From M4M~
Nice song
Nice song, keep up the good work~ Have fun mapping!
Nice song
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Spacing seems to be a bit inconsistent, it ranges from mostly about 1.1x to 1.4x distance snap. For example, 00:07:050 (4) - is spaced 1.38x from the last note and 02:40:356 (5) - is spaced 0.88x from the last note. This might have been caused by you using a large grid size, I would suggest going through the map again with distance snap on a small grid size so your spacing is consistent.
- 00:18:237 (1) - you can remove NC here, since according to your NC logic this 00:14:169 (3) - would also be a NC (but you didn't make it NC). Basically I think NC at 00:18:237 (1) - is unnecessary and it also makes a really short combo of only two notes.
- 00:23:322 (6) - might flow better if you ctrl+g. Of course you will have to rearrange the other notes that come after to match the direction of the repeat slider if you choose to make this change.
- 00:46:711 (1) - maybe move this down a bit so that 00:46:203 (3,4,1) - is like a curved line. Sort of like this I think this looks better and also flows better since before the (3) and (4) was in a straight line and this clashed with the curved slider.
- 00:52:813 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - just a suggestion: 4 hitcircles in a row might feel repetitive to some people, instead you can try having the first two hitcircles as one slider instead (or something like that), I think it's more fun to play this way. You can also mix it up by having the first one as the first two notes as a slider, then the second one as the third and fourth notes as slider, this is what I mean:
Here is another similar part 01:47:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - - 01:23:830 (4,5) - maybe turn this into a slider instead to match vocal
- 01:42:644 (2) - might flow better if you ctrl+g
- 01:55:864 (1) - this touches the HP bar a bit, I'm not sure if this is a problem but if you want you can move 01:55:610 (6,1) - down a bit
- 02:34:635 (1) - in the hard difficulty I think you placed spinner on white tick, so did you put spinner here on blue tick by accident?
- 02:46:711 (1) - I think you can remove clap here since you mostly have clap on white ticks
[Hard] - 00:11:118 (3) - , 00:11:627 (4) - I think it would flow better if you ctrl+g'd both of these
- 00:15:186 (8) - you can add NC here to break up the combo and also match the vocal singing "go-o-o"
- 00:24:847 (2,3) - you can rearrange this for better flow
- 00:35:525 (6) - , 00:36:033 (7) - ctrl+g each of these as well. (7) should end up pointing away from 00:36:542 (1) - which creates a nice flow motion since the player will have to go bottom-right when on slider (7), then go up towards the left when going for 00:36:542 (1) - . I strongly recommend this change~
- 00:37:305 (2,3) - since there is a jump here, it also makes sense to have a jump between here 00:38:322 (4,5) - . Just move 00:38:322 (4) - up a bit, or move 00:38:576 (5) - farther away from (4).
- 01:43:661 (1,2,3) - good flow here
- 01:48:745 (5) - this touches HP bar a little, not sure if it's a problem
- 02:58:915 (1) - move middle point (the red one) to x 228 y 164 and move the second point to x 208 y 196, I think this is a better blanket.
Nice song, keep up the good work~ Have fun mapping!