Sieg wrote:

hi

General:
hitsounds plain a bit, you should examine for more finishes or alternate some claps or get some advices (I don't really like to mod them cus my point of view on hitsounds is quite arguable)

Hard:
OD 6 is kinda low for hardest difficulty and with AR8, try set OD to 7 done
00:15:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try more rounded pattern here? http://puu.sh/87lKf.jpg done
00:22:050 (4) - move to something like 248:208 to make better flow http://puu.sh/87lPT.jpg done
00:33:491 (3) - variety is a good thing (: my suggestion is to make 00:34:508 (4) - similar, that will improve pattern a bit imo http://puu.sh/87m1A.jpg done
00:54:593 (6) - jump to 00:54:847 (1) - great here, but placement of 6 is kinda offgrid\offscrfeen try to move done
01:49:762 (1) - why not? http://puu.sh/87mlB.jpg imo better for flow, nothing bad in your variant tho done
01:54:593 (2) - seems that one is too offgrid
02:02:983 (5,6,1) - make this consistent with 00:53:830 (5,6,1) - I mean jumping pattern from 6 to 1 done
02:30:440 (1,1) - I don't really like this 2 spinners, you can delete 1st spinner and map part from 02:22:305 (4) - with slow rhythm to 02:35:016 (1) - and start spinner here.
02:54:338 (7,1) - blanket here? What? Already blanket
sweet

Normal:
HP and OD -1 done
00:08:067 (1) - don't really like end on 00:08:830 - maybe try http://puu.sh/87nbW.jpg if you not afraid of 4 circles in a row done
02:21:796 (5) - same for this part as on hard
02:46:711 (1,2) - this should be http://puu.sh/87nr8.jpg done
03:21:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ehm not sure about 6 in a row for normal, maybe remove 03:22:559 (4) - done
fine

GL Thanks ^^

1. Try using more fitting colors. Yours are too bright, so they may become a bit annoying when BG is dimmed.
   
   try this instead!

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 180,197,112
   Combo2 : 168,199,200
   Combo3 : 166,185,151
   Combo4 : 104,113,172

2. Add indie kripac to the tags. Indie is because genre of the song is Indie pop and kripac is because her full name is Lenka Kripac.
3. For this kind of BGs, it's better to disable letterboxes. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterboxes. Since they hurt your awesome BG.
4. Also, disable the Widescreen Support since it's for widescreen storyboards only!
5. You'd better use BG with recommended resolution. I've found this one or you can keep yours but with recommended resolution.
6. You may want to add an Easy diff to mmake your mapset playable for everyone, from beginners to top-players. Nor,al may be a bit hard for beginners, so making an Easy diff could be a good idea!

1. First of all, your comboing feels kinda choppy and inconsistent. Try placing NCs every downbeat (big white line), so your combos will have approximately the same lenghth and will be intuitively understandable for players.
   Note: if you feel like combos are being too short, try to place NCs every second big white line, it also works pretty nice.
2. 00:08:067 (1) - the overlap is pretty confusing. It looks messy and may stress players. Try to avoid this overlap. Doesn't look good, huh?
   Note: 00:14:169 (3) - same happens here and a few more times. Try to see such patterns yourself.
3. 00:08:830 (2,3,4,5) - so many 1/2 beats in a row may be a bit too hard for the easiest diff. Try to get rid of some 1/2 beats in order to make diff a bit friendlier for beginners!
   Note: ignore this if you want to make an Easy.
4. 00:56:881 (1) - I would break it into two objects. The first one is 2/1 slider which will fit vocals, and the other one is a circle. example
   Npte: yup, the same applies to 02:06:033 (1) - 02:50:779 (1) - but I think you already know it.
5. 01:51:796 (1) - try replacing it with an 1/2 slider.So, you'll get some kind of polarity, which will give ou consistent and playable rhythm. try it!
   Note: 02:52:813 (1) - the same here. Please either apply the suggestion for all similar patterns or reject it for all similar patterns.
6. 02:30:440 (1,1) - the second spinner appears too fast and is totally nexpected. Consider mapping it instead. Some simple patterns will fit here.try it!
   Note: or you can just remove the first spinner and make the break longer.
   Note2: yup, the same problem 03:07:050 (1,1) - with.
   
   The diff is pretty simple. Apart from comboing issues and some minor rhythm mistakes it's actually pretty nice, though.

1. There's no reason to keep HP Drain so low, increase it by one tick to make diff a bit more interesting and challenging!
2. 00:04:000 (1,2) - try improving the transition and using something more natural here. Read more about flow to make sure that you understand what I'm talking about! So yeah, try this and tell me if it works better or not!
3. 00:16:203 (5) - nazi - ahh, a little overlap with HP Bar doesn't look neat here. If you can avoid it - do it, plaease! It's not a big deal, anyway.
   Note: 01:15:694 (2,3) - the same here. Just a friendly suggestion that may improve your flow. Try me!
4. 01:45:694 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like the way how copypasta is used here. Itfits really good and plays pretty nice, too. Good job!
5. 02:30:440 (1,1) - depends on what you've done on Normal, you should do the same here in order to keep consistency through the mapset!
6. 03:02:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seriously, man, I love this pattern so much. It is used to represent the same lines in lyrics, so it is used properly and plays good. Once again, well done!
   
   Simple diff, light song. Everything fits with the song pretty nice. So, yeah, that's a solid diff.

-Bakari- wrote:

Sieg is so cruel, modding Lenka and doesn't letting me know about it

Yo, you are mapping my favourite artist, so random mod. ♥

[General]

1. Try using more fitting colors. Yours are too bright, so they may become a bit annoying when BG is dimmed. edited for new background
   
   try this instead!

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 180,197,112
   Combo2 : 168,199,200
   Combo3 : 166,185,151
   Combo4 : 104,113,172

2. Add indie kripac to the tags. Indie is because genre of the song is Indie pop and kripac is because her full name is Lenka Kripac. done
3. For this kind of BGs, it's better to disable letterboxes. Song Setup > Storyboarding > Letterboxes. Since they hurt your awesome BG. done
4. Also, disable the Widescreen Support since it's for widescreen storyboards only!
5. You'd better use BG with recommended resolution. I've found this one or you can keep yours but with recommended resolution. done
6. You may want to add an Easy diff to mmake your mapset playable for everyone, from beginners to top-players. Nor,al may be a bit hard for beginners, so making an Easy diff could be a good idea!

I'm lazy

[Normal]

1. First of all, your comboing feels kinda choppy and inconsistent. Try placing NCs every downbeat (big white line), so your combos will have approximately the same lenghth and will be intuitively understandable for players. done (some)
   Note: if you feel like combos are being too short, try to place NCs every second big white line, it also works pretty nice.
2. 00:08:067 (1) - the overlap is pretty confusing. It looks messy and may stress players. Try to avoid this overlap. Doesn't look good, huh?
   Note: 00:14:169 (3) - same happens here and a few more times. Try to see such patterns yourself. done
3. 00:08:830 (2,3,4,5) - so many 1/2 beats in a row may be a bit too hard for the easiest diff. Try to get rid of some 1/2 beats in order to make diff a bit friendlier for beginners!done
   Note: ignore this if you want to make an Easy.
4. 00:56:881 (1) - I would break it into two objects. The first one is 2/1 slider which will fit vocals, and the other one is a circle
   exampledone
   Npte: yup, the same applies to 02:06:033 (1) - 02:50:779 (1) - but I think you already know it. done
5. 01:51:796 (1) - try replacing it with an 1/2 slider.So, you'll get some kind of polarity, which will give ou consistent and playable rhythm. try it!
   Note: 02:52:813 (1) - the same here. Please either apply the suggestion for all similar patterns or reject it for all similar patterns.
6. 02:30:440 (1,1) - the second spinner appears too fast and is totally nexpected. Consider mapping it instead. Some simple patterns will fit here.try it!done
   Note: or you can just remove the first spinner and make the break longer.
   Note2: yup, the same problem 03:07:050 (1,1) - with.done
   
   The diff is pretty simple. Apart from comboing issues and some minor rhythm mistakes it's actually pretty nice, though.

[Hard]

1. There's no reason to keep HP Drain so low, increase it by one tick to make diff a bit more interesting and challenging!done
2. 00:04:000 (1,2) - try improving the transition and using something more natural here. Read more about flow to make sure that you understand what I'm talking about! So yeah, try this and tell me if it works better or not!done
3. 00:16:203 (5) - nazi - ahh, a little overlap with HP Bar doesn't look neat here. If you can avoid it - do it, plaease! It's not a big deal, anyway. done
   Note: 01:15:694 (2,3) - the same here. Just a friendly suggestion that may improve your flow. Try me!done
4. 01:45:694 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like the way how copypasta is used here. Itfits really good and plays pretty nice, too. Good job!Thanks
5. 02:30:440 (1,1) - depends on what you've done on Normal, you should do the same here in order to keep consistency through the mapset!done
6. 03:02:983 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seriously, man, I love this pattern so much. It is used to represent the same lines in lyrics, so it is used properly and plays good. Once again, well done!Thanks again ^^
   
   Simple diff, light song. Everything fits with the song pretty nice. So, yeah, that's a solid diff.

I liked the mapset and it's Lenka. I just couldn't ignore it, so have a few stars! ~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck! Thanks

Don wrote:

Hello! I'm here for mod4mod. Thanks for your mod!

Normal
General impressions
Cool song! Osu! needs more songs like this. I also feel that the map fits the song really well.
However, for a normal difficulty, Distance Snap is almost a prerequisite. You might want to resnap your entire map to something consistent. I'm sorry to say
I'll mod it regardless, though! It felt good while playing. And after modding, I really enjoyed it.

Timing-specific mods
00:06:796 (3) - I feel like this note would have been better positioned somewhere lower http://puu.sh/88gXJ.jpgdone
00:18:237 (1,2) - Consider moving these two notes upwards http://puu.sh/88inw.jpg
00:28:152 (4) - Consider moving this note a little bit up http://puu.sh/88ipZ.jpgdone
00:33:237 (3) - You might want to move a little bit down http://puu.sh/88irP.jpg
00:36:033 (3,4,1) - More round shapes! Woohoo! http://puu.sh/88itF.jpg
00:46:203 (3,4,1) - This would flow better if you made a round shape http://puu.sh/88ivM.jpgdone
00:49:254 (4,5,6) - Same thing here http://puu.sh/88iwx.jpg
01:09:593 (2,3,4) - Perhaps more circular? http://puu.sh/88izC.jpgdone
01:12:898 (2) - You might want to move this note down http://puu.sh/88iBM.jpgdone
01:22:305 (2,3) - What about something like this to make it flow better? http://puu.sh/88iFa.jpg
01:49:762 (1,1) - You might want to fix the blanket.This is not blanket
02:02:220 (2) - Move this note http://puu.sh/88iJD.jpg
02:04:253 (2) - Same as the above http://puu.sh/88iK8.jpg
02:05:524 (4) - Fix the blanket I can't see any problem on this blanket
02:21:033 (3) - Move this note to make the pattern more circular http://puu.sh/88iNb.jpgdone
03:18:745 (4) - Blanket is almost correct but not entirely done

Hard
General impressions
Great map! Feels good from the beginning. Nothing to remark. I love it! thanks

Timing-specific mods
00:12:135 (1) - The anti-flow in this note doesn't really work that well, I don't have any suggestions, but you might want to consider changing it.
00:47:474 (2) - Incorrect blanket why?
02:05:779 (6) - Incorrect blanket done
02:46:711 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This feels out of place
03:18:237 (3,4) - Consider changing it to http://puu.sh/88AI8.jpg

Priti wrote:

http://puu.sh/89FjF.rar
Finished hitsounding
Remove the whistle sample from the folder since it isn't needed anymore.
Also, I fixed some NC mistakes you made, hope its alright by you.

1. iirc you have to add slider border colour if you use custom hitcircles
   plus, it'd definitely look nice if you choose the same grey as you use for the hitcircleoverlay
   > add

    [Colours]
   ....
   SliderBorder: 185,185,185

   if you want to change slider border colour
   (replace "185,185,185" by the colourcode you want to have)

1. 00:04:000 (1,2) - you could improve movement/flow here if you bend 1 in the opposite direction
   screen

   
2. 00:18:237 (1,2) - they could blanket each other so nicely ;w; (just my personal preferance tho x3)
3. 00:23:322 (6,1,2,3,1) - create square pattern here (> stack 1 below 6) or polygon pattern? looks better, imo
4. 00:35:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds better to me if you delete 00:36:288 (5) - and add a cirlce at 00:35:271
5. 01:31:457 (1,2,3,4) - use some kind of pattern here? square/zig-zag?
6. 01:41:627 (1,2) - movement/flow isn't as nice as it could be, maybe try to blanket 01:43:661 (1) - with 01:42:644 (2) - ?
7. 01:51:796 (3,4) - tick change is hard to read, you could replace this with a short slider >
   
   same here - 02:52:813 (1,2) -
8. 02:02:220 (2) - if you move this to 308|292 it looks better with 02:00:440 (2,3,4) - , imo
9. 02:50:779 (1,1) - stack correctly? (leave it as it is if it's intentional)

1. 00:11:118 (3,4) - might look better if you increase the curve a bit?
   comparison

   
   
2. 00:14:169 (6,7) - ^
3. 00:23:322 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:31:457 (7,1) - blanket could be better, middle and last anchor are bit too close to 7
5. 00:32:474 (1,2,3) - movement from 2-3 is really bad imo, try to improve this by placing 3 further up?
6. 00:35:525 (6) - plays nicely if you reverse this
   reverse 00:36:033 (7) - then as well, if you do ^
7. 01:15:186 (1,2) - ^ same as 00:11:118 (3,4) -
8. 02:19:254 (3) - ctrl + g? movement from 2 is better then, imo
9. 02:58:661 (4,1) - could be better blanketed

Squirrel wrote:

hey again. ^__^
mod from my queue ~
nice song choice! .w.

[General]

1. iirc you have to add slider border colour if you use custom hitcircles
   plus, it'd definitely look nice if you choose the same grey as you use for the hitcircleoverlay
   > add

    [Colours]
   ....
   SliderBorder: 185,185,185

   if you want to change slider border colour
   (replace "185,185,185" by the colourcode you want to have)

I don't know what is it

[Normal]
looks great so far! just some minor suggestions -

1. 00:04:000 (1,2) - you could improve movement/flow here if you bend 1 in the opposite direction done
   screen

   
2. 00:18:237 (1,2) - they could blanket each other so nicely ;w; (just my personal preferance tho x3)
3. 00:23:322 (6,1,2,3,1) - create square pattern here (> stack 1 below 6) or polygon pattern? looks better, imo
4. 00:35:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds better to me if you delete 00:36:288 (5) - and add a cirlce at 00:35:271 done
5. 01:31:457 (1,2,3,4) - use some kind of pattern here? square/zig-zag? done
6. 01:41:627 (1,2) - movement/flow isn't as nice as it could be, maybe try to blanket 01:43:661 (1) - with 01:42:644 (2) - ? done
7. 01:51:796 (3,4) - tick change is hard to read, you could replace this with a short slider > done
   
   same here - 02:52:813 (1,2) - done
8. 02:02:220 (2) - if you move this to 308|292 it looks better with 02:00:440 (2,3,4) - , imo
9. 02:50:779 (1,1) - stack correctly? (leave it as it is if it's intentional)

done

[Hard]

1. 00:11:118 (3,4) - might look better if you increase the curve a bit?done
   comparison

   
   
2. 00:14:169 (6,7) - ^ done
3. 00:23:322 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:31:457 (7,1) - blanket could be better, middle and last anchor are bit too close to 7
5. 00:32:474 (1,2,3) - movement from 2-3 is really bad imo, try to improve this by placing 3 further up? done
6. 00:35:525 (6) - plays nicely if you reverse this done
   reverse 00:36:033 (7) - then as well, if you do ^ done
7. 01:15:186 (1,2) - ^ same as 00:11:118 (3,4) -
8. 02:19:254 (3) - ctrl + g? movement from 2 is better then, imo
9. 02:58:661 (4,1) - could be better blanketed

really nice mapset, hope I could help somehow. ;w;
Good luck! Thanks!
*squee* no squee say pawpaw

UnderminE wrote:

Ooo baya iyi gidiyosun SB falan helal inş olcak bakalim

Alarido wrote:

Modding the map on my own (;

[Hard]
♥ There's No problems on Hard diff. It's simply Amazing (:

[Normal]
02:30:059 (1) - this spinner would start on 02:30:440 -- as it does on Hard diff -- so it'll follow the song more accurately and intuitively (: why? this makes bad

[Bakari's Easy]
Could raise 01:19:762 (4) - by 1 grid to make triangle slightly better here (:
01:27:898 (4,1,2) - Move (4) by 1 grid down and move (2) by 1 grid right, for pattern improvement. And don't forget to move 01:31:457 (3) - to x:315 y:243 to keep spacing safe, if you made changes on the pattern.
01:42:135 (2) - Move it 1 grid left and 1 grid down, and also move the last node by 1 grid right, for pattern improvement.
02:03:999 (3) - Move 1 grid right and 1 grid down, for better blanket here.
02:22:305 (1) - You could adjust the blanket Or make it symmetrical on Y axis, but... Truly, I realize this repeating slider don't fits to the song! You could change it to a 3/1 slider, like this image → http://puu.sh/8jA5W.jpg ← so it'll fit better the calmer voice 'aaaaaaa~'
02:49:254 (4) - Move the last node by 1 grid down and 1 grid right, to regularize the pattern. And... remember stacking 02:52:305 (2) and 02:54:847 (1) on it, if it was intentional on previous placement.

Well, good map and... WHAT GOOD SONG ♥ and SB is cool, in truth, SB IS PERFECT for the song <3 it's like a childhood song, osu! needs more childhood songs (and songs that bring such childhood smell to us ♥)
Let's bring more of these songs ♥

Star & wish for ranking

Att.

zigizigiefe wrote:

00:40:483 - 00:42:516 - Şu şekilde sliderları diz. ha



00:42:516 - Spinner ekle. ciddimisin

ciddimisin

Nerd_fare wrote:

Ranked olacağı gün #1 yapmaya çalışacağım CTB modunda.

1. Storyboard is awesome, that's all.
2. If you include a custom hitcircle, you have to include the hitnumbers as well. Some with unmatching default hitnumbers would be bothered... you know what I mean.
3. 02:22:305 - Either unify this part as break on all diff or just map it on all diff.

1. I personally think tick rate 1 is just enough.
2. Everything else is just fine, baka <3

1. 00:07:050 (4,5) - It would be better if you could merge this into a slider instead.
2. 00:11:118 (4,5) - Same here.
3. 00:56:881 (1,2) - Blanket could be done better.
4. 01:44:677 (4,5) - Merge into slider? Would follow music better i guess
5. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket fix?
6. 02:49:761 (3,4) - Merge to slider?
7. 03:01:966 (5,6) - Here too? It'll give smoother flow transition after the circles (-:
8. 03:18:745 (4,1) - Blanket could be done better.

1. 00:31:457 (7,1) - Blanket ;_;
2. 00:39:593 (7,8) - The gap between feels too empty, so I'd suggest you to merge these into a slider.
3. 01:45:694 (1,5) - Yes blanket.
4. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket ;___;
5. 02:54:338 (7,1) - Blanket pls.
6. 03:04:000 (5,5) - Blanket and blanket.

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Some useful links for mapping:
Analyzing flow in beatmaps
Mapping polarity
How to make beautiful sliders
How to make beautiful sliders (advanced)
Difficulty naming
Advanced Timing

brought here by dilek

General

1. Storyboard is awesome, that's all.
2. If you include a custom hitcircle, you have to include the hitnumbers as well. Some with unmatching default hitnumbers would be bothered... you know what I mean.
3. 02:22:305 - Either unify this part as break on all diff or just map it on all diff. done

Easy

1. I personally think tick rate 1 is just enough. done

Normal

1. 00:07:050 (4,5) - It would be better if you could merge this into a slider instead. done
2. 00:11:118 (4,5) - Same here. done
3. 00:56:881 (1,2) - Blanket could be done better. done
4. 01:44:677 (4,5) - Merge into slider? Would follow music better i guess done
5. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket fix? done
6. 02:49:761 (3,4) - Merge to slider?
7. 03:01:966 (5,6) - Here too? It'll give smoother flow transition after the circles (-: done
8. 03:18:745 (4,1) - Blanket could be done better. done

Hard

1. 00:31:457 (7,1) - Blanket ;_; done
2. 00:39:593 (7,8) - The gap between feels too empty, so I'd suggest you to merge these into a slider. done
3. 01:45:694 (1,5) - Yes blanket. done
4. 02:06:033 (1,2) - Blanket ;___; done
5. 02:54:338 (7,1) - Blanket pls. done
6. 03:04:000 (5,5) - Blanket and blanket. done

So far this is my shittiest mod ever. This map is already good as it is! Keep it up and good luck!
feel free to not give any kudosu if you don't think this is helpful. im here because dilek anyways
Starred. Good luck. thanks

Andrea wrote:

Just wanna say also, move this to Pending Beatmaps, it's on WIP section right now.

UnderminE wrote:

skin'e numaralari ekledin mi bak ona bi şey yazmamişsin modda

öteki de tick rate'i 1 yap demiş onu da unutma

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ



[Hard]
00:39:593 (7) - move to x:354 y:250 for the flow done
03:00:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - No issue for ranked. High position. done



[Normal]
00:45:694 (2) - High position done
02:06:033 (1) - use blanket perfectly. done

bad image

03:19:254 (1) - ^ done

bad image

[Bakari's Easy]
Nothing to say. baka baka baka >.<

Sorry, I can't mod as well. So I just (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ
GOOD LUCK! thanks

zigizigiefe wrote:

Al sana mod

1. There's a few missing files, I guess you've miswritten some codes. Please check the AIMod once again!
2. Since you've skinned hitcircle set, you have to change slider border color too.
3. For the same reason as ^, you must add "default-0.png" too. lol http://puu.sh/926j3.jpg