M4M i hope i can be of help
[General]
02:00:141 - Consider display epilepsy warning since this part of the video flashes
02:36:332 - this part also flashes kinda
I think it starts a bit too sudden, there should be some lead in time
[Collab]
02:57:522 - i think kiai time needs to start on downbeats and with a new combo
00:08:475 (2,3,4) - make the circles lead into the slider better? kinda like here 00:12:284 (2,3,4)
00:22:999 (1) - maybe you can have like the end blanket (or blanket better) 00:23:713 (2)
00:25:380 (3,5) - you may want to space them out, the overlap looks kinda weird
00:25:856 (5,6) - suggestion: have them stack kinda like this;
00:28:237 (6) - consider ctrl g
00:40:380 (2) - ^
00:53:475 (1) - you could probably ignore this but i still think it flows better if you ctrl g h j
01:08:713 (1) - hmm, why is this slanted when the rest of the map looks so symmetrical
?
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - maybe space this out a bit more evenly?
01:39:903 (2) - consider ctrl g here as well
02:29:665 (5,6) - not parallel
02:52:999 (4) - improve blanket a bit
? also this seems better since the curves before were not that sharp either.
[Kirino's Hard]
00:08:475 (2,3) - blanket?
00:12:403 - im not sure why but i feel the need to press something here lol. hmm maybe turn 00:12:284 (2,3) into a slider?
00:27:999 (2) - consider ctrl g
03:03:475 (2) - ^
00:29:665 (7,8,9,1) - this part might get confusing since you have to pause a bit and they're all stacked
00:35:380 (1,3) - hmm the overlap... meh should be fine
00:45:856 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion something like this here
00:47:761 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:27:999 (2,1) - space out?
02:28:713 (1,2) - ^
02:57:522 - add kiai time so its like collab diff?
[Normal]
02:57:522 - add kiai?
00:25:380 (3,5) - stack a bit better
00:32:046 (3,5) - i don't really like this overlap
01:24:903 (4,1) - i know its probably fine but these blankets bother me so gunna point them out cuz yyolo
this diff is good.
Anyway, i hope that was at least somewhat helpful