Nishizawa Hagumi - Yureru Cycle · forum

Melophobia

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Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-02-22T21:21:38+00:00

Thank you for modding. :3

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[Metadata]
Title:Yureru Cycle
TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:Melo's Hard
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai game pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
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alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

alacat 2014-02-23T01:37:35+00:00

update! Thanks guys

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-02-23T14:49:56+00:00

Hai hai, from the ero Queue. ~

[General]

As already said, game is already in the genre so you won't need it in the tags. Just remove it and you'll be fine.

[KSHR's Easy]

00:06:031 (1) - I'd suggest to change the clap to a whistle on the end. It's the same tone as on 00:07:103 (2) - so it'll sound closer to the song.
00:27:674 (4) - Change to the default soft-normal for the red tick, there's no beat therefore it sounds weird.
00:34:531 (4) - ^
01:21:245 (3) - I'd recommend a Normal-hitnormal at the repeat, it will fit the drums better.
01:24:245 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat to follow the piano.
01:36:245 (4) - Could add a whistle aswell to follow the high tone.

[-Umi-'s Normal]

00:37:960 (4) - You probably missed a clap at the start.
00:55:960 (1) - Finish on the end sounds far too strong for this calm part, better replace it with a whistle.
01:05:388 (6) - Hmm, the clap on the start sounds a bit out of music, try a whistle, would be better.
01:16:531 (1) - Piano becomes really strong here, sure you don't like a finish at the start better?
01:18:031 (4) - If you added the one above, I'd recommend to give this start a finish aswell so the piano emphasis is the same.
01:22:960 (3) - Change the end to Normal sampleset? Would give the drums in the background a nice touch.

[Melo's Hard]

00:10:853 (6) - Don't know how you think about it, but I would prefer a whistle here since the piano is much louder here than the drums, also the kick Slider behind it already backs the drums up.
00:24:031 (2) - Change this one to a kick Slider? Since you followed the instruments pretty closely until now, it sounds weird to ignore the drums here.
00:33:567 (2) - Try to remove the whistle here and add it to 1. Since it sounds strange to have the 2 whistles of 2 and 3 so close to each other. (Also to keep consistency with 00:36:888 - )
00:34:531 (5) - Consider to remove the whistle from the end here aswell to give the one at 6 a better emphasis.
01:05:174 (3) - Add soft default whistle addition to the end to catch the piano?
01:05:603 (4) - How about changing the end to a soft whistle? To seperate the tones a bit more from each other.
01:19:317 (5) - Make the angle strange? I feel that flow increases, may be personal preference tho.
SPOILER
01:20:817 (3) - Remove the whistle from the end? Sounds too noisy since the powerful part just broke for a while and the emphasis should be on the finishes.
01:27:674 (5) - I find this 3/4 too inconsistent since you only used it to follow instruments so far. I'd try to shorten it by 1/4.
01:28:103 (6) - Would be better to remove the whistle from the repeat, there is no high tone but a drum beat, so it fits the song better if the sound is deep.
01:40:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd remove all whistles from this pattern since the chorus went down and the tones are not really high.
Jeez, awesome diff!

[Insane]

00:11:174 (5) - You could add a clap here aswell to hit all prominent drum beats.
00:19:960 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? Sounds a bit empty otherwise.
00:23:174 (1) - If I was you I'd increase the spacing here, I firstly thought it was 1/4 since the spacing was lower than 00:21:674 (1,2) - .
00:55:531 (6) - Since you use 3/4 here to emphasize the next Slider's start, I'd recommend you to silence the end.
01:16:531 (1) - Same here. ^
Really nice, nothing else to point at!

Hitsound focused mod is hitsound focused.

Good luck, alacat!

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-02-24T12:39:54+00:00

Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:
Hi /o/
[KSHR]
00:07:103 (2) - Maybe you can try adding whistle on the slider start ? it will fit smoothly with the drum hit on the BGM. already~
00:17:817 (3) - Missed whistle on this note ? you used whistle on similiar part that have piano sound like 00:14:388 (4,3) - Yea, it's my mistake! fixed~
00:32:388 (2) - This slider looks a bit distorted imo, i feel that the curved point is way too deep, how about smoother curve like below ? the blanket with sliderbody would be look really nice ! Nice suggestion~, but let me keep the current shape! I really don't wanna rearrange this slider that is along 00:30:245 (2) - .
SPOILER
00:54:245 (2,3) - Considering the pitch is not really 2/1 and the instrument that covering 00:55:103 - is not really noticeable. How about 3/2 reverse instead ? it will flow more smoothly as it there're high vocal at 00:54:888 - hmmmm, Sorry but I don't wanna make the same rhythm as 00:50:817 (2,1) - here because making 3 3/2 sliders in a row sounds kinda boring to me.. Orz
01:37:103 (1,2,3) - Pattern suggestion if you don't mind it ;w; aaa didn't fix! I wanna move the flow above (2) to follow the melody.
SPOILER

Oyatsu

Oyatsu wrote:
KSHR's Easy
01:07:531 (3) - strong beat, I think NC hm, I personally don't see the reason to add a nc because the melody which is made by the strong sounds you meant starts from 01:06:031 - , and end at around 01:08:603 - .
00:30:245 (2) - Why is drum at head? Read Xinely's mod please~ I agreed with her.

CakiP

CakiP wrote:
ha gu mi!(๑ơ ₃ ơ)
[KSHR]
00:19:103 (2,3) - 00:20:817 - ここに強い音があるんだけど、スライダーの終点に強い音を置くよりも、こんな風な音取りにしてスライダーの始点に強い音をおきたいと思った。でも完全に好み。 00:12:245 (3) - と音取り揃えてるのと、画像の通り修正するとobject数がサビのとこよりも密集ちゃってるきがするから、その兼ね合いも考えてって意味でNoで

01:08:174 (3) - finishが少しうるさいかな？っておもったから、Clapにしてみたり。んー、むしろそうすると違和感ある気がしたのでこのままで
01:21:245 (3) - Drumじゃなくてfinishじゃだめ？ダメか・・・試してみたけど曲の音と混ざって汚い・・

Kodora

Kodora wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]

*Your CS choise feels too big & doesn't fit choosen SV, i'd recommend use CS3 here. kk

00:28:531 - Remove custom ticksound from here why? o.o
00:35:388 - ^ ^
00:33:674 (3) - add drum-sampleset to head for consistensy ok~
00:47:388 (3) - whistle instead of hitdrum sounds better for me Whistles around here are following piano sounds. That's why I used the hit-drum here.
00:55:103 (3) - Sounds a bit weird here - following drums here works kinda tricky, make this slider starts at 00:54:888 - and end it at 00:55:531 - imo it will sounds better if it will be placed follow lyrics fixed
01:42:031 (1) - Same as Normal same as Normal ;3

Konei

Konei wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]

00:06:031 (1) - I'd suggest to change the clap to a whistle on the end. It's the same tone as on 00:07:103 (2) - so it'll sound closer to the song. I tried this before I completed this difficulty. But it sounded kinda weird to me because there is very little difference between them.
00:27:674 (4) - Change to the default soft-normal for the red tick, there's no beat therefore it sounds weird. okay~
00:34:531 (4) - ^ ^
01:21:245 (3) - I'd recommend a Normal-hitnormal at the repeat, it will fit the drums better. sounds better~ ok!
01:24:245 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat to follow the piano. okay, added!
01:36:245 (4) - Could add a whistle aswell to follow the high tone. wanna add only finishes around here!

thanks for modding! :3

mod溜めすぎダメ、絶対・・・（するときももらうときも） Tagのことだけ任せます！

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BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-04T19:36:45+00:00

Sorry for the long wait alacat. Just a few things to point out!
[General]

If you want, you an add "Willplus" in tags as well.
The offset sounds a bit late imo. It could be my low fps though. ._.

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

alacat 2014-03-06T22:04:36+00:00

update! Thank you for checking

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-03-06T22:07:07+00:00

I didn't forget the mod. But I just can't do my mod reqs, it's being terribly annoying. Call me for rank then.

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-06T22:20:51+00:00

Okay, looks good! Bubbled!

@Irreversible: Since you going to mod/rank this map, could you also double-check the offset? I wasn't completely sure whether it was slighly off or not.

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-03-07T16:09:13+00:00

Could I have a reply to my mod?

Irreversible

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Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-03-07T17:18:24+00:00

Hi alacat!
Well, as Konei wishes, please reply to his mod first.

[Easy]

The hitsounding is a creative idea, but I'm not a fan at all of custom ones like that; they sound exactly the same as the background beat, and due to that it seems quite inaudible. Furthermore, additional hitsounds appear rather random. For example: 00:26:817 (3) - in easy. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think it would be a good idea to change it anyway.

00:01:103 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - I can see what you try here, although I'm not really okay with the NCing here, it gives many HP back, and makes it really no difficulty at all. Could you reduce them?

Really nice easy!

[Normal]

00:48:245 (1) - Any possibility to make this slidershape even neater?
01:21:245 (4,1) - Don't you wanna leave out this weird rhythm here, and instead map the building up vocals starting from 01:22:317 - ? http://puu.sh/7mkgk/aedf9594da.jpg This might be an idea, but too hard, but I guess it's okay for one time since you lead in the new part of the kiai.

[Hard]

00:03:460 - How about lowering this sounds here by maybe 10%? Seems quite loud how it is now.
00:28:317 (4) - Well, i Kind of saw it, so could you make them completely parallel? Would be nicer to me.
00:41:817 (5) - In my opinion, this stack breaks the flow here. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/7mkw1/222b35167e.jpg to Keep the flow!
00:43:960 (1) - That one is quite Close to the last slider, even if the DS is correct, could you by any Chance move it a bit to the left?
01:11:388 (2) - ^
01:08:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Well, that lead in of the kiai isn't made that great if you ask me; what about making something more outstanding? As you can see, you go in an anti-ClockWise pattern, and this is Kind of boring. I suggest making a left right jump there, a zigzack pattern, a direction Change, whatever suits you; but it would be nice if you could Change this. (sorry for the randomly capitalized letters, my Laptop makes this on his own

)
01:12:031 (3) - You could map the vocals so good here with 3 circles, why wasting it with a Long slider?
01:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not adding some normal / drum hitsounds as you've usually did here?
01:25:745 (2) - Same as above (3 circles)
01:38:388 (1) - not sure whether this NC is placed correctly; i'd rather have it 01:39:674 (3) - .

all in all; a pretty good hard!

[Insane]

00:50:603 (1) - I don't really like this NC, placing a NC 00:50:817 (3) - would give a much better effect!

Enjoyable Insane!

call me back

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-03-07T17:33:40+00:00

Konei wrote:
Hai hai, from the ero Queue. ~

[-Umi-'s Normal]

00:37:960 (4) - You probably missed a clap at the start.
00:55:960 (1) - Finish on the end sounds far too strong for this calm part, better replace it with a whistle.
01:05:388 (6) - Hmm, the clap on the start sounds a bit out of music, try a whistle, would be better.
01:16:531 (1) - Piano becomes really strong here, sure you don't like a finish at the start better?
01:18:031 (4) - If you added the one above, I'd recommend to give this start a finish aswell so the piano emphasis is the same.
01:22:960 (3) - Change the end to Normal sampleset? Would give the drums in the background a nice touch.
All fixed :3, sorry i didn't see your mod >.<

Irreversible wrote:
[Normal]

00:48:245 (1) - Any possibility to make this slidershape even neater? the current one is good for me
01:21:245 (4,1) - Don't you wanna leave out this weird rhythm here, and instead map the building up vocals starting from 01:22:317 - ? http://puu.sh/7mkgk/aedf9594da.jpg This might be an idea, but too hard, but I guess it's okay for one time since you lead in the new part of the kiai. fixed on my own way

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alacat

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Topic Starter

alacat 2014-03-07T19:12:28+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Hi alacat! yo ~ Irrrr
Well, as Konei wishes, please reply to his mod first. okey~

[Insane]

00:50:603 (1) - I don't really like this NC, placing a NC 00:50:817 (3) - would give a much better effect! ahh.. i see your feeling. But as you can see my diff, i made pattern of 3 hits new combo. 00:19:745 (1) - , 00:26:603 (1) - , 00:30:031 (1) - , 00:33:460 (1) - and so on ... So i keep to unify my pattern.

Enjoyable Insane! Thanks!

call me back

for Konei

Konei wrote:
[General]

As already said, game is already in the genre so you won't need it in the tags. Just remove it and you'll be fine. ok !
[Insane]

00:11:174 (5) - You could add a clap here aswell to hit all prominent drum beats. I feel it's too loud to this stream.
00:19:960 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? Sounds a bit empty otherwise. I didn't add a whistle to this sound. please check my pattern ar here.00:13:960 - ,00:14:388 - and so on.
00:23:174 (1) - If I was you I'd increase the spacing here, I firstly thought it was 1/4 since the spacing was lower than 00:21:674 (1,2) - . It's on purpose. i think it's better to put the spacing for flow.
00:55:531 (6) - Since you use 3/4 here to emphasize the next Slider's start, I'd recommend you to silence the end. ok, turned down the volume here
01:16:531 (1) - Same here. ^ kk
Really nice, nothing else to point at! Thank you, Konei :3

Thank you for modding

Update Umi and My diff ! waiting for KSHR and Melo :3

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-03-07T20:19:28+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Easy]

The hitsounding is a creative idea, but I'm not a fan at all of custom ones like that; they sound exactly the same as the background beat, and due to that it seems quite inaudible. Furthermore, additional hitsounds appear rather random. For example: 00:26:817 (3) - in easy. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think it would be a good idea to change it anyway.

> Slidertick & Soft-hitnormal: Hmm.. Considering they sound the same as the background beat, it seems like this hitsouding is against the rule.(I mean ↓) Ok, I'll ask alacat to remove "soft-slidertick4" and "soft-hitnormal4".
SPOILER
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
> Drum Sampleset: In this song, it sounds like drum sampleset doesn't work well with soft-hitnormal. Removed.

00:01:103 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - I can see what you try here, although I'm not really okay with the NCing here, it gives many HP back, and makes it really no difficulty at all. Could you reduce them?
Yea, you're right. Removed some.

Really nice easy! yay!

Thanks Irre~ :3

To alacat: "soft-slidertick4" "soft-hitnormal4" この二つだけ削除お願いしまっす！（他難易度では使われてなかったから兼ね合い気にせず消しちゃって大丈夫です！）

SPOILER

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Title:Yureru Cycle
TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:KSHR's Easy
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai Willplus pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
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alacat

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alacat 2014-03-07T20:51:13+00:00

了解ですー！

Update!

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-03-07T21:50:39+00:00

Konei wrote:
Could I have a reply to my mod?

Oops! Sorry about that Konei!

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2014-03-08T16:13:20+00:00

Konei wrote:
[Melo's Hard]

00:10:853 (6) - Don't know how you think about it, but I would prefer a whistle here since the piano is much louder here than the drums, also the kick Slider behind it already backs the drums up. There's already a whistle on (5) so i find it kinda noisy.
00:24:031 (2) - Change this one to a kick Slider? Since you followed the instruments pretty closely until now, it sounds weird to ignore the drums here. The current rhythm represents how i feel the song better. I'd like to emphasize the heavy beats using long sliders.
00:33:567 (2) - Try to remove the whistle here and add it to 1. Since it sounds strange to have the 2 whistles of 2 and 3 so close to each other. (Also to keep consistency with 00:36:888 - ) Feels empty w/o it, i'd go with the current state anyways. 00:36:888 - is intentionally different. i'd like to provide some variety here.
00:34:531 (5) - Consider to remove the whistle from the end here aswell to give the one at 6 a better emphasis. I can see ur point but it sounds better to me w/ it.
01:05:174 (3) - Add soft default whistle addition to the end to catch the piano? since i didn't use any whistles in this section i'm afraid it'd be strange.
01:05:603 (4) - How about changing the end to a soft whistle? To seperate the tones a bit more from each other. ^
01:19:317 (5) - Make the angle strange? I feel that flow increases, may be personal preference tho. No difference considering players won't move thier cursors for a kick slider and the current one looks better imo
SPOILER
01:20:817 (3) - Remove the whistle from the end? Sounds too noisy since the powerful part just broke for a while and the emphasis should be on the finishes. i've added whistles on every red ticks in kiai sections, i dont find it noisy or bad.
01:27:674 (5) - I find this 3/4 too inconsistent since you only used it to follow instruments so far. I'd try to shorten it by 1/4. That way 01:28:103 - is emphasized in a better way.
01:28:103 (6) - Would be better to remove the whistle from the repeat, there is no high tone but a drum beat, so it fits the song better if the sound is deep. Feels empty if i removed it because there's no whistles around here due to the long slider.
01:40:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd remove all whistles from this pattern since the chorus went down and the tones are not really high. it follows the bass-drum and i think it's funny.
Jeez, awesome diff!

Irreversible wrote:
[Hard]
00:03:460 - How about lowering this sounds here by maybe 10%? Seems quite loud how it is now. Reduced by 20%
00:28:317 (4) - Well, i Kind of saw it, so could you make them completely parallel? Would be nicer to me. Never noticed LOL okay fixed
00:41:817 (5) - In my opinion, this stack breaks the flow here. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/7mkw1/222b35167e.jpg to Keep the flow! Intentional, the transition (direction change) can be more natural by stacking them imo.
00:43:960 (1) - That one is quite Close to the last slider, even if the DS is correct, could you by any Chance move it a bit to the left? good point!
01:11:388 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Well, that lead in of the kiai isn't made that great if you ask me; what about making something more outstanding? As you can see, you go in an anti-ClockWise pattern, and this is Kind of boring. I suggest making a left right jump there, a zigzack pattern, a direction Change, whatever suits you; but it would be nice if you could Change this. (sorry for the randomly capitalized letters, my Laptop makes this on his own ) it's kinda part of my style and i don't find it boring at all
01:12:031 (3) - You could map the vocals so good here with 3 circles, why wasting it with a Long slider? it represents how i feel the song better and considering the level of difficulty i don't have to stick to vocals strictly.
01:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not adding some normal / drum hitsounds as you've usually did here? To emphasize the hi-hat (or whatever it's called lol) on the red ticks.
01:25:745 (2) - Same as above (3 circles) same answer
01:38:388 (1) - not sure whether this NC is placed correctly; i'd rather have it 01:39:674 (3) - . It's not that bad to have newcombo on heavy beat. if (3) had a newcombo the combo would be way too short and wouldn't look that great im afraid.
all in all; a pretty good hard!