hiiiiiiiii (so late
really nice mapset, good luck for rank xD/
General
- sooooooo clean
Easy
- 00:20:926 (1) - I recommended you move this slider down, since the current one is touching the life barSPOILERhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1240926
- 00:56:451 (3,1,2) - hmm, try to line them up?
- 00:58:326 (1,2) - blanket
- 01:04:326 (1,3) - Although it is not prohibited in Easy, I am not really suggest you to use it, considering newbies may confused here while playing imo, but its okay if 01:05:451 (2) - is a slider, and 01:04:326 (1,3) - stacked will not be confused because they have enough time to react, but sadly the current not ;w;
- 01:06:576 (4) - I suggest you extend this slider to 01:07:138 - ( 1/2 beat snap divisor ), so it wont feel weird to the music, of course, you can keep 01:07:326 (5) - or remove it, it wont be too hard whether it is existed
- nice easy as always
Normal
- 00:06:126 (2,3) - actually, I think this flows better, but its okay if you dont change it
- 00:18:926 (4,1,2) - XD, idk if they maybe too hard for players, maybe you can try to find someone who plays Normal and testplay it
- 00:30:526 (1) - as I pointed out in Easy, you can try to move 1-2 grids down for this slider in order to avoid touching the scoreboard
- nice too :3
Hard
- 00:14:126 (4) - as I saw you used sliders to cover the triplets, so... use a reverse slider for here tooo? its pretty nice for me
- 00:17:726 (5) - how about NC here? Since melody changed and it will be more fit with the mucis imo !
- 00:38:526 (1) - Whistle here? the music is going up, apply to all diffs if you think its nice
- 00:53:826 (5) - NC for melody changing too
- so tidy
Insane
- 00:11:326 (1) - I am pretty sure you missed a clap here
- 00:12:926 (1) - ^
- 00:17:526 (1) - just a little suggestion to make the map much exciting : add finish at 00:17:526 (1) - 's tail, and 00:18:326 (5) -'s , 00:18:926 (6) - 's head
- 00:24:126 (1) - finish I suppose
- 00:25:726 (6) - ^
- 00:48:951 (4,1) - nazi stuff for blanket, try to move the last anchor point 2 grids to down
- 00:54:013 (2,3) - here can be a triplet, but I saw you used jumps so its okay to undermap it
- 00:54:388 (4) - how about this?
- 01:08:451 (3) - if I were you, I would place it at 01:08:263 - instead to follow the vocal, thats what you did in 01:09:201 (5,6) -
- 01:17:826 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - as you listened that the music is going up here, I suggest you try to make the jumps going up too, here is an example for you , hope you can read xD, I moved 01:18:763 (2) - and 01:19:138 (2) - only
Fiya's Insane
- 00:44:638 (3,4) - nazi, try to parallel them? Just need to move the first red anchor of 00:44:638 (3) - one grid left
- 00:53:638 (8) - if you like it, try to NC here for a notice to players that you changed the pattern here
- 01:08:826 - add a note here? its it imo
- not bad
really nice mapset, good luck for rank xD/