Lissette wrote:

Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?

sesito71 wrote:

[Breeze's Hard]

Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_< But if I used empty slidertick sound, it would effect other diff. :/

00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm seem better, fixed
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm fixed anyway
Great diff

Shulin wrote:

Breeze's Difficulty:

-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier. unitfied
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - ) blank slidertick sound added

Astom wrote:

[Breeze's Difficulty]

-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong fixed
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short I hate KIAI time lol

James2250 wrote:

Preview point on first 3 diff's: 130784
Preview point on Alex's: 130780 make them all the same
why do 2 of the maps have uninherited timing sections at the end of the map and 2 dont? Present timing is off at the end part :/ [Normal] and [Hard] used spinner from off part so no problems

Breeze:
00:05:477 (1) - remove new combo? done
00:31:522 (4,5) - move these to the corners to mirror 2 and 3 done
00:39:138 (1) - make perfectly symmetrical? fixed
02:03:905 (9) - looks odd changed
02:10:784 (2) - new combo? done

fartownik wrote:

[Breeze]

00:15:920 (4) - Add 3 repeats? add a note instead : P00:17:639 (3) - Make it 1/2 shorter.
00:28:573 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter. fixed
00:29:433 (5) - Move 1/4 back and expand by 1/4. changed another slider
01:09:851 (6) - Silence the repeat?
01:11:079 (1) - ^
01:17:713 (3) - ^
01:52:111 (6) - ^
01:59:605 (2) - Move 1/4 forward? fixed
02:03:905 (9) - Clap on the end. fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat. fixed

VanMoNky wrote:

As Vakin's request. Seems like he is really care about this map.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags. osuplayer111's timing from his Tori no Uta's map even the major tim fixed
2. The timing is wrong. I've disscussed this with Shulin. We suggest you to followe line is not on the right point. Besides, it's ranked just now. So, offset: 65. Resnap all notes. fixed,Resnap all notes
3. You are a good skinner.
4. The last offset is wrong. It's too late. I got 178,200.fixed,Breeze's Difficulty 2:58:20 offset 178.200.Alex's Insane 2:58:20 offset 178.200
5. This map isze is more than 20 MB. Consider compressing the video or something inside this map?fixed,upload new video.map isze become 17MB

[Normal]
00:37:910 - Map this break.fixed,add break time
00:48:720 (3) - Move one tiny grid left.fixed
00:49:211 (4) - Move one tiny grid right. Perhaps you want to symmetry this one to the next stack. But I don't really like the idea.fixed
01:37:368 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick. This the easiest diff, so please don't make the spinner ends too close to the next note.fixed

[Vakin's Hard]
Nice.

[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.fixed

[Alex's Insane]
00:54:617 (1) - Distance error?fixed
01:48:180 (1) - This is an overlapping slider. I can't decide which way the sliderball goes. [!] seems like vikon fixed
02:30:440 (8,9,10) - Delete these notes. Overmapped. Then add something else here.

fixed,delete9,10.add 8 whistle
Star.

ignorethis wrote:

根据老师的帖子 offset应该是1,047，直接把offset改成1,047即可，不用resnap.fixed
<Normal>
02:11:268 (4) - 把后面那个clap去了fixed

<Vikon's Hard>
这个图里面有些new combo设置的不太好，但是这种可有可无的东西我就不写了，也没必要改。

<Breeze's Difficulty>
00:16:772 (1) - 这个显得有点突然了，把音量减下去一些fixed
00:16:772 (1) - ^

<Alex's Insane>
02:31:416 (2) - 去clapfixed

别的没什么了，改好了之后叫我来pubble就可以了

abalee wrote:

plz move your map to pending.

Insane:
01:53:087 (1) - try to remove clap and add finish.fixed
02:10:777 (1) - finish.fixed
02:11:760 (5) - remove clap.fixed
02:13:725 (3) - ,02:14:708 (3) -, 02:36:330 (6) - use clap or whistle only, don't put them in the same note.fixed
02:18:394 (1) -,02:38:295 (2) - clap --> finishfixed

Hard:
01:21:146 (3) - use clap or whistle only, don't put them in the same note.

deepsea wrote:

What happened to those red line near the end? They are not coincident in every diffs.o.O