ok im here
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
you can put "pulse.jpg" into the SB folder for organizational purposes; also since there is only one diff you can transfer the sb code directly into the .osu file under [Events] and delete the osb file.
overall the map lacks volume transitions; you can use 60% volume for kiai sections and 50% for other parts to get some variation there[Andrea]
02:50:843 (5) - NC here and remove NC at 02:52:510 (1); then add one at 02:53:843 (4). This way the NC pattern is consistent
05:09:176 (1) - i think a clap sounds better here considering clap patterns were consistent in all other parts (you can just add it)
05:14:510 (6) - ^
05:19:843 (5) - ^
[Sekai-nyan]
00:39:010 - add a note here? follows the vocals nicely
01:38:510 (6,7,8,9,1) - the way this is set up doesnt feel very natural to play; try curving it down like this:
01:44:343 (11) - delete this note, doesnt really follow the music nicely here
01:48:510 (4) - this feel a lot more natural to play if you move it to 01:48:343
02:41:510 (4) - make this into a triplet? fits the music better imo
03:49:843 (1) - forgot a finish here
03:57:676 (8) - clap?
04:01:843 (5,6,7) - try this rhythm here, sounds better imo:
04:03:176 - move the previous green line to start here; the default slider slide sound plays for half the slider which is quite weird to hear
04:17:176 - hmm why did you skip over this beat? its tempting to hit 04:17:510 (3) too early and quite flow breaking for me. try adding a note here stacked on top of 04:16:843 (2)
04:17:843 (1) - remove this NC and place at 04:18:343 (3), makes the pattern cleaner and easier to read
04:53:176 (6) - use the default finish here like 04:58:510 (6) and 05:01:176 (5)
04:55:843 (5,1) - blanket this properly
05:57:176 - add a triplet here? leads into the spinner nicely
[Miya]
00:49:010 - felt quite empty not clicking here since the vocals gives a dominant feel; try something like this?
01:04:010 - i'd add a note here to cover the heavy drum beat here; you can form a triplet here with 01:03:843 (6,7)
02:12:843 (5,7) - add whistles on these?
03:13:843 (4) - missing finish i think
03:18:843 (2) - ^ on end
03:20:510 (1,2) - use a larger spacing here, seems to be accidental
03:24:510 (4) - ^ on start
[Darksonic]
01:13:510 (2,3,4) - move this up a bit so it forms a proper blanket with 01:12:510 (1)?
04:34:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the way this flows is a bit unnatural, try to get a more oval shape here:
04:40:676 (1) - swap clap for finish? i think it sounds better here
05:36:176 (7,8) - add claps here would be cool
05:51:176 (2,5) - move this a bit right will get more symmetry on this pattern
tbh i would have done alot of rhythms differently, but i had no problems playing it as-is so i guess it works out. Let me know when you are done with the mod