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Topic Starter
Thanks for modding and star Beat <3
and thanks for your star Oyatsu :3
and thanks for your star Oyatsu :3
Hi there >w<
Mod request from PM in-game
and sorry to mod delay ><
Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion
General
- Okay, clear~
Love
- Andrea's parts
- 05:07:176 (1) - Please add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm.
Sekai-nyan's parts - 00:27:176 (5,1) - I'm not sure that you intend to use DS 1.1x or not, but I prefer to use DS 1.0x will be better.
- 00:34:843 (5) - Move to down 2 grids and right 1 grid will be look better.
- 01:32:510 (5,6) - Hitsound on these aren't fit with rhythm. Please add clap on (6), and change clap on (5) into whistle instead.
- 01:37:843 (3,4) - This, too. Add clap on (4), and change clap on (3) into whistle.
- 01:43:176 (5,6) - Same with 01:32:510 (5,6).
- 03:35:176 (5) - Add clap on slider repeat, and change clap on slider begin into whistle instead.
- 03:45:843 (3,4) - Same with 01:37:843 (3,4).
- 04:06:176 (2) - Move to up 1 grid will be look better for a bit.
- 04:08:343 (10) - I heard regular soft-clap hitsound on here. Please use soft-clap2 (S:C2) to follow the melody.
- 05:57:176 (1) - I think that ths until 05:57:843 should to use circles or sliders, which I suggest that use triplets stream (here, 05:57:343, and 05:57:510). Then start spinner at 05:57:843 instead. It will fit with rhythm and melody.
Miya's parts - 01:02:176 (2,3) - I want to reduce DS into 1.0x by move (2) to x:252 y:252.
- 02:19:010 (8) - The flow between (7,8,1) is weird for me. I suggest that move (8) to up 2~3 grids will be better.
Darksonic's parts - 01:25:176 (4) - Please add clap on slider begin, and add whistle on slider end. It will fit with rhythm and melody.
Comment : Great map. So give a star to you
Hope my mod will be useful for you.
Good luck~
Fixed some spacing. Thank you Nichiyouki :3
http://puu.sh/3909Q.osu
http://puu.sh/3909Q.osu
Sekai: Please do this for me since it's just little stuff.Nichiyouki wrote:
Darksonic's parts
01:25:176 (4) - Please add clap on slider begin, and add whistle on slider end. It will fit with rhythm and melody.
Thanks for modding.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding and star Nich :3
Don't let this die and approve it <3
Topic Starter
Never ;w;/ but it'll help if BAT's mods it tho~Andrea wrote:
Don't let this die and approve it <3
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General
Love
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General
- • What about reducing volume a little? Hitsounds are too loud imo, -10% for each section should be fine.
• If I were you I'd keep every SB name at x:500 y:10 in order to make the SB more neat.
• I barely noticed that pulse while playing, use this one.
Love
- • 00:29:843 (1,2,3) - I don't like flow here, try this pattern:
• 00:32:510 (1) - This blanket could be better.
• 00:43:176 (1) - Keep this slider at x:80 y:240 and flip it vertically and horizontally. (also a ~ shape here would be much better)
• 01:13:843 (4) - This slider can be improved, look:
• 01:18:510 (4) - Why a linear slider? Curve it a little:
• 01:41:176 (4,5) - Move (4) at x:244 y:284 and (5) at x:214 y:199.
• 02:08:510 (1) - ~ slider for a better flow:
• 02:24:510 (1) - ^
• 03:20:510 (1) - ^
• 03:28:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I really don't like this pattern to be honest, why all these circles? Try to use some 1/4 repeating sliders, otherwise try this spacing:
• 04:09:176 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like flow here, try this:
• 04:43:176 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it.
• 04:48:510 (1) - Keep this slider at x:396 Y:164 and flip it vertically.
• 04:54:510 (2) - Uhm... why drum sampleset here? Set it to auto and remove the clap.
• 05:57:176 (1,1) - These spinners are totally unnecessary, but I understand why you added them, meh... anyway, just use 1 spinner here (try to start it at 05:57:843) and every white tick reduce volume a bit in order to make a fade out effect.
Go Go! 
Topic Starter
Thanks Hero for your mod <3
Fixed everything~
And Andrea for your sb fix =w=/
Fixed everything~
And Andrea for your sb fix =w=/
ok go and rank it owo
ok im here
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
you can put "pulse.jpg" into the SB folder for organizational purposes; also since there is only one diff you can transfer the sb code directly into the .osu file under [Events] and delete the osb file.
overall the map lacks volume transitions; you can use 60% volume for kiai sections and 50% for other parts to get some variation there
[Andrea]
02:50:843 (5) - NC here and remove NC at 02:52:510 (1); then add one at 02:53:843 (4). This way the NC pattern is consistent
05:09:176 (1) - i think a clap sounds better here considering clap patterns were consistent in all other parts (you can just add it)
05:14:510 (6) - ^
05:19:843 (5) - ^
[Sekai-nyan]
00:39:010 - add a note here? follows the vocals nicely
01:38:510 (6,7,8,9,1) - the way this is set up doesnt feel very natural to play; try curving it down like this: 01:44:343 (11) - delete this note, doesnt really follow the music nicely here
01:48:510 (4) - this feel a lot more natural to play if you move it to 01:48:343
02:41:510 (4) - make this into a triplet? fits the music better imo
03:49:843 (1) - forgot a finish here
03:57:676 (8) - clap?
04:01:843 (5,6,7) - try this rhythm here, sounds better imo: 04:03:176 - move the previous green line to start here; the default slider slide sound plays for half the slider which is quite weird to hear
04:17:176 - hmm why did you skip over this beat? its tempting to hit 04:17:510 (3) too early and quite flow breaking for me. try adding a note here stacked on top of 04:16:843 (2)
04:17:843 (1) - remove this NC and place at 04:18:343 (3), makes the pattern cleaner and easier to read
04:53:176 (6) - use the default finish here like 04:58:510 (6) and 05:01:176 (5)
04:55:843 (5,1) - blanket this properly
05:57:176 - add a triplet here? leads into the spinner nicely
[Miya]
00:49:010 - felt quite empty not clicking here since the vocals gives a dominant feel; try something like this? 01:04:010 - i'd add a note here to cover the heavy drum beat here; you can form a triplet here with 01:03:843 (6,7)
02:12:843 (5,7) - add whistles on these?
03:13:843 (4) - missing finish i think
03:18:843 (2) - ^ on end
03:20:510 (1,2) - use a larger spacing here, seems to be accidental
03:24:510 (4) - ^ on start
[Darksonic]
01:13:510 (2,3,4) - move this up a bit so it forms a proper blanket with 01:12:510 (1)? 04:34:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the way this flows is a bit unnatural, try to get a more oval shape here: 04:40:676 (1) - swap clap for finish? i think it sounds better here
05:36:176 (7,8) - add claps here would be cool
05:51:176 (2,5) - move this a bit right will get more symmetry on this pattern
tbh i would have done alot of rhythms differently, but i had no problems playing it as-is so i guess it works out. Let me know when you are done with the mod
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
you can put "pulse.jpg" into the SB folder for organizational purposes; also since there is only one diff you can transfer the sb code directly into the .osu file under [Events] and delete the osb file.
overall the map lacks volume transitions; you can use 60% volume for kiai sections and 50% for other parts to get some variation there
[Andrea]
02:50:843 (5) - NC here and remove NC at 02:52:510 (1); then add one at 02:53:843 (4). This way the NC pattern is consistent
05:09:176 (1) - i think a clap sounds better here considering clap patterns were consistent in all other parts (you can just add it)
05:14:510 (6) - ^
05:19:843 (5) - ^
[Sekai-nyan]
00:39:010 - add a note here? follows the vocals nicely
01:38:510 (6,7,8,9,1) - the way this is set up doesnt feel very natural to play; try curving it down like this: 01:44:343 (11) - delete this note, doesnt really follow the music nicely here
01:48:510 (4) - this feel a lot more natural to play if you move it to 01:48:343
02:41:510 (4) - make this into a triplet? fits the music better imo
03:49:843 (1) - forgot a finish here
03:57:676 (8) - clap?
04:01:843 (5,6,7) - try this rhythm here, sounds better imo: 04:03:176 - move the previous green line to start here; the default slider slide sound plays for half the slider which is quite weird to hear
04:17:176 - hmm why did you skip over this beat? its tempting to hit 04:17:510 (3) too early and quite flow breaking for me. try adding a note here stacked on top of 04:16:843 (2)
04:17:843 (1) - remove this NC and place at 04:18:343 (3), makes the pattern cleaner and easier to read
04:53:176 (6) - use the default finish here like 04:58:510 (6) and 05:01:176 (5)
04:55:843 (5,1) - blanket this properly
05:57:176 - add a triplet here? leads into the spinner nicely
[Miya]
00:49:010 - felt quite empty not clicking here since the vocals gives a dominant feel; try something like this? 01:04:010 - i'd add a note here to cover the heavy drum beat here; you can form a triplet here with 01:03:843 (6,7)
02:12:843 (5,7) - add whistles on these?
03:13:843 (4) - missing finish i think
03:18:843 (2) - ^ on end
03:20:510 (1,2) - use a larger spacing here, seems to be accidental
03:24:510 (4) - ^ on start
[Darksonic]
01:13:510 (2,3,4) - move this up a bit so it forms a proper blanket with 01:12:510 (1)? 04:34:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the way this flows is a bit unnatural, try to get a more oval shape here: 04:40:676 (1) - swap clap for finish? i think it sounds better here
05:36:176 (7,8) - add claps here would be cool
05:51:176 (2,5) - move this a bit right will get more symmetry on this pattern
tbh i would have done alot of rhythms differently, but i had no problems playing it as-is so i guess it works out. Let me know when you are done with the mod
This map lives. Flame it please!
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding Jona owo/ and Thanks Beat for your support >w<
fixed everything on your mod <3
fixed everything on your mod <3
sorry for the delay ><
map looks fine to me now, and in case anyone is concerned about the drain time, the one on the website does not include the last spinner; the actual drain time for this map is around 6:05 minutes.
Bubble #1~
map looks fine to me now, and in case anyone is concerned about the drain time, the one on the website does not include the last spinner; the actual drain time for this map is around 6:05 minutes.
Bubble #1~
FInally! Go! Sekai-senpai
Topic Starter
Thank you Jona <3
Map looks fine to me as it is.
Bubble #2!
Bubble #2!
Topic Starter
Thanks for the 2nd bubble Irr <3Irreversible wrote:
Map looks fine to me as it is.
Bubble #2!
Go Sekai 
Oh, you can delete "Collab" in the tags, it's useless since it has "collab" in "collaboration" o:
There's no breaktime? Duude, the song has a duration of 6 mins, it's a lot D:
Marathon
I hate the fact that it must be called a "Marathon" >___>..
There's no breaktime? Duude, the song has a duration of 6 mins, it's a lot D:
Marathon
I hate the fact that it must be called a "Marathon" >___>..
- 00:07:843 (2,3) - Reversing both of these circles would be better because, if we look at the previous objects, the spacing is around 1,40 & the spacing between (1,2) is very high compared the previous and, it's somewhat surprising since you have to completely go to the opposite side and then go back in the middle. So, by reversing it, it's going to avoid that kind of confusion and also, would make the spacing more consistent.
- 01:03:510 (5,6,7,8) - I don't really like how it is sounding right now, of course, you are following the bass, but it's not what it has to be emphasized and it feels unnatural. If we look at those objects, 01:01:843 (1,2,3) - , the next objects should have the same rhythm. So, I suggest you to do this:
but if you don't want to follow this suggestion, you can also do a compromise (which sounds a lot better since it's combining both ideas): - 01:20:510 (1,2) - Sorry, I don't want to be rude, but the flow and the slider's shape is terrible.. I don't have any suggestions, to be honest, maybe this?
- 02:24:176 (7,1) - a bit surprising, but oh well o.o
- 03:04:510 (5) - If we follow big downbeats and the song itself, I guess a new combo would be more suitable here.
- 03:31:176 (1) - Shouldn't this circle have a louder finish sound? It seems to have this kind of whistle one, compared to 03:09:843 (1) - . If we look at your timing points, the timing section is "S:C2" instead of "S", like on the previous finish. Proof.. Make this timing point "S" and add another with "S:C2" :3
- 03:41:176 (6,7,8,9,1) - Aesthetically, I think those objects should be more curved, don't you think?
Topic Starter
Thanks Gabe :3
Fixed everything <3
Fixed everything <3
damn it. Im on my phone.
I will flame this tomorrow :3
I will flame this tomorrow :3
One last thing, related to the changes:
01:20:510 (2) - we have fixed the flow here, now, the problem is the spacing, you should fix it since it's largely closer to the next object than the previous.
nokd & call me back
01:20:510 (2) - we have fixed the flow here, now, the problem is the spacing, you should fix it since it's largely closer to the next object than the previous.
nokd & call me back
Topic Starter
Fixed it :3
Thanks Gabe~
Thanks Gabe~
Go and approve it nao!
Let's see if you get the joke.
Let's see if you get the joke.
got it, LOL
Topic Starter
fixed it i hope o3o
Approved c:
Congratulations Sekai <333333
BeatofIke wrote:
Congratulations Sekai <333333
LOL,..
Congratz!! Sekai-senpai
Congratz!! Sekai-senpai