ok im here

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
you can put "pulse.jpg" into the SB folder for organizational purposes; also since there is only one diff you can transfer the sb code directly into the .osu file under [Events] and delete the osb file.

overall the map lacks volume transitions; you can use 60% volume for kiai sections and 50% for other parts to get some variation there

[Andrea]
02:50:843 (5) - NC here and remove NC at 02:52:510 (1); then add one at 02:53:843 (4). This way the NC pattern is consistent
05:09:176 (1) - i think a clap sounds better here considering clap patterns were consistent in all other parts (you can just add it)
05:14:510 (6) - ^
05:19:843 (5) - ^

[Sekai-nyan]
00:39:010 - add a note here? follows the vocals nicely
01:38:510 (6,7,8,9,1) - the way this is set up doesnt feel very natural to play; try curving it down like this: 01:44:343 (11) - delete this note, doesnt really follow the music nicely here
01:48:510 (4) - this feel a lot more natural to play if you move it to 01:48:343
02:41:510 (4) - make this into a triplet? fits the music better imo
03:49:843 (1) - forgot a finish here
03:57:676 (8) - clap?
04:01:843 (5,6,7) - try this rhythm here, sounds better imo: 04:03:176 - move the previous green line to start here; the default slider slide sound plays for half the slider which is quite weird to hear
04:17:176 - hmm why did you skip over this beat? its tempting to hit 04:17:510 (3) too early and quite flow breaking for me. try adding a note here stacked on top of 04:16:843 (2)
04:17:843 (1) - remove this NC and place at 04:18:343 (3), makes the pattern cleaner and easier to read
04:53:176 (6) - use the default finish here like 04:58:510 (6) and 05:01:176 (5)
04:55:843 (5,1) - blanket this properly
05:57:176 - add a triplet here? leads into the spinner nicely

[Miya]
00:49:010 - felt quite empty not clicking here since the vocals gives a dominant feel; try something like this? 01:04:010 - i'd add a note here to cover the heavy drum beat here; you can form a triplet here with 01:03:843 (6,7)
02:12:843 (5,7) - add whistles on these?
03:13:843 (4) - missing finish i think
03:18:843 (2) - ^ on end
03:20:510 (1,2) - use a larger spacing here, seems to be accidental
03:24:510 (4) - ^ on start

[Darksonic]
01:13:510 (2,3,4) - move this up a bit so it forms a proper blanket with 01:12:510 (1)? 04:34:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the way this flows is a bit unnatural, try to get a more oval shape here: 04:40:676 (1) - swap clap for finish? i think it sounds better here
05:36:176 (7,8) - add claps here would be cool
05:51:176 (2,5) - move this a bit right will get more symmetry on this pattern

tbh i would have done alot of rhythms differently, but i had no problems playing it as-is so i guess it works out. Let me know when you are done with the mod

This map lives. Flame it please!

Thanks for modding Jona owo/ and Thanks Beat for your support >w<

fixed everything on your mod <3

sorry for the delay ><

map looks fine to me now, and in case anyone is concerned about the drain time, the one on the website does not include the last spinner; the actual drain time for this map is around 6:05 minutes.

Bubble #1~

FInally! Go! Sekai-senpai

Thank you Jona <3

Map looks fine to me as it is.

Bubble #2!

Irreversible wrote:

Map looks fine to me as it is.

Bubble #2!

Thanks for the 2nd bubble Irr <3

Go Sekai

Oh, you can delete "Collab" in the tags, it's useless since it has "collab" in "collaboration" o:
There's no breaktime? Duude, the song has a duration of 6 mins, it's a lot D:

Marathon
I hate the fact that it must be called a "Marathon" >___>..

1. 00:07:843 (2,3) - Reversing both of these circles would be better because, if we look at the previous objects, the spacing is around 1,40 & the spacing between (1,2) is very high compared the previous and, it's somewhat surprising since you have to completely go to the opposite side and then go back in the middle. So, by reversing it, it's going to avoid that kind of confusion and also, would make the spacing more consistent.
2. 01:03:510 (5,6,7,8) - I don't really like how it is sounding right now, of course, you are following the bass, but it's not what it has to be emphasized and it feels unnatural. If we look at those objects, 01:01:843 (1,2,3) - , the next objects should have the same rhythm. So, I suggest you to do this:
   
   but if you don't want to follow this suggestion, you can also do a compromise (which sounds a lot better since it's combining both ideas):
   
3. 01:20:510 (1,2) - Sorry, I don't want to be rude, but the flow and the slider's shape is terrible.. I don't have any suggestions, to be honest, maybe this?
   
   Example

   
4. 02:24:176 (7,1) - a bit surprising, but oh well o.o
5. 03:04:510 (5) - If we follow big downbeats and the song itself, I guess a new combo would be more suitable here.
6. 03:31:176 (1) - Shouldn't this circle have a louder finish sound? It seems to have this kind of whistle one, compared to 03:09:843 (1) - . If we look at your timing points, the timing section is "S:C2" instead of "S", like on the previous finish. Proof.. Make this timing point "S" and add another with "S:C2" :3
7. 03:41:176 (6,7,8,9,1) - Aesthetically, I think those objects should be more curved, don't you think?

meep, nothing else to point out. call me back, dear.

Thanks Gabe :3

Fixed everything <3

damn it. Im on my phone.

I will flame this tomorrow :3

lol Gabe

One last thing, related to the changes:
01:20:510 (2) - we have fixed the flow here, now, the problem is the spacing, you should fix it since it's largely closer to the next object than the previous.

nokd & call me back

Fixed it :3

Thanks Gabe~

*facepalm*

01:22:176 (3) - this slider, not the slider (2) o.o
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1236711

Go and approve it nao!

Let's see if you get the joke.

got it, LOL

fixed it i hope o3o

Approved c:

Gratz!

♥

Gratz moe Sekai >w</

Congratulations Sekai <333333

LOL,..
Congratz!! Sekai-senpai

gratz sekai :3

omg!! Thank you guys <3 and Thanks Gabe ;w;

sakai congratz xD #1 approved gratz ＼( ˚ ▽ ˚ ) /

Congrats, it's about time!

Thanks everyone ></

Congrats Sekai! (:

I would like to map this song.........three years ago xD (when i mapped grand blue
gratz

kanpakyin wrote:

I would like to map this song.........three years ago xD (when i mapped grand blue
gratz

and i was wondering why too~ =w=/

and Thanks kanpakyin and Giralda <3