[Easy]
00:00:295 (1) - I think you should shorten the spinner by one white tick so that the player will have more time to react to the slider after the spinner. Since this is the easy difficulty, I
strongly recommend you shorten the slider. Example:
This also applies to 00:04:045 (1) -, 00:07:795 (1) - and 00:11:545 (1) -
yes, you're right, fixed00:15:295 (1) - This doesn't work
if you are trying to follow the instrument, the instrument plays before you are supposed to hit the circle. If you wanted the notes to follow the instruments correctly, you would need a more complicated rhythm which is too hard for easy. I
strongly suggest just following the beat(1-2-3-4) with the slider by only placing notes on the white lines:
no, i don't think that will be better, this part of rhythm has a very strong sound on every last red line, i make sliders end on them and add whistles as you see, if change the rhythm to simple 1/1 sliders, those sounds will lost, and actually i think sliders will be much easier to read, even they are start at red lines, so no change, sorryThis will work better for easy, and you can try it out for yourself.
00:50:920 (1) - you should change sliders like this so that you can draw a straight, vertical line from the beginning of the slider to the end. This is what I mean:
If I mention
vertical anywhere else in the map, this is what I am referring to.
this slider is blanket with the last slider's end, there's no reason to break this pattern, no fix00:53:966 (5) - maybe looks better if you move the slider end so it points straight down.
prefer the original00:54:670 (1) - same thing as 00:50:920 (1), move the slider end so that you can draw a straight horizontal line from the start to the end. If I mention
horizontal anywhere else in the map, this will be what I'm talking about.
this diff's placing style is not so "straight", you've modded the whole map and i believe you've seen that, there are not many totally horizontal or vertical sliders in easy diff, so i don't think i will change the overall style of it. sorry, no change here00:57:482 (4,1,2,3) - I think you should place these notes better, maybe like this:
Note that the end of (4) is parallel with (2), and (1) is parallel with (3). Also, (3) is parallel to the end of (3).
ok,fixed01:01:466 (5) - maybe looks better if you point the slider end straight to the right
seems fine, fixed01:11:545 (5) - curve this towards (6) to make it flow better:
ok, fixed01:21:857 (3) - move the end of the slider so it lines up with (1) and (2), like this:
You can also point the slider end straight to the right if you want.
prefer the original01:41:545 (4) - this slider feels weird to play. You should change it to something else, for example maybe an arc like this:
or have it curvy:
changed to another shape01:45:295 (3) - Same thing as above^
no change here01:58:420 (1) - Same thing as 00:54:670 (1)
no change02:05:920 (1) - Extend this slider so that it ends on 02:07:326. This way it matches the music/beat. Also consider changing the shape of the slider.
only changed the shape. music ends on that red line obviously i think……02:32:638 (2) - Not very important, but I prefer if this slider has a higher arc because it feels better:
ok, fixed02:36:388 (2,3) - line (3) up with the end of (2), and move the end of (3) so that it points straight down. This is because it will look better and it matches the ending of the song better:
fine, fixed[Normal]
I like the clap hitsounds that start from 00:47:170 -
glad that you like it :300:11:310 (6) - This part is sort of hard for a normal difficulty, I think you should remove the (6)
will consider that00:11:545 (1) - horizontal
if 00:10:138 (4,5) are also horizontal i may do that ._. here making 1 horizontal may be weird00:11:545 (1,2) - make sure the distance snap is always 1.0x!!! only time distance snap is not the same in a normal difficulty is when you stack the notes.
just 1.01 orz……no change, you may looked wrong00:16:232 (3,4) - same thing as in easy, this pattern is a bit weird. I suggest finding another pattern. Here is a suggestion:
no change, sorryHowever, since this is the normal difficulty, you can choose whether to keep the current pattern or not. I don't think the pattern is too hard for normal.
01:05:920 (1) - I don't think you need the red dot here. If you want to keep it, I suggest moving it so it makes a bigger, noticeable curve.
ok, fixed01:42:248 (4) - place this a little closer to (3)
fixed01:47:170 (8) - I would say remove the new combo since you stack it on another combo and the different approach circle colours look weird.
ok, removed it[Hard]
00:00:295 (1,2,3,4) - nice rhythm~
thx00:23:732 (4,5,6) - maybe this will be confusing because you stack them but the time between them is not the same. You can move 6 out of the stack to clear it up like you did at 00:59:357 (3,4,5). This is what it should look like:
ok, fixed01:05:685 (4,1) - this looks good~ (4 was placed on the end of the next slider) try to stack stuff like this when you can
ok, thx01:29:826 (4) - how come you don't stack it this time?
make the patterns more various, no change here01:42:013 (2) - same thing as above, make sure you make it consistent. Maybe stack the slider in one part of song and don't stack in another part.
no fix, same reason as above, this is a hard diff, more various and acceptable patterns will make it not boring to play01:47:638 - good rhythm
thx~02:04:045 (1,2) - maybe stack the slider ends to make it look nicer
will consider that02:39:670 (1) - hmm I don't think there is enough time between the spinner end and (1). You can fix this if you shorten spinner to 02:39:201 -
enough for a hard diff i think, no fix
Random mod here, because your music is awesome!
