不错的MAP
但是总感觉BPM有点奇怪 (不知道是不是我个人原因
但是总感觉BPM有点奇怪 (不知道是不是我个人原因
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幸苦啦···NORMAL HARD现在不知道怎么回事··一分多后吧··NOTE全部对不齐红白线了··我不敢调整啊··
And the stream especially.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
I'll change the streams if nobody likes it.
fixed.thx blissfulyoshi !
I think your suggestion is important!
关于在00:52:251对OFFSET的修改为52887是为了让主音对齐红白线，对于TIMING听起来说是不对的，其实仔细会发现OFFSET相比15291来说是没有变化的，我敢说时间是坚实的，仔细看就不难发现对于TIMING三个拍点来说主音只是对齐了中间那拍点而已（两头拍点才有哒音），所以BPM OFFSET都是正确的，整个BEATMAP修改不下50次，光针对BPM 和OFFSET酒不下20次，所以你还会认为我们不会有一修改好BPM和OFFSET?如果坚持的话，那也很简单，单把00:52:251后对于OFFSET的调整在改回成15291就行了，不过这样就会存在辅音（蓝线）变成主音的问题，歌曲在此本身也就有变化。
About is 52887 is to let in 00:52:251 pair of OFFSET revision aline the red white line keynote, sounded regarding TIMING to say is incorrect, actually careful will discover that OFFSET compared 15291 does not have the change, I dared saying that the time was solid, looked carefully was not difficult to discover keynote only alines among that racket regarding TIMING three racket (two racket only then to have clip clop sound), therefore BPM OFFSET was correct, entire BEATMAP revised does not get down 50 times, the acupuncture laser the liquor did not get down to BPM and OFFSET 20 times, therefore you will also think that we will not have a revisionGood BPM and OFFSET? If insisted, that is also very simple, after list 00:52:251, was changing regarding the OFFSET adjustment 15291 has been good, but like this will have the consonant (blue line) to turn the keynote question, the song also had the change in this itself.
PS:Sorry to my bad english
Thx osuplayer111.
PS:这次的修改，统一了BPM122.10 PFFSET15305 TIMING听上去同步率有提高·应为是极其细微的变动Resnam all notes 某触TEST后说的“VIKON HARD 00：28：941 那个5跟接下来的1处理下，很不和谐那个5是由于位置特殊
那个1是由于是硬加上去的，音乐里没有，凭乐感我也猜不到它会出现，只是这个位置我几乎打不出300”VIKON我不知道怎么办啊··也可以无视他·嘿嘿
EDIT: oops, forgot i posted earlier... sorry.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
(Or something similar.)
(Make a silent normal-sliderslide.wav if you must, soft-sliderslide.wav too)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
Alex's difficulty is under remapping, thx for your advice.
Can I have another try on Alex's difficulty? It still sounds offbeat...
Also, there's one section I was kinda wanting to change anyway to make it match the beats to the song.
EDIT: Never mind.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
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是的，BPM是偏差了少許。
但，只是極少許
相差了0.09，而且已用了好幾次offset補救
所以應該不會有太大問題
(P.S. 努力了5小時，Ultimate已完成了59.1%... 去到01:50 還欠1分鐘，減去了break time.. 大概還有45秒.......
.......去做一個自己不夠級數玩的map......可真吃力-_-......)
但，只是極少許
相差了0.09，而且已用了好幾次offset補救
所以應該不會有太大問題
(P.S. 努力了5小時，Ultimate已完成了59.1%... 去到01:50 還欠1分鐘，減去了break time.. 大概還有45秒.......
.......去做一個自己不夠級數玩的map......可真吃力-_-......)
Topic Starter
幸苦啦···NORMAL HARD现在不知道怎么回事··一分多后吧··NOTE全部对不齐红白线了··我不敢调整啊··This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ultimate完成了........
好累-_-""
命名方面我打算這樣：
舊的[Vikon's level] 變為 - > [Vikon's Hard]
新的 就叫 [ Vikon's Ultimate ]
因為實在很Ultimate了.......我測試時都是用auto看而已-_-自己玩不到
拜託了~
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
好累-_-""
命名方面我打算這樣：
舊的[Vikon's level] 變為 - > [Vikon's Hard]
新的 就叫 [ Vikon's Ultimate ]
因為實在很Ultimate了.......我測試時都是用auto看而已-_-自己玩不到
拜託了~
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
[Vikon's Ultimate]updated
的確太難了......(因為見高手也玩不了-_-)
所以
大大降低了整體的難度：
1. HP Drain 大幅減少
2. Notes size 大幅變大||
(昨天上載錯了 抱歉-_- 現在更新了)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
的確太難了......(因為見高手也玩不了-_-)
所以
大大降低了整體的難度：
1. HP Drain 大幅減少
2. Notes size 大幅變大||
(昨天上載錯了 抱歉-_- 現在更新了)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
最近在考慮一個問題：
Ultimate這難度其實應否存在呢？
因為未必很多人可以玩到
再者，在增加難度時，我不否認很多地方 為了增加難度，所以加了連打
但有一些連打是不必要的。
但刪去那些不必要，我又怕會和hard開始相似
那麼我應該修改Ultimate？還是加強hard的難度就好？
and I want to ask....
do you(all players) think [Ultimate] is needed?
or do you think it is good or not?
If not, where should i improve ?Or do you think hard level is enough?
I would be grateful if you can answer me, thx.
Ultimate這難度其實應否存在呢？
因為未必很多人可以玩到
再者，在增加難度時，我不否認很多地方 為了增加難度，所以加了連打
但有一些連打是不必要的。
但刪去那些不必要，我又怕會和hard開始相似
那麼我應該修改Ultimate？還是加強hard的難度就好？
and I want to ask....
do you(all players) think [Ultimate] is needed?
or do you think it is good or not?
If not, where should i improve ?Or do you think hard level is enough?
I would be grateful if you can answer me, thx.
14/6/09 12:15 [Vikon's Ultimate]updated
把notes減少和調整位置了
看看能不能保持節奏感的同時，更配合歌曲
我看過
現在的連打是 間距相同，那麼 這樣算是起點一致嗎?
但，如果要起點一致(我意思是第一個連打在紅線，下一連打在下一紅線的話)
那有些間距就會變得不一樣，這不會更難嗎？
所以現在的連打是間距相同，但起點不相同(一個紅 一個白)
現在這樣，是要改的 ? 還是保留?
而且 大概在01:43~02:20 那邊
我是重覆相同模式節奏，看看效果好不好?
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
把notes減少和調整位置了
看看能不能保持節奏感的同時，更配合歌曲
我看過
現在的連打是 間距相同，那麼 這樣算是起點一致嗎?
但，如果要起點一致(我意思是第一個連打在紅線，下一連打在下一紅線的話)
那有些間距就會變得不一樣，這不會更難嗎？
所以現在的連打是間距相同，但起點不相同(一個紅 一個白)
現在這樣，是要改的 ? 還是保留?
而且 大概在01:43~02:20 那邊
我是重覆相同模式節奏，看看效果好不好?
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
14/6/09 12:15 [Vikon's Ultimate]updated
把notes減少和調整位置了
看看能不能保持節奏感的同時，更配合歌曲
我看過
現在的連打是 間距相同，那麼 這樣算是起點一致嗎?
但，如果要起點一致(我意思是第一個連打在紅線，下一連打在下一紅線的話)
那有些間距就會變得不一樣，這不會更難嗎？
所以現在的連打是間距相同，但起點不相同(一個紅 一個白)
現在這樣，是要改的 ? 還是保留?
而且 大概在01:43~02:20 那邊
我是重覆相同模式節奏，看看效果好不好?
把notes減少和調整位置了
看看能不能保持節奏感的同時，更配合歌曲
我看過
現在的連打是 間距相同，那麼 這樣算是起點一致嗎?
但，如果要起點一致(我意思是第一個連打在紅線，下一連打在下一紅線的話)
那有些間距就會變得不一樣，這不會更難嗎？
所以現在的連打是間距相同，但起點不相同(一個紅 一個白)
現在這樣，是要改的 ? 還是保留?
而且 大概在01:43~02:20 那邊
我是重覆相同模式節奏，看看效果好不好?
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
gah, someone messed up mine. 
j/k I'll upload the fixed. 122.85 BPM sounds much better. :\ Especially near the end. :\ Or maybe just the end. I'm not so good at timing.Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
And thanks Vikon!
j/k I'll upload the fixed. 122.85 BPM sounds much better. :\ Especially near the end. :\ Or maybe just the end. I'm not so good at timing.Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osuAnd thanks Vikon!
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
BPM should be at 122.09 like in Vikon's and Alex's.
Offset should be 303 like in Alex's.
Change normal? to Normal.
I don't know much about timing at the end on Alex's.
Sorry I couldn't be much of help so I'll just star.
Offset should be 303 like in Alex's.
Change normal? to Normal.
I don't know much about timing at the end on Alex's.
Sorry I couldn't be much of help so I'll just star.
thx for Mafiamaster!!
so is time to change~
17/4/09 ( change 3 difficulties )
[normal?]
named changed to [Normal]
BPM changed to 122.09
offsets changed
1st -> 303
[15569] -> [ 15537]
[52823] -> [52763]
[166183]-> [166163]
some notes changed
( 其實我不太明白最後那3個漸慢效果的notes....所以，改得不太好。)
[Vikon's Hard]
3 offsets changed
1st -> 303
2nd -> 52887
3rd -> 166164
[Vikon's Ultimate]
2 offsets changed
[15529] -> [303]
2nd -> [166164]
Alex的和easy下次再修改
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Normal].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
so is time to change~
17/4/09 ( change 3 difficulties )
[normal?]
named changed to [Normal]
BPM changed to 122.09
offsets changed
1st -> 303
[15569] -> [ 15537]
[52823] -> [52763]
[166183]-> [166163]
some notes changed
( 其實我不太明白最後那3個漸慢效果的notes....所以，改得不太好。)
[Vikon's Hard]
3 offsets changed
1st -> 303
2nd -> 52887
3rd -> 166164
[Vikon's Ultimate]
2 offsets changed
[15529] -> [303]
2nd -> [166164]
Alex的和easy下次再修改
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Normal].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Easy].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Normal].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Easy].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Normal].osu
續上帖(因為一帖只可上載2file)
[Vikon's Hard],[Vikon's Ultimate] added offsets
[15291]
[52887]
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
[Vikon's Hard],[Vikon's Ultimate] added offsets
[15291]
[52887]
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
Quick mod.
Not great at timing, so I won't touch that for now.
Easy:
This difficulty feels like it did not use distance snap, but the map was easy enough to read except at certain parts. Ex: 00:30:52 (7,8,9,10,1).
Also, get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
The patterns feel okay right now, so fix the spacing and I could mod from there.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:19:71 (2,3,4) -
00:43:30 (2,3,4) -
00:56:08 (5,6,7,8) -
01:01:97 (3,4,5) -
01:09:84 (5,6,7) -
I think you get what I am looking at.
Also I noticed you have notes offscreen like 01:20:65 (1)
Last off, getting rid of the first timing section for the maps that have no beats between the first timing section and the second won't change anything because the second on has another offset that the song will go off of.
Normal:
basically the same opinion and advice from easy.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:04:23 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing change
00:08:16 (3,4,5,6) - " " (also notice how the overall spacing changed between these 2 combos)
00:28:06 (3,4,5) -
There seem to be fewer problems in this difficulty.
Vikon hard:
Get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
I did not like how you sometimes changed spacing randomly, but I guess it is okay
00:28:56 (4,5,6) - make a straight line
01:02:71 (6) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
01:11:07 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the spacing between 2,3 is smaller than the rest of the combo
02:08:07 (4,5,6) - make the end of 4 and the start of 6 the same distnace form 5
Vikon's ultimate:
your spacing seems to vary through a combo
00:16:02 (2) - make this properly distance snapped
00:17:01 (8,9,10) - make the spacing here the same as that in 00:16:27 (4,5,6)
00:36:42 (9,10,11,12) - inconsistent spacing
00:48:21 (1) - I think it is illegal for a slider and spinner to be on the same point on the timeline
00:52:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistnet spacing
you might want to comb through this map with distance snap.
Alex:
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring too
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same
Overall nice beatmap, but it does need quite a bit of work in some diffs. Star.
Sorry I don't understand chinese very well.
Not great at timing, so I won't touch that for now.
Easy:
This difficulty feels like it did not use distance snap, but the map was easy enough to read except at certain parts. Ex: 00:30:52 (7,8,9,10,1).
Also, get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
The patterns feel okay right now, so fix the spacing and I could mod from there.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:19:71 (2,3,4) -
00:43:30 (2,3,4) -
00:56:08 (5,6,7,8) -
01:01:97 (3,4,5) -
01:09:84 (5,6,7) -
I think you get what I am looking at.
Also I noticed you have notes offscreen like 01:20:65 (1)
Last off, getting rid of the first timing section for the maps that have no beats between the first timing section and the second won't change anything because the second on has another offset that the song will go off of.
Normal:
basically the same opinion and advice from easy.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:04:23 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing change
00:08:16 (3,4,5,6) - " " (also notice how the overall spacing changed between these 2 combos)
00:28:06 (3,4,5) -
There seem to be fewer problems in this difficulty.
Vikon hard:
Get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
I did not like how you sometimes changed spacing randomly, but I guess it is okay
00:28:56 (4,5,6) - make a straight line
01:02:71 (6) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
01:11:07 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the spacing between 2,3 is smaller than the rest of the combo
02:08:07 (4,5,6) - make the end of 4 and the start of 6 the same distnace form 5
Vikon's ultimate:
your spacing seems to vary through a combo
00:16:02 (2) - make this properly distance snapped
00:17:01 (8,9,10) - make the spacing here the same as that in 00:16:27 (4,5,6)
00:36:42 (9,10,11,12) - inconsistent spacing
00:48:21 (1) - I think it is illegal for a slider and spinner to be on the same point on the timeline
00:52:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistnet spacing
you might want to comb through this map with distance snap.
Alex:
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring too
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same
Overall nice beatmap, but it does need quite a bit of work in some diffs. Star.
Sorry I don't understand chinese very well.
thx for blissfulyoshi !
fixed my level :
take most of blissfulyoshi's advice
but keep the first timing section
because this section let the timing become clear( in my opinion)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
fixed my level :
take most of blissfulyoshi's advice
but keep the first timing section
because this section let the timing become clear( in my opinion)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Easy].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Easy].osu
Topic Starter
容易：
This困难感觉象没有使用距离短冷期，但是地图是足够容易读除了在某些零件。 前： 00:30 ：52 (7,8,9,10,1)。因为您在这diff，不使用它Also，摆脱第一个时间部分。
The样式现在感到好，因此固定间距，并且我可能从那里的mod。
Normal ：
basically从容易的同样观点和忠告。
大概就是间距的问题了，要放的合理什么的，说真的我以前真的不太注意，随便改了点EASY...要好好复习了··嗯
This困难感觉象没有使用距离短冷期，但是地图是足够容易读除了在某些零件。 前： 00:30 ：52 (7,8,9,10,1)。因为您在这diff，不使用它Also，摆脱第一个时间部分。
The样式现在感到好，因此固定间距，并且我可能从那里的mod。
Normal ：
basically从容易的同样观点和忠告。
大概就是间距的问题了，要放的合理什么的，说真的我以前真的不太注意，随便改了点EASY...要好好复习了··嗯
Alex:Gah! It's +10 million points. D: Oops... Rankability is questionable.
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage Moved it.. -.-
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5eh? No nazi...
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4Eh, fine...
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring tooGah, remade it, but still questioning the rankablity. D:
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen-.- There's been more offscreen... But I'll change it.
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2nah
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same
And the stream especially.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
I'll change the streams if nobody likes it.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi wrote:
Quick mod.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:19:71 (2,3,4) - DONE
00:43:30 (2,3,4) - DONE
00:56:08 (5,6,7,8) -DONE
01:01:97 (3,4,5) -DONE
01:09:84 (5,6,7) -DONE
I think you get what I am looking at.
Also I noticed you have notes offscreen like 01:20:65 (1)DONE
Normal:
basically the same opinion and advice from easy.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:04:23 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing changeDONE
00:08:16 (3,4,5,6) - " " (also notice how the overall spacing changed between these 2 combos)DONE
00:28:06 (3,4,5) - DONE
There seem to be fewer problems in this difficulty.
Vikon hard:DONE
Get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
I did not like how you sometimes changed spacing randomly, but I guess it is okay
00:28:56 (4,5,6) - make a straight line
01:02:71 (6) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
01:11:07 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the spacing between 2,3 is smaller than the rest of the combo
02:08:07 (4,5,6) - make the end of 4 and the start of 6 the same distnace form 5
Vikon's ultimate:DONE
your spacing seems to vary through a combo
00:16:02 (2) - make this properly distance snapped
00:17:01 (8,9,10) - make the spacing here the same as that in 00:16:27 (4,5,6)
00:36:42 (9,10,11,12) - inconsistent spacing
00:48:21 (1) - I think it is illegal for a slider and spinner to be on the same point on the timeline
00:52:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistnet spacing
you might want to comb through this map with distance snap.
Alex:DONE
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring too
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same
fixed.thx blissfulyoshi !I think your suggestion is important!
I dont know if I'm missing something but the the timing is a mess!
I think Alex's difficulty has good timing. Im thinking everyone should operate off of that.
Go to 00:52:251 and listen to timing tab. Then listen again on all the other difficulties
It sounds WAY off. Right now, your timing tabs are saying the music has a different beat.
Ive been trying to see what timing i would use but i cant get it down right now. maybe ill check back after i see what you guys have to say about it.
Alex's final timing point is also too early by the last notes.
Its not worth modding in detail until timing is solid
I think Alex's difficulty has good timing. Im thinking everyone should operate off of that.
Go to 00:52:251 and listen to timing tab. Then listen again on all the other difficulties
It sounds WAY off. Right now, your timing tabs are saying the music has a different beat.
Ive been trying to see what timing i would use but i cant get it down right now. maybe ill check back after i see what you guys have to say about it.
Alex's final timing point is also too early by the last notes.
Its not worth modding in detail until timing is solid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Testing Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Testing Vikon's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
关于在00:52:251对OFFSET的修改为52887是为了让主音对齐红白线，对于TIMING听起来说是不对的，其实仔细会发现OFFSET相比15291来说是没有变化的，我敢说时间是坚实的，仔细看就不难发现对于TIMING三个拍点来说主音只是对齐了中间那拍点而已（两头拍点才有哒音），所以BPM OFFSET都是正确的，整个BEATMAP修改不下50次，光针对BPM 和OFFSET酒不下20次，所以你还会认为我们不会有一修改好BPM和OFFSET?如果坚持的话，那也很简单，单把00:52:251后对于OFFSET的调整在改回成15291就行了，不过这样就会存在辅音（蓝线）变成主音的问题，歌曲在此本身也就有变化。About is 52887 is to let in 00:52:251 pair of OFFSET revision aline the red white line keynote, sounded regarding TIMING to say is incorrect, actually careful will discover that OFFSET compared 15291 does not have the change, I dared saying that the time was solid, looked carefully was not difficult to discover keynote only alines among that racket regarding TIMING three racket (two racket only then to have clip clop sound), therefore BPM OFFSET was correct, entire BEATMAP revised does not get down 50 times, the acupuncture laser the liquor did not get down to BPM and OFFSET 20 times, therefore you will also think that we will not have a revisionGood BPM and OFFSET? If insisted, that is also very simple, after list 00:52:251, was changing regarding the OFFSET adjustment 15291 has been good, but like this will have the consonant (blue line) to turn the keynote question, the song also had the change in this itself.
PS:Sorry to my bad english
Your translation came out bad =x
1. Inherit this timing point.
2.There will be a clap sound on these beats. Not before this. Not after this.
3.There will be a drum sound on these beats.
(?). Sometimes this this circle should be on the end when you hear the clap or the drum.
If the song changes beat or offset then you should see this in all difficultys. Red timing should be the same on all difficultys (unless someone changes BPM for slider speed)
1. Inherit this timing point.
2.There will be a clap sound on these beats. Not before this. Not after this.
3.There will be a drum sound on these beats.
(?). Sometimes this this circle should be on the end when you hear the clap or the drum.
If the song changes beat or offset then you should see this in all difficultys. Red timing should be the same on all difficultys (unless someone changes BPM for slider speed)
Topic Starter
这次的改动：取消了所有难度使用到对00:52:251调整OFFSET（调整为52887）的动作，正如我所说的，对MAP本身是没有影响的，这样TIMING听起来是很准确的。
I used translator. The notes may not move a lot but it is hard to mod if timing looks bad.
ALL:
!! Look at HP drain on empty space. You might have to add breaks.
!! Please add breaks! two minutes is very long. This is more important for harder difficulties.
Vikon Hard
The stopping sliders look messy =x
01:09:84 (3,4) - move away a little?
02:09:30 (5,6) - align with 4? if you want
Vikon Ultimate
Use "Catmull" sliders? (push 's') [00:17:62 (11) - looks bad]
01:37:11 (1) - spacing might be hard to see when you have to click this fast. Move away?
01:40:31 (1,2,3) - make spacing the same for all hits
02:22:45 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - impossible to see for me.
-i do not like maps that have too much 1/4hitstreams
Normal
Timing:52,886 please inherit timing here also
01:59:96 (7) - move down so it follows slider (6)?
02:56:85 (10) - spacing
02:57:71 (3) - spacing
Easy
Inherit timing again.
Impossible to fail
make hit circle bigger?
make hp drain a little bigger?
01:11:80 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:17:70 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:32:44 (9) - move forward 1/4. then fix spacing.
01:34:90 (1) - move away. down?
01:37:11 (5) - move away.
01:44:24 (7) - move forward 1/4
01:48:17 (4) - move forward 1/4. shorten by 1/4. then fix spacing.
01:52:84 (5,6) - move away.
02:07:58 (6) - too far.
02:08:81 (7) - new combo?
02:11:76 (13) - move forward 1/4 and shorten? It is ok to be late for easy if you do a 1/1 beat combo.
02:15:57 (6) - ^
02:19:62 (5) - forward 1/4?
I will only mod a map that i can complete, I cannot do Alex Insane.
ALL:
!! Look at HP drain on empty space. You might have to add breaks.
!! Please add breaks! two minutes is very long. This is more important for harder difficulties.
Vikon Hard
The stopping sliders look messy =x
01:09:84 (3,4) - move away a little?
02:09:30 (5,6) - align with 4? if you want
Vikon Ultimate
Use "Catmull" sliders? (push 's') [00:17:62 (11) - looks bad]
01:37:11 (1) - spacing might be hard to see when you have to click this fast. Move away?
01:40:31 (1,2,3) - make spacing the same for all hits
02:22:45 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - impossible to see for me.
-i do not like maps that have too much 1/4hitstreams
Normal
Timing:52,886 please inherit timing here also
01:59:96 (7) - move down so it follows slider (6)?
02:56:85 (10) - spacing
02:57:71 (3) - spacing
Easy
Inherit timing again.
Impossible to fail
make hit circle bigger?
make hp drain a little bigger?
01:11:80 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:17:70 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:32:44 (9) - move forward 1/4. then fix spacing.
01:34:90 (1) - move away. down?
01:37:11 (5) - move away.
01:44:24 (7) - move forward 1/4
01:48:17 (4) - move forward 1/4. shorten by 1/4. then fix spacing.
01:52:84 (5,6) - move away.
02:07:58 (6) - too far.
02:08:81 (7) - new combo?
02:11:76 (13) - move forward 1/4 and shorten? It is ok to be late for easy if you do a 1/1 beat combo.
02:15:57 (6) - ^
02:19:62 (5) - forward 1/4?
I will only mod a map that i can complete, I cannot do Alex Insane.
Topic Starter
fixed.thx fufe. love this song,do the best we can .fufe wrote:
I used translator. The notes may not move a lot but it is hard to mod if timing looks bad.
ALL:
!! Look at HP drain on empty space. You might have to add breaks.
!! Please add breaks! two minutes is very long. This is more important for harder difficulties.
Vikon Hard
The stopping sliders look messy =x
01:09:84 (3,4) - move away a little?DONE
02:09:30 (5,6) - align with 4? if you wantDONE
Vikon Ultimate
Use "Catmull" sliders? (push 's') [00:17:62 (11) - looks bad]
01:37:11 (1) - spacing might be hard to see when you have to click this fast. Move away?DONE
01:40:31 (1,2,3) - make spacing the same for all hitsDONE
02:22:45 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - impossible to see for me.DONE
-i do not like maps that have too much 1/4hitstreams
Normal
Timing:52,886 please inherit timing here alsoDONE
01:59:96 (7) - move down so it follows slider (6)?DONE
02:56:85 (10) - spacingDONE
02:57:71 (3) - spacingDONE
Easy
Inherit timing again.
Impossible to fail
make hit circle bigger?DONE
make hp drain a little bigger?DONE
01:11:80 (2,3,4) - spacingDONE(
01:17:70 (3,4,5) - spacingDONE(^)
01:32:44 (9) - move forward 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:34:90 (1) - move away. down?DONE
01:37:11 (5) - move away.DONE
01:44:24 (7) - move forward 1/4DONE
01:48:17 (4) - move forward 1/4. shorten by 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:52:84 (5,6) - move away.DONE
02:07:58 (6) - too far.DONE
02:08:81 (7) - new combo?DONE
02:11:76 (13) - move forward 1/4 and shorten? It is ok to be late for easy if you do a 1/1 beat combo. DONE
02:15:57 (6) - ^DONE
02:19:62 (5) - forward 1/4?DONE
I will only mod a map that i can complete, I cannot do Alex Insane.
Remove the [Air] on the title please.
[Easy]
Remove first offset.
BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305
01:08:87 (4) - New combo.
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
02:10:79 (12) - ^
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)
[Normal]
01:05:96 (1) - Finish.
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.
[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.
[Vikon's Ultimate]
Abuse of claps on this difficulty.
[Alex's Insane]
02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.
[Easy]
Remove first offset.
BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305
01:08:87 (4) - New combo.
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
02:10:79 (12) - ^
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)
[Normal]
01:05:96 (1) - Finish.
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.
[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.
[Vikon's Ultimate]
Abuse of claps on this difficulty.
[Alex's Insane]
02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.
[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:81 (5) edited the tricky slider
[Vikon's Ultimate]
edited the sound
plz help me to see if they are fine, thx
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
00:42:81 (5) edited the tricky slider
[Vikon's Ultimate]
edited the sound
plz help me to see if they are fine, thx
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
Topic Starter
osuplayer111 wrote:
Remove the [Air] on the title please.
[Easy]
Remove first offset.DONE
BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305DONE
01:08:87 (4) - New combo.DONE
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.DONE
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.DONE
02:10:79 (12) - ^DONE
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)DONE
[Normal]
01:05:96 (1) - Finish.DONE
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.DONE
[Vikon's Hard]DONE
00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.
[Vikon's Ultimate]DONE
Abuse of claps on this difficulty.
[Alex's Insane]Waite Alex's Edit
02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.
Thx osuplayer111.
PS:这次的修改，统一了BPM122.10 PFFSET15305 TIMING听上去同步率有提高·应为是极其细微的变动Resnam all notes 某触TEST后说的“VIKON HARD 00：28：941 那个5跟接下来的1处理下，很不和谐那个5是由于位置特殊
那个1是由于是硬加上去的，音乐里没有，凭乐感我也猜不到它会出现，只是这个位置我几乎打不出300”VIKON我不知道怎么办啊··也可以无视他·嘿嘿
So is everyone's fine on the streams apparently? D:
@osuplayer111: And I don't see it too hard. The part before it looks harder. :\
And I'm confused on what you guys are on with the Timing... I see 122.10 and then you guys have 122.09 at the end. I hate timing. I realized why my end timing is weird. I miss typed .085 and it was .85
Sorry, but I'll upload tomorrow, my osu! is being really strange. Could someone re-time the last part, it doesn't sound like 122.10, it feels faster on some parts, and I don't think it's the offset. Listen to the last three sliders, the last one feels off, but the others are fine. :\ I suck at timing so much. D:
I'm not uploading until I get a good timing.
@osuplayer111: And I don't see it too hard. The part before it looks harder. :\
And I'm confused on what you guys are on with the Timing... I see 122.10 and then you guys have 122.09 at the end.
I hate timing. I realized why my end timing is weird. I miss typed .085 and it was .85 Sorry, but I'll upload tomorrow, my osu! is being really strange. Could someone re-time the last part, it doesn't sound like 122.10, it feels faster on some parts, and I don't think it's the offset. Listen to the last three sliders, the last one feels off, but the others are fine. :\ I suck at timing so much. D:
I'm not uploading until I get a good timing.
[quote][skyflying:“VIKON HARD 00：28：941 那个5跟接下来的1处理下，很不和谐那个5是由于位置特殊
那个1是由于是硬加上去的，音乐里没有，凭乐感我也猜不到它会出现，只是这个位置我几乎打不出300”VIKON我不知道怎么办啊/quote]
那一段喔XD
[00:28:560] (4) (5) (6)是玩jump的，所以手很自然地把它們放在slider開始的位置
而[00:29:788] (1) (2) 雖然音樂沒有，但是跟從紅白線，所以其實不難猜到，我在測試時，其他人總能過到。
甚至有時他們能夠打出full combo時，我還失手miss了一下XD
所以notes沒有太大問題的
P.S. [Vikon's Hard] 調較BPM後，是否還未重移notes的位置？
P.S.2 其實很早以前，我就做了一個spinner-circle的圖，雖然尺寸不太合適，但是你看看，考慮一下用不用吧~
個人覺得這圖很好看的XD
那个1是由于是硬加上去的，音乐里没有，凭乐感我也猜不到它会出现，只是这个位置我几乎打不出300”VIKON我不知道怎么办啊/quote]
那一段喔XD
[00:28:560] (4) (5) (6)是玩jump的，所以手很自然地把它們放在slider開始的位置
而[00:29:788] (1) (2) 雖然音樂沒有，但是跟從紅白線，所以其實不難猜到，我在測試時，其他人總能過到。
甚至有時他們能夠打出full combo時，我還失手miss了一下XD
所以notes沒有太大問題的
P.S. [Vikon's Hard] 調較BPM後，是否還未重移notes的位置？
P.S.2 其實很早以前，我就做了一個spinner-circle的圖，雖然尺寸不太合適，但是你看看，考慮一下用不用吧~
個人覺得這圖很好看的XD
Topic Starter
可以用，不过还要做点边框什么的，修改了BPM和OF后由于变化不大只是非常细微的变动·所有NOTE都重置了，我只是放慢50%后感觉TIMING比以前那个好久换了，现在等ALEX有什么进展吧也许TIMING还能进一步精确
[Vikon's Ultimate]
[00:48:228] illegal slider appeared again, fixed it.
P.S. [Vikon's Hard]真的重置了notes? 我在osu更新至lastest version ，但發覺所有notes還未重置
是你上載錯了檔案嗎?還是其他原因?
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
[00:48:228] illegal slider appeared again, fixed it.
P.S. [Vikon's Hard]真的重置了notes? 我在osu更新至lastest version ，但發覺所有notes還未重置
是你上載錯了檔案嗎?還是其他原因?
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
除了ALEX的全部套用新BPM OF都重置了NOTE···
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
bump bump
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
Looking at Vikon's Hard:
00:51:17 (2) - New combo to keep the flow from before?
00:51:66 (3) - ^
Easy:
00:34:223 - So empty here, even though it's easy, a slider will fit just right in Or something at least. >>
Normal:
Why does this one get more breaks at the beginning.
Vikon's Ultimate:
00:17:63 (11) - Kinda ugly looking. Also watch out, it's going a bit high.
00:21:57 (13) - First part of ^
00:25:50 (11) - ^ Both of them, it's going too close to the edge.
All sliders: ^ What's with the weird points? :\
Alex's:
Perfect! Ready for ranking! j/k
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
Looking at Vikon's Hard:
00:51:17 (2) - New combo to keep the flow from before?
00:51:66 (3) - ^
Easy:
00:34:223 - So empty here, even though it's easy, a slider will fit just right in
Or something at least. >>Normal:
Why does this one get more breaks at the beginning.
Vikon's Ultimate:
00:17:63 (11) - Kinda ugly looking.
Also watch out, it's going a bit high.00:21:57 (13) - First part of ^
00:25:50 (11) - ^ Both of them, it's going too close to the edge.
All sliders: ^ What's with the weird points? :\
Alex's:
Perfect! Ready for ranking!
j/k[All difficulties]
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.
The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.
[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longer
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorter
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorter
[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to blue
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on blue
00:41:10 (6) - ^
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to white
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous white
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to blue
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to red
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to blue
02:49:84 (6) - ^
02:51:81 (6) - ^
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.
[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.
[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.
[Alex's insane]
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.
I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.
Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.
Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.
The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.
[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longer
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorter
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorter
[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to blue
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on blue
00:41:10 (6) - ^
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to white
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous white
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to blue
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to red
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to blue
02:49:84 (6) - ^
02:51:81 (6) - ^
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.
[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.
[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.
[Alex's insane]
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.
I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.
Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.
Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.
Topic Starter
thanks you james039!james039 wrote:
[All difficulties]i will mod when i have best idea
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.
The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.
[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter done
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorterdone
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longerdone
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone
[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to bluedone
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on bluedone
00:41:10 (6) - ^done
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to whitedone
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous whitedone
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to bluedone
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to reddone
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to bluedone
02:49:84 (6) - ^done
02:51:81 (6) - ^done
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.
[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.
[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.
[Alex's insane]wait alex's mod
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.
I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.
Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.
Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.
18/7
[Vikon's Ultimate]
fixed the problem of being too close to the edge
and changed the pattern after[01:84:540]
(especially for those after [02:46:164], It's a big change )
please help me to have a look , THX.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
[Vikon's Ultimate]
fixed the problem of being too close to the edge
and changed the pattern after[01:84:540]
(especially for those after [02:46:164], It's a big change )
please help me to have a look , THX.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Ultimate].osu
General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.
Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo.
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
* Repeat for the others like this.
01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was.
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__<
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068.
The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.
Vikon's Ultimate:
Please use small hitcircles here.
00:48:22 (1) - This spinner screwed up. Please forward it by 1/4th on the timeline.
00:56:33 (4) - Too far from (3). Best fix is to just reposition the (3).
02:14:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing please.
02:17:41 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:38 (1) - I think it's better off you just deleting this beat.
02:49:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Please stick to a constant spacing here. >__>
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.
Vikon's Hard:
Please use the bigger circles here if anything.
00:47:24 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:85 (3) - A little too close to (2).
01:54:32 (3) - Too close to (2).
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.
Note: I didn't feel like pointing out all of the spacing problems here - you probably get the point by now.
Normal:
00:15:290 - Delete this extra timing section.
00:15:305 - Inherit this timing section.
00:47:73 (7) - New combo.
01:00:75 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing change like this. (1,2) are further apart on the timeline, but closer on the grid, and the reverse for (2,3).
01:29:25 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
01:30:98 (2) - Please stack properly with 01:29:99 (5).
02:06:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:13 (4,5,6) - Incorrect spacing. Maybe just move (6) closer to (5).
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (7,8,9) - 1/8th forward on the timeline.
02:57:71 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
Easy:
00:15:305 - Delete the extra timing section.
00:34:96 (1) - Too far from previous (3).
00:47:73 (5) - New combo.
00:59:03 (8) - ^
01:08:62 (7) - ^
01:14:76 (7) - ^
01:24:22 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
01:31:96 (9) - Too far from (8).
01:32:33 (10) - Too close to (9).
01:35:40 (3) - Move closer to (2).
01:41:79 (3) - New combo.
01:47:81 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
02:08:57 (7) - New combo.
02:10:78 (12) - ^
02:11:39 (13) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (12), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:15:45 (6) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (5).
02:19:26 (5) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (4), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:21:103 - The kiai time doesn't fit.
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (1,2) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
Holy crap that took so long. Make good use of this mod post, please. =~="
/sweat
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.
Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo.
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
* Repeat for the others like this.
01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was.
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__<
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068.
The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.
Vikon's Ultimate:
Please use small hitcircles here.
00:48:22 (1) - This spinner screwed up. Please forward it by 1/4th on the timeline.
00:56:33 (4) - Too far from (3). Best fix is to just reposition the (3).
02:14:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing please.
02:17:41 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:38 (1) - I think it's better off you just deleting this beat.
02:49:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Please stick to a constant spacing here. >__>
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.
Vikon's Hard:
Please use the bigger circles here if anything.
00:47:24 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:85 (3) - A little too close to (2).
01:54:32 (3) - Too close to (2).
02:54:02 (1) - Remove clap.
Note: I didn't feel like pointing out all of the spacing problems here - you probably get the point by now.
Normal:
00:15:290 - Delete this extra timing section.
00:15:305 - Inherit this timing section.
00:47:73 (7) - New combo.
01:00:75 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing change like this. (1,2) are further apart on the timeline, but closer on the grid, and the reverse for (2,3).
01:29:25 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
01:30:98 (2) - Please stack properly with 01:29:99 (5).
02:06:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:13 (4,5,6) - Incorrect spacing. Maybe just move (6) closer to (5).
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (7,8,9) - 1/8th forward on the timeline.
02:57:71 (3) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
Easy:
00:15:305 - Delete the extra timing section.
00:34:96 (1) - Too far from previous (3).
00:47:73 (5) - New combo.
00:59:03 (8) - ^
01:08:62 (7) - ^
01:14:76 (7) - ^
01:24:22 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.
01:31:96 (9) - Too far from (8).
01:32:33 (10) - Too close to (9).
01:35:40 (3) - Move closer to (2).
01:41:79 (3) - New combo.
01:47:81 (4) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (3).
02:08:57 (7) - New combo.
02:10:78 (12) - ^
02:11:39 (13) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (12), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:15:45 (6) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (5).
02:19:26 (5) - 1/4th forward on the timeline, then move it away from (4), then extend it by 1/4th.
02:21:103 - The kiai time doesn't fit.
02:26:01 (5) - New combo.
02:55:99 (1,2) - 1/4th forward on the timeline.
Holy crap that took so long. Make good use of this mod post, please. =~="
/sweat
Topic Starter
Fixed.very thanks!
Alex's Insane:
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26)
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41)
it's hard to mod
wait alex
Alex's Insane:
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26)
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41)
it's hard to mod
wait alexalright, I'll make some of these changes in the morning, just posting to show I'm still doing this.
thanks for PMing me
thanks for PMing me
You really deserved that 2 kudos.Takuma wrote:
General:
Please use only slidertick rate 1. Not too sure why 02:46:164 timing section is .01 off.
Changed tick rate.
Alex's Insane:
I think the large spacing isn't very good.. it's a nice calm song and doesn't deserve that wide of a spacing. Please do something about this, I really like this song. >W< This is also overmapped, imo. Well, I changed the spacing. >.>
00:44:77 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:45:51 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
00:46:24 (7) - Too far from (6).
00:46:98 (1) - Too far from previous (12).
* Repeat for the others like this.
Added new combos, I think there's been worse spacings recently ranked. *coughflyawaycough*
01:39:32 (19,20) - I think you should delete these two, then move 01:39:56 (1) to where the (19) originally was. K
01:55:290 - Please, no x2 here! Like I said, its a slow calm song, nothing worthy for an x2 part! >__< Alright, changed
02:06:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - OH MY GODDDDD ._.
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) - ^
02:52:35 (1) - Shorten to 02:54:068. ? Shorten?
The timing section at 02:49:836 should have the BPM around 134, I think.
I think I got it basically with all these fixes. Hopefully... If not, just do the BPM change and resnap for me. >.>
EDIT: oops, forgot i posted earlier... sorry.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.
p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*
p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*
Oh, thanks, I noticed that slider kept disappearing. >_< (Never noticed the other one though.) It does have something to do with 1/8th though. (I think if I switch back to 1/4th it makes them disappear.peppy wrote:
Just a note that there are two horribly bugged notes on Alex's Isane. Check out the .osu file searching for NaN to find them. Best just delete those two lines from the .osu file and fixing up in-game.
p.s. some of the sliders are really ugly sounding in that difficulty. Plus this has nothing on Jame's perfection of the Lix mix of this map D: D: D: D: *hides now*
(Or something similar.)(Make a silent normal-sliderslide.wav if you must, soft-sliderslide.wav too)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Alex's Insane].osu
nice song~!
Topic Starter
Welcome back~!
i will also be here if you need my help.
let's continue to ask for mod till this beatmap becomes ranked~
change [Vikon's Hard]
all changed the hitsounds
distance snapped
2:10:350 - 2:24:602 Strengthen the Jump
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
i will also be here if you need my help.
let's continue to ask for mod till this beatmap becomes ranked~
change [Vikon's Hard]
all changed the hitsounds
distance snapped
2:10:350 - 2:24:602 Strengthen the Jump
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
Set a preview point.
[Normal]
01:24:469 (4) - End 01:25:329
01:25:575 (x) - Add a circle
01:43:265 (9) - New combo
[Vikon's Hard]
00:47:737 (1) - Remove new combo
[Alex's Insane]
Timing is wrong here
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
Set a preview point.
[Normal]
01:24:469 (4) - End 01:25:329
01:25:575 (x) - Add a circle
01:43:265 (9) - New combo
[Vikon's Hard]
00:47:737 (1) - Remove new combo
[Alex's Insane]
Timing is wrong here
Starred~
Topic Starter
thanks xxheroxx!edit this.:-D
ps:
[Alex's Insane]
Timing is wrong here
......I think alex0686 make the timing was not bad :-D
ps:
[Alex's Insane]
Timing is wrong here
......I think alex0686 make the timing was not bad :-D
~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - move 1/2 right
or
place a note at 02:53:780
~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left
~Alex's Insane~
Personally hate this diff
+Star
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - move 1/2 right
or
place a note at 02:53:780
~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left
~Alex's Insane~
Personally hate this diff
+Star
Thx for DJPop's Modding
Hitsounds changed
fixed
Let's wait for Alex's one.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Normal].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
[Vikon's Hard]DJPop wrote:
~Normal~
00:49:948 (6,7) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:03:953 (2) - end on left blue tick
01:21:889 (1) - end on right white tick
01:23:118 (1) - delete
02:53:534 (2) - place a note at 02:53:780
~Vikon's Hard~
00:29:801 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:047 (2) to 00:42:823 (5) - claps don't fit in this part, should be removed
01:47:442 (2) - seems you forgot the clap
01:55:550 (3) - claps misplaced
02:00:219 (1,2) - ^
02:01:447 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:08:081 (4,5) - ^
02:10:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:54:027 (1) - move 1/6 left
Hitsounds changed
fixed
Let's wait for Alex's one.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Normal].osu
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Vikon's Hard].osu
star..
it's good..i like it...
keep going!
it's good..i like it...
keep going!
Let's try =]
thanks for shareing=]
thanks for shareing=]
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
BPM: 122.09
Offset: 16,785 (It's actually only off by a few ms for mapping/playing, but I put it on the "strong beat" of the song where it should be)
Bonus modding!
The spinner image is off center, fix that.
[Normal]
The spacing feels a bit strange but I guess it's all fine.
This has the same kiai problems as [Vikon's Hard].
[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:831 - This is a bad place to start kiai time, try 00:44:305 (but I don't personally like kiai times that start with spinners... up to you, but I don't like how it is now)
01:48:684 (1,1,1,1) - This spacing change makes no sense.
01:52:861 - Bad kiai start point, try 01:53:107 or 01:54:581 .
02:21:119 - Another bad kiai. Try 02:22:593.
02:24:620 (1,1,1) - Make these spinners start a bit later.
02:53:984 (1) - Make this spinner end on the next white tick.
[Alex's Insane]
A lot of this map has patterns that don't work with the music at all. It lacks hitsounds, uses new combos terribly and it really feels like the mapper threw in whatever they wanted with no thinking. I'm not going to point everything out, but there's a lot here that needs to be changed.
00:35:438 (1) - These spinners don't really belong here if you ask me.
00:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - No no no. A thousand times no. You have music playing, map to it.
02:49:836 - Timing is horribly wrong.
Offset: 16,785 (It's actually only off by a few ms for mapping/playing, but I put it on the "strong beat" of the song where it should be)
Bonus modding!
The spinner image is off center, fix that.
[Normal]
The spacing feels a bit strange but I guess it's all fine.
This has the same kiai problems as [Vikon's Hard].
[Vikon's Hard]
00:42:831 - This is a bad place to start kiai time, try 00:44:305 (but I don't personally like kiai times that start with spinners... up to you, but I don't like how it is now)
01:48:684 (1,1,1,1) - This spacing change makes no sense.
01:52:861 - Bad kiai start point, try 01:53:107 or 01:54:581 .
02:21:119 - Another bad kiai. Try 02:22:593.
02:24:620 (1,1,1) - Make these spinners start a bit later.
02:53:984 (1) - Make this spinner end on the next white tick.
[Alex's Insane]
A lot of this map has patterns that don't work with the music at all. It lacks hitsounds, uses new combos terribly and it really feels like the mapper threw in whatever they wanted with no thinking. I'm not going to point everything out, but there's a lot here that needs to be changed.
00:35:438 (1) - These spinners don't really belong here if you ask me.
00:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - No no no. A thousand times no. You have music playing, map to it.
02:49:836 - Timing is horribly wrong.
感觉Insane的最后有点奇怪..
我的错觉吧...
Star
我的错觉吧...
Star
EDIT: Anything in blue text
[Alex's Insane]
Do the following changes in order:
Hope this helps
EDIT2: Fixed this post for clarification purposes.
[Alex's Insane]
Do the following changes in order:
- [02:49:713] and [02:49:836] - get rid of these timing sections
- [02:54:019] - BPM should be 118.000
- [02:55:043] - BPM should be 116.000
- [02:56:077] - BPM should be 114.000
- [02:57:129] - BPM should be 113.000
- [02:58:190] - BPM should be 111.000
- [02:59:281] - BPM should be 104.000
- [02:59:851] - BPM should be 75.000
Hope this helps
EDIT2: Fixed this post for clarification purposes.
By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections?
Also, please check my previous post if you haven't yet. I made more accurate timing changes to Alex's difficulty
Also, please check my previous post if you haven't yet. I made more accurate timing changes to Alex's difficulty
Fixed, your mod does help~Blazevoir wrote:
By the way... Why do the first two difficulties have different offsets/unneeded timing sections?
Alex's difficulty is under remapping, thx for your advice.
You're welcome One more thing I should point out though:
Alex's Insane
[02:49:344] - I personally think this should be removed too unless he's keeping the sliders at half speed. If that's the case, he needs to return the BPM to normal speed after those sliders.
One more thing I should point out though:Alex's Insane
[02:49:344] - I personally think this should be removed too unless he's keeping the sliders at half speed. If that's the case, he needs to return the BPM to normal speed after those sliders.
Oops, forgot to mention:
Here's my ★
Here's my ★
AIR > w <~*
+ Star
+ Star
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hey Vikon, is it me, or did my timing fixes that I sent you still sound offbeat?
[General]
我也有兴趣加diff.如果不介意的话请PM我,我会马上做: )
- osb文件没有用到,请删掉再full submit
- 请设置一个preview time,作用是在选歌界面别人选到你的map后歌曲就从设定的地方开始播放,一般设定在歌曲高潮处,请选择自己觉得适合的地方,然后选择Timng - Set Current Position as Preview
- Alex's Insane 有countdown,其他难度没有,这个最好统一. 个人感觉不用countdown比较好,所以建议去掉Alex's Insane的countdown
- 在所有难度的tag里加上Alex0686, Vikon
- soft音量感觉有点大,用40%-50%的比较合适
- 00:17:762 (3) - 并没有对准音乐,我想你是想用1/2 BSD放note来减低难度,对于这种在1/4拍上的音,可以用slider带过. 所以我的建议是删掉00:17:516 (2),让slider从00:17:516开始00:18:744结束
- 00:25:624 - 这里也没对准音,建议在00:25:378放一个note,然后slider 00:25:624 - 00:26:607
- 00:29:432 (4) - slider在这结束(蓝线), slider结尾在蓝线对于新手来说不会造成什么困难
- 01:15:736 (7) - 去掉clap
- 02:46:164 - timing section - 这里可以用1/2 BPM, 虽然这里都是note对osu模式没什么影响,不过玩太鼓的这里就可以玩到慢节奏的note,比较合音乐
- 00:37:172 (6,7) - 往下移一格?(lv3)
- 02:46:164之后的这一部分感觉不适合加clap,就单纯的soft音就很好了
- 00:16:029 timing section - Put it a little early in case of early hit in playing reslut in different slider speed
- 00:24:629 (4) - no clap here
I fell this map lack of finish sound, so I have some finish sound suggetion : - 00:52:149 (2)
- 01:07:876 (3)
- 01:39:328 (1)
我也有兴趣加diff.如果不介意的话请PM我,我会马上做: )
Normal
check with AIMod (shift+ctrl+A) there are some unsnapped notes
no jumps in normal, plz
double check spacing with distance snap on
01:53:585 - useless inherited timing section
dont put inherited timing section on tope of a note, because if someone hit earlier mess up the effect
Vikon's Hard
02:22:577 (6) - new combo for the change on spacing
02:24:794 (1,1,1) - unsnapped
the changes of volume in some of the timing section are so insignificant that are useless, imo
Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?
01:23:110 (3) - remove, and star next slider here, end point at 01:23:602(red tick) and add note here 01:23:847(white tick)
01:39:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like how sound this combo, i suggest this:
01:39:328 (1) - shorten half beat
01:40:556 (2) - move one beat earlier at 01:40:065 -
01:40:802 (3) - move one beat earlier, and shorten half beat
01:41:048 - start a slider here, end it at 01:41:539 -
01:41:785 - remove this note
01:42:031 - move the slider half beat earlier, shorten half beat, and reverse and....
01:43:014 (1) - remove
you can do it if you like
01:54:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/8 stream >.<
02:23:066 - 02:23:189 - add notes (suggestion) same to the two following combos
02:59:558 (3) - unsnapped note
i cant tell much of the offsets >.<
Star!
check with AIMod (shift+ctrl+A) there are some unsnapped notes
no jumps in normal, plz
double check spacing with distance snap on
01:53:585 - useless inherited timing section
dont put inherited timing section on tope of a note, because if someone hit earlier mess up the effect
Vikon's Hard
02:22:577 (6) - new combo for the change on spacing
02:24:794 (1,1,1) - unsnapped
the changes of volume in some of the timing section are so insignificant that are useless, imo
Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?
01:23:110 (3) - remove, and star next slider here, end point at 01:23:602(red tick) and add note here 01:23:847(white tick)
01:39:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont like how sound this combo, i suggest this:
01:39:328 (1) - shorten half beat
01:40:556 (2) - move one beat earlier at 01:40:065 -
01:40:802 (3) - move one beat earlier, and shorten half beat
01:41:048 - start a slider here, end it at 01:41:539 -
01:41:785 - remove this note
01:42:031 - move the slider half beat earlier, shorten half beat, and reverse and....
01:43:014 (1) - remove
you can do it if you like
01:54:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 1/8 stream >.<
02:23:066 - 02:23:189 - add notes (suggestion) same to the two following combos
02:59:558 (3) - unsnapped note
i cant tell much of the offsets >.<
Star!
...I thought it was obvious...Lissette wrote:
Alex's Insane
why you have different offset here?
THX for Lissette and Breeze 's mods
fixed and ALL notes were resnapped
AImod can't find any problems now.
fixed and ALL notes were resnapped
AImod can't find any problems now.
Also, there's one section I was kinda wanting to change anyway to make it match the beats to the song.
EDIT: Never mind.
我的diff.完成了,久等了 :3
有用到一些custom sound,所以麻烦把custom下载下来后解压到map文件夹后再fullsubmit,麻烦了
我会定期来看看有没有我的diff.的mod,然后修改好后再post : P
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Download: custom sound.rar
有用到一些custom sound,所以麻烦把custom下载下来后解压到map文件夹后再fullsubmit,麻烦了
我会定期来看看有没有我的diff.的mod,然后修改好后再post : P
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Download: custom sound.rar
Hi there~
[Normal]
00:32:504 (5) - New combo
00:44:297 (6) - ^
01:04:690 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:911 (7) - New combo
01:47:196 (3) - ^
End the last spinner in 03:00:941
[Vikon's Hard]
00:21:447 (8,9) - Spacing
00:42:823 (5) - New combo
Start the last spinner in 02:54:027
[Breeze's Hard]
Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_<
00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm
Great diff
Star*
[Normal]
00:32:504 (5) - New combo
00:44:297 (6) - ^
01:04:690 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:911 (7) - New combo
01:47:196 (3) - ^
End the last spinner in 03:00:941
[Vikon's Hard]
00:21:447 (8,9) - Spacing
00:42:823 (5) - New combo
Start the last spinner in 02:54:027
[Breeze's Hard]
Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_<
00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm
Great diff
Star*
thanks to your modsesito71 wrote:
[Breeze's Hard]
Some slider ticks don't sound very well IMO >_<But if I used empty slidertick sound, it would effect other diff. :/
00:35:943 (1,2) - I'd put these notes like these ones 00:34:961, to follow the rhythm
01:58:499 (1,2) - ^
01:58:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes nearer than the other ones, if you want to follow the rhythm
Great diff
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Normal:
02:26:508 (2) - Too high, hits the HP bar. Reposition/redraw the slider.
02:47:884 (6) - New combo.
02:48:130 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:49:850 (6) - New combo
02:50:096 (1) - Remove new combo
02:51:816 (6) - New combo
02:52:061 (1) - Remove new combo
02:53:781 (3) - Finish?
Vikon's Hard:
01:07:884 (7) - Add finish.
01:52:847 (1,2) - Doesn't fit imo.
01:53:830 (1,2) - ^
02:28:965 - Uneeded inheriting section
02:46:164 - Timing section not present in the other difficulties
Breeze's Difficulty:
-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier.
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - )
-- Timing is different
Map is nice ^^
Alex's Insane:
-- Timing is different to the other difficulties.
01:47:928 (4,5,6) - The overlaps look messy.
01:54:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) 1/8 stream... lol
There should be no discrepancies in you timing, this song has been ranked before use them as references. I'll come back and star this when the timing has been fixed between all difficulties.
02:26:508 (2) - Too high, hits the HP bar. Reposition/redraw the slider.
02:47:884 (6) - New combo.
02:48:130 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:49:850 (6) - New combo
02:50:096 (1) - Remove new combo
02:51:816 (6) - New combo
02:52:061 (1) - Remove new combo
02:53:781 (3) - Finish?
Vikon's Hard:
01:07:884 (7) - Add finish.
01:52:847 (1,2) - Doesn't fit imo.
01:53:830 (1,2) - ^
02:28:965 - Uneeded inheriting section
02:46:164 - Timing section not present in the other difficulties
Breeze's Difficulty:
-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier.
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - )
-- Timing is different
Map is nice ^^
Alex's Insane:
-- Timing is different to the other difficulties.
01:47:928 (4,5,6) - The overlaps look messy.
01:54:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) 1/8 stream... lol
There should be no discrepancies in you timing, this song has been ranked before use them as references. I'll come back and star this when the timing has been fixed between all difficulties.
[Normal]
-I don't see problems
[Vikon's Hard]
-I don't see problems
[Breeze's Difficulty]
-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short
[Alex's Insane]
-02:26:629 this part is strange, rly, ingame is realy hard to see the "stop" maybe you can fix it but is only my request.
I like the opening of Air =) try your best for approval, good luck and my star
-I don't see problems
[Vikon's Hard]
-I don't see problems
[Breeze's Difficulty]
-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short
[Alex's Insane]
-02:26:629 this part is strange, rly, ingame is realy hard to see the "stop" maybe you can fix it but is only my request.
I like the opening of Air =) try your best for approval, good luck and my star
(pm me after all the above stuff has been fixed and I will mod)
Shulin wrote:
Breeze's Difficulty:
-- The offset needs to start earlier on this difficulty because you start the map earlier.
-- Slider tick rate 0.5 (or add a custom silent slider tick for some parts because the tick sounds off e.g. 00:17:639 (3) - and 00:25:501 (7) - )
Download: blank sound.rarAstom wrote:
[Breeze's Difficulty]
-01:38:597(11) <-> 01:38:720(12) distance wrong
-01:39:825 to 01:41:791 time between circles is the same but you use a increment in distance
-02:30:440 Kiai time? it's not wrong but very short
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Preview point on first 3 diff's: 130784
Preview point on Alex's: 130780 make them all the same
why do 2 of the maps have uninherited timing sections at the end of the map and 2 dont?
Normal:
looks good
Vikon's Hard:
01:37:615 (3) - move more on grid?
01:39:335 (2) - ^ (health bar is in the way which makes it worse)
Breeze:
00:05:477 (1) - remove new combo?
00:31:522 (4,5) - move these to the corners to mirror 2 and 3
00:39:138 (1) - make perfectly symmetrical?
02:03:905 (9) - looks odd
02:10:784 (2) - new combo?
Alex:
00:18:991 (1) - start at 00:19:237?
00:27:345 (2) - more 1 tiny grid down
00:27:836 (3) - ^
00:35:944 (1) - extend 1/2?
01:06:411 (5) - move down (redo combo somehow)
01:16:976 (3,4) - move down
02:25:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - couldnt you make this into a slightly more interesting thing than a straight line?
*star*
Preview point on Alex's: 130780 make them all the same
why do 2 of the maps have uninherited timing sections at the end of the map and 2 dont?
Normal:
looks good
Vikon's Hard:
01:37:615 (3) - move more on grid?
01:39:335 (2) - ^ (health bar is in the way which makes it worse)
Breeze:
00:05:477 (1) - remove new combo?
00:31:522 (4,5) - move these to the corners to mirror 2 and 3
00:39:138 (1) - make perfectly symmetrical?
02:03:905 (9) - looks odd
02:10:784 (2) - new combo?
Alex:
00:18:991 (1) - start at 00:19:237?
00:27:345 (2) - more 1 tiny grid down
00:27:836 (3) - ^
00:35:944 (1) - extend 1/2?
01:06:411 (5) - move down (redo combo somehow)
01:16:976 (3,4) - move down
02:25:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - couldnt you make this into a slightly more interesting thing than a straight line?
*star*
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osuJames2250 wrote:
Preview point on first 3 diff's: 130784
Preview point on Alex's: 130780 make them all the same
why do 2 of the maps have uninherited timing sections at the end of the map and 2 dont?
Breeze:
00:05:477 (1) - remove new combo?
00:31:522 (4,5) - move these to the corners to mirror 2 and 3
00:39:138 (1) - make perfectly symmetrical?
02:03:905 (9) - looks odd
02:10:784 (2) - new combo?
Modded as you requested, but can't see something wrong
Nice map, ~star
Nice map, ~star
IMO the feather looks pretty odd as the star2.png.
[Breeze]
00:15:920 (4) - Add 3 repeats?
00:17:639 (3) - Make it 1/2 shorter.
00:28:573 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter.
00:29:433 (5) - Move 1/4 back and expand by 1/4.
01:09:851 (6) - Silence the repeat?
01:11:079 (1) - ^
01:17:713 (3) - ^
01:52:111 (6) - ^
01:59:605 (2) - Move 1/4 forward?
02:03:905 (9) - Clap on the end.
[Alex's Insane]
I don't like this difficulty at all. No offence. Full of out-of-rhythm fragments and strange
patterns.
I miss soft-whistles in the middle of the map. It's just neccessary on this song.
00:35:944 (1) - Wtf. This spinner comes out from nowhere and ends nowhere too.
Totally out of rhythm. You should map this part.
01:41:792 (6) - New combo.
01:48:180 (6) - I was confused a bit first time playing this part. New combo at least.
01:54:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Man, putting 1/8 streams on the slow map like this is really
bad idea. Change to slider?
03:01:041 (1,1) - Move 1/8 back.
+star
[Breeze]
00:15:920 (4) - Add 3 repeats?
00:17:639 (3) - Make it 1/2 shorter.
00:28:573 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter.
00:29:433 (5) - Move 1/4 back and expand by 1/4.
01:09:851 (6) - Silence the repeat?
01:11:079 (1) - ^
01:17:713 (3) - ^
01:52:111 (6) - ^
01:59:605 (2) - Move 1/4 forward?
02:03:905 (9) - Clap on the end.
[Alex's Insane]
I don't like this difficulty at all. No offence. Full of out-of-rhythm fragments and strange
patterns.
I miss soft-whistles in the middle of the map. It's just neccessary on this song.
00:35:944 (1) - Wtf. This spinner comes out from nowhere and ends nowhere too.
Totally out of rhythm. You should map this part.
01:41:792 (6) - New combo.
01:48:180 (6) - I was confused a bit first time playing this part. New combo at least.
01:54:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Man, putting 1/8 streams on the slow map like this is really
bad idea. Change to slider?
03:01:041 (1,1) - Move 1/8 back.
+star
Thanks to your mod, it's usefulfartownik wrote:
[Breeze]
00:15:920 (4) - Add 3 repeats?
00:28:573 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter.
00:29:433 (5) - Move 1/4 back and expand by 1/4.
01:09:851 (6) - Silence the repeat?
01:11:079 (1) - ^
01:17:713 (3) - ^
01:52:111 (6) - ^
01:59:605 (2) - Move 1/4 forward?
02:03:905 (9) - Clap on the end.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
As Vakin's request. Seems like he is really care about this map.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.
[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags. osuplayer111's timing from his Tori no Uta's map even the major tim
2. The timing is wrong. I've disscussed this with Shulin. We suggest you to followe line is not on the right point. Besides, it's ranked just now. So, offset: 65. Resnap all notes.
3. You are a good skinner.
4. The last offset is wrong. It's too late. I got 178,200.
5. This map isze is more than 20 MB. Consider compressing the video or something inside this map?
[Normal]
00:37:910 - Map this break.
00:48:720 (3) - Move one tiny grid left.
00:49:211 (4) - Move one tiny grid right. Perhaps you want to symmetry this one to the next stack. But I don't really like the idea.
01:37:368 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick. This the easiest diff, so please don't make the spinner ends too close to the next note.
[Vakin's Hard]
Nice.
[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.
[Alex's Insane]
00:54:617 (1) - Distance error?
01:48:180 (1) - This is an overlapping slider. I can't decide which way the sliderball goes. [!]
02:30:440 (8,9,10) - Delete these notes. Overmapped. Then add something else here.
Star.1. Lowercase all the tags. osuplayer111's timing from his Tori no Uta's map even the major tim
2. The timing is wrong. I've disscussed this with Shulin. We suggest you to followe line is not on the right point. Besides, it's ranked just now. So, offset: 65. Resnap all notes.
3. You are a good skinner.
4. The last offset is wrong. It's too late. I got 178,200.
5. This map isze is more than 20 MB. Consider compressing the video or something inside this map?
[Normal]
00:37:910 - Map this break.
00:48:720 (3) - Move one tiny grid left.
00:49:211 (4) - Move one tiny grid right. Perhaps you want to symmetry this one to the next stack. But I don't really like the idea.
01:37:368 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick. This the easiest diff, so please don't make the spinner ends too close to the next note.
[Vakin's Hard]
Nice.
[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.
[Alex's Insane]
00:54:617 (1) - Distance error?
01:48:180 (1) - This is an overlapping slider. I can't decide which way the sliderball goes. [!]
02:30:440 (8,9,10) - Delete these notes. Overmapped. Then add something else here.
Vikon : 关于Timing,你上线的时候找我再商量下VanMoNky wrote:
[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (skyflying) [Breeze's Difficulty].osu
Topic Starter
Thanks your modVanMoNky wrote:
As Vakin's request. Seems like he is really care about this map.
Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.[General]fixed,delete9,10.add 8 whistle
1. Lowercase all the tags. osuplayer111's timing from his Tori no Uta's map even the major tim fixed
2. The timing is wrong. I've disscussed this with Shulin. We suggest you to followe line is not on the right point. Besides, it's ranked just now. So, offset: 65. Resnap all notes. fixed,Resnap all notes
3. You are a good skinner.
4. The last offset is wrong. It's too late. I got 178,200.fixed,Breeze's Difficulty 2:58:20 offset 178.200.Alex's Insane 2:58:20 offset 178.200
5. This map isze is more than 20 MB. Consider compressing the video or something inside this map?fixed,upload new video.map isze become 17MB
[Normal]
00:37:910 - Map this break.fixed,add break time
00:48:720 (3) - Move one tiny grid left.fixed
00:49:211 (4) - Move one tiny grid right. Perhaps you want to symmetry this one to the next stack. But I don't really like the idea.fixed
01:37:368 (1) - Reduce one 1/2 tick. This the easiest diff, so please don't make the spinner ends too close to the next note.fixed
[Vakin's Hard]
Nice.
[Breeze's Difficulty]
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.fixed
[Alex's Insane]
00:54:617 (1) - Distance error?fixed
01:48:180 (1) - This is an overlapping slider. I can't decide which way the sliderball goes. [!] seems like vikon fixed
02:30:440 (8,9,10) - Delete these notes. Overmapped. Then add something else here.
Star.
根据老师的帖子 offset应该是1,047，直接把offset改成1,047即可，不用resnap.
<Normal>
02:11:268 (4) - 把后面那个clap去了
<Vikon's Hard>
这个图里面有些new combo设置的不太好，但是这种可有可无的东西我就不写了，也没必要改。
<Breeze's Difficulty>
00:16:772 (1) - 这个显得有点突然了，把音量减下去一些
00:16:772 (1) - ^
<Alex's Insane>
02:31:416 (2) - 去clap
别的没什么了，改好了之后叫我来pubble就可以了
<Normal>
02:11:268 (4) - 把后面那个clap去了
<Vikon's Hard>
这个图里面有些new combo设置的不太好，但是这种可有可无的东西我就不写了，也没必要改。
<Breeze's Difficulty>
00:16:772 (1) - 这个显得有点突然了，把音量减下去一些
00:16:772 (1) - ^
<Alex's Insane>
02:31:416 (2) - 去clap
别的没什么了，改好了之后叫我来pubble就可以了
Topic Starter
thanks to your modignorethis wrote:
根据老师的帖子 offset应该是1,047，直接把offset改成1,047即可，不用resnap.fixed
<Normal>
02:11:268 (4) - 把后面那个clap去了fixed
<Vikon's Hard>
这个图里面有些new combo设置的不太好，但是这种可有可无的东西我就不写了，也没必要改。
<Breeze's Difficulty>
00:16:772 (1) - 这个显得有点突然了，把音量减下去一些fixed
00:16:772 (1) - ^
<Alex's Insane>
02:31:416 (2) - 去clapfixed
别的没什么了，改好了之后叫我来pubble就可以了
ok pubble.