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skyflying

fufe wrote:

I used translator. The notes may not move a lot but it is hard to mod if timing looks bad.

ALL:
!! Look at HP drain on empty space. You might have to add breaks.
!! Please add breaks! two minutes is very long. This is more important for harder difficulties.

Vikon Hard
The stopping sliders look messy =x
01:09:84 (3,4) - move away a little?DONE
02:09:30 (5,6) - align with 4? if you wantDONE

Vikon Ultimate
Use "Catmull" sliders? (push 's') [00:17:62 (11) - looks bad] :(
01:37:11 (1) - spacing might be hard to see when you have to click this fast. Move away?DONE
01:40:31 (1,2,3) - make spacing the same for all hitsDONE
02:22:45 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - impossible to see for me.DONE
-i do not like maps that have too much 1/4hitstreams

Normal
Timing:52,886 please inherit timing here alsoDONE
01:59:96 (7) - move down so it follows slider (6)?DONE
02:56:85 (10) - spacingDONE
02:57:71 (3) - spacingDONE

Easy
Inherit timing again.
Impossible to fail
make hit circle bigger?DONE
make hp drain a little bigger?DONE
01:11:80 (2,3,4) - spacingDONE( :? problem?)
01:17:70 (3,4,5) - spacingDONE(^)
01:32:44 (9) - move forward 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:34:90 (1) - move away. down?DONE
01:37:11 (5) - move away.DONE
01:44:24 (7) - move forward 1/4DONE
01:48:17 (4) - move forward 1/4. shorten by 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:52:84 (5,6) - move away.DONE
02:07:58 (6) - too far.DONE
02:08:81 (7) - new combo?DONE
02:11:76 (13) - move forward 1/4 and shorten? It is ok to be late for easy if you do a 1/1 beat combo. DONE
02:15:57 (6) - ^DONE
02:19:62 (5) - forward 1/4?DONE

I will only mod a map that i can complete, I cannot do Alex Insane.
fixed.thx fufe. love this song,do the best we can .
Andrea
Remove the [Air] on the title please.

[Easy]

Remove first offset.

BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305

01:08:87 (4) - New combo.
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
02:10:79 (12) - ^
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)

[Normal]

01:05:96 (1) - Finish.
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.

[Vikon's Hard]

00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.

[Vikon's Ultimate]

Abuse of claps on this difficulty.

[Alex's Insane]

02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.
Vikon
[Vikon's Hard]

00:42:81 (5) edited the tricky slider

[Vikon's Ultimate]

edited the sound

plz help me to see if they are fine, thx

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
Topic Starter
skyflying

osuplayer111 wrote:

Remove the [Air] on the title please.

[Easy]

Remove first offset.DONE

BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305DONE :)

01:08:87 (4) - New combo.DONE
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.DONE
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.DONE
02:10:79 (12) - ^DONE
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)DONE

[Normal]

01:05:96 (1) - Finish.DONE
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.DONE

[Vikon's Hard]DONE
00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.

[Vikon's Ultimate]DONE
Abuse of claps on this difficulty.

[Alex's Insane]Waite Alex's Edit

02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.

Thx osuplayer111.

PS:这次的修改,统一了BPM122.10 PFFSET15305 TIMING听上去同步率有提高·应为是极其细微的变动Resnam all notes 某触TEST后说的“VIKON HARD 00:28:941 那个5跟接下来的1处理下,很不和谐那个5是由于位置特殊
那个1是由于是硬加上去的,音乐里没有,凭乐感我也猜不到它会出现,只是这个位置我几乎打不出300”VIKON我不知道怎么办啊··也可以无视他·嘿嘿
cyanberryio
So is everyone's fine on the streams apparently? D:

@osuplayer111: And I don't see it too hard. The part before it looks harder. :\

And I'm confused on what you guys are on with the Timing... I see 122.10 and then you guys have 122.09 at the end. :| I hate timing. :( I realized why my end timing is weird. :P I miss typed .085 and it was .85 :|

Sorry, but I'll upload tomorrow, my osu! is being really strange. Could someone re-time the last part, it doesn't sound like 122.10, it feels faster on some parts, and I don't think it's the offset. Listen to the last three sliders, the last one feels off, but the others are fine. :\ I suck at timing so much. D:

I'm not uploading until I get a good timing.
Vikon
[quote][skyflying:“VIKON HARD 00:28:941 那个5跟接下来的1处理下,很不和谐那个5是由于位置特殊
那个1是由于是硬加上去的,音乐里没有,凭乐感我也猜不到它会出现,只是这个位置我几乎打不出300”VIKON我不知道怎么办啊/quote]

那一段喔XD
[00:28:560] (4) (5) (6)是玩jump的,所以手很自然地把它們放在slider開始的位置
而[00:29:788] (1) (2) 雖然音樂沒有,但是跟從紅白線,所以其實不難猜到,我在測試時,其他人總能過到。
甚至有時他們能夠打出full combo時,我還失手miss了一下XD
所以notes沒有太大問題的

P.S. [Vikon's Hard] 調較BPM後,是否還未重移notes的位置?

P.S.2 其實很早以前,我就做了一個spinner-circle的圖,雖然尺寸不太合適,但是你看看,考慮一下用不用吧~
個人覺得這圖很好看的XD

Topic Starter
skyflying
可以用,不过还要做点边框什么的,修改了BPM和OF后由于变化不大只是非常细微的变动·所有NOTE都重置了,我只是放慢50%后感觉TIMING比以前那个好久换了,现在等ALEX有什么进展吧也许TIMING还能进一步精确
Vikon
[Vikon's Ultimate]
[00:48:228] illegal slider appeared again, fixed it.

P.S. [Vikon's Hard]真的重置了notes? 我在osu更新至lastest version ,但發覺所有notes還未重置
是你上載錯了檔案嗎?還是其他原因?

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
Topic Starter
skyflying
:o 除了ALEX的全部套用新BPM OF都重置了NOTE··· :? 好像是我疏忽了
Topic Starter
skyflying
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
cyanberryio
bump bump

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu

Looking at Vikon's Hard:
00:51:17 (2) - New combo to keep the flow from before?
00:51:66 (3) - ^

Easy:
00:34:223 - So empty here, even though it's easy, a slider will fit just right in :D Or something at least. >>

Normal:
Why does this one get more breaks at the beginning.

Vikon's Ultimate:
00:17:63 (11) - Kinda ugly looking. :P Also watch out, it's going a bit high.
00:21:57 (13) - First part of ^
00:25:50 (11) - ^ Both of them, it's going too close to the edge.
All sliders: ^ What's with the weird points? :\

Alex's:
Perfect! Ready for ranking! :P j/k
FurukawaPan
[All difficulties]
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.

The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.

[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longer
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorter
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorter

[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to blue
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on blue
00:41:10 (6) - ^
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to white
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous white
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to blue
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to red
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to blue
02:49:84 (6) - ^
02:51:81 (6) - ^
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.

[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.

[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.

[Alex's insane]
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.

I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.

Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.

Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.
Topic Starter
skyflying

james039 wrote:

[All difficulties]i will mod when i have best idea
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.

The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.

[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter done
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorterdone
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longerdone
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone

[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to bluedone
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on bluedone
00:41:10 (6) - ^done
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to whitedone
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous whitedone
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to bluedone
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to reddone
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to bluedone
02:49:84 (6) - ^done
02:51:81 (6) - ^done
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.

[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.

[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.

[Alex's insane]wait alex's mod
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.

I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.

Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.

Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.
thanks you james039!
Vikon
18/7

[Vikon's Ultimate]
fixed the problem of being too close to the edge

and changed the pattern after[01:84:540]
(especially for those after [02:46:164], It's a big change )

please help me to have a look , THX.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
Takuma
General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.

Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo.
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).

* Repeat for the others like this.

01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was.
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__<
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068.

The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.

Vikon's Ultimate:
Please use small hitcircles here.
00:48:22 (1) - This spinner screwed up. Please forward it by 1/4th on the timeline.
00:56:33 (4) - Too far from (3). Best fix is to just reposition the (3).
02:14:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing please.
02:17:41 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:38 (1) - I think it's better off you just deleting this beat.
02:49:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Please stick to a constant spacing here. >__>
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.

Vikon's Hard:
Please use the bigger circles here if anything.
00:47:24 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:85 (3) - A little too close to (2).
01:54:32 (3) - Too close to (2).
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.

Note: I didn't feel like pointing out all of the spacing problems here - you probably get the point by now.

Normal:
00:15:290 - Delete this extra timing section.
00:15:305 - Inherit this timing section.
00:47:73 (7) - New combo.
01:00:75 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing change like this. (1,2) are further apart on the timeline, but closer on the grid, and the reverse for (2,3).
01:29:25 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
01:30:98 (2) - Please stack properly with 01:29:99 (5).
02:06:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:13 (4,5,6) - Incorrect spacing. Maybe just move (6) closer to (5).
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (7,8,9) - 1/8th forward on the timeline.
02:57:71 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.

Easy:
00:15:305 - Delete the extra timing section.
00:34:96 (1) - Too far from previous (3).
00:47:73 (5) - New combo.
00:59:03 (8) - ^
01:08:62 (7) - ^
01:14:76 (7) - ^
01:24:22 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
01:31:96 (9) - Too far from (8).
01:32:33 (10) - Too close to (9).
01:35:40 (3) - Move closer to (2).
01:41:79 (3) - New combo.
01:47:81 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
02:08:57 (7) - New combo.
02:10:78 (12) - ^
02:11:39 (13) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (12), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:15:45 (6) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (5).
02:19:26 (5) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (4), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:21:103 - The kiai time doesn't fit.
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (1,2) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.

Holy crap that took so long. Make good use of this mod post, please. =~="
/sweat
Topic Starter
skyflying
Fixed.very thanks!

Alex's Insane:
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26)
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41)
it's hard to mod :cry: wait alex
cyanberryio
alright, I'll make some of these changes in the morning, just posting to show I'm still doing this.

thanks for PMing me ;)
cyanberryio

Takuma wrote:

General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.
Changed tick rate.

Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo. Well, I changed the spacing. >.>
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).

* Repeat for the others like this.
Added new combos, I think there's been worse spacings recently ranked. *coughflyawaycough*

01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was. K
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__< Alright, changed
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD ._.
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068. ? Shorten?

The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.

I think I got it basically with all these fixes. Hopefully... If not, just do the BPM change and resnap for me. >.>
You really deserved that 2 kudos. :)

EDIT: oops, forgot i posted earlier... sorry. :(

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
peppy
Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.

p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*
cyanberryio

peppy wrote:

Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.

p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*
Oh, thanks, I noticed that slider kept disappearing. >_< (Never noticed the other one though.) It does have something to do with 1/8th though. (I think if I switch back to 1/4th it makes them disappear. :? (Or something similar.)

(Make a silent normal-sliderslide.wav if you must, soft-sliderslide.wav too)

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
dkey
nice song~!
PicoLo
I like Air. ^^
~Star. ;)
no5181
~star
Topic Starter
skyflying
Vikon
Welcome back~!
i will also be here if you need my help.
let's continue to ask for mod till this beatmap becomes ranked~

change [Vikon's Hard]
all changed the hitsounds
distance snapped
2:10:350 - 2:24:602 Strengthen the Jump

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Set a preview point.

[Normal]

01:24:469 (4) - End 01:25:329
01:25:575 (x) - Add a circle
01:43:265 (9) - New combo

[Vikon's Hard]


00:47:737 (1) - Remove new combo

[Alex's Insane]

Timing is wrong here

Starred~
Topic Starter
skyflying
thanks xxheroxx!edit this.:-D

ps:
[Alex's Insane]

Timing is wrong here
......I think alex0686 make the timing was not bad :-D
happiyan
Star~
DJPop
~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - move 1/2 right
or
place a note at 02:53:780

~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left

~Alex's Insane~
Personally hate this diff :|


+Star
Vikon
Thx for DJPop's Modding

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - place a note at 02:53:780

~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left
[Vikon's Hard]
Hitsounds changed

fixed
Let's wait for Alex's one.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Normal].osu

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
longlong3112
star..
it's good..i like it...
keep going!
omniscience_old
Let's try =]

thanks for shareing=]
tsuka
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
CheeseWarlock
BPM: 122.09
Offset: 16,785 (It's actually only off by a few ms for mapping/playing, but I put it on the "strong beat" of the song where it should be)

Bonus modding!

The spinner image is off center, fix that.

[Normal]
The spacing feels a bit strange but I guess it's all fine.
This has the same kiai problems as [Vikon's Hard].

[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:831 - This is a bad place to start kiai time, try 00:44:305 (but I don't personally like kiai times that start with spinners... up to you, but I don't like how it is now)
01:48:684 (1,1,1,1) - This spacing change makes no sense.
01:52:861 - Bad kiai start point, try 01:53:107 or 01:54:581 .
02:21:119 - Another bad kiai. Try 02:22:593.
02:24:620 (1,1,1) - Make these spinners start a bit later.
02:53:984 (1) - Make this spinner end on the next white tick.

[Alex's Insane]
A lot of this map has patterns that don't work with the music at all. It lacks hitsounds, uses new combos terribly and it really feels like the mapper threw in whatever they wanted with no thinking. I'm not going to point everything out, but there's a lot here that needs to be changed.
00:35:438 (1) - These spinners don't really belong here if you ask me.
00:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - No no no. A thousand times no. You have music playing, map to it.
02:49:836 - Timing is horribly wrong.
Kawachino Yumi
感觉Insane的最后有点奇怪..
我的错觉吧...
Star
NaomiMinette
EDIT: Anything in blue text

[Alex's Insane]

Do the following changes in order:
  1. [02:49:713] and [02:49:836] - get rid of these timing sections
  2. [02:54:019] - BPM should be 118.000
  3. [02:55:043] - BPM should be 116.000
  4. [02:56:077] - BPM should be 114.000
  5. [02:57:129] - BPM should be 113.000
  6. [02:58:190] - BPM should be 111.000
  7. [02:59:281] - BPM should be 104.000
  8. [02:59:851] - BPM should be 75.000
Note: You'll have to fix the notes, sliders, and spinners after fixing the timing sections. Also, the BPM changes aren't entirely accurate, but it was as close as I could get.

Hope this helps :)


EDIT2: Fixed this post for clarification purposes.
NaomiMinette
By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections? :?

Also, please check my previous post if you haven't yet. I made more accurate timing changes to Alex's difficulty :)
Vikon

Blazevoir wrote:

By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections? :?
Fixed, your mod does help~

Alex's difficulty is under remapping, thx for your advice. :)
NaomiMinette
You're welcome :) One more thing I should point out though:

Alex's Insane
[02:49:344] - I personally think this should be removed too unless he's keeping the sliders at half speed. If that's the case, he needs to return the BPM to normal speed after those sliders.
NaomiMinette
Oops, forgot to mention:

Here's my ★ :)
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