Ormax wrote:

Just a little sumthin'
I'd suggest decreasing offset a bit, as it feels totally late and uncomfortable for me.
01:08:001 (7,8) - dont like these two, right there they look... silly?
01:31:096 (4,5) - those doubles confused me, why not make smth like dis http://puu.sh/53eJq.jpg or just change the direction of the second "double" so it doesnt kinda ruin the flow
07:53:119 (1) - idk if it is changeable, but this sudden change of rhytm is hardly readable on these triplets. I wanted to suggest doing 07:55:024 (1) - instead, and placing the triplets after, but idk if it'd be any good with music. It's up to you to decide.

Guess that's all. Didn't notice anything else.
Good luck with this one \o

Xebo wrote:

Tüdelü
So hier ist mal mein Mod ..

General + 1 or 2 HP Drain Rate, a bit too easy i think !

[Absolution]
00:19:786 (2) - End-Punkte übereinander liegend mit (3)
00:39:905 - Add Note ?

01:03:120 (1) - Rhytmus sollte schon einheitlich bleiben ._. Wie Davor 01:01:215 (1) - (5) oder danach 01:08:834 (2) - (5) den Rhytmus evt. Machen ?
02:17:405 (1,1,1 2,1,2) - Schweres Spacing ._.


Map ist ganz gut gelungen Ich könnt mir aber vorstellen man könnte dazu ja noch nen Geiles Storyboard machen

Irreversible wrote:

Take another star, I really like that song *-*

• 00:02:167 (1) - seemed a bit like you were making your own rhythm here, which can be misleading in a rather quieter section. Try something like this to match the bgm more: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074605
  00:05:977 (1) - ^
  00:09:786 (1) - ^
  00:13:596 (5) - ^, also NC to follow NC pattern like before
  There are a couple more of these ahead so i'll stop mentioning them =v=
  00:27:882 (3) - hmm how about letting the previous note create a nice blanket~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074619
  01:06:453 (3) - Clap for hitsound consistency
  01:06:929 (5) - Clap on tail for same reason as above
  01:31:691 (3) - For this section, try using Soft sample set for every red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074627 highlighting the specific spot and selecting "Soft" from the upper-left dropdown, as shown in the screenshot. I think that'd be really appropriate for this part, since I feel that it's a bit noisy atm
  01:45:977 (1,2,3,4) - What's this following? either way, the bgm for (2,4) is really subtle/silent. I suggest you change up the rhythm a bit here to fit the constant beat going here
  01:49:786 (7,8) - ^
  again, there are more spots like these~
  01:56:453 (5) - NC?
  03:18:358 (1) - NC
  03:22:881 (2,3) - again, rhythm is off imo
  06:14:865 (4,5,6) - I'd at least halve the spacing of this stream. Being in the same combo with 06:14:429 (2) - (1/4 rhythm as opposed to 1/8) with similar spacing would cause confusion in rhythm reading here
  06:37:722 (6,7,8) - again, consider moving these closer together
  06:53:595 (1) - probably not a good idea to stack this because the cursor movement comes to a disturbing halt imo. The combo really gets moving in all these directions and suddenly this =v=!
  06:55:976 (1) - Not sure about the necessity of this spinner, seemed more like a filler
  07:06:929 (13) - Finish would sound nice
  07:25:976 (4) - NC, to give players some drain leniency here
  07:43:119 (3) - ^same here maybe

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey just dropping by~

General
- Your mp3 bitrate is 0?? or apparently 123kbps VBR xD Either way, these rates aren't rankable. It should be between 128-192kbps. You should reencode this to be safe. After replacing the mp3, the offset may have to be adjusted a little.

- Delete "pendulum the island" from tags. They're already in your title and artist


Absolution

• 00:02:167 (1) - seemed a bit like you were making your own rhythm here, which can be misleading in a rather quieter section. Try something like this to match the bgm more: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074605
  00:05:977 (1) - ^
  00:09:786 (1) - ^
  00:13:596 (5) - ^, also NC to follow NC pattern like before
  There are a couple more of these ahead so i'll stop mentioning them =v=
  00:27:882 (3) - hmm how about letting the previous note create a nice blanket~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074619
  01:06:453 (3) - Clap for hitsound consistency
  01:06:929 (5) - Clap on tail for same reason as above
  01:31:691 (3) - For this section, try using Soft sample set for every red tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1074627 highlighting the specific spot and selecting "Soft" from the upper-left dropdown, as shown in the screenshot. I think that'd be really appropriate for this part, since I feel that it's a bit noisy atm
  01:45:977 (1,2,3,4) - What's this following? either way, the bgm for (2,4) is really subtle/silent. I suggest you change up the rhythm a bit here to fit the constant beat going here
  01:49:786 (7,8) - ^
  again, there are more spots like these~
  01:56:453 (5) - NC?
  03:18:358 (1) - NC
  03:22:881 (2,3) - again, rhythm is off imo
  06:14:865 (4,5,6) - I'd at least halve the spacing of this stream. Being in the same combo with 06:14:429 (2) - (1/4 rhythm as opposed to 1/8) with similar spacing would cause confusion in rhythm reading here
  06:37:722 (6,7,8) - again, consider moving these closer together
  06:53:595 (1) - probably not a good idea to stack this because the cursor movement comes to a disturbing halt imo. The combo really gets moving in all these directions and suddenly this =v=!
  06:55:976 (1) - Not sure about the necessity of this spinner, seemed more like a filler
  07:06:929 (13) - Finish would sound nice
  07:25:976 (4) - NC, to give players some drain leniency here
  07:43:119 (3) - ^same here maybe

this is pretty awesome. Hope this gets approved eventually xD feel free to ask me any questions! Good luck

PrivatHansi1 wrote:

This map need way too many mods to get rarnked, the last 3 minutes are completly unreadable!

Marco wrote:

00:02:524 (2) - i think this is placed 1/4 beat too late
00:06:334 (2) - ^
00:10:143 (2) - ^
00:13:953 (2) - ^
00:17:762 (2) - ^
00:21:572 (2) - ^
04:40:262 (1,2,3) - i can't really feel the rhythm at these 3 circles
05:53:953 (6,7) - the space between these 2 shouldn't be there
06:10:857 (1,2,1,2,3) - these are a little bit confusing, if you ask me
06:15:262 (7) - i don't really like the position of this one, how about placing it a bit further away?
07:53:119 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i don't know what i should think about this part, it's weird and hard to read

i hope i could help you a little bit

I love Pendulum, so do your best!

AlexaBM wrote:

hi again, i can't mod insanes but.. as i know, 04:53:596 - map is unrankable if you have a break time in the kiai time
Try something to fill this break
maybe some notes, but this break shouldn't be in the kiai time

Deif wrote:

Re-encoded your mp3 file to 192kbps, which is a rankable bitrate: DOWNLOAD

The new offset should be ~290 (I hope it's accurate enough).

Also remove from Tags "Pendulum the island" since they're already the Artist and the Title. "Immersion" is the name of the album where The Island appear, but normally mappers don't include the album in the Source. Add it in Tags instead.

Good luck!

Sala- wrote:

PrivatHansi1 wrote:

This map need way too many mods to get rarnked, the last 3 minutes are completly unreadable!

Is this statement supported by anybody else?

Ririi wrote:

Noob Modding incoming D: :

06:53:607 (1) - Seems kinda unreadable, not sure if it's me though..
06:58:846 (6) - ^
07:39:337 (1) - This slider ends too early in my opinion/ears.

Can't really find more what bothers me, so yea, hope I could help a bit and good luck with getting it approved! :3

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi , I'm from #modreq and also from PM :3
Pls , be gentle with my mod >w<

01:23:145 (1,2,3,4) - Make a symmetrical order (/ make a better pattern !)

01:32:668 (5,6,7,8) - ^

01:39:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

02:06:954 (5) - Move it a little bit in right ?

02:08:859 (2) - Make a straight line ?

05:14:930 (1) - Stack it ! ( like 05:42:906 (8) - )

I haven't find any mistakes after !
That's all I think !

Good luck for bubble ! :3

SkinnyBill wrote:

I just played through this until a bit into the dusk bit before failing. It definitely gets harder in dusk, so you might want to consider making the Dusk section easier, or the dawn section harder for a more uniform difficulty

Just a couple of personal things I'd like to point out
0:27:907 (3) goes off time and might throw people off track.
Also, the subsequent notes (4, 1, 1, 1, 1) shouldn't overlay like that in my opinion. Not sure about others, but I didn't notice that another slider appeared underneath. Consider either spacing them or repositioning them completely.

0:44:097 is a bit difficult and also quite hard to see what is going on - mainly because the fades on the notes you've already clicked.

Generally it was quite simple to follow apart from repetitions of what i've already linked.

Good map though, keep it up
I look forward to seeing updates

Lust wrote:

I'm sorry, you will need to change the difficulty name to Marathon

1. BG Size is 1280x720, find one that is size 1366x768 or resize it

[Absolution]

1. 00:13:621 (1,2) - This would be nicer as a blanket
2. 00:15:526 (1) - The whistle on the slider body sounds bad, remove it
3. 00:16:716 (3,2) - For a short time these overlap, try to avoid it
4. 00:17:430 (1,2) - Blanket is off, use the approach circle to fix!
5. 00:23:145 (1) - Same whistle suggestion
6. 00:27:430 (2,3) - Have (2) blankets (3)'s slider end
7. 00:32:668 (7,1) - (Nazi) Blanket is off
8. 00:44:097 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Try and not have too much new combo spam, its detrimental to the HP drain
9. 01:08:859 (2) - This isn't stacked perfectly with 01:08:383 (1) - . Move it to 45:340
10. 01:10:287 (5,1) - Avoid the overlap
11. 01:18:383 (5,7) - Stack is also not perfect, move 01:19:811 (7) - to 286:175
12. 02:15:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - The slowdown isn't really needed
13. 03:49:573 (2,4) - (Nazi) Fix stack
14. 03:50:287 (4,1) - (Nazi) Avoid the overlap (very small, almost unoticeable)
15. 04:02:192 (1,1,1,1) - Just have these all one combo
16. 04:45:049 (5,6,1) - Avoid the overlap

gl