Pro!
thanks for check Ike ~ /o/BeatofIke wrote:
Pro!
Blue: Keep sorry, other all fixed! nice suggestion. thanks for modding xDZero__wind wrote:
Let's see what we have here, pro guys~ Hi :3
General
exchange your combo color3 and 4, to make similar colors seperate
Gazel's Hard
only diff without spinner at the start, why not?
I hate spinner ;w; please keep = =
00:11:695 (1,2) - it sounds better to me if the whistles at their ends were replaced with claps
00:14:221 (1) - ^
00:16:747 (1) - ^
00:19:590 (2) - ^
00:12:642 (3) - for this one, the clap at end is redundant
00:15:011 - this is correct
01:20:537 - really intended default whistles? sounds real abrupt to me
Yes. I guess to accompany the lyrics better = =
01:22:432 - too low volume at this point imo, better 60% as I suppose, cause it would be really weird if that heavy beat has a even lower volume than beats like 01:23:695 -
I guess that's all for this. it's good that you've made your maps flow nicely and I hope you could pay more attention to make it also sound nice
Call me back
thanks good mod :3Zero__wind wrote:
Let's see what we have here, pro guys~
Hi~ヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙
General
exchange your combo color3 and 4, to make similar colors seperate
OK.change All diff
Insane
for this diff, I really recommend some claps for the first and last part like what I've mentioned in Sylith's Insane. they would really sound nice
00:21:800 - from this point, till 00:41:695 - , would you mind using your normal whistles instead of soft ones for this soft part, as your soft whistle (the bassdrum sound) sounds really unfitting in here, representing almost nothing in the music
00:55:274 (3,4) - move the whistle on 3's head to 4's head instead, to fit the music better
ok~
00:58:116 (4) - similar point, better move the whistle from its end to its head
ok~
00:58:432 (1) - and remove the whistle at end, it really doesn't fit anything imo
ok~
01:00:642 (4) - you may want a whistle on head here
ok~
01:06:011 (5) - add a NC here to divide long combo set
ok~
01:09:011 (2) - this rhythm is weird, you ignored the beat at 01:09:168 - and set one at 01:09:011 - where there's nothing going on. I think you should try to rearrange the rhythm here in this way ↓
ok~
01:14:063 (2) - also a bit weird, try something like the pic below?
ok~
01:18:800 (1) - a whistle would work really good here
ok~
01:28:274 - ^ same sound as 01:28:116 -
ok~
01:28:432 (4,1) - not a good rhythm, you left a heavy beat at a slider's end and started a slider from a really soft point, better rearrange them like
ok~
01:30:958 (4) - listen to the music carefully and you'll find that clap fits better than whistle at this point
ok~
01:42:958 - ^
ok~
01:45:484 - ^
ok~
01:33:168 (3) - the clap at end should be moved to the head
ok~
01:47:695 (1) - similar idea, adding a clap at end sounds really good
ok~
I guess that's all for this. it's good that you've made your maps flow nicely and I hope you could pay more attention to make it also sound nice
Call me back
omg really nice mod!Zero__wind wrote:
Let's see what we have here, pro guys~
General
exchange your combo color3 and 4, to make similar colors seperate
Sylith's Insane
for the beginning part, I don't really know why you only used clap for 00:15:484 - but not for all similar points like 00:12:011 (2) - , 00:12:484 (4) - and 00:14:537 (2) - and so on. only drum sample is a bit too soft to me. and btw, the clap at 00:12:642 (5) - 's end doesn't fit in the music
00:20:695 - unneeded green line
00:21:011 (2) - drum clap sounds better to me
00:48:800 (4) - maybe remove the whistle on head, using whistle and clap together doesn't really sounds good imo
00:51:168 (3) - replace the clap with whistle, and it would fit the song better
00:55:590 (4) - missing whistle on head
01:07:195 (2) - this note is quite unreasonable, what does it really stand for?
01:20:853 (4) - clap fits better than whistle here
01:29:063 (2) - ^
01:30:958 (6) - ^
01:25:274 (2) - may add a clap here?
01:36:011 (3) - you need a whistle at end to keep your previous hitsounding pattern
01:37:116 (1,2,3) - no whistles should be on them, only claps would be much better with the music
01:42:958 (2) - clap fits better than whistle, like I've mentioned above
01:45:484 (2) - ^
01:48:011 - ^
01:46:590 (2,3,4) - use whistles for 2 and 4, clap for 3, and they would apply a nice sound effect
I guess that's all for this. it's good that you've made your maps flow nicely and I hope you could pay more attention to make it also sound nice
Call me back
osu file format v12
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AllFixedZero__wind wrote:
Let's see what we have here, pro guys~
General
exchange your combo color3 and 4, to make similar colors seperate
litoluna's Easy
00:52:116 (1) - add a finish on head to go with the cymbals?
00:54:326 (3) - why not having a whistle here? just like 00:54:642 -
00:59:695 (4,1) - swap NC here makes more sense to me as new sentence begins from 00:59:695 (4) -
01:32:537 (1) - probably need a clap at end to make the snares coherent
01:33:800 (3) - ^ and for this one, I recommend finish on head and clap at end
01:36:051 - ^
01:36:326 (1) - finish on head if you added finish on the previous sliders
01:43:590 (2) - clap at reversing point instead of drum sample? more audioable to me
I guess that's all for this. it's good that you've made your maps flow nicely and I hope you could pay more attention to make it also sound nice
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Thank youZero__wind wrote:
Let's see what we have here, pro guys~
General
exchange your combo color3 and 4, to make similar colors seperate
Naryuga's Normal
00:47:063 (1,2) - remove the whistle on 2's head and add one on 1's end to fit in the music better
00:50:537 (2) - may need a whistle here, quite the same sound as 00:50:221 -
for the beginning and ending part, I personaly don't like how you use whistle and clap together at some points, but as you made them quite consistent so I took it kinda as your style - removed the most (maybe all?) part of the whistle from the whistle+clap parts, which was not really very consistent... so yeah
- fixed the other part you've mentioned. very nice
I've made a few bitsounds changes at 00:18:011 (2) - and 01:46:432 (2,3) - maybe that's not a big deal imo
I guess that's all for this. it's good that you've made your maps flow nicely and I hope you could pay more attention to make it also sound nice
Call me back
FixedZero__wind wrote:
just rechecked all diff and still got a little things to say before ranking it
Gazel's Hard
01:47:063 (4,5) - these beats should actually be snapped on 1/3 snap divisor according to the music. I don't know if it would be unrankable to deal them like the current. I would say that it's better if rearrange the rhythm like the pic below
and after doing so, you could add claps to all these beats and it would sound better for sure
let me know if you changed any
thanks recheck :3Zero__wind wrote:
just rechecked all diff and still got a little things to say before ranking it
Insane
00:24:326 (1) - I don't know why you used many normal finish sounds for this part, it's quite overwhelming to me, you didn't have them when I modded last time iirc. I would highly recommend that you remove the normal finish sounds, replace them with soft finish if you want. check the below
00:24:326 (1) -
00:29:379 (1) -
00:34:432 (1) -
Still, it's ok if you wanna keep them, it's your choice.
00:41:695 (3) - this finish is good
01:14:221 - missing a clap for consistency, referring to 01:10:432 (1) - , 01:11:695 (3) - and 01:12:800 (2) -
01:09:168 - you may also add a clap here, same as the above
00:42:009 - the inherited point here is unsnapped, it doesn't cause any problem though, it's still better if you resnap it to 00:42:011 -
All fixed!
let me know if you changed any
litoluna is kawaiiSatellite wrote:
litoluna and Naryuga should get married.
thanks!!Zero__wind wrote:
I don't know why but I simply can't get enough of this vocal
pretty cool map
Ranked
thanks o.o)/Oyatsu wrote:
Congratz! Wow nice!!
thanks~ :3-Asagi wrote:
Wow Gratz
awesome map awesome song awesome everything <3
thanks~><[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
lol gratz!
still waiting for my gd to get ranked ><