Nishizawa Hagumi - Yureru Cycle‬ · forum‬

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-02-09T16:38:39+00:00

Japanese BAT x 3

Fycho

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Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-02-09T16:40:14+00:00

nice song/map and starred xD

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-02-09T16:49:06+00:00

KSHR wrote:
Japanese BAT x 3

I feel alone xD

~~anyways normal incoming >.</~~

done =w=/

> http://puu.sh/6QrqP/778a8d7727.rar (with some custom hitsounds :3)

Asphyxia

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2014-02-10T15:51:52+00:00

Hi guys! Actually, this song is cool! Melophobia requested a mod so yeah, here I am :3

General thoughts

Let's get nazi, shall we! Your BG rezo is 1365 x 768 and not 1366 x 768, that's a simple resize if you want to do it!
Some inconsistencies in kiai-times:
See here
I see you have umi and -umi- in tags, I'd honestly remove one of them from there. If not, you should add probably ''Melo'' to your tags aswell, I myself
would search it with ''Melo'' more but I guess that's just me.
Disable widescreen support please!
Clean!

KSHR's Easy

00:04:531 (3) - Shouldn't this be NC'd according to 00:07:960 (1) - ? If not, remove the NC from 00:07:960 (1) -
00:15:674 (2) - I'd move this slider a bit down to the movement doesn't feel too bad here, like erm, x:277, y:260?
00:25:531 (2) - Doesn't fit because of it's shape, I mean it does fit but not as well as it could. I think this slider should be more blanketed 00:24:031 (4) - with this sliders end. Well, if you don't understand what I mean, see this picture:
Example
01:14:388 (2) - Movement here was also a bit unnatural for me, you could move this slider somewhere around x:203 y:34 to help the flow a bit
01:40:531 (1) - I'm not really a fan of 1 combo objects, I mean yeah, it could be for the emphaziz (idk how to write it properly... orz) but still, it feels too unnecessary so consider removing the NC there.
One problem I had with this was the tick sounds, they shouldn't be there at all, sometimes it screwed the rhythm imo... well, get more opinions on that I guess! Other than that, solid and nice difficulty!

Umi's Normal

00:02:603 (3) - This shouldn't belong to 00:01:960 (2) - this combo at all. It felt really weird while playing. 00:01:103 (1,2) - are so strong and 00:02:603 (3) - and this isn't so it's really weird I guess you made your mind now! (note: this applies for 00:05:817 (4) - etc)
00:23:388 (4,5) - Dat spacing, I guess it should be pretty easy to fix!
00:40:317 (3) - Moving this note a bit more down creates a cool flow there! It plays better than this straight one, try it!
Honestly, I would've done those overlaps a bit differently but that seems to be your style and it'd be quite rude to try to change it so I rather not. Cool diff otherwise.

Melo's Hard/me pokes Melo

00:01:103 (1) - Just a personal thing here, you could make it a bit better looking, now it feels kind of meh... like this maybe? http://puu.sh/6QXfB.jpg
00:01:103 (1,2,3) - If you can, rotate them a bit clockwise, the movement wasn't was natural as I wanted it to be. Like this:
Example
00:21:031 (4,5) - This jump was quite unexpected (for me) but I guess you want to keep it though. Could you reduce the spacing on this maybe a bit? The song isn't imo that intense to have such a jump there, atleast not that big. : p
00:28:960 (1) - I guess it's small thing but I'd rotate this slider a bit so the movement gets better here. Atleast it got better when I tested it.
Example
00:42:031 (1) - This kind of overlaps felt wrong to play, I'd just adjust them a bit so they don't get overlapped. Of course if you don't like this idea, don't apply this to anywhere ^^
00:57:674 (1,2) - This was so pretty but the small, small overlap (imo) kind of ruined it, care to fix that?
01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps were pretty big if you ask me. I'd reduce them a bit.
So pretty o.o Great job!

Insane

00:04:317 - There's actually a beat that you could place a note. I feel like this place having not a note made it play pretty weird, I didn't like the break there.
00:13:103 (1,2) - This played way better if you would CTRL + G 1 and then CTRL + G, kind of reverse them, try it out!
00:16:960 (2) - Try to CTRL + J this slider and move it back to it's original place? Feels more natural this way!
00:22:317 (2) - I'd honestly move this note a bit up, considering the movement wasn't perfect here. This would make it way better imho! (x:158 y:54 could work)
01:16:103 (7) - Try CTRL + G here, plays more interesting and feels good to play, check it!
01:16:960 (2) - I'd move this note more closer to 01:16:531 (1) - 's end, I first thought it would be on the red tick instead in the blue tick.
01:41:817 (7) - I would NC this note to be consistent with the other diffs?
Can't really point out much stuff because this diff played well. GJ ~

Sorry for the crappy mod ;-; this mapset is nice (btw I love the BG) so yeah, GL guys with it! ~

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-02-10T16:09:22+00:00

<3

KSHR

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-02-10T16:14:49+00:00

βёдтofIκё

Melophobia

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Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-02-10T16:21:33+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Melo's Hard/me pokes Melo
00:01:103 (1) - Just a personal thing here, you could make it a bit better looking, now it feels kind of meh... like this maybe? http://puu.sh/6QXfB.jpg　I somehow wanted to try something new to me. lol but yeah, yours should look better. Fixed accordingly.
00:01:103 (1,2,3) - If you can, rotate them a bit clockwise, the movement wasn't was natural as I wanted it to be. Like this: Good point, I've been thinking that could be better. Fixed in my own way though.
Example
00:21:031 (4,5) - This jump was quite unexpected (for me) but I guess you want to keep it though. Could you reduce the spacing on this maybe a bit? The song isn't imo that intense to have such a jump there, atleast not that big. : p Well I don't love that pattern either. Fixed into a boring stacking pattern.
00:28:960 (1) - I guess it's small thing but I'd rotate this slider a bit so the movement gets better here. Atleast it got better when I tested it. Hmm, no. The current one flows/looks better to me.
Example
00:42:031 (1) - This kind of overlaps felt wrong to play, I'd just adjust them a bit so they don't get overlapped. Of course if you don't like this idea, don't apply this to anywhere ^^ I liked the way it touches the previous slider but i found a cool alternative so fixed.
00:57:674 (1,2) - This was so pretty but the small, small overlap (imo) kind of ruined it, care to fix that? Agreed. I curved it in the opposite direction.
01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - Those jumps were pretty big if you ask me. I'd reduce them a bit. Well that was a bit too much. xD Reduced the spacing.
So pretty o.o Great job!

Thanks for modding! it was quite helpful to me.

I thought you disliked non-english songs so I'm glad you like this song. xD

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2014-02-10T16:31:47+00:00

Hi! from Melo-san's request :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

少し始まるのが早いのでLead-inを500~1000くらい入れてもいいかも？
BGのサイズが1365x768になってますがこれはいいんですかね・・・？きちんと16:9である1366x768のものを使用することをオススメします。
全diffのWidescreen supportのチェックを外しましょう。

[Insane]

00:02:603 (4) - 音取りの提案です。ボーカルをフォローしつつ裏のバスを拾えるこの音取りはどうでしょうか？
00:06:995 (7,8,9) - 7,8を00:06:888 (6) - と同様にSampleset Drumにして（もしくは8をSampleset Noneでwhistle）、00:07:424 (9) - ここの終端と同じ音が00:07:103 (8) - この終端にあるので、同じようにAdd whistleはどうでしょう
00:10:103 (5) - 曲にfitさせるならclapよりwhistleが合ってると思います。
00:16:531 (1,2) - ここは次にくる3連に繋ぎやすくするように丸い流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
00:20:388 (4,5,6) - 6への流れがスムーズではなかったので配置の提案です。このように三角形を作ってみてはどうでしょうか？ 4は 00:21:245 (7) - の終端にスタックしてあり、5は 00:19:960 (3) - のブランケットを意識してます。この流れならばスムーズなAIM運びが可能であると思います。
SPOILER
00:24:245 (7) - whistleが入るはずですがストリームの途中ということで故意的に抜いているのであればスルーしてください！
00:24:674 (10) - 次のnoteへ直線上になるように置いたほうが、個人的にはAIMした時に若干打ちやすいです。
SPOILER
00:35:388 (1) - 1/4スライダーの後のせいか、若干スペーシングが狭く感じました。　それと合わせてスライダーの向きを反対側に曲げて次のスライダーを打ちやすくしてみるのはどうでしょう？
SPOILER
01:29:388 - この手の音のする箇所にはfinishの入ったnoteが必ずあるので、Add noteしてfinishをいれて欲しい場所でした。　周りの配置を崩さずに置くなら x:404 y:128あたりがベストかなと思います。
01:34:745 (4) - 01:35:817 (3) - ここにスタックして、ストンと落ちるような配置が自分は好みです！

[Melo's Hard]

00:04:531 (1) - かなり細かいけどx:360 y:136に移動すると00:03:888 (4,5,1) - ここの始端同士で綺麗な三角形になります。
01:04:317 (1,3,4) - 1と4のスライダーは並行な形になっているので、それに合わせて3のスライダーも同じように角度を合わせてみてはどうでしょう
SPOILER
01:07:103 (2,3,4) - 曲の方が思いっきり1/6のリズムなのでこの3連は違和感がありました。Insaneと同じようにスライダーで音取りしてみてはどうでしょう？
01:12:031 (3) - ボーカルをフォローした音取りの方が自然で、さらに他の同じような箇所もボーカルフォローが多いので統一感を出すためにも合わせてみては？

01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - BPM低いというのもありますがHardにしては少し飛びすぎではと思いました。少し縮めたものを作ってみたのでよかったら使ってみてください。

SPOILER

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01:24:245 (3) - このスライダーも少し曲げてあげた方が流れも見栄えも良くなると思います。4の位置も若干移動させてます。
SPOILER
01:25:745 (2) - 01:12:031 (3) - と同じです。

[Umi's Normal]

00:02:603 (3) - Add finish to slider head. same as 00:09:460 (4) - here.
00:26:817 (4) - Add whistle to slider end. Whistle and clap have been added in other similar places.
00:51:460 (4) - Add clap to slider head and end?
01:11:388 (4) - design suggesiton. I think current one is a little bad form. so What about use a copy slider?
SPOILER
01:20:817 (3) - Add finish.
01:39:674 (4) - add a slider curve for blanket.
SPOILER

[KSHR's Easy]

01:03:460 (2) - Sampleset drumよりもピアノに合わせてwhistle入れたほうが曲にあっていていいと思いました。

Nice diff!!

Good luck!

Melophobia

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Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-02-10T16:45:08+00:00

Guy wrote:
[Melo's Hard]
00:04:531 (1) - かなり細かいけどx:360 y:136に移動すると00:03:888 (4,5,1) - ここの始端同士で綺麗な三角形になります。ほい
01:04:317 (1,3,4) - 1と4のスライダーは並行な形になっているので、それに合わせて3のスライダーも同じように角度を合わせてみてはどうでしょう　おっけー
SPOILER
01:07:103 (2,3,4) - 曲の方が思いっきり1/6のリズムなのでこの3連は違和感がありました。Insaneと同じようにスライダーで音取りしてみてはどうでしょう？　悩んでたんですよねぇ３連打でHardの人でも叩けるようにしたかったんですけどまぁ確かに違和感あったのでスライダーにしちゃいました
01:12:031 (3) - ボーカルをフォローした音取りの方が自然で、さらに他の同じような箇所もボーカルフォローが多いので統一感を出すためにも合わせてみては？　ごもっともな意見ではあるんですけど今の方が好みなのでしばらくこれでいきます
01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - BPM低いというのもありますがHardにしては少し飛びすぎではと思いました。少し縮めたものを作ってみたのでよかったら使ってみてください。前のModで指摘されて自力で修正したんですけどこっちの方が綺麗ですねありがとうございます使わせてもらいます
SPOILER
396,176,75460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,84,75674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,239,75888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,96,76103,1,10,0:0:0:0:
220,156,76317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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01:24:245 (3) - このスライダーも少し曲げてあげた方が流れも見栄えも良くなると思います。4の位置も若干移動させてます。おっけーです
SPOILER
01:25:745 (2) - 01:12:031 (3) - と同じです。同じ理由です

ありがとう！
http://puu.sh/6R1ed.osu

Umi

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Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-02-10T16:46:54+00:00

Asphyxia wrote:
Umi's Normal
00:02:603 (3) - This shouldn't belong to 00:01:960 (2) - this combo at all. It felt really weird while playing. 00:01:103 (1,2) - are so strong and 00:02:603 (3) - and this isn't so it's really weird I guess you made your mind now! (note: this applies for 00:05:817 (4) - etc) So you mean NC right ? added then
00:23:388 (4,5) - Dat spacing, I guess it should be pretty easy to fix! ops lol fixed
00:40:317 (3) - Moving this note a bit more down creates a cool flow there! It plays better than this straight one, try it! yeah not bad :3
Honestly, I would've done those overlaps a bit differently but that seems to be your style and it'd be quite rude to try to change it so I rather not. Cool diff otherwise.

Guy wrote:
[Umi's Normal]
00:02:603 (3) - Add finish to slider head. same as 00:09:460 (4) - here.
00:26:817 (4) - Add whistle to slider end. Whistle and clap have been added in other similar places.
00:51:460 (4) - Add clap to slider head and end?
01:11:388 (4) - design suggesiton. I think current one is a little bad form. so What about use a copy slider?
SPOILER
01:20:817 (3) - Add finish.
01:39:674 (4) - add a slider curve for blanket.
SPOILER

All fixed :3

Good luck!

sankyuu both for mod

diff

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Title:Yureru Cycle
TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai game pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
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kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2014-02-10T17:33:43+00:00

As requested from Melophobia.
[General]
前の二人が全部言ってくれたので特に無いです
[Easy]
Hit Sound
01:30:245(1) 始点にfinish追加
[Normal]
Placement
00:17:388(5,6,1) Put these notes more symmterically, and the flow looks more nice.

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:21:245(4) It looks a bit difficult because of not 1/1 rhythm, so I suppose it would be better if you like.

SPOILER

Hit Sound
01:16:531(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental.
[Hard]
Placement
00:23:388(1) 前の三連スタックのオーバーラップが少し気になるので、ブランケット状に配置してみるのは？

SPOILER

01:13:745(2) スライダーの向きが次のnoteに対してやや不自然なので、以下のようにしてみては？

SPOILER

01:33:674(1)　強迫でfinishもついてるので、ここはジャンプさせた方が曲調に合ってると思います。前の部分で星形ジャンプかけてて、ここでスペーシング急に小さくするのはやや不自然に見えます。e.g.)

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:33:674(3) 途中でボーカル始まってるので、それを拾ってやったほうが今よりも違和感なく聞こえます。 e.g.)

SPOILER

00:47:338(3) ^
[Insane]
Placement
00:11:174(13,14,1) - (13,14)が直線になっており(1)への流れが少し妙なので、内側へ曲げるような形にすると今よりもいい感じになります。　e.g.)

SPOILER

00:16:531(1) 逆側に曲げたやった方が前のnoteから自然につながり、かつ次の(2)への流れも良いと思います。

SPOILER

00:21:245(7) ここも同様の理由で、前後のnoteの家回しを考えると向きを逆にするといいです。　

SPOILER

00:49:317(2,3) ここCTRL+Gしてみては？今の配置だと四角形っぽく回す形にしては、(4)から(5)へのジャンプで少し打ち回しが変わって少し妙なので、それならば星形等間隔でジャンプさせた方が読みやすいように思いました。
01:08:603(4) ここでNC入れてみては？01:07:531でNC入れてるのを見ると、2コンボの後に11コンボ続くのも少し見た目が悪いので、ボーカルが始まるここで一旦区切ったほうがいいです。
01:24:460(4) ここ×1.00になってますけど、次の(5,1)間や他のスペーシング見ると×1.10にするべきでは？
01:29:574(5) ブランケットがやや強制気味で次のnoteへの流れが悪いように見えるので、直線スライダーで置き換えてみては？また(8,1)でジャンプを設けると、強迫をフォロー出来ると思います。。e.g.)

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:04:317 ここにnote追加してみては？バックにインストとボーカルが聞こえて、次の00:07:745でnote入ってるので対称的にした方がいいです。

Good luck.

Melophobia

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Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-02-10T22:16:47+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hard]
Placement
00:23:388(1) 前の三連スタックのオーバーラップが少し気になるので、ブランケット状に配置してみるのは？わざと重ねてます、後続のスライダーの曲げ方的にも今のままの方が好きです
SPOILER
01:13:745(2) スライダーの向きが次のnoteに対してやや不自然なので、以下のようにしてみては？　個人的にそこまで違和感ない＆次のNoteとの間に一拍置いてるので問題ないと思ってます　今の置き方は前のスライダーの角度と合わせてて個人的に綺麗だと思うので見た目的にも現状維持します
SPOILER
01:33:674(1)　強迫でfinishもついてるので、ここはジャンプさせた方が曲調に合ってると思います。前の部分で星形ジャンプかけてて、ここでスペーシング急に小さくするのはやや不自然に見えます。e.g.)　流れとは反対の方向にアンチジャンプを作っても強調はできるかなーと思ってこうしてます
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:33:674(3) 途中でボーカル始まってるので、それを拾ってやったほうが今よりも違和感なく聞こえます。 e.g.)　違和感あるかどうかはイマイチわからないんですがこのパートはボーカルが比較的少ないのでボーカル寄りに音取りすると違和感あるように感じたのもありバックグラウンドの音を重視しておいてます（00:27:674 (3,4) - とか顕著です）
SPOILER
00:47:338(3) ^

Modありがとう～

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

alacat 2014-02-10T22:17:30+00:00

@Fycho, BeatofIke

Thank you so much! ☆

Asphyxia

Asphyxia wrote:
Hi guys! Actually, this song is cool! Melophobia requested a mod so yeah, here I am :3 hi, Asphyxia :3 !

General thoughts
Let's get nazi, shall we! Your BG rezo is 1365 x 768 and not 1366 x 768, that's a simple resize if you want to do it! oops, changed it to this size.
Some inconsistencies in kiai-times: Melo fixed this point, thanks!
I see you have umi and -umi- in tags, I'd honestly remove one of them from there. If not, you should add probably ''Melo'' to your tags aswell, I myself
would search it with ''Melo'' more but I guess that's just me. It's ok, please search -Umi-'s name at web site then you can understand.
Disable widescreen support please! sure!
Clean!

Insane
00:04:317 - There's actually a beat that you could place a note. I feel like this place having not a note made it play pretty weird, I didn't like the break there. yes, that's right!
00:13:103 (1,2) - This played way better if you would CTRL + G 1 and then CTRL + G, kind of reverse them, try it out! I prefer to have the up and down motion.
00:16:960 (2) - Try to CTRL + J this slider and move it back to it's original place? Feels more natural this way! It's on purpose!
00:22:317 (2) - I'd honestly move this note a bit up, considering the movement wasn't perfect here. This would make it way better imho! (x:158 y:54 could work) ok!
01:16:103 (7) - Try CTRL + G here, plays more interesting and feels good to play, check it! hmm, it would be nice jump but it's not natural imo.
01:16:960 (2) - I'd move this note more closer to 01:16:531 (1) - 's end, I first thought it would be on the red tick instead in the blue tick.ok, reduce this distance ~
01:41:817 (7) - I would NC this note to be consistent with the other diffs? orz, i forgot to do this.
Can't really point out much stuff because this diff played well. GJ ~

Sorry for the crappy mod ;-; this mapset is nice (btw I love the BG) so yeah, GL guys with it! ~

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi! from Melo-san's request :3 ありがとう！

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
少し始まるのが早いのでLead-inを500~1000くらい入れてもいいかも？1秒あれば充分かなと思うので、今後指摘を受けたら検討してみます。
BGのサイズが1365x768になってますがこれはいいんですかね・・・？きちんと16:9である1366x768のものを使用することをオススメします。修正！
全diffのWidescreen supportのチェックを外しましょう。はーい！

[Insane]
00:02:603 (4) - 音取りの提案です。ボーカルをフォローしつつ裏のバスを拾えるこの音取りはどうでしょうか？最初のパート(3回)で全てこのパターンで統一してるのでこのままで！
00:06:995 (7,8,9) - 7,8を00:06:888 (6) - と同様にSampleset Drumにして（もしくは8をSampleset Noneでwhistle）、00:07:424 (9) - ここの終端と同じ音が00:07:103 (8) - この終端にあるので、同じようにAdd whistleはどうでしょう白いline上に定期的にこの音がなっているのでここにはその音がないです。
00:10:103 (5) - 曲にfitさせるならclapよりwhistleが合ってると思います。whistle忘れてました、clapがないと寂しいのでclapはつけたままにします。
00:16:531 (1,2) - ここは次にくる3連に繋ぎやすくするように丸い流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？この配置もｲｲと思いますが、今のパターンが気に入っているのでこのままで。
SPOILER
00:20:388 (4,5,6) - 6への流れがスムーズではなかったので配置の提案です。このように三角形を作ってみてはどうでしょうか？ 4は 00:21:245 (7) - の終端にスタックしてあり、5は 00:19:960 (3) - のブランケットを意識してます。この流れならばスムーズなAIM運びが可能であると思います。　 (5)を下にジャンプさせるように変更しました！
SPOILER
00:24:245 (7) - whistleが入るはずですがストリームの途中ということで故意的に抜いているのであればスルーしてください！その通りです！ clapと連続していて煩いのでいれてないです。
00:24:674 (10) - 次のnoteへ直線上になるように置いたほうが、個人的にはAIMした時に若干打ちやすいです。前の5連打からの流れを考えてこの角度にしています。
SPOILER
00:35:388 (1) - 1/4スライダーの後のせいか、若干スペーシングが狭く感じました。　それと合わせてスライダーの向きを反対側に曲げて次のスライダーを打ちやすくしてみるのはどうでしょう？前のスライダーを移動して調節しました。
SPOILER
01:29:388 - この手の音のする箇所にはfinishの入ったnoteが必ずあるので、Add noteしてfinishをいれて欲しい場所でした。　周りの配置を崩さずに置くなら x:404 y:128あたりがベストかなと思います。確かに強い音はありますが、その後の連続するclapでのおおきなジャンプを見せ付けたいのでスライダーの終点にしています。
01:34:745 (4) - 01:35:817 (3) - ここにスタックして、ストンと落ちるような配置が自分は好みです！　前の(2,3)からの流れで半時計回りの流れができているので内側にある(1)の始点にスタックしています！
Good luck!

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:
As requested from Melophobia.　　ありがとうですー！
[General]
前の二人が全部言ってくれたので特に無いです
[Insane]
Placement
00:11:174(13,14,1) - (13,14)が直線になっており(1)への流れが少し妙なので、内側へ曲げるような形にすると今よりもいい感じになります。　より丸を描くように配置しました。　e.g.)
SPOILER
00:16:531(1) 逆側に曲げたやった方が前のnoteから自然につながり、かつ次の(2)への流れも良いと思います。普段ならそうしているところですが、今回は遊んでみました
SPOILER
00:21:245(7) ここも同様の理由で、前後のnoteの家回しを考えると向きを逆にするといいです。　Guyさんのmodで少しここのパートを変更したので流れは大丈夫になったと思います。
SPOILER
00:49:317(2,3) ここCTRL+Gしてみては？今の配置だと四角形っぽく回す形にしては、(4)から(5)へのジャンプで少し打ち回しが変わって少し妙なので、それならば星形等間隔でジャンプさせた方が読みやすいように思いました。星の形に置くとそのようなジャンプが一般的ですが(1,2)間でジャンプさせるような音がないのでこのように配置しています。
01:08:603(4) ここでNC入れてみては？01:07:531でNC入れてるのを見ると、2コンボの後に11コンボ続くのも少し見た目が悪いので、ボーカルが始まるここで一旦区切ったほうがいいです。追加しました！
01:24:460(4) ここ×1.00になってますけど、次の(5,1)間や他のスペーシング見ると×1.10にするべきでは？あら・・修正しました！
01:29:574(5) ブランケットがやや強制気味で次のnoteへの流れが悪いように見えるので、直線スライダーで置き換えてみては？また(8,1)でジャンプを設けると、強迫をフォロー出来ると思います。。e.g.)　直線に変更しました～(8)は始点にスタックさせておきたいのでこのままで。
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:04:317 ここにnote追加してみては？バックにインストとボーカルが聞こえて、次の00:07:745でnote入ってるので対称的にした方がいいです。追加しました。

Good luck.

Mod ありがとうございます～

Special thanks : Melophobia !!!

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-02-11T01:40:35+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Normal]
Placement
00:17:388(5,6,1) Put these notes more symmterically, and the flow looks more nice. k fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:21:245(4) It looks a bit difficult because of not 1/1 rhythm, so I suppose it would be better if you like. not that hard imo
SPOILER
Hit Sound
01:16:531(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental. added

thx :3/

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KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-02-11T03:49:56+00:00

Asphyxia

Asphyxia wrote:
KSHR's Easy
00:04:531 (3) - Shouldn't this be NC'd according to 00:07:960 (1) - ? If not, remove the NC from 00:07:960 (1) -
Yea, this's my mistake. (alacat also pointed out this yesterday lol). Added a nc here anyway.
00:15:674 (2) - I'd move this slider a bit down to the movement doesn't feel too bad here, like erm, x:277, y:260?
It's kinda hard to fix in your way considering 00:18:245 (1,2) - . So I rearranged the shape of 00:14:817 (1) - and moved 00:15:674 (2,3) - upward a bit. The current pattern should be so close to yours!
00:25:531 (2) - Doesn't fit because of it's shape, I mean it does fit but not as well as it could. I think this slider should be more blanketed 00:24:031 (4) - with this sliders end. Well, if you don't understand what I mean, see this picture: Looks nice. Fixed!
01:14:388 (2) - Movement here was also a bit unnatural for me, you could move this slider somewhere around x:203 y:34 to help the flow a bit
hmm..your suggestion is not that bad. But I didn't fix because I think this way is against the flow from (1) which has a gentle curve. Also I have no idea to rearrange (1,3).. Orz
01:40:531 (1) - I'm not really a fan of 1 combo objects, I mean yeah, it could be for the emphaziz (idk how to write it properly... orz) but still, it feels too unnecessary so consider removing the NC there.
Not fixed. I added a nc to make consistence with 01:33:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - , So this 1 combo makes sense, right? Btw, I don't get your point well to be honest as you expected. But at least you tried to explain. I really think that's sooooo important ! Well I understand you have a good attitude to modding ;3 ~~( I sometimes don't know how to write the explanation either.. lol)~~
One problem I had with this was the tick sounds, they shouldn't be there at all, sometimes it screwed the rhythm imo... well, get more opinions on that I guess! Other than that, solid and nice difficulty!
I got some opinions about the ticksounds, and decide to keep for now~

Guy

Guy wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]
01:03:460 (2) - Sampleset drumよりもピアノに合わせてwhistle入れたほうが曲にあっていていいと思いました。
(1)と同じヒットサウンドをつけたかったので両方にSoft whistleを追加、あんど、それだと音が高すぎて違和感があったからその2箇所だけ音量を15%ほど下げてみました。
p.s. ここ本当にピアノある・・？

Nice diff!! てぃーわい！

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:
As requested from Melophobia.
[Easy]
Hit Sound
01:30:245(1) 始点にfinish追加
おっと、忘れてました。これを修正するときに気づいたけど、01:26:817 (1) - 終端の方も忘れてたので一緒に追加！

Thanks for your mods!

To alacat:
Slidertickの音の件、自分で何人かに意見もらって、とりあえず今のところはそのままにすることにしました。何度も指摘を受けたり、何か理に適った理由があったときはtickのwav削除を頼むと思います！

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-02-11T15:24:23+00:00

Hi alameow ~
As KSHR's request here. since i starting mod this while alacat didin't update yet. i'm sorry if you guys already fixed from mod above
my version still your "pure" (no mods) diff here lol

Guide

old = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Personal Taste

General

Clean

KSHR's Easy

00:02:603 (1) - omg Ultimate nazi, 1 grid down for better blanket with 00:01:103 (1) -
00:03:674 (2) - nazi again, move this node of slider's tail to 172,212 so it'll point the next object, same as you did at 00:02:603 (1) - slider's tail to (2)'s head. somehow looked neater and flow a little bit better
00:06:031 (1,2) - remove clap on (1)'s tail and add it to (2)'s head same as you did at 00:02:603 (1,2) - ? ii guess the music a little bit similar so consistency would be better here
00:07:960 (1) - remove NC here as you did at 00:04:531 (3) - for consistency ? oh God i becoming nazi finder like this lol
00:12:245 (3) - damn another nazi lol, if i were you i would to change the slider's flow become like http://puu.sh/6S11d.jpg . somehow it fits better with your previous sliders flow here (personal taste)
00:23:388 (3,4) - maybe much of starting slider on red tick could make the newbie get a trap here (i got it while playing with HD lol) imo rhythm could be easier here, http://puu.sh/6S1eo.jpg just use it and add finish on repeat cause music ~
00:26:817 (3) - since the music is drum here. i guess soft-hitnormal can't emphasize it with well. add whistle here instead to emphasize the vocal too. or sampleset drum if you want to use whistle to emphasize piano sound only here
00:29:388 (1) - hmm since i heard a little sound here (like a tick) i would to use clap here with volume 30% to emphasize it. even softhitnormal is fine here but i wanna emphasize it more ~
00:30:245 (2) - same as 00:26:817 (3) - (for head and tail)
00:37:531 (3) - same as 00:29:388 (1) -
00:40:531 - until 00:50:817 - i would suggest to add sampleset drum for each 1st whitetick (i mean downbeat) here since there is a drum sound which feels empty with soft hit normal here imo (except 00:45:674 - lol. oh btw hinsvar agreed with this too)
00:46:103 (1,2) - imo flow of (1) too upward with the previous slider imo. i guess flow could be smoother here. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1327051 instead?
00:55:103 (3) - hmm i would to ctrl+G this slider for better flow to 00:55:960 (1) - but it is a nazi ;-;
00:59:388 (1) - inconsistency spacing 1,27x here? fix it?
01:09:460 - unnecessary greenline :p
01:19:960 (1) - altho you're using clap on tick, i'm still feel empty to skip map 01:20:388 - , i would to use 1/1 repeat slider or http://puu.sh/6S37D.jpg for following vocal properly
01:26:817 (1) - add finish on tail too since there is a cymbal sound here. confirmed with hinsvar (again lol, for sure :p)
01:30:245 (1) - add finish on head. same reason. cymbal is appear here
01:39:674 (4) - imo altho the music still like cyrstal sound here. i heard a cymbal here. change whistle with finish?

Umi's Normal

00:05:817 (1,2) - hmm actually the vocal of red tick doesn't emphasize it with well if you use slider's tail here. i would to use http://puu.sh/6S3K6.jpg for following vocal properly instead
00:12:245 (3) - 1/2 whistle space is really noisy for me. since the pitch of piano appear in 00:12:031 - i would to remove whistle on head here
00:12:245 (3) - flow could be better here if you curving it a little bit down http://puu.sh/6S47P.jpg , confirmed with Hinsvar btw =3=
00:21:674 (1) - add whistle in head for emphasize the piano sound too here, you did it in previous 00:14:817 -
00:26:817 (4) - since i just hear a drum sound on slider's tail. i would to remove the whistle on tail. as i said before. 1/2 whistle space too noisy imo
00:42:031 (1) - nazi, blanket could be better. previous , should like this or neater than this
00:45:674 (1) - flip this slider for better flow, i really, since i feel uncomfortable with my mouse movement from here to next slider ;_;
00:59:388 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - omg too many of 1/2 space here. altho this is Normal diff. i would to remove some of 1/2 space since the Easy is quite Easy imo , if i were you i would to remove 01:01:531 (3) -
01:20:388 (2,3) - i would to ctrl+G this slider to keep flow from 01:19:531 (6) - . i mean keep a zig zag flow and pattern
01:21:245 (4) - yeah as i said before, vocal of 01:21:888 - doesn't emphasize with well if you use a slider's tail. i would to use http://puu.sh/6S4Kz.jpg instead
01:30:245 (1) - me and hinsvar have same suggestion about this

Melo's Hard

00:08:817 (2) - nazi, i prefer to make symmetrical pattern here with move this slider to 432,104 for neater pattern. (if you agree with this, fix the spacing after this slider lol)
00:19:103 (3) - nazi again, if it supposed for symmetrical pattern, should be move this to 348,40
00:21:674 (1) - a little bit nazi, try to move this slider to 200,76 to make a triangle pattern between 00:20:817 (3,4,5,6,1) - ? i guess it could make a neater pattern here
00:23:388 (1) - hmm personal taste, could you to avoid the overlap here? a little bit break the neat of pattern here.
00:27:460 (2,3) - hmm a little bit weird while you want to emphasize the vocal of red tick with circle here. i would to use slider's head instead but seems you using 1/1 slider on whitetick for emphasize piano sound. i would to suggest change them become http://puu.sh/6S5SG.jpg for emphasize both vocal and piano with clearly here
00:35:174 (6,1) - imo should be swap NC here, NC for slider to emphasize the piano/music change here (as you did at 00:42:031 (1) - )
00:35:174 (6) - also another nazi, it it supposed for symmetrical, i guess move it to 76,60 for better symmetrical
00:52:102 (2,3,4) - it because next of triplet is a slider with jump. i would to make 1/4 slider repeat instead here to make easier, a little bit hard for player who want to try Hard after completely able to play Normal diff imo (also the jump is little bit far imo, but since supposed as perfect triangle pattern, i think it's fine). About placement, maybe 1/4 slider like http://puu.sh/6S6mr.jpg
00:58:960 (3) - maybe ctrl+G this slider to make a jump for 00:59:388 (1) - ? to emphasize the cymbal i guess
01:05:603 (4) - imo jump of this slider doesn't fit since the music is becoming relax (no hard music). but i don't have any idea for solution so just saying here >_<
01:09:245 (6,7,8) - it because next of triplet is a slider with jump. i would to make 1/4 slider repeat instead here to make easier, a little bit hard for player who want to try Hard after completely able to play Normal diff imo
01:25:103 (1) - i guess no cymbal sound on slider's head time. remove it and use whistle instead. (the music is similar with 01:11:388 - imo)
01:31:960 (1) - flip this slider (ctrl+H) here, somehow flow seems better from this slider to 01:32:603 (2) - altho use a opposite of natural flow from (1) slider
01:41:817 - unnecessary greenline since it is same with previous greenline
01:45:674 - imo volume 100% here is too loud. use 80% instead for consistency with Easy and Insane?
Overall this diff is nice and fun to play :3

Insane

00:10:745 (9) - nazi, maybe NC this because the pattern is changed here? also the combo is kinda long ahuehue
00:13:103 (1) - maybe add whistle on tail to emphasize the music here? a little bit empty imo
00:16:531 (1) - flip this slider with ctrl+J? the flow seems better and more natural
00:40:103 (5) - to keep flow of curving here 00:39:245 (3,4) - between this. i would move this circle to 68,160 for keep it as natural flow
00:49:960 (5) - maybe NC this since the pattern shape is changing here. (previous is flower and changing to triangle) , i guess it player could to read it easier with NC
00:56:817 (3) - nazi, could you to avoid the overlap with 00:55:960 (1) - here? somehow it looked a little bit messy here. (if you want a nazi reason there is a inconsistency 1,24x for next object huahua)
01:15:031 (2) - imo the music isn't loud here. a huge jump like this feels uncomfortable. i would to reduce the jump around move this circle to 96,72
01:16:103 (7) - personal taste, i would to ctrl+G this slider. somehow it more challenging for play and flow more natural here
01:22:960 (7) - since i'm still able to see 01:22:531 (5) - 's fade while (7) appearing. i would to NC the (7) for easier to read
01:36:031 (4,5,6) - how nazi, stack them on 01:34:960 (1) - 's head for neater pattern onegai lol
Nothing much to say, you're really pro xD

Nice map

Good Luck >3<

Last edited by Xinely 2014-02-12T08:09:54+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-02-11T18:19:08+00:00

KSHR's Easy

00:02:603 (1) - omg Ultimate nazi, 1 grid down for better blanket with 00:01:103 (1) -
ok~
00:03:674 (2) - nazi again, move this node of slider's tail to 172,212 so it'll point the next object, same as you did at 00:02:603 (1) - slider's tail to (2)'s head. somehow looked neater and flow a little bit better
^
00:06:031 (1,2) - remove clap on (1)'s tail and add it to (2)'s head same as you did at 00:02:603 (1,2) - ? i guess the music a little bit similar so consistency would be better here
As you wrote, there is little difference between them. I'd follow it with hitsounds!
00:07:960 (1) - remove NC here as you did at 00:04:531 (3) - for consistency ? oh God i becoming nazi finder like this lol
Added a nc to 00:04:531 (1) - instead for consistency~
00:12:245 (3) - damn another nazi lol, if i were you i would to change the slider's flow become like http://puu.sh/6S11d.jpg. somehow it fits better with your previous sliders flow here (personal taste)
Yea, nazi party! Well I agree with rearranging this shape a bit. Fixed in my own way.
00:23:388 (3,4) - maybe much of starting slider on red tick could make the newbie get a trap here (i got it while playing with HD lol) imo rhythm could be easier here, http://puu.sh/6S1eo.jpg just use it and add finish on repeat cause music ~
Let me keep this for some reasons.
1, Even if beginners misread this 3/4 gap, 00:24:031 - is followed by the beginning of the slider. So most of them won't make a 100 or a combo-break here. (Why did you played this with HD! ww)
2, There are similar strong sounds at 00:23:388 - and 00:24:031 - . So I wanna let players to beat them~
00:26:817 (3) - since the music is drum here. i guess soft-hitnormal can't emphasize it with well. add whistle here instead to emphasize the vocal too? or sampleset drum if you want to use whistle to emphasize piano sound only here
Drum-Sampleset sounds nice :3
00:29:388 (1) - hmm since i heard a little sound here (like a tick) i would to use clap here with volume 30% to emphasize it. even softhitnormal is fine here but i wanna emphasize it more ~
Probably I got what sound you wanna emphasize. But a clap? Maybe did you mean a whistle?
00:30:245 (2) - same as 00:26:817 (3) - (for head and tail)
Fixed this as well
00:37:531 (3) - same as 00:29:388 (1) -
^
00:40:531 - until 00:50:817 - i would suggest to add sampleset drum for each 1st whitetick (i mean downbeat) here since there is a drum sound which feels empty with soft hit normal here imo (except 00:45:674 - lol. oh btw hinsvar agreed with this too)
okke~
00:46:103 (1,2) - imo flow of (1) too upward with the previous slider imo. i guess flow could be smoother here. try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1327051 instead?
You received a private message from 'Hinsvar'. Click to read it! I mean fixed in my own way.
00:55:103 (3) - hmm i would to ctrl+G this slider for better flow to 00:55:960 (1) - but it is a nazi ;-;
I prefer the current flow which changes at 00:55:103 (3,1,2) -
00:59:388 (1) - inconsistency spacing 1,27x here? fix it?
oops.. moved this slider leftward by 1 grid.
01:09:460 - unnecessary greenline :p
okkei!
01:19:960 (1) - altho you're using clap on tick, i'm still feel empty to skip map 01:20:388 - , i would to use 1/1 repeat slider or http://puu.sh/6S37D.jpg for following vocal properly
hmm.... your point makes sense. But let me keep for now. I have no idea to fix this.. (I mean placement) Orz
01:26:817 (1) - add finish on tail too since there is a cymbal sound here. confirmed with hinsvar (again lol, for sure :p)
F
01:30:245 (1) - add finish on head. same reason. cymbal is appear here
I
01:39:674 (4) - imo altho the music still like cyrstal sound here. i heard a cymbal here. change whistle with finish?
X

thanks for your mod!

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Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-02-11T19:15:25+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Melo's Hard
00:08:817 (2) - nazi, i prefer to make symmetrical pattern here with move this slider to 432,104 for neater pattern. (if you agree with this, fix the spacing after this slider lol) I made this unsymmetrical intentionally. I like how it looks that way.
00:19:103 (3) - nazi again, if it supposed for symmetrical pattern, should be move this to 348,40 ^
00:21:674 (1) - a little bit nazi, try to move this slider to 200,76 to make a triangle pattern between 00:20:817 (3,4,5,6,1) - ? i guess it could make a neater pattern here I've changed the whole pattern over the previous mod so yeah.
00:23:388 (1) - hmm personal taste, could you to avoid the overlap here? a little bit break the neat of pattern here. I like the way it touches the next slider.
00:27:460 (2,3) - hmm a little bit weird while you want to emphasize the vocal of red tick with circle here. i would to use slider's head instead but seems you using 1/1 slider on whitetick for emphasize piano sound. i would to suggest change them become http://puu.sh/6S5SG.jpg for emphasize both vocal and piano with clearly here Since there's less vocal in this section I focused on instruments rather than vocals.
00:35:174 (6,1) - imo should be swap NC here, NC for slider to emphasize the piano/music change here (as you did at 00:42:031 (1) - ) That way it looks better considering it's a part of the previous pattern.
00:35:174 (6) - also another nazi, it it supposed for symmetrical, i guess move it to 76,60 for better symmetrical Same reply.
00:52:102 (2,3,4) - it because next of triplet is a slider with jump. i would to make 1/4 slider repeat instead here to make easier, a little bit hard for player who want to try Hard after completely able to play Normal diff imo (also the jump is little bit far imo, but since supposed as perfect triangle pattern, i think it's fine). About placement, maybe 1/4 slider like http://puu.sh/6S6mr.jpg I don't know if goes too far or not but if I use a kick-slider here it ruins the appearance of the pattern.
00:58:960 (3) - maybe ctrl+G this slider to make a jump for 00:59:388 (1) - ? to emphasize the cymbal i guess I don't like it honestly, the current one flows a lot better and I don't use jumps for emphasis in this difficulty.
01:05:603 (4) - imo jump of this slider doesn't fit since the music is becoming relax (no hard music). but i don't have any idea for solution so just saying here >_< The bass-drum sounds deserve to be emphasized imo and the spacing usage fits with the previous slider's shape.
01:09:245 (6,7,8) - it because next of triplet is a slider with jump. i would to make 1/4 slider repeat instead here to make easier, a little bit hard for player who want to try Hard after completely able to play Normal diff imo I can't think of a good pattern which flows nicely if I go with a kick slider. The jump is intended to be that hard because it's the beginning of the kiai sections.
01:25:103 (1) - i guess no cymbal sound on slider's head time. remove it and use whistle instead. (the music is similar with 01:11:388 - imo) It's louder than the section you mentioned and it feels empty without the finish to me.
01:31:960 (1) - flip this slider (ctrl+H) here, somehow flow seems better from this slider to 01:32:603 (2) - altho use a opposite of natural flow from (1) slider It's part of my mapping style and I like the way it flows and looks.
01:41:817 - unnecessary greenline since it is same with previous greenline But no need to remove them..
01:45:674 - imo volume 100% here is too loud. use 80% instead for consistency with Easy and Insane? I want it to be so loud because it's the very last of the difficulty.. I don't think it makes sense to worry about consistency with other difficulties since it' a guest difficulty.
Overall this diff is nice and fun to play :3

I wasn't trying to be so mean but nothing changed so far. If you could understand what is my intention (i.e mapping style) it'd help you improve your ability. I'm sorry if it sounds rude. Thanks for modding though!

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-02-11T19:15:31+00:00

Game won't be needed in the tags since it's gonna be in the genre (video game)

Cool song and game btw.

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-02-12T09:34:32+00:00

Xinely wrote:
i read your reply that written no idea for placement ~~~~
actually trying to chat in game but you're afk so i will give my suggestion about placement here

SS about placement : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328494
Code if you want to use it in below (btw i didn't change anything for hitsound, i'm afraid, i guess you can fix it by yourself lol)
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(3) will touch the HP bar if I fix this in your way. So I kinda forced to fix this pattern referring to yours lol But the current one shouldn't be that bad~
Also, sorry for inconvenience about your post, and thanks for replying Xinely

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Momochikun

1,954 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-02-12T12:11:46+00:00

Hi /o/
Mod as Melo's request :3 ~
I started this a few days ago, sorry if some of them is doubled ><

[General]

Disable widecreen support in all diffs since this map have a video.
Add more audio lead-in maybe ? 1000 - 1500 would be nice. current seems a bit too fast especially on Insane that didn't give enough preparation imo.

[Insane]

00:06:888 (6) - Add drum clap to this one maybe ? the drum that played here is pretty different with previous o.o
00:05:603 - Maybe you can add note here ? if you listen more carefully this section has a slightly vocal hit which different on a similiar part like 00:09:031 -
00:28:103 (8,1) - Hm.. maybe because the high instrument was at 00:28:317 - which being emphasized with the end of kick slider, it sounds a bit weird for me. I think pattern like 00:23:174 (1,2) - would match this section more smooth. You also can arrange them like this
00:54:888 (5) - I think you can move this a bit upside here to create a smooth contact with 00:55:531 (6) -
SPOILER
00:56:817 (3) - Maybe replace the whistle of this one to 00:56:603 (2) - instead to cover the piano sound on the music ? it sounds much better imo

[Melo]

Personally i didn't really like finish with whistle, it sounds a bit odd for me. If the whistle get removed the sound would be more smooth to follow on gameplay imo. Ex : 00:11:388 (1,1) - and many more. Just mentioning though since it's about taste :3

00:06:888 (4) - Since the drum that played here is rather a bit echo'd more than the others. I think adding drum clap additions will fit nicely with them here.
00:17:495 (4) - ^
00:20:817 (3,4) - Can you move them a bit down to avoid partial overlapping with 00:19:745 (1) - ? It looks a bit messy for me.
00:28:960 (1) - The transition here is quite weird to follow if you ask me, so have my andom 120* degree pattern suggestion, it flow more smooth imo !
SPOILER
00:31:317 (3) - Considering that there're instrument at 00:31:638 - which you have used for making triplet here 00:33:567 (2) - . I'd delete the reverse point then add a note on slider's end here to match the consistency with your next pattern /o/
00:43:531 (5) - I think using a red node slider wasn't a really good choice when the previous pattern and after is a smooth normal curving slider, it would be more fit if you use like this around 00:40:531 (3,4) - imo, How about something like this ?
SPOILER
00:53:174 (2) - I would likely to turn this into a single note instead since there're no instrument that landed on the slider's end that bother the feeling a bit during gameplay. I know it will bother you pattern, if you didnt' want.. maybe you can try something similiar with reducing the volume of the slider's end or completely silent it ? xD
00:54:888 (3,1) - I don't know if this intentional and sorry for being nazi, but this imperfect stack is actually pretty noticeable during gameplay. It would be neater if you can fix that if not did on purpose o3o
01:27:674 (5) - I think this section really need a finish due to the slightly cymbal crash on the BGM. It would fit nicely if you can add it and reduced the volume a bit to match the louder ones at 01:28:103 -
Actually i want to refrain for mentioning like changing 00:16:317 (1) - / 01:12:031 (3) - / 01:25:745 (2) - to 1/2 slider and note to following the instrument or vocal more smoothly. But since i saw you mostly denied all of those suggestions, i'll just want to say that i'm agree with other modders to be honest ><

[Umi]

00:05:817 (1,2) - Feels technically a bit weird due to the NC thing and the skipped drum instrument at 00:06:460 - that may cause a bit confusion to player. Personally i think skipping the downbeat and sticking with the instrument like 00:08:817 (3,1) - would be a lot better to match this section. Try !
00:19:103 (3,4) - I wonder if this pattern was did on purpose, shouldn't it be flipped 120* degree like this for neater pattern ?
00:23:388 (4,5) - Hm.. i think it's not a great idea on Normal to stick out with the triplet pattern with 1/2 slider when the high cymbal noticeable one at 00:24:031 - is being skipped. I'd recommend you to delete (5) and start a 1/1 from 00:24:031 - . It would play much better imo

00:26:817 (4) - Just my personal opinion, but i don't really like how this slider skipping the bell instrument at 00:27:674 - .. Something like 00:30:245 (4,5,6) - would be the best choice imo ><
00:36:031 - Maybe add note here to follow the vocal emphasize like 00:35:174 - ?
00:37:960 (4) - Add Normal sampleset on slider's end to cover the triplet maybe ? clap is not pretty noticeable to be honest lol, adding this would be more smooth to follow
00:58:745 (5,1) - Just a little aesthetical feeling here, maybe you could move it like this for smoother transition between them ?
01:18:888 - I feel that there're should be a finish here due to the slightly cymbal crash on the BGM, try reduce the volume a bit then add it ~
01:28:103 (3) - You'd better remove the clap on head. It doesn't sounds good together with finish.

[KSHR]

00:07:103 (2) - Maybe you can try adding whistle on the slider start ? it will fit smoothly with the drum hit on the BGM.
00:17:817 (3) - Missed whistle on this note ? you used whistle on similiar part that have piano sound like 00:14:388 (4,3) -
00:32:388 (2) - This slider looks a bit distorted imo, i feel that the curved point is way too deep, how about smoother curve like below ? the blanket with sliderbody would be look really nice !
SPOILER
00:54:245 (2,3) - Considering the pitch is not really 2/1 and the instrument that covering 00:55:103 - is not really noticeable. How about 3/2 reverse instead ? it will flow more smoothly as it there're high vocal at 00:54:888 -
01:37:103 (1,2,3) - Pattern suggestion if you don't mind it ;w;
SPOILER

Sorry if that's sounds not helpful or bothering to you, the map has already fine as it looks.
Good Luck /o/ ~

Melophobia

osu! Alumni

2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-02-12T13:40:04+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
[Melo]
Personally i didn't really like finish with whistle, it sounds a bit odd for me. If the whistle get removed the sound would be more smooth to follow on gameplay imo. Ex : 00:11:388 (1,1) - and many more. Just mentioning though since it's about taste :3 Alrighty. Indeed that way it sounds better!
00:06:888 (4) - Since the drum that played here is rather a bit echo'd more than the others. I think adding drum clap additions will fit nicely with them here. Yes!
00:17:495 (4) - ^ ^
00:20:817 (3,4) - Can you move them a bit down to avoid partial overlapping with 00:19:745 (1) - ? It looks a bit messy for me. Agreed.
00:28:960 (1) - The transition here is quite weird to follow if you ask me, so have my andom 120* degree pattern suggestion, it flow more smooth imo ! It probably flows better but I think the current one looks better. So I'd like to keep it as is.
SPOILER
00:31:317 (3) - Considering that there're instrument at 00:31:638 - which you have used for making triplet here 00:33:567 (2) - . I'd delete the reverse point then add a note on slider's end here to match the consistency with your next pattern /o/ I would like to make the minimal use of triplet in this part so I used them for points where there's no vocal.
00:43:531 (5) - I think using a red node slider wasn't a really good choice when the previous pattern and after is a smooth normal curving slider, it would be more fit if you use like this around 00:40:531 (3,4) - imo, How about something like this ? I used something simillar to your suggested pattern so I made something different here. But I agree with you that a red node slider isn't good here. So I removed the red node and made it normal one. Good point btw!
SPOILER
00:53:174 (2) - I would likely to turn this into a single note instead since there're no instrument that landed on the slider's end that bother the feeling a bit during gameplay. I know it will bother you pattern, if you didnt' want.. maybe you can try something similiar with reducing the volume of the slider's end or completely silent it ? xD Wow I silenced the slider end and it turned out very well.
00:54:888 (3,1) - I don't know if this intentional and sorry for being nazi, but this imperfect stack is actually pretty noticeable during gameplay. It would be neater if you can fix that if not did on purpose o3o Well I didn't intend to make it like that.. Fixed accordingly.
01:27:674 (5) - I think this section really need a finish due to the slightly cymbal crash on the BGM. It would fit nicely if you can add it and reduced the volume a bit to match the louder ones at 01:28:103 - Nice suggestion. It sounds really good to me.
Actually i want to refrain for mentioning like changing 00:16:317 (1) - / 01:12:031 (3) - / 01:25:745 (2) - to 1/2 slider and note to following the instrument or vocal more smoothly. But since i saw you mostly denied all of those suggestions, i'll just want to say that i'm agree with other modders to be honest >< Hmm it's actually part of my mapping style I would like to see more opinions on the matter. Honestly I don't see any problem with it.
Also we made further discussion on drum-additions over IRC and changed a lot of hitsounds. Now it's surely much better.

Cool mod. Thank you so much.

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-02-17T16:44:11+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Umi's Normal
00:05:817 (1,2) - hmm actually the vocal of red tick doesn't emphasize it with well if you use slider's tail here. i would to use http://puu.sh/6S3K6.jpg for following vocal properly instead More or less fixed with momochii's mod :3
00:12:245 (3) - 1/2 whistle space is really noisy for me. since the pitch of piano appear in 00:12:031 - i would to remove whistle on head here it's okay for me
00:12:245 (3) - flow could be better here if you curving it a little bit down http://puu.sh/6S47P.jpg , confirmed with Hinsvar btw =3= i prefer the current one >.<
00:21:674 (1) - add whistle in head for emphasize the piano sound too here, you did it in previous 00:14:817 - aded
00:26:817 (4) - since i just hear a drum sound on slider's tail. i would to remove the whistle on tail. as i said before. 1/2 whistle space too noisy imo same as before :/
00:42:031 (1) - nazi, blanket could be better. previous , should like this or neater than this okay fixed
00:45:674 (1) - flip this slider for better flow, i really, since i feel uncomfortable with my mouse movement from here to next slider ;_; good for me
00:59:388 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - omg too many of 1/2 space here. altho this is Normal diff. i would to remove some of 1/2 space since the Easy is quite Easy imo , if i were you i would to remove 01:01:531 (3) - Not that hard though
01:20:388 (2,3) - i would to ctrl+G this slider to keep flow from 01:19:531 (6) - . i mean keep a zig zag flow and pattern good idea but i like mine
01:21:245 (4) - yeah as i said before, vocal of 01:21:888 - doesn't emphasize with well if you use a slider's tail. i would to use http://puu.sh/6S4Kz.jpg instead fixed
01:30:245 (1) - me and hinsvar have same suggestion about this and fixed

Momochikun wrote:
[Umi]
00:05:817 (1,2) - Feels technically a bit weird due to the NC thing and the skipped drum instrument at 00:06:460 - that may cause a bit confusion to player. Personally i think skipping the downbeat and sticking with the instrument like 00:08:817 (3,1) - would be a lot better to match this section. Try ! nice fixed
00:19:103 (3,4) - I wonder if this pattern was did on purpose, shouldn't it be flipped 120* degree like this for neater pattern ? yeah better
00:23:388 (4,5) - Hm.. i think it's not a great idea on Normal to stick out with the triplet pattern with 1/2 slider when the high cymbal noticeable one at 00:24:031 - is being skipped. I'd recommend you to delete (5) and start a 1/1 from 00:24:031 - . It would play much better imo
it feel strange for me
00:26:817 (4) - Just my personal opinion, but i don't really like how this slider skipping the bell instrument at 00:27:674 - .. Something like 00:30:245 (4,5,6) - would be the best choice imo >< not for me >.<
00:36:031 - Maybe add note here to follow the vocal emphasize like 00:35:174 - ? humm nah x)
00:37:960 (4) - Add Normal sampleset on slider's end to cover the triplet maybe ? clap is not pretty noticeable to be honest lol, adding this would be more smooth to follow okay !
00:58:745 (5,1) - Just a little aesthetical feeling here, maybe you could move it like this for smoother transition between them ? prefer my pattern
01:18:888 - I feel that there're should be a finish here due to the slightly cymbal crash on the BGM, try reduce the volume a bit then add it ~ whistle better imo we can't notice the finish when we're playing
01:28:103 (3) - You'd better remove the clap on head. It doesn't sounds good together with finish. ok

thx for mod :3

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256,288,15460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,315,15674,2,0,P|145:331|88:315,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,195,16531,2,0,P|145:178|202:195,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,237,17388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,138,17817,1,10,0:0:0:0:
293,57,18245,5,4,0:0:0:0:
220,152,18674,2,0,L|143:160,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,162,19103,2,0,P|119:217|100:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,328,19960,2,0,P|251:290|310:289,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,221,20817,2,0,L|378:81,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,22,21674,6,0,L|252:153,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,193,22317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,193,22531,2,0,P|177:185|118:192,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,312,23388,2,0,P|177:319|236:312,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,275,24245,2,0,L|360:201,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,160,24674,2,0,L|364:80,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,47,25103,6,0,P|304:54|245:45,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,67,25960,2,0,P|141:128|126:197,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,247,26603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,247,26817,2,0,P|188:233|317:253,2,180,8|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,266,28317,6,0,L|114:86,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,31,29388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,107,29817,2,0,L|379:61,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,43,30245,2,0,P|430:98|420:156,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,190,30888,2,0,P|359:248|381:303,1,120
411,355,31531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,345,31960,6,0,L|168:326,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,317,32603,2,0,P|159:209|228:230,1,180
315,248,33674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
357,135,34103,2,0,L|291:100,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,78,34531,2,0,P|223:127|153:153,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,154,35174,6,0,P|137:236|106:318,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,341,36245,2,0,P|281:328|339:342,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,222,37103,2,0,P|282:236|224:222,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,141,37960,2,0,L|188:77,1,60,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,101,38388,2,0,L|294:58,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,82,38817,6,0,L|456:58,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,176,39674,2,0,L|321:200,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,220,40317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,40531,2,0,P|169:152|209:41,2,180,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,253,42031,6,0,P|326:222|408:253,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,342,43103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,255,43531,2,0,L|192:204,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,207,43960,2,0,L|206:102,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,49,44603,2,0,L|327:29,1,120
358,26,45245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
461,87,45674,6,0,P|425:162|437:216,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,255,46317,2,0,P|366:260|286:345,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,324,47388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,217,47817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,111,48245,6,0,B|211:98|257:109|257:109|313:125|349:106,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,231,49960,2,0,P|231:243|296:223,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,175,50817,2,0,L|412:241,2,60,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,118,51460,2,0,P|337:79|242:72,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,62,52103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,149,52531,6,0,P|114:231|27:275,2,180,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,62,54245,2,0,L|324:144,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,169,54888,2,0,P|282:219|275:306,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,364,55960,6,0,P|451:314|458:227,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,105,57245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,165,57674,2,0,P|144:172|83:159,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,149,58317,1,4,0:0:0:0:
29,267,58745,2,0,L|93:328,1,60,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,321,59388,6,0,P|289:301|375:330,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,353,60888,2,0,L|140:216,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,172,61531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,172,61745,2,0,P|194:187|251:171,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
277,116,62388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,59,62603,6,0,P|355:42|412:58,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,169,63460,1,2,0:0:0:0:
390,269,63888,2,0,L|310:299,1,60,4|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,313,64317,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,224,64745,2,0,L|225:147,1,60,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,50,65388,2,0,L|158:63,2,60,8|8|4,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
303,41,66031,5,4,0:0:0:0:
388,125,66460,1,4,0:0:0:0:
322,225,66888,2,0,P|259:257|151:216,2,180,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,190,68388,2,0,P|434:202|492:278,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,311,69245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,249,69674,6,0,P|260:167|293:119,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,85,70317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,85,70531,2,0,L|151:67,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,168,71388,2,0,L|269:186,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,215,72245,2,0,L|402:184,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,124,72674,2,0,L|357:93,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,69,73103,6,0,P|242:58|183:69,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,147,73960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
145,253,74388,2,0,L|241:181,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,309,75674,2,0,L|365:268,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,248,76317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,192,76531,6,0,P|409:138|418:67,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,23,77174,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,66,77603,2,0,L|226:56,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,52,78031,2,0,P|126:106|185:159,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,188,78888,2,0,P|265:231|230:295,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,317,79531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,273,79960,5,4,0:0:0:0:
176,214,80388,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,153,80817,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,94,81245,2,0,P|236:77|303:106,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,131,81888,6,0,L|396:131,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,251,82531,2,0,L|329:252,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,293,82960,2,0,L|225:294,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,314,83388,6,0,P|120:294|80:250,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,192,84031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,133,84245,2,0,P|120:89|175:69,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,151,85103,2,0,P|318:130|358:86,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,52,85960,2,0,L|457:140,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,169,86388,2,0,L|436:219,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,257,86817,6,0,P|312:288|229:257,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,221,87674,1,4,0:0:0:0:
79,155,88103,2,0,P|180:100|282:153,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,268,89388,1,4,0:0:0:0:
349,328,89817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,231,90245,6,0,P|431:157|410:113,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,43,91103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,102,91531,2,0,L|107:34,2,120,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,177,92817,2,0,L|295:257,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,294,93245,2,0,L|207:282,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,275,93674,6,0,L|195:133,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,51,94531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,72,94960,2,0,B|401:123|371:187|371:187|341:252|377:300,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,243,96245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
475,123,96674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,73,97103,6,0,P|286:67|231:75,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,118,97960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
91,230,98388,2,0,P|134:316|178:230,1,240,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,131,99674,2,0,P|287:185|298:246,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,286,100531,6,0,L|425:229,2,60,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,342,101174,2,0,P|328:330|270:343,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,354,101817,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102031,12,4,105674,0:1:0:0:

alacat

osu! Alumni

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Topic Starter

alacat 2014-02-18T06:54:19+00:00

update

removed widecreen support ~

Oyatsu

1,908 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2014-02-19T14:18:08+00:00

HI alanyan-san ^^
Here is my M4M of Melo

Really Nice song/map!

Insane

00:09:888 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yea! These notes, they are belong to drum sound in instrumental but 00:10:745 (9) - You can hear it is piano instead, so they can't be the same NC. I sugguest to NC at (9).
00:13:103 (1) - Add whistle maybe, I can hear it at head
I prefer 00:13:103 (1) - is at 424/96, it will be a nice trigle nicer instead of your mouse move straight
I don't know your NC style but if I'm you, I will put NC at 00:38:174 (6) , this is time to change from calm to drum (strong)
00:38:817 (1,2,3) - This rhythm should repeat, my mean is Ctrl+G them, and it follows rhythm better, right?
Example
00:45:674 (1) - Add clap S:C1 will follow instrumental
01:00:674 (5) - Miss clap. As: 00:58:960 -
01:09:674 (1) - Tail is abit down, 1 grid up plz
01:12:138 (5) - Sorry but seems this note is a "ghost", It didn't follow anything. I don't know your purpost but maybe remove it and to creat nice jump is better. (If you accept to fix, 01:12:031 (4) - should be at 168/168, that is my way)
01:18:888 (3) - It is quite down, I prefer to stack, How about moving to 152/120
01:25:745 (5,6,7) - same problem as 01:12:138 (5)
01:32:174 (2) - I think it should be blanket distance, previous is 1,86x but after is 1,96x. How about moving tail is at 144/76
01:41:174 (1) - NC maybe

Melo's Hard

00:02:603 - volumn 40% plz, it is so loud. Why can you think 00:01:103 (1,1) - are the same volumn? o-o
00:13:103 (1) - Add whistle at head, I can hear it
00:19:745 (1) - ^
00:23:174 (6,7,1) - You need to hear more carefully plz, (7) seems be ghot note, it didn't follow anything, insstead of you ignored some rhythm at the end of 00:23:388 (1) - , I can hear 2 single notes at 00:23:710 - 00:23:817 - . I sugguest for rhythm:
Example
00:35:174 (6,1) - Repeat NC
00:45:674 (1) - Add clap S:C1 at head
01:12:888 (1,2,3) - (2) didn't appear with its purpose, plz remove it. I only hear "ma ga"
01:21:888 (1) - abit stack, maybe it is at 336/48 better
01:25:103 (1) - At heard, whistle instead of finish plz. Let see previous note: 01:13:103 (3) -
01:20:817 (3) - Slider is quite round, so it is abit ugly. I sugguest to mive tail to 292/152
01:28:103 (6,1) - NC should be at (6), not at (1)
01:33:460 (6,1) - This distance seems be quite near, It can make player difficultly to read. I don't know the way to fix. It depends on you

Umi's Normal

00:09:460 (1) - Tail of this slider is abit down for newbie to play, I sugguest to make like this:
Example

-- Middle point: 364/272
-- Tail point: 416/244
If you fixed, let fiix both distance
00:11:817 (2,3) - This flow is abit bad. How about tail point of (2) is at 136/236. Move 00:12:245 (3) - to 100/216
Example
00:35:174 (1) - Move to 112/176 for better flow, and 00:36:245 (2) - 232/340, 00:37:103 (3) - 344/220 to fix distance
00:43:531 (3,4) - same problem as 00:11:817 (2,3)
00:45:674 (1) - Add clap S:C1
01:40:531 (1) - if you followed 1/2, I think 01:41:174 (2) - this is 1/2 too, I sugguest for this rhythm
Example

KSHR's Easy

01:07:531 (3) - strong beat, I think NC
00:30:245 (2) - Why is drum at head?

Go! Go!! alanyan-san

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2014-02-22T01:42:25+00:00

ha gu mi!(๑ơ ₃ ơ)

[KSHR]
00:19:103 (2,3) - 00:20:817 - ここに強い音があるんだけど、スライダーの終点に強い音を置くよりも、こんな風な音取りにしてスライダーの始点に強い音をおきたいと思った。でも完全に好み。

img

01:08:174 (3) - finishが少しうるさいかな？っておもったから、Clapにしてみたり。
01:21:245 (3) - Drumじゃなくてfinishじゃだめ？ダメか・・・

[Umi]
I think this flows better than currently the flows. just imo

img

00:11:817 (2) - Let's bend the Slider.

img

00:24:031 - add note? I could hear a strong sound of the piano.
00:38:388 (5) - Sampleset Normal? same sound here 00:38:174(4) -
00:43:531 (3) - fix this stack. Please move to x:245 y:253.
00:48:245 (1) - Let's make this shape for the slider.

img

00:54:245 (2) - add Whistle to end
01:06:888 (3) - remove clap and add finish instead of clap to end.
01:34:960 (3) - remove clap to end?

[Melo]
01:13:745 (4,5) - ボーカルの伸びてるところをとりたいなと思ったから、こんな風な音取りをしてみたり・・・

img

[alacat]
00:28:103 (8) - 往復スライダーの最初と最後でピアノの音の強さが違ったので、できれば往復スライダーでまとめずに、分けて音をとりたいと思いました。

img

00:34:960 (8,9) - 完全に好みだけど、test playしたときにちょっとこの二連打がひっかかったので、こんな音取りにしてみたり... ~~(画像の背景の女の子がかわいい)~~

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01:34:103 (2) - もう少し右に置いたほうがAIMがしやすいかも!

That's all~!
Good luck!!

あまり力になれなくて申し訳ない・・・。
がんばって!(応援)

Kodora

Kodora 2014-02-22T14:02:11+00:00

from ero queue

[Insane]

00:10:745 (9) - Consider add NC here follow new part of music, or else it will be too long
00:43:745 (1,2,3) - Nice pattern but stacking here looks off due to note offset. I fixed that, here's code:
```
272,72,43745,5,0,0:0:0:0:
276,76,43853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,43960,2,0,P|232:72|188:84,1,90
```
01:00:460 (4,1) - Swap NCs follow lyrics, this also will make your stack easier to read
01:02:174 (3,1) - Same here
01:03:888 (3,1) - ^

Great job as usual!

[Mero's Hard]

/me runs

00:10:745 (5,6,7) - If you want to follow piano here imo would be better to use just one 1/4 repeat slider - it will be more hard-player-friendy and also made this part easier to catch
00:22:745 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - add drum claps here as you did before at 00:17:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - for consistensy
00:29:817 (3) - this linear slider feels a bit random here and doesn't flows well, how about make it regular curved instead?

SPOILER
00:51:031 (2,3) - swap them on timeline, it will made this triangle pattern much easier to catch & will improve playability
01:10:531 (3,1,2) - I prefer to see this part more smooth - linear slider here doesn't flows well, try this - flow better, and is related to how you mapped before:

SPOILER
01:15:460 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Might be a bit too hard for regular Hard diff - this jump comes kinda suddenly & feels unexpected. Dropping spacing here to x1.7 will make it more comfortable to play imo.
01:25:103 (1) - Also i prefer to see this one as linear - imo, flows better:

SPOILER
01:41:174 (1,2,3) - Ah, this last triange is really can be too much for a Hard diff, especially in the near end - maybe try to decrease spacing here and make something like this - will plays exactly same, just less cruel to catch:

SPOILER

Awesome!

[Umi's Normal]

*Since Hard diff have AR7 & Easy have AR3 i suggest you use AR4 here for better difficulty spread - it also works very well with your patterns here
*Use ticksounds to make your clap-patterns consistent

00:09:460 (1,3) - I would not recommend to use patterns like this on easiest diffs - such stuff looks too tricky for beginners. If you want to have little "trap" here, try to little unstack it, something like this - you will still have your "trap", but it will be more beginner-friendly.

SPOILER
00:47:388 (3) - add whistle?
00:49:960 (2) - if you will apply previous one add here too to head of slider
01:31:531 (3) - Looks bad, maybe try something like this?

SPOILER
01:42:031 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:41:925 - , same as in other diffs - spinner & note follows exactly same note so there is no reason to keep 1/2 pause here.

[KSHR's Easy]

*Your CS choise feels too big & doesn't fit choosen SV, i'd recommend use CS3 here.

00:28:531 - Remove custom ticksound from here
00:35:388 - ^
00:33:674 (3) - add drum-sampleset to head for consistensy
00:47:388 (3) - whistle instead of hitdrum sounds better for me
00:55:103 (3) - Sounds a bit weird here - following drums here works kinda tricky, make this slider starts at 00:54:888 - and end it at 00:55:531 - imo it will sounds better if it will be placed follow lyrics
01:42:031 (1) - Same as Normal

Very nice map, star & good luck :3

Umi

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Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-02-22T14:50:28+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Umi's Normal
00:09:460 (1) - Tail of this slider is abit down for newbie to play, I sugguest to make like this: it change nothing for me '-'
Example

-- Middle point: 364/272
-- Tail point: 416/244
If you fixed, let fiix both distance
00:11:817 (2,3) - This flow is abit bad. How about tail point of (2) is at 136/236. Move 00:12:245 (3) - to 100/216 fixed with CakiP's mod
Example
00:35:174 (1) - Move to 112/176 for better flow, and 00:36:245 (2) - 232/340, 00:37:103 (3) - 344/220 to fix distance i prefer the curren flow
00:43:531 (3,4) - same problem as 00:11:817 (2,3) ^
00:45:674 (1) - Add clap S:C1 no need clap here
01:40:531 (1) - if you followed 1/2, I think 01:41:174 (2) - this is 1/2 too, I sugguest for this rhythm which rythm ? D:
Example

CakiP wrote:
[Umi]
I think this flows better than currently the flows. just imo the current flow is good for me
img
00:11:817 (2) - Let's bend the Slider. yep fixed
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00:24:031 - add note? I could hear a strong sound of the piano. i'll consider i have other reflexion about it
00:38:388 (5) - Sampleset Normal? same sound here 00:38:174(4) - okay
00:43:531 (3) - fix this stack. Please move to x:245 y:253. fixed
00:48:245 (1) - Let's make this shape for the slider. not prefer my current one
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00:54:245 (2) - add Whistle to end using the whistle to follow the piano here
01:06:888 (3) - remove clap and add finish instead of clap to end. 2 finish successively is too noisy though
01:34:960 (3) - remove clap to end? why ? there is a clap here

Kodora wrote:
[Umi's Normal]

*Since Hard diff have AR7 & Easy have AR3 i suggest you use AR4 here for better difficulty spread - it also works very well with your patterns here AR7 > AR5 > AR3 better spread imo
*Use ticksounds to make your clap-patterns consistent i don't skip lot of clap

00:09:460 (1,3) - I would not recommend to use patterns like this on easiest diffs - such stuff looks too tricky for beginners. If you want to have little "trap" here, try to little unstack it, something like this - you will still have your "trap", but it will be more beginner-friendly. it's not that hard to notice this hidden note though, but i'll consider if i have other reflexion

SPOILER
00:47:388 (3) - add whistle? using the whistle to follow the piano, and there is no piano here
00:49:960 (2) - if you will apply previous one add here too to head of slider ^
01:31:531 (3) - Looks bad, maybe try something like this? why bad ? '-'

SPOILER
01:42:031 (1) - make this spinner start at 01:41:925 - , same as in other diffs - spinner & note follows exactly same note so there is no reason to keep 1/2 pause here. okay fixed

thx for mod guys :3

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Melophobia

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Melophobia 2014-02-22T21:21:38+00:00

Thank you for modding. :3

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[Metadata]
Title:Yureru Cycle
TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:Melo's Hard
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai game pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
BeatmapID:366359
BeatmapSetID:146778

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

alacat 2014-02-23T01:37:35+00:00

update! Thanks guys

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-02-23T14:49:56+00:00

Hai hai, from the ero Queue. ~

[General]

As already said, game is already in the genre so you won't need it in the tags. Just remove it and you'll be fine.

[KSHR's Easy]

00:06:031 (1) - I'd suggest to change the clap to a whistle on the end. It's the same tone as on 00:07:103 (2) - so it'll sound closer to the song.
00:27:674 (4) - Change to the default soft-normal for the red tick, there's no beat therefore it sounds weird.
00:34:531 (4) - ^
01:21:245 (3) - I'd recommend a Normal-hitnormal at the repeat, it will fit the drums better.
01:24:245 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat to follow the piano.
01:36:245 (4) - Could add a whistle aswell to follow the high tone.

[-Umi-'s Normal]

00:37:960 (4) - You probably missed a clap at the start.
00:55:960 (1) - Finish on the end sounds far too strong for this calm part, better replace it with a whistle.
01:05:388 (6) - Hmm, the clap on the start sounds a bit out of music, try a whistle, would be better.
01:16:531 (1) - Piano becomes really strong here, sure you don't like a finish at the start better?
01:18:031 (4) - If you added the one above, I'd recommend to give this start a finish aswell so the piano emphasis is the same.
01:22:960 (3) - Change the end to Normal sampleset? Would give the drums in the background a nice touch.

[Melo's Hard]

00:10:853 (6) - Don't know how you think about it, but I would prefer a whistle here since the piano is much louder here than the drums, also the kick Slider behind it already backs the drums up.
00:24:031 (2) - Change this one to a kick Slider? Since you followed the instruments pretty closely until now, it sounds weird to ignore the drums here.
00:33:567 (2) - Try to remove the whistle here and add it to 1. Since it sounds strange to have the 2 whistles of 2 and 3 so close to each other. (Also to keep consistency with 00:36:888 - )
00:34:531 (5) - Consider to remove the whistle from the end here aswell to give the one at 6 a better emphasis.
01:05:174 (3) - Add soft default whistle addition to the end to catch the piano?
01:05:603 (4) - How about changing the end to a soft whistle? To seperate the tones a bit more from each other.
01:19:317 (5) - Make the angle strange? I feel that flow increases, may be personal preference tho.
SPOILER
01:20:817 (3) - Remove the whistle from the end? Sounds too noisy since the powerful part just broke for a while and the emphasis should be on the finishes.
01:27:674 (5) - I find this 3/4 too inconsistent since you only used it to follow instruments so far. I'd try to shorten it by 1/4.
01:28:103 (6) - Would be better to remove the whistle from the repeat, there is no high tone but a drum beat, so it fits the song better if the sound is deep.
01:40:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd remove all whistles from this pattern since the chorus went down and the tones are not really high.
Jeez, awesome diff!

[Insane]

00:11:174 (5) - You could add a clap here aswell to hit all prominent drum beats.
00:19:960 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? Sounds a bit empty otherwise.
00:23:174 (1) - If I was you I'd increase the spacing here, I firstly thought it was 1/4 since the spacing was lower than 00:21:674 (1,2) - .
00:55:531 (6) - Since you use 3/4 here to emphasize the next Slider's start, I'd recommend you to silence the end.
01:16:531 (1) - Same here. ^
Really nice, nothing else to point at!

Hitsound focused mod is hitsound focused.

Good luck, alacat!

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-02-24T12:39:54+00:00

Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:
Hi /o/
[KSHR]
00:07:103 (2) - Maybe you can try adding whistle on the slider start ? it will fit smoothly with the drum hit on the BGM. already~
00:17:817 (3) - Missed whistle on this note ? you used whistle on similiar part that have piano sound like 00:14:388 (4,3) - Yea, it's my mistake! fixed~
00:32:388 (2) - This slider looks a bit distorted imo, i feel that the curved point is way too deep, how about smoother curve like below ? the blanket with sliderbody would be look really nice ! Nice suggestion~, but let me keep the current shape! I really don't wanna rearrange this slider that is along 00:30:245 (2) - .
SPOILER
00:54:245 (2,3) - Considering the pitch is not really 2/1 and the instrument that covering 00:55:103 - is not really noticeable. How about 3/2 reverse instead ? it will flow more smoothly as it there're high vocal at 00:54:888 - hmmmm, Sorry but I don't wanna make the same rhythm as 00:50:817 (2,1) - here because making 3 3/2 sliders in a row sounds kinda boring to me.. Orz
01:37:103 (1,2,3) - Pattern suggestion if you don't mind it ;w; aaa didn't fix! I wanna move the flow above (2) to follow the melody.
SPOILER

Oyatsu

Oyatsu wrote:
KSHR's Easy
01:07:531 (3) - strong beat, I think NC hm, I personally don't see the reason to add a nc because the melody which is made by the strong sounds you meant starts from 01:06:031 - , and end at around 01:08:603 - .
00:30:245 (2) - Why is drum at head? Read Xinely's mod please~ I agreed with her.

CakiP

CakiP wrote:
ha gu mi!(๑ơ ₃ ơ)
[KSHR]
00:19:103 (2,3) - 00:20:817 - ここに強い音があるんだけど、スライダーの終点に強い音を置くよりも、こんな風な音取りにしてスライダーの始点に強い音をおきたいと思った。でも完全に好み。 00:12:245 (3) - と音取り揃えてるのと、画像の通り修正するとobject数がサビのとこよりも密集ちゃってるきがするから、その兼ね合いも考えてって意味でNoで

01:08:174 (3) - finishが少しうるさいかな？っておもったから、Clapにしてみたり。んー、むしろそうすると違和感ある気がしたのでこのままで
01:21:245 (3) - Drumじゃなくてfinishじゃだめ？ダメか・・・試してみたけど曲の音と混ざって汚い・・

Kodora

Kodora wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]

*Your CS choise feels too big & doesn't fit choosen SV, i'd recommend use CS3 here. kk

00:28:531 - Remove custom ticksound from here why? o.o
00:35:388 - ^ ^
00:33:674 (3) - add drum-sampleset to head for consistensy ok~
00:47:388 (3) - whistle instead of hitdrum sounds better for me Whistles around here are following piano sounds. That's why I used the hit-drum here.
00:55:103 (3) - Sounds a bit weird here - following drums here works kinda tricky, make this slider starts at 00:54:888 - and end it at 00:55:531 - imo it will sounds better if it will be placed follow lyrics fixed
01:42:031 (1) - Same as Normal same as Normal ;3

Konei

Konei wrote:
[KSHR's Easy]

00:06:031 (1) - I'd suggest to change the clap to a whistle on the end. It's the same tone as on 00:07:103 (2) - so it'll sound closer to the song. I tried this before I completed this difficulty. But it sounded kinda weird to me because there is very little difference between them.
00:27:674 (4) - Change to the default soft-normal for the red tick, there's no beat therefore it sounds weird. okay~
00:34:531 (4) - ^ ^
01:21:245 (3) - I'd recommend a Normal-hitnormal at the repeat, it will fit the drums better. sounds better~ ok!
01:24:245 (2) - Add a whistle to the repeat to follow the piano. okay, added!
01:36:245 (4) - Could add a whistle aswell to follow the high tone. wanna add only finishes around here!

thanks for modding! :3

mod溜めすぎダメ、絶対・・・（するときももらうときも） Tagのことだけ任せます！

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BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-04T19:36:45+00:00

Sorry for the long wait alacat. Just a few things to point out!
[General]

If you want, you an add "Willplus" in tags as well.
The offset sounds a bit late imo. It could be my low fps though. ._.

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

alacat 2014-03-06T22:04:36+00:00

update! Thank you for checking

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,317 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-03-06T22:07:07+00:00

I didn't forget the mod. But I just can't do my mod reqs, it's being terribly annoying. Call me for rank then.

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

4,245 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-06T22:20:51+00:00

Okay, looks good! Bubbled!

@Irreversible: Since you going to mod/rank this map, could you also double-check the offset? I wasn't completely sure whether it was slighly off or not.

Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-03-07T16:09:13+00:00

Could I have a reply to my mod?

Irreversible

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4,317 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-03-07T17:18:24+00:00

Hi alacat!
Well, as Konei wishes, please reply to his mod first.

[Easy]

The hitsounding is a creative idea, but I'm not a fan at all of custom ones like that; they sound exactly the same as the background beat, and due to that it seems quite inaudible. Furthermore, additional hitsounds appear rather random. For example: 00:26:817 (3) - in easy. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think it would be a good idea to change it anyway.

00:01:103 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - I can see what you try here, although I'm not really okay with the NCing here, it gives many HP back, and makes it really no difficulty at all. Could you reduce them?

Really nice easy!

[Normal]

00:48:245 (1) - Any possibility to make this slidershape even neater?
01:21:245 (4,1) - Don't you wanna leave out this weird rhythm here, and instead map the building up vocals starting from 01:22:317 - ? http://puu.sh/7mkgk/aedf9594da.jpg This might be an idea, but too hard, but I guess it's okay for one time since you lead in the new part of the kiai.

[Hard]

00:03:460 - How about lowering this sounds here by maybe 10%? Seems quite loud how it is now.
00:28:317 (4) - Well, i Kind of saw it, so could you make them completely parallel? Would be nicer to me.
00:41:817 (5) - In my opinion, this stack breaks the flow here. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/7mkw1/222b35167e.jpg to Keep the flow!
00:43:960 (1) - That one is quite Close to the last slider, even if the DS is correct, could you by any Chance move it a bit to the left?
01:11:388 (2) - ^
01:08:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Well, that lead in of the kiai isn't made that great if you ask me; what about making something more outstanding? As you can see, you go in an anti-ClockWise pattern, and this is Kind of boring. I suggest making a left right jump there, a zigzack pattern, a direction Change, whatever suits you; but it would be nice if you could Change this. (sorry for the randomly capitalized letters, my Laptop makes this on his own

)
01:12:031 (3) - You could map the vocals so good here with 3 circles, why wasting it with a Long slider?
01:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not adding some normal / drum hitsounds as you've usually did here?
01:25:745 (2) - Same as above (3 circles)
01:38:388 (1) - not sure whether this NC is placed correctly; i'd rather have it 01:39:674 (3) - .

all in all; a pretty good hard!

[Insane]

00:50:603 (1) - I don't really like this NC, placing a NC 00:50:817 (3) - would give a much better effect!

Enjoyable Insane!

call me back

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Umi 2014-03-07T17:33:40+00:00

Konei wrote:
Hai hai, from the ero Queue. ~

[-Umi-'s Normal]

00:37:960 (4) - You probably missed a clap at the start.
00:55:960 (1) - Finish on the end sounds far too strong for this calm part, better replace it with a whistle.
01:05:388 (6) - Hmm, the clap on the start sounds a bit out of music, try a whistle, would be better.
01:16:531 (1) - Piano becomes really strong here, sure you don't like a finish at the start better?
01:18:031 (4) - If you added the one above, I'd recommend to give this start a finish aswell so the piano emphasis is the same.
01:22:960 (3) - Change the end to Normal sampleset? Would give the drums in the background a nice touch.
All fixed :3, sorry i didn't see your mod >.<

Irreversible wrote:
[Normal]

00:48:245 (1) - Any possibility to make this slidershape even neater? the current one is good for me
01:21:245 (4,1) - Don't you wanna leave out this weird rhythm here, and instead map the building up vocals starting from 01:22:317 - ? http://puu.sh/7mkgk/aedf9594da.jpg This might be an idea, but too hard, but I guess it's okay for one time since you lead in the new part of the kiai. fixed on my own way

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TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
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Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai Willplus pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
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alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

alacat 2014-03-07T19:12:28+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Hi alacat! yo ~ Irrrr
Well, as Konei wishes, please reply to his mod first. okey~

[Insane]

00:50:603 (1) - I don't really like this NC, placing a NC 00:50:817 (3) - would give a much better effect! ahh.. i see your feeling. But as you can see my diff, i made pattern of 3 hits new combo. 00:19:745 (1) - , 00:26:603 (1) - , 00:30:031 (1) - , 00:33:460 (1) - and so on ... So i keep to unify my pattern.

Enjoyable Insane! Thanks!

call me back

for Konei

Konei wrote:
[General]

As already said, game is already in the genre so you won't need it in the tags. Just remove it and you'll be fine. ok !
[Insane]

00:11:174 (5) - You could add a clap here aswell to hit all prominent drum beats. I feel it's too loud to this stream.
00:19:960 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? Sounds a bit empty otherwise. I didn't add a whistle to this sound. please check my pattern ar here.00:13:960 - ,00:14:388 - and so on.
00:23:174 (1) - If I was you I'd increase the spacing here, I firstly thought it was 1/4 since the spacing was lower than 00:21:674 (1,2) - . It's on purpose. i think it's better to put the spacing for flow.
00:55:531 (6) - Since you use 3/4 here to emphasize the next Slider's start, I'd recommend you to silence the end. ok, turned down the volume here
01:16:531 (1) - Same here. ^ kk
Really nice, nothing else to point at! Thank you, Konei :3

Thank you for modding

Update Umi and My diff ! waiting for KSHR and Melo :3

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-03-07T20:19:28+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Easy]

The hitsounding is a creative idea, but I'm not a fan at all of custom ones like that; they sound exactly the same as the background beat, and due to that it seems quite inaudible. Furthermore, additional hitsounds appear rather random. For example: 00:26:817 (3) - in easy. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think it would be a good idea to change it anyway.

> Slidertick & Soft-hitnormal: Hmm.. Considering they sound the same as the background beat, it seems like this hitsouding is against the rule.(I mean ↓) Ok, I'll ask alacat to remove "soft-slidertick4" and "soft-hitnormal4".
SPOILER
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
> Drum Sampleset: In this song, it sounds like drum sampleset doesn't work well with soft-hitnormal. Removed.

00:01:103 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - I can see what you try here, although I'm not really okay with the NCing here, it gives many HP back, and makes it really no difficulty at all. Could you reduce them?
Yea, you're right. Removed some.

Really nice easy! yay!

Thanks Irre~ :3

To alacat: "soft-slidertick4" "soft-hitnormal4" この二つだけ削除お願いしまっす！（他難易度では使われてなかったから兼ね合い気にせず消しちゃって大丈夫です！）

SPOILER

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Title:Yureru Cycle
TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:KSHR's Easy
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai Willplus pulltop ココロ＠ファンクション！
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alacat

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alacat 2014-03-07T20:51:13+00:00

了解ですー！

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BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-03-07T21:50:39+00:00

Konei wrote:
Could I have a reply to my mod?

Oops! Sorry about that Konei!

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2014-03-08T16:13:20+00:00

Konei wrote:
[Melo's Hard]

00:10:853 (6) - Don't know how you think about it, but I would prefer a whistle here since the piano is much louder here than the drums, also the kick Slider behind it already backs the drums up. There's already a whistle on (5) so i find it kinda noisy.
00:24:031 (2) - Change this one to a kick Slider? Since you followed the instruments pretty closely until now, it sounds weird to ignore the drums here. The current rhythm represents how i feel the song better. I'd like to emphasize the heavy beats using long sliders.
00:33:567 (2) - Try to remove the whistle here and add it to 1. Since it sounds strange to have the 2 whistles of 2 and 3 so close to each other. (Also to keep consistency with 00:36:888 - ) Feels empty w/o it, i'd go with the current state anyways. 00:36:888 - is intentionally different. i'd like to provide some variety here.
00:34:531 (5) - Consider to remove the whistle from the end here aswell to give the one at 6 a better emphasis. I can see ur point but it sounds better to me w/ it.
01:05:174 (3) - Add soft default whistle addition to the end to catch the piano? since i didn't use any whistles in this section i'm afraid it'd be strange.
01:05:603 (4) - How about changing the end to a soft whistle? To seperate the tones a bit more from each other. ^
01:19:317 (5) - Make the angle strange? I feel that flow increases, may be personal preference tho. No difference considering players won't move thier cursors for a kick slider and the current one looks better imo
SPOILER
01:20:817 (3) - Remove the whistle from the end? Sounds too noisy since the powerful part just broke for a while and the emphasis should be on the finishes. i've added whistles on every red ticks in kiai sections, i dont find it noisy or bad.
01:27:674 (5) - I find this 3/4 too inconsistent since you only used it to follow instruments so far. I'd try to shorten it by 1/4. That way 01:28:103 - is emphasized in a better way.
01:28:103 (6) - Would be better to remove the whistle from the repeat, there is no high tone but a drum beat, so it fits the song better if the sound is deep. Feels empty if i removed it because there's no whistles around here due to the long slider.
01:40:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd remove all whistles from this pattern since the chorus went down and the tones are not really high. it follows the bass-drum and i think it's funny.
Jeez, awesome diff!

Irreversible wrote:
[Hard]
00:03:460 - How about lowering this sounds here by maybe 10%? Seems quite loud how it is now. Reduced by 20%
00:28:317 (4) - Well, i Kind of saw it, so could you make them completely parallel? Would be nicer to me. Never noticed LOL okay fixed
00:41:817 (5) - In my opinion, this stack breaks the flow here. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/7mkw1/222b35167e.jpg to Keep the flow! Intentional, the transition (direction change) can be more natural by stacking them imo.
00:43:960 (1) - That one is quite Close to the last slider, even if the DS is correct, could you by any Chance move it a bit to the left? good point!
01:11:388 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Well, that lead in of the kiai isn't made that great if you ask me; what about making something more outstanding? As you can see, you go in an anti-ClockWise pattern, and this is Kind of boring. I suggest making a left right jump there, a zigzack pattern, a direction Change, whatever suits you; but it would be nice if you could Change this. (sorry for the randomly capitalized letters, my Laptop makes this on his own ) it's kinda part of my style and i don't find it boring at all
01:12:031 (3) - You could map the vocals so good here with 3 circles, why wasting it with a Long slider? it represents how i feel the song better and considering the level of difficulty i don't have to stick to vocals strictly.
01:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not adding some normal / drum hitsounds as you've usually did here? To emphasize the hi-hat (or whatever it's called lol) on the red ticks.
01:25:745 (2) - Same as above (3 circles) same answer
01:38:388 (1) - not sure whether this NC is placed correctly; i'd rather have it 01:39:674 (3) - . It's not that bad to have newcombo on heavy beat. if (3) had a newcombo the combo would be way too short and wouldn't look that great im afraid.
all in all; a pretty good hard!