AIBat wrote:

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1. 00:09:470 - note?
2. 00:11:111 (1,2,3,4,1) - I will prefer to make the increasing jump more significant.(dont worry it still undashed lol)
   
   
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3. 00:22:361 (7,1) - intend small jump?
4. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ctrl+H, to make a jump.
5. 00:45:331 (1,2,3) - i will put these 3 like this, to create a better movement
   
   2

   

1. I personally think AR6 will fit better.
   
2. 00:10:642 (7) - (nazi) stack to 00:08:767 (4) - start.
   
3. 00:14:861 (1,2,3) - increase the distance inbetween, to make 00:13:923 (2,1) - this jumps smaller, fitting the music.
   
   3

   
4. 00:30:798 (1,2,3,4) - personal suggestion
   
   4

   

1. 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - what a surprise! it plays OK, but I will still suggest to swap these 2 pattern. Meaning 00:01:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this in front and 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this behind. Your choice
   
2. 00:12:517 (5,6,7) - linear flow?
   
   linear flow

   
3. tones of suggestions
4. 1. 00:28:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - why here stop ctrl+V? ctrl+H the whole thing might give you a better performance., (like, 00:28:220 (6) - can have a better flow, 00:31:736 (3) - this can connecting well with next pattern).
   2. 00:27:517 (5,6) - same as 00:12:517 (5,6,7) - or at least to make (6) horizontal to right, to make it flows better.
5. 00:35:017 (3,4) - keep the spacing as 00:34:081 (1,2) - (x3.38)
   
   
   1. 00:36:423 (6,7) - symetrical problem. make (7) end stack to next (11) properly, and (6) stack to (7) properly, then ctrl+H (6).(please use grid size tiny to make it stack properly.
      This is to make it perfect symetrical, and also gain some advantage to your next copy paste patterns.
   2. 00:39:705 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ok here we go. just copy and paste the previous similar patterns and ctrl+H will be perfect.
   3. The above changes is to make your pattern looks symetrical perfect, and fix the inconsistant spacing.
6. 00:42:517 (3) - 45°this slider?
   
7. 00:43:220 (4,5,6,7) - I prefer a jump like this
   
   increased jump

   

ZHSteven wrote:

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1. 00:09:470 - note?
2. 00:11:111 (1,2,3,4,1) - I will prefer to make the increasing jump more significant.(dont worry it still undashed lol)
   
   
   1

   
3. 00:22:361 (7,1) - intend small jump?
4. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ctrl+H, to make a jump.
5. 00:45:331 (1,2,3) - i will put these 3 like this, to create a better movement
   
   2

   

neat and sweet

ZHSteven wrote:

CTB modding as promised

AIBat wrote:

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1. 00:09:470 - note?
2. 00:11:111 (1,2,3,4,1) - I will prefer to make the increasing jump more significant.(dont worry it still undashed lol)
   
   
   1

   
3. 00:22:361 (7,1) - intend small jump?
4. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ctrl+H, to make a jump.
5. 00:45:331 (1,2,3) - i will put these 3 like this, to create a better movement
   
   2

   

neat and sweet


[Salad]

1. I personally think AR6 will fit better. I prefer AR7 ^^
   
2. 00:10:642 (7) - (nazi) stack to 00:08:767 (4) - start. Fixed
   
3. 00:14:861 (1,2,3) - increase the distance inbetween, to make 00:13:923 (2,1) - this jumps smaller, fitting the music. Fixed
   
   3

   
4. 00:30:798 (1,2,3,4) - personal suggestion I prefer my pattern
   
   4

   

I like the spacing idea in this diff.
Some patterns can also be introduced into Rain diff.



[Platter]

1. 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - what a surprise! it plays OK, but I will still suggest to swap these 2 pattern. Meaning 00:01:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this in front and 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this behind. Your choice Fixed
   
2. 00:12:517 (5,6,7) - linear flow? Fixed
   
   linear flow

   
3. tones of suggestions
4. 1. 00:28:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - why here stop ctrl+V? ctrl+H the whole thing might give you a better performance., (like, 00:28:220 (6) - can have a better flow, 00:31:736 (3) - this can connecting well with next pattern).
   2. 00:27:517 (5,6) - same as 00:12:517 (5,6,7) - or at least to make (6) horizontal to right, to make it flows better.
   Fixed
   
   
5. 00:35:017 (3,4) - keep the spacing as 00:34:081 (1,2) - (x3.38) Fixed
   
   
   1. 00:36:423 (6,7) - symetrical problem. make (7) end stack to next (11) properly, and (6) stack to (7) properly, then ctrl+H (6).(please use grid size tiny to make it stack properly. Fixed
      This is to make it perfect symetrical, and also gain some advantage to your next copy paste patterns.
   2. 00:39:705 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ok here we go. just copy and paste the previous similar patterns and ctrl+H will be perfect. Fixed
   3. The above changes is to make your pattern looks symetrical perfect, and fix the inconsistant spacing.
6. 00:42:517 (3) - 45°this slider? Fixed
   
7. 00:43:220 (4,5,6,7) - I prefer a jump like this I created new pattern
   
   increased jump

   

NCs:
00:13:923 (1) - NC here since this is the real pattern start. Fixed
00:09:705 (1) - NC I think there shouldn't be a NC
00:39:705 (1) - NC Fixed
00:43:455 (1) - NC Fixed



stand jump too much. try to get use of "\/" or "/\" patterns more.

nice ideas of jumps. Try to make rain next time, I believe it will be awesome.

ZHSteven wrote:

After dissussing about the some mirror issues with mapper, I think it is finnally ready to go.

bubbled.

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2. 00:15:798 (2) - Quizá se te haya olvidado añadir el Clap a esta nota...
3. 00:38:533 (2) - Y aquí un Whistle al final del slider.

1. 00:00:330 - 00:03:611 - I just realized... This is the only difficulty that doesn't have that intro mapped! Add some notes to keep the consistency with the rest of the diffs, please.

1. 00:01:499 -You still have to snap this section to 00:01:501.
2. 00:11:345 (2,3) - Add a Dash between those notes, please. It's a note worthy to be remarcable. The most simple solution would be making Ctrl-G on (3).
3. 00:26:345 (2,3) - It's the mirrored situation as explained before. You know what to do =)

Deif wrote:

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   00:37:124 - snap to 00:37:126
   00:48:140 - snap to 00:48:142
   00:48:843 - snap to 00:48:845
2. 00:15:798 (2) - Quizá se te haya olvidado añadir el Clap a esta nota...
3. 00:38:533 (2) - Y aquí un Whistle al final del slider.

[Salad]

1. 00:00:330 - 00:03:611 - I just realized... This is the only difficulty that doesn't have that intro mapped! Add some notes to keep the consistency with the rest of the diffs, please.

[Platter]

1. 00:01:499 -You still have to snap this section to 00:01:501.
2. 00:11:345 (2,3) - Add a Dash between those notes, please. It's a note worthy to be remarcable. The most simple solution would be making Ctrl-G on (3).
3. 00:26:345 (2,3) - It's the mirrored situation as explained before. You know what to do =)

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Kurokami wrote:

[Platter]
00:43:923 (2,3) - What is this sudden HDash? It makes no sense here. Yes there is a small rhythm change but both are calm. I suggest correct this since its annoying to play and hear at the same time.

Edit: Because I totally forgot to say which diff has this problem I edited the post.

Kurokami wrote:

[Platter]
00:43:923 (2,3) - What is this sudden HDash? It makes no sense here. Yes there is a small rhythm change but both are calm. I suggest correct this since its annoying to play and hear at the same time.

Edit: Because I totally forgot to say which diff has this problem I edited the post.

eldnl wrote:

Kurokami wrote:

[Platter]
please don't come here when the map is already ranked, try to find and point all these stuffs before ... by the way ... i don't see anything wrong there = ='

Natsu wrote:

What posting feedback about the map its right and nice it will help the mapper to take some more suggestion for hes future maps

anyways gratz on your first ranked mapc:

eldnl wrote:

please don't come here when the map is already ranked

eldnl wrote:

sabes que todo esto es subjetivo no? nadie puede decir que esta mal y que no, a no ser que sea algo tecnico, si alguien modera un mapa con burbuja, a no ser que mencione algo unrankeable, es una perdida de tiempo y atrasa todo el proceso, es una locura que el tipo quiera desrankear el mapa solo porque esa nota no le parece, ahi va mi comentario, obviamente un feedback no esta nada mal, pero el tipo esta pidiendo que lo cambie ...

Natsu wrote:

the one who don't know nothing is you, its like your other post telling to the modders to don't mod bubble maps, anyways if you want to continue this you can always do it in pm.

Kurokami wrote:

Oh, so my rhythm sense is wrong? Tell me what you hear there please because that part is calm for a hdash. The next white tick is more fitting in my oppinion. But if you think hdash is fit for a calm part of the song just go ahead.
So if the map is ranked I can't point out something which is bad? Whats wrong with raising the quality of the ranked maps?

And this is to be honest still not ranked just qualified so there is a possibility for a week to be unranked.
I modded this mapset before and that hdash wasn't there so I can't point out I dunno whose idea it was but its kinda stupid.

Edit: Anyways, I'm out from this conversation since it seems useless to arque with you about this.

mingmichael wrote:

i don't care about the conversations above
congratzzz Kandai-sa >w< love your map a lot <3 <3

osu needs more ctb mapsets D:

Kurokami wrote:

To be honest this is probably mapping style difference and I just added a suggestion (and we already had a conversation in-game about this) so its up to you to accept it. So as I told before I'm out of this type of conversation. I need to thank you this map since the standard version was kinda easy and grats for the "ranked" map.

Natsu wrote:

y en el caso de este el comentario del poster se toma como un ¨feedback¨para sus futuros mapas

Krfawy wrote:

Moja biczo kochana, gratuluję skarbie! Jestem dumny z mojego loFFFcianego Pandysława że ma mapcię taką rankniętą T^T WOW. Wzruszenie takie wielkie ;_; Owocki takie w rytmie <3 SS-ki takie ciężkie do wbicia z Hiddenem ;_; WOW <3

Gratuluję jesio raz, pamiętaj że nagroda Cię spotka i będzie tak bardzo że cię znajdę :*

XD