blissfulyoshi wrote:

Quick mod.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:19:71 (2,3,4) - DONE
00:43:30 (2,3,4) - DONE
00:56:08 (5,6,7,8) -DONE
01:01:97 (3,4,5) -DONE
01:09:84 (5,6,7) -DONE
I think you get what I am looking at.

Also I noticed you have notes offscreen like 01:20:65 (1)DONE

Normal:
basically the same opinion and advice from easy.

Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:04:23 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing changeDONE
00:08:16 (3,4,5,6) - " " (also notice how the overall spacing changed between these 2 combos)DONE
00:28:06 (3,4,5) - DONE
There seem to be fewer problems in this difficulty.

Vikon hard:DONE
Get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
I did not like how you sometimes changed spacing randomly, but I guess it is okay
00:28:56 (4,5,6) - make a straight line
01:02:71 (6) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
01:11:07 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the spacing between 2,3 is smaller than the rest of the combo
02:08:07 (4,5,6) - make the end of 4 and the start of 6 the same distnace form 5

Vikon's ultimate:DONE
your spacing seems to vary through a combo
00:16:02 (2) - make this properly distance snapped
00:17:01 (8,9,10) - make the spacing here the same as that in 00:16:27 (4,5,6)
00:36:42 (9,10,11,12) - inconsistent spacing
00:48:21 (1) - I think it is illegal for a slider and spinner to be on the same point on the timeline
00:52:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistnet spacing
you might want to comb through this map with distance snap.

Alex:DONE
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring too
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same

fufe wrote:

I used translator. The notes may not move a lot but it is hard to mod if timing looks bad.

ALL:
!! Look at HP drain on empty space. You might have to add breaks.
!! Please add breaks! two minutes is very long. This is more important for harder difficulties.

Vikon Hard
The stopping sliders look messy =x
01:09:84 (3,4) - move away a little?DONE
02:09:30 (5,6) - align with 4? if you wantDONE

Vikon Ultimate
Use "Catmull" sliders? (push 's') [00:17:62 (11) - looks bad]
01:37:11 (1) - spacing might be hard to see when you have to click this fast. Move away?DONE
01:40:31 (1,2,3) - make spacing the same for all hitsDONE
02:22:45 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - impossible to see for me.DONE
-i do not like maps that have too much 1/4hitstreams

Normal
Timing:52,886 please inherit timing here alsoDONE
01:59:96 (7) - move down so it follows slider (6)?DONE
02:56:85 (10) - spacingDONE
02:57:71 (3) - spacingDONE

Easy
Inherit timing again.
Impossible to fail
make hit circle bigger?DONE
make hp drain a little bigger?DONE
01:11:80 (2,3,4) - spacingDONE( problem?)
01:17:70 (3,4,5) - spacingDONE(^)
01:32:44 (9) - move forward 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:34:90 (1) - move away. down?DONE
01:37:11 (5) - move away.DONE
01:44:24 (7) - move forward 1/4DONE
01:48:17 (4) - move forward 1/4. shorten by 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:52:84 (5,6) - move away.DONE
02:07:58 (6) - too far.DONE
02:08:81 (7) - new combo?DONE
02:11:76 (13) - move forward 1/4 and shorten? It is ok to be late for easy if you do a 1/1 beat combo. DONE
02:15:57 (6) - ^DONE
02:19:62 (5) - forward 1/4?DONE

I will only mod a map that i can complete, I cannot do Alex Insane.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Remove the [Air] on the title please.

[Easy]

Remove first offset.DONE

BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305DONE

01:08:87 (4) - New combo.DONE
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.DONE
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.DONE
02:10:79 (12) - ^DONE
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)DONE

[Normal]

01:05:96 (1) - Finish.DONE
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.DONE

[Vikon's Hard]DONE
00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.

[Vikon's Ultimate]DONE
Abuse of claps on this difficulty.

[Alex's Insane]Waite Alex's Edit

02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.

james039 wrote:

[All difficulties]i will mod when i have best idea
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.

The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.

[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter done
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorterdone
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longerdone
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone

[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to bluedone
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on bluedone
00:41:10 (6) - ^done
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to whitedone
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous whitedone
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to bluedone
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to reddone
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to bluedone
02:49:84 (6) - ^done
02:51:81 (6) - ^done
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.

[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.

[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.

[Alex's insane]wait alex's mod
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.

I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.

Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.

Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.

Takuma wrote:

General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.
Changed tick rate.

Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo. Well, I changed the spacing. >.>
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).

* Repeat for the others like this.
Added new combos, I think there's been worse spacings recently ranked. *coughflyawaycough*

01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was. K
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__< Alright, changed
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD ._.
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068. ? Shorten?

The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.

I think I got it basically with all these fixes. Hopefully... If not, just do the BPM change and resnap for me. >.>

peppy wrote:

Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.

p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - place a note at 02:53:780

~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left

1. [02:49:713] and [02:49:836] - get rid of these timing sections
2. [02:54:019] - BPM should be 118.000
3. [02:55:043] - BPM should be 116.000
4. [02:56:077] - BPM should be 114.000
5. [02:57:129] - BPM should be 113.000
6. [02:58:190] - BPM should be 111.000
7. [02:59:281] - BPM should be 104.000
8. [02:59:851] - BPM should be 75.000

Blazevoir wrote:

By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections?

1. osb文件没有用到,请删掉再full submit
2. 请设置一个preview time,作用是在选歌界面别人选到你的map后歌曲就从设定的地方开始播放,一般设定在歌曲高潮处,请选择自己觉得适合的地方,然后选择Timng - Set Current Position as Preview
3. Alex's Insane 有countdown,其他难度没有,这个最好统一. 个人感觉不用countdown比较好,所以建议去掉Alex's Insane的countdown
4. 在所有难度的tag里加上Alex0686, Vikon

1. soft音量感觉有点大,用40%-50%的比较合适
2. 00:17:762 (3) - 并没有对准音乐,我想你是想用1/2 BSD放note来减低难度,对于这种在1/4拍上的音,可以用slider带过. 所以我的建议是删掉00:17:516 (2),让slider从00:17:516开始00:18:744结束
3. 00:25:624 - 这里也没对准音,建议在00:25:378放一个note,然后slider 00:25:624 - 00:26:607
4. 00:29:432 (4) - slider在这结束(蓝线), slider结尾在蓝线对于新手来说不会造成什么困难
5. 01:15:736 (7) - 去掉clap
6. 02:46:164 - timing section - 这里可以用1/2 BPM, 虽然这里都是note对osu模式没什么影响,不过玩太鼓的这里就可以玩到慢节奏的note,比较合音乐

1. 00:37:172 (6,7) - 往下移一格?(lv3)
2. 02:46:164之后的这一部分感觉不适合加clap,就单纯的soft音就很好了

1. 00:16:029 timing section - Put it a little early in case of early hit in playing reslut in different slider speed
2. 00:24:629 (4) - no clap here
   I fell this map lack of finish sound, so I have some finish sound suggetion :
3. 00:52:149 (2)
4. 01:07:876 (3)
5. 01:39:328 (1)

Lissette wrote:

Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?

sesito71 wrote:

[Breeze's Hard]

Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_< But if I used empty slidertick sound, it would effect other diff. :/

00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm seem better, fixed
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm fixed anyway
Great diff

Shulin wrote:

Breeze's Difficulty:

-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier. unitfied
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - ) blank slidertick sound added

Astom wrote:

[Breeze's Difficulty]

-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong fixed
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short I hate KIAI time lol

James2250 wrote:

Preview point on first 3 diff's: 130784
Preview point on Alex's: 130780 make them all the same
why do 2 of the maps have uninherited timing sections at the end of the map and 2 dont? Present timing is off at the end part :/ [Normal] and [Hard] used spinner from off part so no problems

Breeze:
00:05:477 (1) - remove new combo? done
00:31:522 (4,5) - move these to the corners to mirror 2 and 3 done
00:39:138 (1) - make perfectly symmetrical? fixed
02:03:905 (9) - looks odd changed
02:10:784 (2) - new combo? done

fartownik wrote:

[Breeze]

00:15:920 (4) - Add 3 repeats? add a note instead : P00:17:639 (3) - Make it 1/2 shorter.
00:28:573 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter. fixed
00:29:433 (5) - Move 1/4 back and expand by 1/4. changed another slider
01:09:851 (6) - Silence the repeat?
01:11:079 (1) - ^
01:17:713 (3) - ^
01:52:111 (6) - ^
01:59:605 (2) - Move 1/4 forward? fixed
02:03:905 (9) - Clap on the end. fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat. fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

As Vakin's request. Seems like he is really care about this map.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags. osuplayer111's timing from his Tori no Uta's map even the major tim fixed
2. The timing is wrong. I've disscussed this with Shulin. We suggest you to followe line is not on the right point. Besides, it's ranked just now. So, offset: 65. Resnap all notes. fixed,Resnap all notes
3. You are a good skinner.
4. The last offset is wrong. It's too late. I got 178,200.fixed,Breeze's Difficulty 2:58:20 offset 178.200.Alex's Insane 2:58:20 offset 178.200
5. This map isze is more than 20 MB. Consider compressing the video or something inside this map?fixed,upload new video.map isze become 17MB

[Normal]
00:37:910 - Map this break.fixed,add break time
00:48:720 (3) - Move one tiny grid left.fixed
00:49:211 (4) - Move one tiny grid right. Perhaps you want to symmetry this one to the next stack. But I don't really like the idea.fixed
01:37:368 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick. This the easiest diff, so please don't make the spinner ends too close to the next note.fixed

[Vakin's Hard]
Nice.

[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.fixed

[Alex's Insane]
00:54:617 (1) - Distance error?fixed
01:48:180 (1) - This is an overlapping slider. I can't decide which way the sliderball goes. [!] seems like vikon fixed
02:30:440 (8,9,10) - Delete these notes. Overmapped. Then add something else here.

fixed,delete9,10.add 8 whistle
Star.

ignorethis wrote:

根据老师的帖子 offset应该是1,047，直接把offset改成1,047即可，不用resnap.fixed
<Normal>
02:11:268 (4) - 把后面那个clap去了fixed

<Vikon's Hard>
这个图里面有些new combo设置的不太好，但是这种可有可无的东西我就不写了，也没必要改。

<Breeze's Difficulty>
00:16:772 (1) - 这个显得有点突然了，把音量减下去一些fixed
00:16:772 (1) - ^

<Alex's Insane>
02:31:416 (2) - 去clapfixed

别的没什么了，改好了之后叫我来pubble就可以了

abalee wrote:

plz move your map to pending.

Insane:
01:53:087 (1) - try to remove clap and add finish.fixed
02:10:777 (1) - finish.fixed
02:11:760 (5) - remove clap.fixed
02:13:725 (3) - ,02:14:708 (3) -, 02:36:330 (6) - use clap or whistle only, don't put them in the same note.fixed
02:18:394 (1) -,02:38:295 (2) - clap --> finishfixed

Hard:
01:21:146 (3) - use clap or whistle only, don't put them in the same note.

deepsea wrote:

What happened to those red line near the end? They are not coincident in every diffs.o.O