General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.

Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo.
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).

* Repeat for the others like this.

01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was.
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__<
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068.

The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.

Vikon's Ultimate:
Please use small hitcircles here.
00:48:22 (1) - This spinner screwed up. Please forward it by 1/4th on the timeline.
00:56:33 (4) - Too far from (3). Best fix is to just reposition the (3).
02:14:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing please.
02:17:41 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:38 (1) - I think it's better off you just deleting this beat.
02:49:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Please stick to a constant spacing here. >__>
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.

Vikon's Hard:
Please use the bigger circles here if anything.
00:47:24 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:85 (3) - A little too close to (2).
01:54:32 (3) - Too close to (2).
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.

Note: I didn't feel like pointing out all of the spacing problems here - you probably get the point by now.

Normal:
00:15:290 - Delete this extra timing section.
00:15:305 - Inherit this timing section.
00:47:73 (7) - New combo.
01:00:75 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing change like this. (1,2) are further apart on the timeline, but closer on the grid, and the reverse for (2,3).
01:29:25 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
01:30:98 (2) - Please stack properly with 01:29:99 (5).
02:06:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:13 (4,5,6) - Incorrect spacing. Maybe just move (6) closer to (5).
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (7,8,9) - 1/8th forward on the timeline.
02:57:71 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.

Easy:
00:15:305 - Delete the extra timing section.
00:34:96 (1) - Too far from previous (3).
00:47:73 (5) - New combo.
00:59:03 (8) - ^
01:08:62 (7) - ^
01:14:76 (7) - ^
01:24:22 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
01:31:96 (9) - Too far from (8).
01:32:33 (10) - Too close to (9).
01:35:40 (3) - Move closer to (2).
01:41:79 (3) - New combo.
01:47:81 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
02:08:57 (7) - New combo.
02:10:78 (12) - ^
02:11:39 (13) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (12), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:15:45 (6) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (5).
02:19:26 (5) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (4), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:21:103 - The kiai time doesn't fit.
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (1,2) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.

Holy crap that took so long. Make good use of this mod post, please. =~="
/sweat

Fixed.very thanks!

Alex's Insane:
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26)
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41)
it's hard to mod wait alex

alright, I'll make some of these changes in the morning, just posting to show I'm still doing this.

thanks for PMing me

Takuma wrote:

General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.
Changed tick rate.

Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo. Well, I changed the spacing. >.>
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).

* Repeat for the others like this.
Added new combos, I think there's been worse spacings recently ranked. *coughflyawaycough*

01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was. K
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__< Alright, changed
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD ._.
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068. ? Shorten?

The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.

I think I got it basically with all these fixes. Hopefully... If not, just do the BPM change and resnap for me. >.>

You really deserved that 2 kudos.

EDIT: oops, forgot i posted earlier... sorry.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu

Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.

p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*

peppy wrote:

Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.

p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*

Oh, thanks, I noticed that slider kept disappearing. >_< (Never noticed the other one though.) It does have something to do with 1/8th though. (I think if I switch back to 1/4th it makes them disappear. (Or something similar.)

(Make a silent normal-sliderslide.wav if you must, soft-sliderslide.wav too)

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu

nice song~!

I like Air. ^^
~Star.

~star

I'm back

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Normal].osu

Welcome back~!
i will also be here if you need my help.
let's continue to ask for mod till this beatmap becomes ranked~

change [Vikon's Hard]
all changed the hitsounds
distance snapped
2:10:350 - 2:24:602 Strengthen the Jump

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Set a preview point.

[Normal]

01:24:469 (4) - End 01:25:329
01:25:575 (x) - Add a circle
01:43:265 (9) - New combo

[Vikon's Hard]

00:47:737 (1) - Remove new combo

[Alex's Insane]

Timing is wrong here

Starred~

thanks xxheroxx!edit this.:-D

ps:
[Alex's Insane]

Timing is wrong here
......I think alex0686 make the timing was not bad :-D

Star~

~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - move 1/2 right
or
place a note at 02:53:780

~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left

~Alex's Insane~
Personally hate this diff


+Star

Thx for DJPop's Modding

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - place a note at 02:53:780

~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left

[Vikon's Hard]
Hitsounds changed

fixed
Let's wait for Alex's one.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Normal].osu

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu

star..
it's good..i like it...
keep going!

Let's try =]

thanks for shareing=]

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

BPM: 122.09
Offset: 16,785 (It's actually only off by a few ms for mapping/playing, but I put it on the "strong beat" of the song where it should be)

Bonus modding!

The spinner image is off center, fix that.

[Normal]
The spacing feels a bit strange but I guess it's all fine.
This has the same kiai problems as [Vikon's Hard].

[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:831 - This is a bad place to start kiai time, try 00:44:305 (but I don't personally like kiai times that start with spinners... up to you, but I don't like how it is now)
01:48:684 (1,1,1,1) - This spacing change makes no sense.
01:52:861 - Bad kiai start point, try 01:53:107 or 01:54:581 .
02:21:119 - Another bad kiai. Try 02:22:593.
02:24:620 (1,1,1) - Make these spinners start a bit later.
02:53:984 (1) - Make this spinner end on the next white tick.

[Alex's Insane]
A lot of this map has patterns that don't work with the music at all. It lacks hitsounds, uses new combos terribly and it really feels like the mapper threw in whatever they wanted with no thinking. I'm not going to point everything out, but there's a lot here that needs to be changed.
00:35:438 (1) - These spinners don't really belong here if you ask me.
00:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - No no no. A thousand times no. You have music playing, map to it.
02:49:836 - Timing is horribly wrong.

感觉Insane的最后有点奇怪..
我的错觉吧...
Star

EDIT: Anything in blue text

[Alex's Insane]

Do the following changes in order:

1. [02:49:713] and [02:49:836] - get rid of these timing sections
2. [02:54:019] - BPM should be 118.000
3. [02:55:043] - BPM should be 116.000
4. [02:56:077] - BPM should be 114.000
5. [02:57:129] - BPM should be 113.000
6. [02:58:190] - BPM should be 111.000
7. [02:59:281] - BPM should be 104.000
8. [02:59:851] - BPM should be 75.000

Note: You'll have to fix the notes, sliders, and spinners after fixing the timing sections. Also, the BPM changes aren't entirely accurate, but it was as close as I could get.

Hope this helps


EDIT2: Fixed this post for clarification purposes.

By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections?

Also, please check my previous post if you haven't yet. I made more accurate timing changes to Alex's difficulty

Blazevoir wrote:

By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections?

Fixed, your mod does help~

Alex's difficulty is under remapping, thx for your advice.

You're welcome One more thing I should point out though:

Alex's Insane
[02:49:344] - I personally think this should be removed too unless he's keeping the sliders at half speed. If that's the case, he needs to return the BPM to normal speed after those sliders.

Oops, forgot to mention:

Here's my ★

AIR > w <~*

+ Star

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

LKS ：
謝謝你的建議，已經fixed了。
(我拉silder的技術實在太可怕了......XD)

Hey Vikon, is it me, or did my timing fixes that I sent you still sound offbeat?

[General]

1. osb文件没有用到,请删掉再full submit
2. 请设置一个preview time,作用是在选歌界面别人选到你的map后歌曲就从设定的地方开始播放,一般设定在歌曲高潮处,请选择自己觉得适合的地方,然后选择Timng - Set Current Position as Preview
3. Alex's Insane 有countdown,其他难度没有,这个最好统一. 个人感觉不用countdown比较好,所以建议去掉Alex's Insane的countdown
4. 在所有难度的tag里加上Alex0686, Vikon

[Normal]

1. soft音量感觉有点大,用40%-50%的比较合适
2. 00:17:762 (3) - 并没有对准音乐,我想你是想用1/2 BSD放note来减低难度,对于这种在1/4拍上的音,可以用slider带过. 所以我的建议是删掉00:17:516 (2),让slider从00:17:516开始00:18:744结束
3. 00:25:624 - 这里也没对准音,建议在00:25:378放一个note,然后slider 00:25:624 - 00:26:607
4. 00:29:432 (4) - slider在这结束(蓝线), slider结尾在蓝线对于新手来说不会造成什么困难
5. 01:15:736 (7) - 去掉clap
6. 02:46:164 - timing section - 这里可以用1/2 BPM, 虽然这里都是note对osu模式没什么影响,不过玩太鼓的这里就可以玩到慢节奏的note,比较合音乐

[Vikon's Hard]

1. 00:37:172 (6,7) - 往下移一格?(lv3)
2. 02:46:164之后的这一部分感觉不适合加clap,就单纯的soft音就很好了

[Alex's Insane]

1. 00:16:029 timing section - Put it a little early in case of early hit in playing reslut in different slider speed
2. 00:24:629 (4) - no clap here
   I fell this map lack of finish sound, so I have some finish sound suggetion :
3. 00:52:149 (2)
4. 01:07:876 (3)
5. 01:39:328 (1)

不错,star
我也有兴趣加diff.如果不介意的话请PM我,我会马上做: )

Normal
check with AIMod (shift+ctrl+A) there are some unsnapped notes
no jumps in normal, plz
double check spacing with distance snap on
01:53:585 - useless inherited timing section
dont put inherited timing section on tope of a note, because if someone hit earlier mess up the effect

Vikon's Hard
02:22:577 (6) - new combo for the change on spacing
02:24:794 (1,1,1) - unsnapped
the changes of volume in some of the timing section are so insignificant that are useless, imo

Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?
01:23:110 (3) - remove, and star next slider here, end point at 01:23:602(red tick) and add note here 01:23:847(white tick)
01:39:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like how sound this combo, i suggest this:
01:39:328 (1) - shorten half beat
01:40:556 (2) - move one beat earlier at 01:40:065 -
01:40:802 (3) - move one beat earlier, and shorten half beat
01:41:048 - start a slider here, end it at 01:41:539 -
01:41:785 - remove this note
01:42:031 - move the slider half beat earlier, shorten half beat, and reverse and....
01:43:014 (1) - remove
you can do it if you like
01:54:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/8 stream >.<
02:23:066 - 02:23:189 - add notes (suggestion) same to the two following combos
02:59:558 (3) - unsnapped note
i cant tell much of the offsets >.<

Star!

Lissette wrote:

Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?

...I thought it was obvious...

THX for Lissette and Breeze 's mods
fixed and ALL notes were resnapped
AImod can't find any problems now.

Can I have another try on Alex's difficulty? It still sounds offbeat...

Also, there's one section I was kinda wanting to change anyway to make it match the beats to the song.


EDIT: Never mind.

我的diff.完成了,久等了 :3
有用到一些custom sound,所以麻烦把custom下载下来后解压到map文件夹后再fullsubmit,麻烦了

我会定期来看看有没有我的diff.的mod,然后修改好后再post : P

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu

Download: custom sound.rar

Hi there~

[Normal]

00:32:504 (5) - New combo
00:44:297 (6) - ^
01:04:690 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:911 (7) - New combo
01:47:196 (3) - ^
End the last spinner in 03:00:941

[Vikon's Hard]

00:21:447 (8,9) - Spacing
00:42:823 (5) - New combo
Start the last spinner in 02:54:027

[Breeze's Hard]

Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_<

00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm

Great diff

Star*

sesito71 wrote:

[Breeze's Hard]

Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_< But if I used empty slidertick sound, it would effect other diff. :/

00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm seem better, fixed
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm fixed anyway
Great diff

thanks to your mod

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu

Normal:

02:26:508 (2) - Too high, hits the HP bar. Reposition/redraw the slider.
02:47:884 (6) - New combo.
02:48:130 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:49:850 (6) - New combo
02:50:096 (1) - Remove new combo
02:51:816 (6) - New combo
02:52:061 (1) - Remove new combo
02:53:781 (3) - Finish?

Vikon's Hard:

01:07:884 (7) - Add finish.
01:52:847 (1,2) - Doesn't fit imo.
01:53:830 (1,2) - ^
02:28:965 - Uneeded inheriting section
02:46:164 - Timing section not present in the other difficulties

Breeze's Difficulty:

-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier.
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - )
-- Timing is different

Map is nice ^^

Alex's Insane:

-- Timing is different to the other difficulties.

01:47:928 (4,5,6) - The overlaps look messy.
01:54:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) 1/8 stream... lol

There should be no discrepancies in you timing, this song has been ranked before use them as references. I'll come back and star this when the timing has been fixed between all difficulties.

[Normal]

-I don't see problems

[Vikon's Hard]

-I don't see problems

[Breeze's Difficulty]

-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short

[Alex's Insane]

-02:26:629 this part is strange, rly, ingame is realy hard to see the "stop" maybe you can fix it but is only my request.

I like the opening of Air =) try your best for approval, good luck and my star