hi~
[General]
[Insane]
[Fiya's Insane]
[Hard]
not really much help, sorry!
good luck with ranking~
[General]
- the title should be romanised as Hyouri Itttai. don't forget to resubmit! also, i think yuzu might be written in all caps but i'm not sure on this one.
- tags: if you wanted to get really in depth, you could add the tags for every character appearing in the ed. also, right now you only have gon and killua's given names.SPOILERgon freecss killua zoldyck neferpitou ikalgo meleoron knuckle bine shoot mcmahon menthuthuyoupi morel mccarnathy shaiapouf meruem knov isaac netero komugi palm siberia
- umm..this video and mp3 are off sync by a few seconds. i don't think anyone will really notice but if you could somehow fix that it'd be nice to have the hook synced with the video.
[Insane]
- i see you barely have any green lines here before the kiai, experimenting with some sv changes where you think they could fit could potentially give off a lot more unique of a flow to this!
- there's a pretty constant sound in the rhythm that i noticed you haven't mapped, i'm not sure if it was intentional but if you listen at 00:10:326 (6) - there's actually a triplet here that's prevalent in the beat up until the kiai.
00:27:326 (1) - this section felt kind of ambiguous to me, sort of like following half-vocals and half music. 00:28:126 - i think these white ticks should all be filled.
00:47:263 - there's a stream in the music here, but it's not the usual drum fill, so it's up to you if you want to map it.
00:54:388 (4) - how about a rhythm like this to follow both things going on here?
00:55:326 (1,1) - this part of the song is exactly what made me want to map it! but i think you could execute this a little better. by keeping them both going straight down you can't take much advantage of slider leniency to increase the sv for a little more impact here. how about curving the second one and blanketting the first one that way? you could increase the sv to 1.25 or even 1.50 without giving people whiplash this way.
very fun, much better than my difficulty.
nothing to say here ;_;
[Hard]
nothing to say here either, mapped just as good as departure!
not really much help, sorry!
good luck with ranking~