Hola :3
Modding in English so all can understand. (And because I feel weird modding in Spanish).
[Normal]
Mostly aesthetics stuff, beat placement looked fine. And making combo modding, because some are a pretty mess.
00:08:713 (2) - How about moving ti around x:140 y:192 and making softer the curve, it'd look nicer imo.
00:09:665 (1) - Remove NC here, this combo is pretty short imo.
00:14:427 (5) - Remove 1 repeat and add a circle in 00:15:380, it'd play better as that beat has a strong feeling to being hit.
00:19:665 (1,2) - Maybe make these sliders look symmetrical, copy (1), reverse it (Ctrl+G) and flip it horizontally (Ctrl+H), if you do move 00:18:713 (5) - to x:256 y:168.
00:21:570 (3) - Maybe make a blanket for 00:22:999 (1).
00:28:713 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:35:856 (3,5) - The overlap for these looks a bit bad, if you want to keep that shape for (2) and (3), maybe make something like this:
Remember fix the spacing for (6) if needed.
00:40:618 (2) - Fix spacing here.
00:44:427 (1) - Remember I told you about the whistle here, just remove the Normal sampleset from the slider (at the right side of editor), also remove the finish there, it doesn't fit too much.
00:45:380 (2) - Put that finish in the end of this
01:10:618 (1) - Remove NC.
01:16:332 (4,1) - Maybe fix spacing here.
01:19:665 (3) - Make the end of this lead to the next circle, like this.
01:25:380 (2) - I'd have the side with the reverse arrow pointing down, having a better flow imo.
01:31:570 (1,1) - Remove both NC
01:36:808 (4) - Maybe NC here.
01:40:141 (1) - Remove NC.
01:41:094 (2) - Put NC
01:43:951 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:903 (3) - Put NC
01:45:380 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:380 (1,2) - Also, this overlap looks very ugly imo, you really should avoid it. Maybe like this:
01:48:237 (4) - If you do what I pointed above, you may want to make a blanket with this.
02:07:284 (2) - Fix spacing, and maybe a blanket.
02:11:570 (3) - I'd prefer stack this with (4), fits better with vocals imo.
02:13:951 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:380 (2) - Put NC.
02:26:808 (1,2) - A blanket would be nice here.
02:32:046 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:42:046 (1,2) - Not a nice flow for an Easy imo, make (1) lead to (2).
02:52:999 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:475 (2) - Put NC
02:55:856 (1) - Maybe remove NC
02:57:284 (4,1) - Swap NC.
03:00:618 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:094 (3,1) - Swap NC
03:07:761 (1) - Remove NC
03:08:713 (3) - Put NC
03:09:665 (1) - Remove NC
[Kirino's Hard]
Not much to say here, and I won't nazi just to justify a mod here, it's a nice diff as it is now.
Use tickrate 1, tickrate should be consistent in all diffs, and tickrate 2 sounds pretty bad in this song.
00:01:094 (2,1) - This tiny overlaps that didn't look too nice for me.
02:03:475 - 02:18:713 - I can see what you did here
02:27:999 (2,1,2) - Tiny overlaps again
03:10:261 - And a note is missing here ;_;
[Collab]
Gero:
00:05:022 (4) - Delete this, there's no 1/4 tones in the music.
00:57:284 (1) - Finish this spinner in 00:59:189, there's no point in finishing it after the vocals. You can just put a circle in 01:00:618.
Kirino:
00:20:975 (4) - I think this circle is over nothing in the music, you should delete it.
00:29:427 - And a circle is missing here for vocals
Lolicakes:
00:38:713 - I'd use this rhythm instead, fits better with the music.
02:19:308 (1) - Snap this to the white tick x_x
02:19:546 - Maybe add a note here, fits nicely with vocals.
02:21:451 - ^
02:27:999 - I feel a note is missing here too. You put a note here in your next patterns.
Zeroarg:
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - I'd stack this triple, increase the spacing here, or align the notes correctly, looks a bit ugly imo, as it's a bit curved.
01:38:713 (6,7,8) - ^
01:40:141 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:40:380, fitting very nice with the vocals.
01:45:856 - I felt a note is missing here.
01:46:332 - And maybe here too, not needed if you're following vocals.
02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Stack, space a bit, or align, as I said above.
Natsu:
01:56:332 - I'd use this rhytm here, those sliders played a bit weird for me.
02:01:808 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I feel this is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192)
DakeDekaane:
You're awesome, I love your mapping style.
And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
Modding in English so all can understand. (And because I feel weird modding in Spanish).
[Normal]
Mostly aesthetics stuff, beat placement looked fine. And making combo modding, because some are a pretty mess.
00:08:713 (2) - How about moving ti around x:140 y:192 and making softer the curve, it'd look nicer imo.
00:09:665 (1) - Remove NC here, this combo is pretty short imo.
00:14:427 (5) - Remove 1 repeat and add a circle in 00:15:380, it'd play better as that beat has a strong feeling to being hit.
00:19:665 (1,2) - Maybe make these sliders look symmetrical, copy (1), reverse it (Ctrl+G) and flip it horizontally (Ctrl+H), if you do move 00:18:713 (5) - to x:256 y:168.
00:21:570 (3) - Maybe make a blanket for 00:22:999 (1).
00:28:713 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:35:856 (3,5) - The overlap for these looks a bit bad, if you want to keep that shape for (2) and (3), maybe make something like this:
Remember fix the spacing for (6) if needed.
00:40:618 (2) - Fix spacing here.
00:44:427 (1) - Remember I told you about the whistle here, just remove the Normal sampleset from the slider (at the right side of editor), also remove the finish there, it doesn't fit too much.
00:45:380 (2) - Put that finish in the end of this
01:10:618 (1) - Remove NC.
01:16:332 (4,1) - Maybe fix spacing here.
01:19:665 (3) - Make the end of this lead to the next circle, like this.
01:25:380 (2) - I'd have the side with the reverse arrow pointing down, having a better flow imo.
01:31:570 (1,1) - Remove both NC
01:36:808 (4) - Maybe NC here.
01:40:141 (1) - Remove NC.
01:41:094 (2) - Put NC
01:43:951 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:903 (3) - Put NC
01:45:380 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:380 (1,2) - Also, this overlap looks very ugly imo, you really should avoid it. Maybe like this:
01:48:237 (4) - If you do what I pointed above, you may want to make a blanket with this.
02:07:284 (2) - Fix spacing, and maybe a blanket.
02:11:570 (3) - I'd prefer stack this with (4), fits better with vocals imo.
02:13:951 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:380 (2) - Put NC.
02:26:808 (1,2) - A blanket would be nice here.
02:32:046 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:42:046 (1,2) - Not a nice flow for an Easy imo, make (1) lead to (2).
02:52:999 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:475 (2) - Put NC
02:55:856 (1) - Maybe remove NC
02:57:284 (4,1) - Swap NC.
03:00:618 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:094 (3,1) - Swap NC
03:07:761 (1) - Remove NC
03:08:713 (3) - Put NC
03:09:665 (1) - Remove NC
[Kirino's Hard]
Not much to say here, and I won't nazi just to justify a mod here, it's a nice diff as it is now.
Use tickrate 1, tickrate should be consistent in all diffs, and tickrate 2 sounds pretty bad in this song.
00:01:094 (2,1) - This tiny overlaps that didn't look too nice for me.
02:03:475 - 02:18:713 - I can see what you did here
02:27:999 (2,1,2) - Tiny overlaps again
03:10:261 - And a note is missing here ;_;
[Collab]
Gero:
00:05:022 (4) - Delete this, there's no 1/4 tones in the music.
00:57:284 (1) - Finish this spinner in 00:59:189, there's no point in finishing it after the vocals. You can just put a circle in 01:00:618.
Kirino:
00:20:975 (4) - I think this circle is over nothing in the music, you should delete it.
00:29:427 - And a circle is missing here for vocals
Lolicakes:
00:38:713 - I'd use this rhythm instead, fits better with the music.
02:19:308 (1) - Snap this to the white tick x_x
02:19:546 - Maybe add a note here, fits nicely with vocals.
02:21:451 - ^
02:27:999 - I feel a note is missing here too. You put a note here in your next patterns.
Zeroarg:
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - I'd stack this triple, increase the spacing here, or align the notes correctly, looks a bit ugly imo, as it's a bit curved.
01:38:713 (6,7,8) - ^
01:40:141 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:40:380, fitting very nice with the vocals.
01:45:856 - I felt a note is missing here.
01:46:332 - And maybe here too, not needed if you're following vocals.
02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Stack, space a bit, or align, as I said above.
Natsu:
01:56:332 - I'd use this rhytm here, those sliders played a bit weird for me.
02:01:808 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I feel this is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192)
DakeDekaane:
You're awesome, I love your mapping style.
And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3