Hi, ticket of Satellite. Sorry for so late!
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Good luck!!~
General
- Sorry but I'm sure kiai time of all diffs should be ended at 00:09:168 (1) - . Rhythm here is down, so kiaitime is ended here is really bad
Insane
- 00:09:168 (1) - Add whistle-normal
- 00:11:379 (1) - ^ at head
- I really can't understand what you mapped, 00:12:168 (3,4,5) - this rhythm, although there isn't a sound at (4) but you still add it, while 00:13:905 (7) - this rhythm can make three notes but you ignore it. Plz consider this!
- 00:16:511 (6,8) - ^, you overmap almost in this diff
- 00:18:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A baka rhythm, you always ignore all drum in sound and overmap all anywhere you like. My rhythm works better for catching instrument
- 00:20:300 (1) - Add whistle-normal
- 00:23:379 (1) - 216/276, nicer for a better flow?
- 00:26:774 (4) - Plz no vocal, no instrument, I also checked 25% and I'm sure empty here, Remove this note or you overmap it
- 00:27:326 (2,3) - Piano is special point to player can look at it this time, change a piano flow rhythm? My mean Ctrl+J it. You will see an amazing rhythm
- 00:31:274 (3,4) - From tail after repeat, (4) is really off. so I have rhythm for this. Remove repeat of (3). Add a slider from 00:31:905 - to 00:32:221 - (ofc, remove current note). You will see a better rhythm. If you make as me, don't forget remove NC of 00:32:537 (3) - and put NC at new slider. It will keep NC pattern better
- 00:34:274 (3,4,1) - same problem as 00:26:774 (4) -
- 00:38:063 (4,5,6) - ^
- 00:38:853 (1,2) - same problem as 00:31:274 (3,4)
- 00:41:221 (2) - Insane so i think you should map perfect all sounds in instrument and don't overmap too much, This slider ignored piano sounds. Change into single notes will bettter about rhythm
- 00:47:853 (5,6,7) - same problem as 00:38:063 (4,5,6)
- 00:50:695 (5,6,1) - ^
- 00:51:958 (5,6,1) - ^
- 01:01:432 (2) - You ignored sounds in instrument again, I really can't understand, if you say "I follow vocal" sorry but vocal starts at 01:01:590 - . CHange it into single notes 1/2 will catch well drum in instrument
- 01:07:747 (2) - A slider follow vocal, 01:09:011 (2) - It was this slider too but vocal changed at 01:08:853 - , so to be able to creat blanket rhythm previous-after. You should remove repeat of 01:08:537 (1) - and move 01:09:011 (2) - to 01:08:853 . Add a single note at 01:09:326 (3) - to full empty. Img if you don't understand
- 01:09:484 (4) - Add whistle-normal at head
- 01:13:432 (4,5,1) - overmap
- 01:14:063 (2) - No follow instrument (01:14:221 - both drum and piano are here) and vocal (01:14:221 - here too). Delete slider, add1 single note at 01:14:063 (2) - and 1 slider from 01:14:221 - to 01:14:379 -
- 01:16:432 (1) - Change into 1/2 slider and add couple note at 01:16:668 - 01:16:747 - , I can hear drum here
- 01:22:274 (5,6,1) - same problem as 00:47:853 (5,6,7)
- 01:36:958 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
- 01:51:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yea, a bad rhythm you ignored so many drums although put follow rhythm will work well
- 01:38:853 (1) - Remove whistle at head, it is bad
- 01:41:063 (3) - Move to 160/140 to be better flow
FEEDBACK: The diff isnt't bad but you've ignored many sounds in instrument and overmap each three notes before a strong beat, Also you use so many finish sound althought sound in intrument didn't have. You need to consider
Sylith's Insane
- 00:09:168 (1) - Yea like inane diffs, there is piano, whynot end it and you end it a place no have anything. 00:09:168 (1) - end at 00:10:747 - and add whistle-normal
- 00:16:432 (8) - I prefer if you can increase speed slider here, the sound is clearly so. It is more interesting. Right?
- 00:29:300 (2) - It is really useless to follow anything. Remove plz or you overmap
- 00:39:326 (4,5,1) - I can accept this but 00:40:590 (4,5,1) - no
- 00:41:695 (4,1) - 00:20:221 (5,1) - the same is distance but you use different beatsnap together, so I sugguest you map it like 00:19:274 (1,2) -
- 00:55:590 (4) - tail is at 444/152 to be better pattern
- 01:02:221 (1) - 296/156, you aren't worried about distance, it is still unranked, it is insteresting and almost Insane I see now it is sothat
- 01:16:432 (1) - Add whistle-normal
- 01:18:011 (3) - Tail should be moved to 160/64
- 01:39:484 (4,5) - What is this? Oh my god @@
- 01:52:747 (1) - 232/312 to be straight with 01:52:432 (2) -
- 01:19:590 (5) - Because this lider is so long, it stole a big tick of 01:20:063 (1) - . So rhythm is made late. My rhythm:
FEEDBACK: This diff is quite generally. But still overmap someplaces
Gazel's Hard
- 00:11:379 (5,1) - Placement of (1) is abit down, it is quite difficult to you can move down your mouse and press after repeating-slider previous. I want (1) is at 360/340. 00:12:168 (2) - 452/180 to fix DS
- 00:24:168 - Put a single note because there is vocal (stack perfectly with (3) will nicer)
- 01:15:800 (3) - Creat 2 single notes and make a jump will more interesting for me
- 01:36:958 (3) - I know although used tick but there is point time still better?
FEEDBACK: Nicest diff! <3
Naryuga's Normal
- 00:09:168 (1) - end at 00:10:747 - and add whistle-normal
- 00:18:642 (3) - I think 1/2 slider and add repeat will work well for nobb player, this is still weird for them
- 00:23:063 (3,1) - Abit stack, Let you change slider pattern not to stack plz
{*]00:26:221 (4) - 100/132 not to stack with (3) - 01:37:432 (1) - Change into single note at tail will better
FEEDBACK: Fine~
litoluna's Easy
- Fine enough for me. Although there are some small stuffs but I think it can be acceptable
Good luck!!~