DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - place a note at 02:53:780

~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left

1. [02:49:713] and [02:49:836] - get rid of these timing sections
2. [02:54:019] - BPM should be 118.000
3. [02:55:043] - BPM should be 116.000
4. [02:56:077] - BPM should be 114.000
5. [02:57:129] - BPM should be 113.000
6. [02:58:190] - BPM should be 111.000
7. [02:59:281] - BPM should be 104.000
8. [02:59:851] - BPM should be 75.000

Blazevoir wrote:

By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections?

1. osb文件没有用到,请删掉再full submit
2. 请设置一个preview time,作用是在选歌界面别人选到你的map后歌曲就从设定的地方开始播放,一般设定在歌曲高潮处,请选择自己觉得适合的地方,然后选择Timng - Set Current Position as Preview
3. Alex's Insane 有countdown,其他难度没有,这个最好统一. 个人感觉不用countdown比较好,所以建议去掉Alex's Insane的countdown
4. 在所有难度的tag里加上Alex0686, Vikon

1. soft音量感觉有点大,用40%-50%的比较合适
2. 00:17:762 (3) - 并没有对准音乐,我想你是想用1/2 BSD放note来减低难度,对于这种在1/4拍上的音,可以用slider带过. 所以我的建议是删掉00:17:516 (2),让slider从00:17:516开始00:18:744结束
3. 00:25:624 - 这里也没对准音,建议在00:25:378放一个note,然后slider 00:25:624 - 00:26:607
4. 00:29:432 (4) - slider在这结束(蓝线), slider结尾在蓝线对于新手来说不会造成什么困难
5. 01:15:736 (7) - 去掉clap
6. 02:46:164 - timing section - 这里可以用1/2 BPM, 虽然这里都是note对osu模式没什么影响,不过玩太鼓的这里就可以玩到慢节奏的note,比较合音乐

1. 00:37:172 (6,7) - 往下移一格?(lv3)
2. 02:46:164之后的这一部分感觉不适合加clap,就单纯的soft音就很好了

1. 00:16:029 timing section - Put it a little early in case of early hit in playing reslut in different slider speed
2. 00:24:629 (4) - no clap here
   I fell this map lack of finish sound, so I have some finish sound suggetion :
3. 00:52:149 (2)
4. 01:07:876 (3)
5. 01:39:328 (1)

Lissette wrote:

Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?

sesito71 wrote:

[Breeze's Hard]

Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_< But if I used empty slidertick sound, it would effect other diff. :/

00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm seem better, fixed
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm fixed anyway
Great diff

Shulin wrote:

Breeze's Difficulty:

-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier. unitfied
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - ) blank slidertick sound added

Astom wrote:

[Breeze's Difficulty]

-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong fixed
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short I hate KIAI time lol

James2250 wrote:

Preview point on first 3 diff's: 130784
Preview point on Alex's: 130780 make them all the same
why do 2 of the maps have uninherited timing sections at the end of the map and 2 dont? Present timing is off at the end part :/ [Normal] and [Hard] used spinner from off part so no problems

Breeze:
00:05:477 (1) - remove new combo? done
00:31:522 (4,5) - move these to the corners to mirror 2 and 3 done
00:39:138 (1) - make perfectly symmetrical? fixed
02:03:905 (9) - looks odd changed
02:10:784 (2) - new combo? done

fartownik wrote:

[Breeze]

00:15:920 (4) - Add 3 repeats? add a note instead : P00:17:639 (3) - Make it 1/2 shorter.
00:28:573 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter. fixed
00:29:433 (5) - Move 1/4 back and expand by 1/4. changed another slider
01:09:851 (6) - Silence the repeat?
01:11:079 (1) - ^
01:17:713 (3) - ^
01:52:111 (6) - ^
01:59:605 (2) - Move 1/4 forward? fixed
02:03:905 (9) - Clap on the end. fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat. fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

As Vakin's request. Seems like he is really care about this map.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags. osuplayer111's timing from his Tori no Uta's map even the major tim fixed
2. The timing is wrong. I've disscussed this with Shulin. We suggest you to followe line is not on the right point. Besides, it's ranked just now. So, offset: 65. Resnap all notes. fixed,Resnap all notes
3. You are a good skinner.
4. The last offset is wrong. It's too late. I got 178,200.fixed,Breeze's Difficulty 2:58:20 offset 178.200.Alex's Insane 2:58:20 offset 178.200
5. This map isze is more than 20 MB. Consider compressing the video or something inside this map?fixed,upload new video.map isze become 17MB

[Normal]
00:37:910 - Map this break.fixed,add break time
00:48:720 (3) - Move one tiny grid left.fixed
00:49:211 (4) - Move one tiny grid right. Perhaps you want to symmetry this one to the next stack. But I don't really like the idea.fixed
01:37:368 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick. This the easiest diff, so please don't make the spinner ends too close to the next note.fixed

[Vakin's Hard]
Nice.

[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.fixed

[Alex's Insane]
00:54:617 (1) - Distance error?fixed
01:48:180 (1) - This is an overlapping slider. I can't decide which way the sliderball goes. [!] seems like vikon fixed
02:30:440 (8,9,10) - Delete these notes. Overmapped. Then add something else here.

fixed,delete9,10.add 8 whistle
Star.

ignorethis wrote:

根据老师的帖子 offset应该是1,047，直接把offset改成1,047即可，不用resnap.fixed
<Normal>
02:11:268 (4) - 把后面那个clap去了fixed

<Vikon's Hard>
这个图里面有些new combo设置的不太好，但是这种可有可无的东西我就不写了，也没必要改。

<Breeze's Difficulty>
00:16:772 (1) - 这个显得有点突然了，把音量减下去一些fixed
00:16:772 (1) - ^

<Alex's Insane>
02:31:416 (2) - 去clapfixed

别的没什么了，改好了之后叫我来pubble就可以了

abalee wrote:

plz move your map to pending.

Insane:
01:53:087 (1) - try to remove clap and add finish.fixed
02:10:777 (1) - finish.fixed
02:11:760 (5) - remove clap.fixed
02:13:725 (3) - ,02:14:708 (3) -, 02:36:330 (6) - use clap or whistle only, don't put them in the same note.fixed
02:18:394 (1) -,02:38:295 (2) - clap --> finishfixed

Hard:
01:21:146 (3) - use clap or whistle only, don't put them in the same note.

deepsea wrote:

What happened to those red line near the end? They are not coincident in every diffs.o.O