that, the rest is fine. Beautiful song. Star ~ ☆ + Kudosu! Star ~ ☆
Topic Starter
Sure

YGOkid8 wrote:

General
IMO, the song sounds better with Soft sounds instead of Normal sounds.

Actually besides that, the rest is fine. Beautiful song. Star ~ ☆ + Kudosu! Star ~ ☆
Thanks for your mod and stars! :D
I tried combine soft and normal hitsound.
Lizbeth
hihi!! n.n

Nice map! loved the skin
how about changing the color of the play-warningarrow too??

General
Capitalize song name

Hard
00:14:577 - add note
00:33:636 (4,5,6,7) - space this more evenly
00:34:577 (8) - too close to prev circle imo
01:58:341 (2) - this is partially hide by drain bar in hard rock mode... please move it up a bit

Normal and Easy
Flawless, nice job

Star!! ^^
Topic Starter
Sure

Lizbeth wrote:

hihi!! n.n

Nice map! loved the skin
how about changing the color of the play-warningarrow too?? // changed to bluish

General
Capitalize song name // no. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151

Hard
00:14:577 - add note // changed to slider
00:33:636 (4,5,6,7) - space this more evenly // fixed
00:34:577 (8) - too close to prev circle imo // fixed
01:58:341 (2) - this is partially hide by drain bar in hard rock mode... please move it up a bit // fixed. But I think no one succeed with hard rock. XD

Normal and Easy
Flawless, nice job

Star!! ^^
Thanks for your mod and star~ :D
Dusty
[Normal]
00:37:518 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The white combo goes around in a triangle, but the light blue combo overlaps itself in a different way, it's awkward

[Hard]
8 drain is a lot.
03:41:048 (4) - ^, look how much the drain bar decreases on this slider
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Add some tags please. You can add "winter" and something else.

[Storyboarding]
What is null.png? Delete the .osb file and the null image.

[Easy]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor.
01:41:401 (1) - Too far from the spinner center. It's hard for an easy diff.
02:20:459 (5) - Should be on 02:20:401.

[Normal]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor.
00:53:283 (4) - Should be on 00:53:224.
00:54:695 (2) - Should be on 00:54:636.
00:56:107 (4) - Should be on 00:56:048.
01:22:930 (2) - Should be on 01:22:871.
02:20:459 (6) - Should be on 02:20:401.
02:22:224 (2) - Should be on 02:22:165.
02:23:636 (4) - Should be on 02:23:577.
02:50:459 (2) - Should be on 02:50:401.
03:40:695 (3) - Add finish.

[Hard]
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!
2. The spacing is too wide...
00:14:107 (2) - Should be on 00:14:048.
00:14:460 (4) - Should be on 00:14:401.
00:16:930 (1) - Should be on 00:16:871.
00:17:283 (2) - Should be on 00:17:224.
00:17:636 (3) - Should be on 00:17:577.
00:20:459 (5) - Should be on 00:20:401.
00:21:165 (6) - Should be on 00:21:107.
00:21:518 (8) - Should be on 00:21:459.
00:22:224 (2) - Should be on 00:22:165.
00:22:930 (4) - Should be on 00:22:871.
00:23:636 (6) - Should be on 00:23:577 or 00:23:665.
Sorry, but I stopped at here. But don't think there will be no mistake anymore. Fix these notes yourself, I believe you can.
Star.
Shulin

VanMoNky wrote:

1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!
This is a 1/3 song...

Easy:

02:34:342 (8) - Silence the return? Red tick return sounds strange.
02:45:636 (5) - ^

Normal:

02:03:989 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:26:812 (2) - Should start on 1/3. Some of the beats may hit 1/6 later though :/

Hard:

-- Imo lower the OD and HP drain by 1 tick, at the moment it plays like an Insane and since this is a relaxing song I'm not sure the high OD fits.

00:25:165 (1) - Right one square.
01:25:636 (1) - Start on 1/3, looks better imo, end same point.
02:53:106 (1) - Start this on 1/3 instead of 1/8, end same point.
03:26:812 (5) - 1/3.
03:27:048 (6) - ^
03:27:518 (8) - 1/3? Not sure about this one. But 1/6 sounds off to me.

Great maps, but I'd double check the snaps and get a second opinion I might have missed some. I liked the way you mapped this :D

~ Star.
Sonnyc
IMO, what about Snow Angel?
If not, never mind..
Real mod later
Topic Starter
Sure

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
00:37:518 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The white combo goes around in a triangle, but the light blue combo overlaps itself in a different way, it's awkward // fixed to same way

[Hard]
8 drain is a lot. // fixed to 7
03:41:048 (4) - ^, look how much the drain bar decreases on this slider

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Add some tags please. You can add "winter" and something else.

[Storyboarding]
What is null.png? Delete the .osb file and the null image. // No. For continue BG video when last note finished.

[Easy]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
01:41:401 (1) - Too far from the spinner center. It's hard for an easy diff. // fixed
02:20:459 (5) - Should be on 02:20:401.

[Normal]
Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. // No
00:53:283 (4) - Should be on 00:53:224.
00:54:695 (2) - Should be on 00:54:636.
00:56:107 (4) - Should be on 00:56:048.
01:22:930 (2) - Should be on 01:22:871.
02:20:459 (6) - Should be on 02:20:401.
02:22:224 (2) - Should be on 02:22:165.
02:23:636 (4) - Should be on 02:23:577.
02:50:459 (2) - Should be on 02:50:401.
03:40:695 (3) - Add finish.

[Hard]
1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this! // No... this song is based on 1/3 beat.
2. The spacing is too wide...
00:14:107 (2) - Should be on 00:14:048.
00:14:460 (4) - Should be on 00:14:401.
00:16:930 (1) - Should be on 00:16:871.
00:17:283 (2) - Should be on 00:17:224.
00:17:636 (3) - Should be on 00:17:577.
00:20:459 (5) - Should be on 00:20:401.
00:21:165 (6) - Should be on 00:21:107.
00:21:518 (8) - Should be on 00:21:459.
00:22:224 (2) - Should be on 00:22:165.
00:22:930 (4) - Should be on 00:22:871.
00:23:636 (6) - Should be on 00:23:577 or 00:23:665.
Sorry, but I stopped at here. But don't think there will be no mistake anymore. Fix these notes yourself, I believe you can.
Star.

Shulin wrote:

VanMoNky wrote:

1. Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. There are so many 1/3 beat notes. Fix this!
This is a 1/3 song...

Easy:

02:34:342 (8) - Silence the return? Red tick return sounds strange.
02:45:636 (5) - ^

Normal:

02:03:989 (1) - Remove new combo? // fixed
03:26:812 (2) - Should start on 1/3. Some of the beats may hit 1/6 later though :/

Hard:

-- Imo lower the OD and HP drain by 1 tick, at the moment it plays like an Insane and since this is a relaxing song I'm not sure the high OD fits.
// I made this map like as hollow. But yes.. this is just Hard diff. So I decreased only HP Drain by 1 tick. >_<

00:25:165 (1) - Right one square. // fixed
01:25:636 (1) - Start on 1/3, looks better imo, end same point.
02:53:106 (1) - Start this on 1/3 instead of 1/8, end same point.
03:26:812 (5) - 1/3.
03:27:048 (6) - ^
03:27:518 (8) - 1/3? Not sure about this one. But 1/6 sounds off to me.

Great maps, but I'd double check the snaps and get a second opinion I might have missed some. I liked the way you mapped this :D
// Some notes were snapped by 1/4. I think they are fine. Because DJPop didn't point them. lol

~ Star.
Thanks for your mods and stars, Dusty, VanMoNky and Shulin. :)


sonnyc wrote:

IMO, what about Snow Angel? // Please check this web page. http://www.ivesound.jp/music/db/database.cgi?cmd=dp&Tfile=Data&num=151
If not, never mind..
Real mod later
Vanmonky
1/4 is better for me..
kino77
Very nice map~

[Easy]
The volume sounds little bit low to me,other fine~

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Little insane to me>_<,but all fine~I like it~ :)

All good~
Just the combo color seems similar~

STAR~
Lizbeth
P-Bubble ^^
Topic Starter
Sure
Combo colors were changed a little bit. Thanks for your suggestion kino :D

And Thank you Lizbeth. Pubbled! ^.^
Yes_old
bleh sorry i'm so late with mod ;_; i forgot!

hard
01:41:989 (4,5) - whistle at end
01:53:283 (4) - whistle beginning
02:02:224 (8) - (nazi) make this symmetric please. looks a little uneven
02:08:224 (2) - whistle beginning
02:11:048 (3) - whistle

hmm. i dont like the combination of normal hit + soft whistle :/

other difficulties I can't really find anything ^^ nice maps!!
Topic Starter
Sure

Yes wrote:

bleh sorry i'm so late with mod ;_; i forgot!

hard
01:41:989 (4,5) - whistle at end // fixed
01:53:283 (4) - whistle beginning // fixed
02:02:224 (8) - (nazi) make this symmetric please. looks a little uneven // fixed
02:08:224 (2) - whistle beginning
02:11:048 (3) - whistle

hmm. i dont like the combination of normal hit + soft whistle :/

other difficulties I can't really find anything ^^ nice maps!!
Thanks for your mod and star :D
Nakagawa-Kanon
저는 1/3 박자가 마음에 듭니다 [맵만들때의 색다름이란!]
Lokamp
Easy
Excellent!

Normal
See upper ;)

Hard
00:20:224 (4,5) - quite forced jump...

Well,I seldon see such a well-storyboarded and mapped song like this one...
Let's incentivize it with another Proto-bubble!
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