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Kirino Kousaka

kajiyatta wrote:

Hard
Placement
00:17:046(4,5,6,7) liner placement seems weird for me, so a bit cuved better Fixed~
01:43:475(2) move to x:256 y:132. yeah stack (1) seems more nice to be consistence. Fixed~
Rhythm
02:50:141(2,3) to follow the music, I suggest this rhythm. nope for this one. :3
Hit Sonud
00:52:599(1) delete finish at head, maybe add clap better Fixed~
00:57:522(1) delete finish since there is no cymbal I see nothing here, no change o.o
02:00:141(1) ^ I see nothing here, no change o.o

Collab
Rhythm
00:19:189(1,2,3,4) hears weird since it doesn't fit to music, so listencarefully and more follow music better Fixed~
00:29:427 it's the most difficult diff, so I don't follow to make many breaks. Fixed~
Thanks for the mod kajiyatta!
DakeDekaane
Hola :3

Modding in English so all can understand. (And because I feel weird modding in Spanish).

[Normal]
Mostly aesthetics stuff, beat placement looked fine. And making combo modding, because some are a pretty mess.
00:08:713 (2) - How about moving ti around x:140 y:192 and making softer the curve, it'd look nicer imo.
00:09:665 (1) - Remove NC here, this combo is pretty short imo.
00:14:427 (5) - Remove 1 repeat and add a circle in 00:15:380, it'd play better as that beat has a strong feeling to being hit.
00:19:665 (1,2) - Maybe make these sliders look symmetrical, copy (1), reverse it (Ctrl+G) and flip it horizontally (Ctrl+H), if you do move 00:18:713 (5) - to x:256 y:168.
00:21:570 (3) - Maybe make a blanket for 00:22:999 (1).
00:28:713 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:35:856 (3,5) - The overlap for these looks a bit bad, if you want to keep that shape for (2) and (3), maybe make something like this:
Remember fix the spacing for (6) if needed.
00:40:618 (2) - Fix spacing here.
00:44:427 (1) - Remember I told you about the whistle here, just remove the Normal sampleset from the slider (at the right side of editor), also remove the finish there, it doesn't fit too much.
00:45:380 (2) - Put that finish in the end of this :P
01:10:618 (1) - Remove NC.
01:16:332 (4,1) - Maybe fix spacing here.
01:19:665 (3) - Make the end of this lead to the next circle, like this.
01:25:380 (2) - I'd have the side with the reverse arrow pointing down, having a better flow imo.
01:31:570 (1,1) - Remove both NC
01:36:808 (4) - Maybe NC here.
01:40:141 (1) - Remove NC.
01:41:094 (2) - Put NC
01:43:951 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:903 (3) - Put NC
01:45:380 (1) - Remove NC.
01:45:380 (1,2) - Also, this overlap looks very ugly imo, you really should avoid it. Maybe like this:
01:48:237 (4) - If you do what I pointed above, you may want to make a blanket with this.
02:07:284 (2) - Fix spacing, and maybe a blanket.
02:11:570 (3) - I'd prefer stack this with (4), fits better with vocals imo.
02:13:951 (1) - Remove NC
02:15:380 (2) - Put NC.
02:26:808 (1,2) - A blanket would be nice here.
02:32:046 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:42:046 (1,2) - Not a nice flow for an Easy imo, make (1) lead to (2).
02:52:999 (1) - Remove NC
02:53:475 (2) - Put NC
02:55:856 (1) - Maybe remove NC
02:57:284 (4,1) - Swap NC.
03:00:618 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:094 (3,1) - Swap NC
03:07:761 (1) - Remove NC
03:08:713 (3) - Put NC
03:09:665 (1) - Remove NC

[Kirino's Hard]
Not much to say here, and I won't nazi just to justify a mod here, it's a nice diff as it is now.
Use tickrate 1, tickrate should be consistent in all diffs, and tickrate 2 sounds pretty bad in this song.
00:01:094 (2,1) - This tiny overlaps that didn't look too nice for me.
02:03:475 - 02:18:713 - I can see what you did here :x
02:27:999 (2,1,2) - Tiny overlaps again
03:10:261 - And a note is missing here ;_;

[Collab]

Gero:
00:05:022 (4) - Delete this, there's no 1/4 tones in the music.
00:57:284 (1) - Finish this spinner in 00:59:189, there's no point in finishing it after the vocals. You can just put a circle in 01:00:618.

Kirino:
00:20:975 (4) - I think this circle is over nothing in the music, you should delete it.
00:29:427 - And a circle is missing here for vocals

Lolicakes:
00:38:713 - I'd use this rhythm instead, fits better with the music.

02:19:308 (1) - Snap this to the white tick x_x
02:19:546 - Maybe add a note here, fits nicely with vocals.
02:21:451 - ^
02:27:999 - I feel a note is missing here too. You put a note here in your next patterns.

Zeroarg:
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - I'd stack this triple, increase the spacing here, or align the notes correctly, looks a bit ugly imo, as it's a bit curved.
01:38:713 (6,7,8) - ^
01:40:141 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:40:380, fitting very nice with the vocals.
01:45:856 - I felt a note is missing here.
01:46:332 - And maybe here too, not needed if you're following vocals.
02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Stack, space a bit, or align, as I said above.

Natsu:
01:56:332 - I'd use this rhytm here, those sliders played a bit weird for me.

02:01:808 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I feel this is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192)

DakeDekaane:
You're awesome, I love your mapping style.


And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
Gero
DakeDekaane
[Collab]

Gero:
00:05:022 (4) - Delete this, there's no 1/4 tones in the music.Fixed
00:57:284 (1) - Finish this spinner in 00:59:189, there's no point in finishing it after the vocals. You can just put a circle in 01:00:618. Fixed
is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192)

DakeDekaane:
You're awesome, I love your mapping style.
<---- AHAHAHAHAHAHHA XDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHAHAHA X'D

mancusojuanmattos
[Collab:]

Gero:
• 00:05:022 (4) - No aparece nada en la musica que soporte una nota ahi. Esa nota es innecesaria, deberias eliminarla. Intenta escuchar la musica a 50/25% playback cuando agregas streams y ese estilo de cosas Fixed
• 00:14:784 (3) - (^) Yo creo que este circle esta bien va bien con la musica



Mis Partes Del Collab Aqui (son las dos partes asi que ten cuidado xD) :

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VAMOS POR EL RANK! Buena Suerte Loli, llamame cuando hayas actualizado todo el mapa, lo modeare :P
Natsu

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola :3

[Collab]

Natsu:
01:56:332 - I'd use this rhytm here, those sliders played a bit weird for me. since thos sliders fit and get alot of sense for me i gonna keep it

02:01:808 (1) - Maybe it's just me but I feel this is a bit far from the previous slider, maybe move it to the center of your pattern? (x:256 y:192) xD that jump fit very weel imo since is easy to get it orz


And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
Mythiax

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola :3

Zeroarg:
01:36:094 (3,4,5) - I'd stack this triple, increase the spacing here, or align the notes correctly, looks a bit ugly imo, as it's a bit curved. stacked
01:38:713 (6,7,8) - ^ I don't want to stack this one. I really dislike stacks behind a slider. Did some little changes in position tho...
01:40:141 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:40:380, fitting very nice with the vocals. no plz, sounds horrible imo
01:45:856 - I felt a note is missing here. Following vocals, nothing missing there
01:46:332 - And maybe here too, not needed if you're following vocals. same as above
02:54:189 (2,3,4) - Stack, space a bit, or align, as I said above. ok, stacked.

And I think that's all from my part, good luck Moecakes :3
will edit with my updates in short. little busy now.

EDIT: update.

careful lolicakes, both parts are together.

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RoyaLuigi
per favore rankate questa beatmap
Mythiax

RoyaLuigi wrote:

per favore rankate questa beatmap
@translation: please rank this beatmap.

Yeah, I know that's pretty obvious what says there. and what? I wanted to look like a multi-language guy, baka >//<
Kirino Kousaka

Zeroarg wrote:

Yeah, I know that's pretty obvious what says there. and what? I wanted to look like a multi-language guy, baka >//<
well, take this: Putang ina
/me runs

Also, I shall make my updates after Lolicakes update everything and what's left is mine. =w=
Natsu
Why you stop getting mods orz :l
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Updated~
Waiting for Kiri~
I need to fix hitsounds from my difficult x.x~
Gero
bato fato XD gentleman ok no XD no me se la letra =W= Star~
Natsu

Gero wrote:

bato fato XD gentleman ok no XD no me se la letra =W= Star~
gero te has hecho como tommy spam en todos lados xD
DeletedUser_1574070
COOL MAP (Quick check)

Collab
00:14:427 (1,2,3,4) - I couldn't understand why you NCed here. (Just IMO. it doesn't mean you should un-NC here)
00:26:808 (1) - finish added here so I think 00:19:189 (1) - here should be added, too
00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - jump might made this map better but this is fine too
00:32:999 (2,3) - stack
00:42:046 (2) - finish (Since PSY put emphasis on 'Mal-E-ya!')
01:46:094 (4) - is this intentional points that you didn't use Ctrl + H here?
01:46:808 (5,7) - ^


Hard
00:02:046 (1,2) - not good overlap. just a bit down
02:28:713 (1) - ^

Normal
00:42:761 - rhythm suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791366
02:28:713 (3,4) - is this intentional?
02:57:284 (1,3) - stacking might be better

Great map :) hope this ranked soon!
Mythiax

Kloyd wrote:

Collab
01:46:094 (4) - is this intentional points that you didn't use Ctrl + H here?
01:46:808 (5,7) - ^
Both are on purpouse. I follow vocals there and it's my pattern. Thanks for mod :3
787B
Hello there.
Mod requested ingame.

General

  • 01:33:475 - I quite don't understand why the kiai here, because this part of the song actually repeats a lot, but doesn't have kiai on all of them of course. Just pointed this out to know the idea/explanation. Everything else looks fine.

Normal

  • Will point considerable issues with combos here.
  1. 00:11:570 (1,2) - Stack here kinda ruins the flow in my opinion, would be nice if they were separated. Plus, in the actual position there's an "imaginary" straight line that the cursor plays, considering 00:09:665 (3,4,1) -, which I dislike for degrading gameplay. Here's an example of an improvement. Although, keep in mind that when changing this you might want to change the next objects 00:13:475 (3,4,5) - of course for a better placement on the grid.
  2. 00:20:618 (2,3,1) - Why the sudden change of spacing here between them? Might want to keep the 1,0x for consistency.
  3. 00:26:808 (1) - I usually follow the new ticklines for a reference when adding new combos, especially in instrumental songs. But there is vocals here of course. If you actually wanted the new combo here because of that tickline, it's fine. Though considering previous combos were following vocals, you might want to change the new combo to 00:27:284 (2) - because here's where it changes.
  4. 00:30:618 (5) - Highly suggest a new combo here instead of 00:31:570 (1) - because of the drums in the song.
  5. 00:33:475 (4,1,2) - You might want to move one of them a bit to the left or right to improve flow. The same issue of straight line here, like in 00:09:665 (3,4,1) -.
  6. 00:37:284 (5) - Hm, better find a new placement for this since it also doesn't match the 1,0x spacing. This place is actually confusing to read because of that. Remember you can always do ctrl+g in sliders to change its start position to find better places on the grid.
  7. 00:38:713 (6) - New Combo here, right?
  8. 00:40:618 (2) - Spacing.
  9. 00:42:046 (4) - Kinda optional the new combo here and deleting the current one at 00:44:427 (1) - because combos of only two objects are a bit weird to me.
  10. 01:02:046 (2,3) - Stacks here are also unnecessary to me, considering this is the kiai, you might want to have a good flow here. Here's an example of what stuff could've been.
  11. 01:12:522 (6) - A bit nazi, but it would be much better if this was at x;256 y:220 (to match with 01:09:665 (2,3) - ). Althought it's currently not possible because 01:11:570 (5) - doesn't let that happen due to the spacing, you could try decreasing its ending node a bit down to make that possible. Doing that won't affect next objects spacing by the way.
  12. 01:15:856 (3,4) - A slider here would be totally awesome. Give it a try, it fits better than the stacks. Honestly.
  13. 01:18:713 (2) - Might want a new combo here because of the vocals. Also give a fix on them, the current pattern is a bit weird imo. Here, try this.
  14. 01:29:189 (1) - NC unnecessary. Fix patterns.
  15. 01:32:522 (1) - NC also unnecessary imo.
  16. 01:36:808 (1) - ^. Also fix the spacing here.
  17. 02:11:570 (3) - NC because of kiai.
  18. 02:28:713 (3,4) - Consider improving stack here. Which implies making both of them at the same place on the grid. Just delete (4) and place it again below (3). Make sure both of them are in x:256 y:164.
  19. 02:36:332 (1) - This spinner should end in 02:39:665 - to match with all your previous spinners patterns. This is recommended for making things consistent.
  20. 02:47:284 (3) - Might want to move this slider's ending node down on the grid for a better visuals, so it won't touch with 02:45:856 (1) - .
  21. 02:57:284 (1,3) - Nazi again, but they could've been placed on the same spot on the grid.
  22. 03:09:665 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
  23. 03:10:618 (1) - This should finish at 03:12:046 -.

Kirino's Hard

  1. 00:23:475 (4) - Might want to add the NC here, since the vocals change. I kinda wished the pattern here was a slider instead of those stacks in 00:22:999 (3,4) - though, it plays better and keeps the consistency of previous objects in my opinion.
  2. 00:53:832 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't use the blue tick for hitcircles-only here. Sliders work much better for that in my opinion. You basically followed only the vocals at this part, which I honestly think it plays a bit bad. You could've tried mixing both the vocals and instrumentals part here for a better pattern though. For reference, try checking the Collab at this part.
  3. 02:19:189 - Why no object here, just like you did in 01:14:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ? Well, I know there is break after, but I think it also fits nice for the current pattern you've used.
  4. 03:06:808 (1,2) - The stack here ruins the flow a lot. The pattern is good, but would be best if they were in different places. Here's an example.

Collab

  1. 00:17:999 - Kinda feels like an empty spot here. Would be nice if there was an hitcircle.
  2. 00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - Uhh, I'm not sure if this is a good spot for emphasis. I honestly think it would be a lot better if the combo was (1,2,3,4).
  3. 00:32:999 (2,3) - Kinda nazi, but the stack could've been improved (hitcircle (3) been placed at x:351 y:185).
  4. 00:34:427 (1) - NC here looks better.
  5. 00:37:284 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggesting another pattern for combos here. Take a look.
  6. 00:57:284 (1) - I really felt this spinner was forced a bit when I test-played it. Mostly because only in the collab the spin at this part is quite long, which I quite don't like the inconsistency. Would be nice if this was reduced to 00:57:284 (1) - or 00:58:713 - .
  7. 01:38:713 (6) - Spacing here from previous object is a bit messy. You should follow the 1,0x spacing you've used, instead of the 0,80x.
  8. 01:38:713 (6) - New Combo could've been added, so it won't let the current combo a bit long.
  9. 01:45:618 (3,4,5) - Highly suggesting adding couple objects between those notes. Especifically in 01:45:856 -, 01:46:332 - and 01:46:570 - . You can clearly hear beats there. I understand you've wanted to follow the vocals, but it feels kinda weird without adding something between them. And considering this is a Collab, you can make a good use of those notes.
  10. 01:52:522 (1,2,3,4) - You could've tried a better placement for those sliders. Honestly, this looks kinda boring to play.
  11. 02:02:522 (4) - Clap unnecessary, since well, there's actually only vocals.
  12. Here are a couple of places I would add objects, since I actually found something was missing there when test-playing: 02:11:808 -, 02:24:665 - 02:27:999 - 02:28:475 - 02:30:380 - 02:32:284 - 02:34:189 - 02:35:141 - 02:36:094 -. Give them a test and see if you agree.
Alright, wishing the best of luck for you guys.
Poke me ingame if there's something you didn't understand/want to discuss.
See ya.
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
thanks for your mod >w</
Natsu

Wolf wrote:

Hello there.
Mod requested ingame.

[*]01:52:522 (1,2,3,4) - You could've tried a better placement for those sliders. Honestly, this looks kinda boring to play. Is fun when you play it with DT also if you listen to the music is kinda bored in this point too so i thing those slider fit nice that point but I gonna check more opinions about it :D
Mythiax

Wolf wrote:

Hello there.

Collab

  1. 01:38:713 (6) - Spacing here from previous object is a bit messy. You should follow the 1,0x spacing you've used, instead of the 0,80x. oh, fixed.
  2. 01:38:713 (6) - New Combo could've been added, so it won't let the current combo a bit long. I don't see anything bad in having a combo up to 8 notes.
  3. 01:45:618 (3,4,5) - Highly suggesting adding couple objects between those notes. Especifically in 01:45:856 -, 01:46:332 - and 01:46:570 - . You can clearly hear beats there. I understand you've wanted to follow the vocals, but it feels kinda weird without adding something between them. And considering this is a Collab, you can make a good use of those notes. only added the first note you mentioned. I don't want to change it too much.
Thanks a lot for mod.

Lolicakes
cambios
por favor: Mueve 01:38:713 (6,7,8) - a x:344 y:56 y agrega una nota en 01:45:856 - x:264 y:200 eso es todo en mi parte.
Loooctav
Need mod? e.e
Topic Starter
Lolicakey

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Need mod? e.e
yes :33 I'll call you for a mod, I will wait for Kiri's answer
xHappy-
Normal
00:07:761(1) - add finish to head slider ?
00:24:427 - Change to like this ?

00:30:618(5) - add finish to head slider ?
01:03:475 - Change to like this ?

01:25:856(2) - add finish to end slider ?
02:57:284(1) - add finish ?
Hard
00:07:761(1) - add finish to head slider ?
00:30:618(1) - ^
Collab
not bad
Kirino Kousaka

DakeDekaane wrote:

Modding in English so all can understand. (And because I feel weird modding in Spanish).

[Kirino's Hard]
Not much to say here, and I won't nazi just to justify a mod here, it's a nice diff as it is now.
Use tickrate 1, tickrate should be consistent in all diffs, and tickrate 2 sounds pretty bad in this song. fixed~
00:01:094 (2,1) - This tiny overlaps that didn't look too nice for me. made some changes~
02:03:475 - 02:18:713 - I can see what you did here :x no u don't. No change. =w=
02:27:999 (2,1,2) - Tiny overlaps again fixed :o
03:10:261 - And a note is missing here ;_; made changes~

[Collab]
Kirino:
00:20:975 (4) - I think this circle is over nothing in the music, you should delete it. not sure if something's wrong or if fixed it long before, no change :o
00:29:427 - And a circle is missing here for vocals same here, I think I fixed before but meh. no change I guess. o.o
Thanks for the mod DakeNanami~!

Kloyd wrote:

Collab
00:26:808 (1) - finish added here so I think 00:19:189 (1) - here should be added, too removed finish from 00:19:189 (1) since there is no cymbal sound there unlike 00:22:999 (1).
00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - jump might made this map better but this is fine too Jumps added~


Hard
00:02:046 (1,2) - not good overlap. just a bit down already fixed with Dake's mod
02:28:713 (1) - ^ already fixed with Dake's mod too
Thanks for the mod Kloyd~

Wolf wrote:

Hello there.

Kirino's Hard

  1. 00:23:475 (4) - Might want to add the NC here, since the vocals change. I kinda wished the pattern here was a slider instead of those stacks in 00:22:999 (3,4) - though, it plays better and keeps the consistency of previous objects in my opinion. Didn't do the NC, but turned 00:22:999 (3,4) into a slider, nice point you got there.
  2. 00:53:832 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't use the blue tick for hitcircles-only here. Sliders work much better for that in my opinion. You basically followed only the vocals at this part, which I honestly think it plays a bit bad. You could've tried mixing both the vocals and instrumentals part here for a better pattern though. For reference, try checking the Collab at this part. Didn't do the blue ticks, but I have to agree with the mixture of vocals and some instrumentals. Made changes~
  3. 02:19:189 - Why no object here, just like you did in 01:14:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ? Well, I know there is break after, but I think it also fits nice for the current pattern you've used. I agree, fixed~
  4. 03:06:808 (1,2) - The stack here ruins the flow a lot. The pattern is good, but would be best if they were in different places. Here's an example. Fixed~

Collab

  1. 00:17:999 - Kinda feels like an empty spot here. Would be nice if there was an hitcircle. True, fixed~
  2. 00:29:427 (1,2,1,2) - Uhh, I'm not sure if this is a good spot for emphasis. I honestly think it would be a lot better if the combo was (1,2,3,4). Good point, fixed~
  3. Here are a couple of places I would add objects, since I actually found something was missing there when test-playing: 02:11:808 -, 02:24:665 - 02:27:999 - 02:28:475 - 02:30:380 - 02:32:284 - 02:34:189 - 02:35:141 - 02:36:094 -. Give them a test and see if you agree. Added on my part~
Thanks for modding Wolf~ You've got some very nice ideas, you're doing great and keep that up. :D

Peeoil555 wrote:

Hard
00:07:761(1) - add finish to head slider ? no change.
00:30:618(1) - ^ Nice catch, fixed~
Thanks for the mod Peeoil555~

I'm very sorry for this late reply, here are the updates for my diff and Collab.
Lolicakes, I will fix your diff's hitsounds soon when I come back, and recheck the hitsounds of the other two diffs if they have some hitsound infringements at the same time.
Cloudchaser
R.I.P Gentleman :c
Kirino Kousaka
Wow, see you again in august, mappu. =w=
Yuzeyun
It's not dead, it's sleeping beside ~
Gero
Orz ;----; rest in peace PSY U.U
Natsu

Gero wrote:

Orz ;----; rest in peace PSY U.U
Mythiax

Gero wrote:

Orz ;----; rest in peace PSY U.U
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Remapping Normal diff ( =A=)b YEAH! I'm back for now ;-;
Gero
still alive :'D/ this is a miracle XD
Yuzeyun

Lolicakes wrote:

Remapping Normal diff ( =A=)b YEAH! I'm back for now forever ;-;
=3=b
Mythiax
It's alive!
Natsu
:3/
Kyouren
I'm a mother father gentleman
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
Someday I'll finish to map Normal diff, someday... :(
Natsu

Lolicakes wrote:

Someday I'll finish to map Normal diff, someday... :(
hurry up orz I wanna see this ranked soon T-T baka
Yuzeyun
Topic Starter
Lolicakey
added <3
Natsu

Lolicakes wrote:

added <3
baka rank this :C
Gero

Natsu wrote:

Lolicakes wrote:

added <3
baka rank this :C

This ^
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