Hi guys

Well thats all I can suggest here GL nice map

scanter wrote:

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Natsu wrote:

Miya:

1. 00:51:843 this part should be mapped since sound weird without the clap in your pattern of 2 and 4 line I want a variation
2. 00:53:176 x:64 y:228 to be in line with 00:52:510 nazi stuff xD sure, fixed ><
3. 02:06:676 should be a circle here like you did on 02:08:343 .-. Nope, i dont want to follow vocal at this section.
4. 02:17:343 same as above
5. 03:27:176 this place feel so empty and weird for play imo Ok, since bakabakari say the same thing too. Changed~

1. title: piece of azure
   
   wikipedia
2. add "visual novel" and "Lapis Lazuli" to tag.
3. you must resize pulse.jpg to 800x600. 1024x768 is not rankable.
   
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   use this.
   
4. you migh need to check epilepsy warning. at the moment, "pulse.jpg" is vibrating at kiai.
   if its vibrating is miss, not need to do it. but do not forget to fix about size code.

1. 01:17:510 (1,2,3) - (nazi) I thought appearance is not good because (1) touch 01:16:510 (3) on playing.
   
   
   
   try this.
2. 01:21:510 (2,3) - placement suggestion.
   
   
3. 01:31:843 (2,3,4) - (nazi) distance.
   
   1. 01:32:010 (3) - move to x:40 y:232
4. 03:31:010 (14) - remove?
   it is would be better because by again adding the change here.
5. 03:51:010 - add note here because I felt this place had vocal and instruments.
6. 03:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt some claps what ignore the instrument is odd.
   
   1. 03:55:343 (2) - 03:56:176 (7) - 03:56:343 (8) - 03:56:676 (2) - 03:57:010 (4) - 03:57:510 (7) - add clap.
7. 04:07:176 (4,5,6) - (nazi) distance.
   
   1. 04:07:510 (6) - x:128 y:124 ?
8. 04:17:843 (1) - why did you use spinner?
   there is no sound extending from 04:17:843 imo.
   
   
   1. 04:17:843 (1) - none
   2. 04:18:010 (2) - clap
   3. 04:18:343 (3) - ^
   4. 04:18:510 (4) - ^
   5. 04:18:676 (5) - none
   6. 04:18:843 (6) - clap
   7. 04:19:010 (7) - ^
   8. 04:19:176 (8) - finish?
   you can put these.
9. 04:51:176 (1) ~ 04:53:176 (6) - are picking up vocal/piano. however there is a contradiction.
   
   1. 04:50:843 - if it follow vocal, add note here. because this place had it.
   2. 04:53:510 - if it follow piano (or instrument), add note. there is a piano in here.
10. 04:57:343 - add note....like 05:01:176 (5,6,7) - .

1. I'm pretty sure you've missed some tags like collaboration and probably OST (since it's Original SoundTrack)
2. Why there's no breaks? ;_; Try to discuss it with BATs, maybe it'll be ok to add at least one.
   Note: you should discuss it with BATs, because if you add break, Drain Time will be lower than 6 minutes. :<

10:59 Miya: hoo, you modding that map :o
10:59 -Bakari-: yea :3
10:59 Miya: just irc modding here if you found something on my part o/
11:05 -Bakari-: 03:27:010 (3,4) - 
11:06 Miya: hmm? :o
11:06 -Bakari-: I'm not really sure about this pattern. I'd try to remove 03:27:343 (4) - and replace (3) with 1/4 slider 
11:06 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/2ZYkd.jpg example]
11:06 -Bakari-: It sounds kinda better, imo
11:07 Miya: i do this because there is no beat on 03:27:176 -
11:07 -Bakari-: Vocals end here, so we can end slider at this point to emphasize it
11:08 Miya: hmm, i'll consider it ><
11:09 Miya: if other modder suggest the same thing, i ll change this :3
11:12 -Bakari-: Oh, and 02:05:010 (5) - 02:05:676 - 02:11:010 (6) -  sound kinda overmapped. 
11:14 Miya: 02:05:010 (5) - if you hear clearly you can hear a beat on this spot
11:14 Miya: 02:05:676 (8) - same vocal is here too
11:14 -Bakari-: Let me check it with 25% playback rate
11:14 Miya: for this 02:11:010 (6) - i will remove it ><
11:15 -Bakari-: 02:10:176 (4) - aaand maybe you should place something here
11:15 Miya: what? hitsound? :o
11:15 -Bakari-: wait-wait >3<
11:15 -Bakari-: 02:10:676 - here*
11:15 Miya: lol
11:16 Miya: nope, i want to keep the vocal consistencies here ><
11:18 -Bakari-: 02:22:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and how about making something interesting here? Somehow I feel like [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this [attern] fits with music pretty cool
11:18 -Bakari-: 02:22:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and how about making something interesting here? Somehow I feel like [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this [attern] fits with music pretty cool
11:18 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/2ZYCU.jpg this] pattern*
11:18 Miya: let me see
11:19 Miya: :o
11:19 Miya: but i prefer my pattern ><
11:19 Miya: sorry
11:19 -Bakari-: Well, this pattern is out of your style, anyway. 
11:19 Miya: yeah xD
11:20 Miya: besides it will looks weird since all pattern on this map is simple ><
11:21 -Bakari-: And one last thing
11:21 Miya: yup? :o
11:22 -Bakari-: 03:17:843 (1,2) - try to replace it with 1/2 sliders, so it will fit with vocals a bit better, imo. [http://puu.sh/2ZYJw.jpg example]
11:24 Miya: hmm, i prefer my rhythm ><
11:24 Miya: i want to add a 1/1 slider too to gives variation on this combo :3
11:25 -Bakari-: Well, it sounds a bit strange because (2) sounds kinda weird with vocals 
11:26 Miya: im not following the vocal at this point 03:18:843 - :o
11:27 Miya: look at the next rhythm, im not following vocal at all ><
11:28 -Bakari-: Seems like you don't want to mix them here 
11:28 Miya: yup yup ><
11:29 -Bakari-: well, that's it.
11:29 Miya: ok, ty for the mod :D
11:29 -Bakari-: Sure, you're always welcome!

1. 00:07:843 (2,3) - try to avoid jumps in calm part of the song. There's no any reason to place jump, it sounds just like 00:01:843 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - previous patterns.
2. 03:08:176 (6,7,8) - stack/unstack both circles here, to make pattern consistent and easier readable, it'll looks easier-readable and better while playing.

1. 00:23:176 (3) - sory, but I can't hear any beat here. So, try to remove this circlel, please! You can make 00:22:510 (2) - 1/2 longer and silince it's end t follow vocals here.
   Note: 00:33:843 (3) - same happens here. :<
2. 02:41:510 (4,5,1,2) - nazi - 90% of sliders in this map are curved, that's why seeing 4 straight sliders here is quite inconsistent.
3. 03:55:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - are you sure, that deathstream actually fits here? It feels kinda too hard for a relaxing diff with calm rhythm. Consider replacing SOME circles with a slider.
4. 04:42:843 (1) - BPM is quite low, but that note is still appears too quickly. Consider making spinner shorter and/or removing this circle. Discuss it with Darksonic, please
5. 05:02:010 (1) - same as above. Discuss it with Andrea, maybe someone should cut/change their pattern.

1. 01:13:510 (2,3,4) - nazi - try to unstack them. so you'll have a cute blanket like this
2. 04:42:843 (1) - BPM is quite low, but that note is still appears too quickly. Consider making spinner shorter and/or removing this circle. Discuss it with Sekai-nyan, please
3. 05:28:176 (6) - nazi - that stack looks kinda awkward. Just to make sure that this map is PERFECT, fix this little stack. :3

Xinely wrote:

Miya

00:46:843 (3) - 100,108? I think my current position is fine.
00:59:176 (1) - replace with finish? No, it will break my finish rhythm.
03:31:010 (14) - nazi. 1 grid down Ok, fixed ><

Love

That's all GL

Hi Sekai-nyan! Mod request via in-game PM! Sorry for delay!
There's not really much I found!

1. Nice storyboard!

1. 00:31:176 (4,5,6) - Since you added custom soft-finishes to emphasize the piano chords playing, I think it would add more emphasis to the non-chord piano if you add soft-whistles at those parts. In this case, add the soft-whistle at the end of slider 4, the beginning of slider 6, and at the end of slider 6.
2. 00:39:176 (5) - I believe you missed the custom soft-finish here since you can still hear the piano chords.
3. 04:50:843 (5) - Hmm...add a note maybe? It follows the vocals/soft piano and it also makes this section of the map to feel fuller.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Darksonic's parts
01:25:176 (4) - Please add clap on slider begin, and add whistle on slider end. It will fit with rhythm and melody.

Andrea wrote:

Don't let this die and approve it <3

• • What about reducing volume a little? Hitsounds are too loud imo, -10% for each section should be fine.
  • If I were you I'd keep every SB name at x:500 y:10 in order to make the SB more neat.
  • I barely noticed that pulse while playing, use this one.

• • 00:29:843 (1,2,3) - I don't like flow here, try this pattern:
  
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  • 00:32:510 (1) - This blanket could be better.
  • 00:43:176 (1) - Keep this slider at x:80 y:240 and flip it vertically and horizontally. (also a ~ shape here would be much better)
  
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  • 01:13:843 (4) - This slider can be improved, look:
  
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  • 01:18:510 (4) - Why a linear slider? Curve it a little:
  
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  • 01:41:176 (4,5) - Move (4) at x:244 y:284 and (5) at x:214 y:199.
  • 02:08:510 (1) - ~ slider for a better flow:
  
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  • 02:24:510 (1) - ^
  • 03:20:510 (1) - ^
  • 03:28:510 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I really don't like this pattern to be honest, why all these circles? Try to use some 1/4 repeating sliders, otherwise try this spacing:
  
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  • 04:09:176 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like flow here, try this:
  
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  • 04:43:176 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it.
  • 04:48:510 (1) - Keep this slider at x:396 Y:164 and flip it vertically.
  • 04:54:510 (2) - Uhm... why drum sampleset here? Set it to auto and remove the clap.
  • 05:57:176 (1,1) - These spinners are totally unnecessary, but I understand why you added them, meh... anyway, just use 1 spinner here (try to start it at 05:57:843) and every white tick reduce volume a bit in order to make a fade out effect.