Momochikun
Momochikun wrote:
Hi /o/[KSHR]
- 00:07:103 (2) - Maybe you can try adding whistle on the slider start ? it will fit smoothly with the drum hit on the BGM. already~
- 00:17:817 (3) - Missed whistle on this note ? you used whistle on similiar part that have piano sound like 00:14:388 (4,3) - Yea, it's my mistake! fixed~
- 00:32:388 (2) - This slider looks a bit distorted imo, i feel that the curved point is way too deep, how about smoother curve like below ? the blanket with sliderbody would be look really nice ! Nice suggestion~, but let me keep the current shape! I really don't wanna rearrange this slider that is along 00:30:245 (2) - .
- 00:54:245 (2,3) - Considering the pitch is not really 2/1 and the instrument that covering 00:55:103 - is not really noticeable. How about 3/2 reverse instead ? it will flow more smoothly as it there're high vocal at 00:54:888 - hmmmm, Sorry but I don't wanna make the same rhythm as 00:50:817 (2,1) - here because making 3 3/2 sliders in a row sounds kinda boring to me.. Orz
- 01:37:103 (1,2,3) - Pattern suggestion if you don't mind it ;w; aaa didn't fix! I wanna move the flow above (2) to follow the melody.
Oyatsu
Oyatsu wrote:
KSHR's Easy
- 01:07:531 (3) - strong beat, I think NC hm, I personally don't see the reason to add a nc because the melody which is made by the strong sounds you meant starts from 01:06:031 - , and end at around 01:08:603 - .
- 00:30:245 (2) - Why is drum at head? Read Xinely's mod please~ I agreed with her.
CakiP
CakiP wrote:
ha gu mi!(๑ơ ₃ ơ)
[KSHR]
00:19:103 (2,3) - 00:20:817 - ここに強い音があるんだけど、スライダーの終点に強い音を置くよりも、こんな風な音取りにしてスライダーの始点に強い音をおきたいと思った。でも完全に好み。 00:12:245 (3) - と音取り揃えてるのと、画像の通り修正するとobject数がサビのとこよりも密集ちゃってるきがするから、その兼ね合いも考えてって意味でNoで
01:08:174 (3) - finishが少しうるさいかな?っておもったから、Clapにしてみたり。 んー、むしろそうすると違和感ある気がしたのでこのままで
01:21:245 (3) - Drumじゃなくてfinishじゃだめ?ダメか・・・ 試してみたけど曲の音と混ざって汚い・・
Kodora
Kodora wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
*Your CS choise feels too big & doesn't fit choosen SV, i'd recommend use CS3 here. kk
- 00:28:531 - Remove custom ticksound from here why? o.o
- 00:35:388 - ^ ^
- 00:33:674 (3) - add drum-sampleset to head for consistensy ok~
- 00:47:388 (3) - whistle instead of hitdrum sounds better for me Whistles around here are following piano sounds. That's why I used the hit-drum here.
- 00:55:103 (3) - Sounds a bit weird here - following drums here works kinda tricky, make this slider starts at 00:54:888 - and end it at 00:55:531 - imo it will sounds better if it will be placed follow lyrics fixed
- 01:42:031 (1) - Same as Normal same as Normal ;3
Konei
Konei wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
- 00:06:031 (1) - I'd suggest to change the clap to a whistle on the end. It's the same tone as on 00:07:103 (2) - so it'll sound closer to the song. I tried this before I completed this difficulty. But it sounded kinda weird to me because there is very little difference between them.
- 00:27:674 (4) - Change to the default soft-normal for the red tick, there's no beat therefore it sounds weird. okay~
- 00:34:531 (4) - ^ ^
- 01:21:245 (3) - I'd recommend a Normal-hitnormal at the repeat, it will fit the drums better. sounds better~ ok!
- 01:24:245 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat to follow the piano. okay, added!
- 01:36:245 (4) - Could add a whistle aswell to follow the high tone. wanna add only finishes around here!
thanks for modding! :3
mod溜めすぎダメ、絶対・・・(するときももらうときも) Tagのことだけ任せます!
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